A series of trials, investigations and cases solved without using evidence too often.
In other words, Algebryan and Conspiracy technique.

Episode 1: The First Unexpectedly Extravagant Conspiracy!

Episode 2: Luna Truth! Adrian's Bizarre Investigation!

Episode 3: The Fabricator

Episode 4: Spooky Conspiracy of the Dead Arsonist

Episode 5: The Fabricator's Innocence

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Last edited by AJtheprogrammer on Sun Nov 15, 2015 7:37 am, edited 4 times in total.

Just updated the list with a new episode!

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I read through the first chapter XD First off I like the name "Adrian" but then again I'm bias XD

I have a few points that might help out.
- You sorta rushed through this. The cases normally have good exposition telling us who's who and let out the personality of the characters before any of the plot starts to unfold. I got a bit lost as to who's who and the logic behind their actions seemed out of place at points.
- You said he'd do it with no evidence, but he used the evidence of a samurai sword (which came out of nowhere) and I got confused. Samurai swords are long, not short. Shorter weapons would be knives or daggers.
- I like your idea of the plot twist! And you kept the pun names of planets going through! Maybe they shouldn't just admit it straight away, have it be a bit of a challenge to prove.

I hope my critiques help! I'll check the others out!

EDIT:
OK I'm reading chapter 2 and things are a lot easier to follow! We know everyone now and I like Adrian's investigation style. I'm referring to it in my head as the "illuminati process" because it reminds me of all those absurd unrelated connections people make with things to the illuminati XD (Also nice reference! I played Point Blanc as well!) I had a good chuckle well done!

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Thanks for reading!



Yeah, I have to fix that.



Thanks! This is normally caused by my ADHD.

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New episode!

Episode 5: The Fabricator's Innocence

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