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Here is a yaoi fic I made.

*YAOI WARNING* Don't click this if you don't like male/male fics. Please don't flame me, or you will merely display your own ignorance. Thank you

Please review as soon as you read it. Don't hold back.

http://www.idletheme.com/objection/viewstory.php?sid=44

if i doesn't work, PM me, as I might not check back for a while.

Slow Day by Artimus
The Pain Of Death Is Also The Joy Of Rebirth - Keel Lorenz, End Of Evangelion
Re: My own FicTopic%20Title

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I added another fanfic
*Yaoi warning*

Once again, If you don't like male/male pairing, don't click.

Loving Consolation
http://www.idletheme.com/objection/viewstory.php?sid=46&ageconsent=ok


edit

also, I added a new short humor fic.

Objection!
The Pain Of Death Is Also The Joy Of Rebirth - Keel Lorenz, End Of Evangelion
Re: My own FicTopic%20Title
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Since you asked me personally to come review, here I am.

But I have to say, the formatting of your fic (rather, lack of formatting) made it nearly impossible to read and understand. Every time a new person speaks, you should have a paragraph break. Unless the uploading ruined the format, but I've never had that problem on Objection before.
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Re: My own FicTopic%20Title

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I was worrried about that, so I will fix it today. Thanks very much!
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