Fweee! -Gamie's sprites- -NOW UPDATED-

Sun May 06, 2007 3:02 am

Gamie

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I made a charry. D8

I don't have a name for her yet, and I'll put her info in later. C:

For some reason, her head seems too small for the body to me. ~~IS IT JUST ME OR AM I RIIIGHT?~~

Comments on her, please. None negative (unless it's to help me fix up my sprite), 'cause then I'll cry ;_;

April May's Body/skin palette, Ayame's head (I used about three frames of her head to get it working. The head itself, her eyebrows, and her lips), Ema's hair (which I kinda refix) and ribbon, Mia's badge, and April May's heart.

New!

WHEE. SOME MORE SPRITES. :'D

It's just her talking in a serious look. Wheeee.

I'm goona make another outfit for her soon, a regular outfit this time. C:

And also some ones in court, if I'm not lazy enough. Detective Gumshoe

~~ANYONEWANNAHELPMENAMEHER?~~

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Sun May 06, 2007 3:03 am

Richard Wellington

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uh...that very...c-cute...

but you might want to fix the mouth abit

what do i is called rollplaying, i really don't think i am richard.

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Sun May 06, 2007 3:04 am

Gamie

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Yeah. Her's a mouth's a bit weird. 83

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Sun May 06, 2007 3:04 am

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I think her head is fine. Very cute outfit though, I think you should work a little more on the line quality.

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Sun May 06, 2007 3:11 am

Gamie

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Thanks. : D!!!

Where should I work on the line quality?

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Sun May 06, 2007 3:13 am

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Gamie wrote:

Thanks. : D!!!

Where should I work on the line quality?

I'd say the arms and the lavender coat (is that a coat?).

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Sun May 06, 2007 3:15 am

Gamie

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Android 21 3/7 wrote:

Gamie wrote:

Thanks. : D!!!

Where should I work on the line quality?

I'd say the arms and the lavender coat (is that a coat?).

Ah, ok. I was trying to mimic how the skin was for the sprite, but in the end I kinda gave up and did random things to it. :3

And I don't know if it's a coat or a vest. D8

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Sun May 06, 2007 7:02 pm

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wow looks very cute! And yeah, i think you should move her mouth to the left a bit and you are done ^^

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Sun May 06, 2007 8:39 pm

Gamie

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Ela-chan wrote:

wow looks very cute! And yeah, i think you should move her mouth to the left a bit and you are done ^^

Oh! Ok! :D I see. Thanks~ <3 And I'll move it once I stop being lazy and open Adobe.

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Sun May 06, 2007 8:48 pm

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Question: From whom did she get the tie?

Other than that (and the mouth), I like it. Very cute! Phoenix

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Mon May 07, 2007 3:52 am

Gamie

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Macbeth wrote:

Question: From whom did she get the tie?

Other than that (and the mouth), I like it. Very cute! Phoenix

Oh, I made the tie. Redd White

Yeah, I should upload the updated sprite for her. 83 Thanks!

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Sat May 12, 2007 11:56 pm

Gamie

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Oh whee. I forgot to say there's a new sprite C:

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Sun May 13, 2007 12:18 am

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After seeing her talking sheet, I realize that her face and her arms are too different in terms of tones. Her arm should not be divided into three tonal parts. I don't know how to describe it other than like this:
s=shade
m=midtone
o=base skin tone

What you have:
oooooooo
mmmmmm
sssssssss

The way it is with the original
sssmooo
sssmooo
sssmooo

My art thread!
My sprite thread! Calando in progress
Phoenix Wright and co.:Ace Mythbusters! Myth 2 finished
First AA fanfic: Childhood Turnabout (finished)
And my devart site
My billboard signature! *gets pelted with tomatoes*

Re: Fweee! -Gamie's sprites- -NOW UPDATED-

Sun May 13, 2007 2:39 am

Gamie

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Android 21 3/7 wrote:

After seeing her talking sheet, I realize that her face and her arms are too different in terms of tones. Her arm should not be divided into three tonal parts. I don't know how to describe it other than like this:
s=shade
m=midtone
o=base skin tone

What you have:
oooooooo
mmmmmm
sssssssss

The way it is with the original
sssmooo
sssmooo
sssmooo

C: Ah, I see. I'm not quite used to the coloring/shading of Phoenix Wright sprites. I still use the whole "Dolls" and all. D:

Thanks! :3