This is my character/internet persona, Alastair.
C+C, please.
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
This is my character/internet persona, Alastair. C+C, please. |
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| Author: | The Sandwich [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Not bad, but I've two issues. The hair looks a little odd, you probably need just a lil bit of shading up there? Second is the shirt. The lack of a collar makes it look weird, but maybe that's just me? |
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
LOL, Those are the two things I can't figure out how to fix. (I suck at shading.) Spoiler: Something involving GS4 Or do you mean the shape of the hair? It's supposed to be like Roy Mustang's hair. Spoiler: Big Image |
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| Author: | The Sandwich [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Wow, the last person I gave c+c to bit my head off. Yay! Maybe you could remove the stripe and instead give him an insignia on his shirt? |
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
It's not a stripe. It's a shirt, and the black part is an overcoat/jacket. |
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| Author: | The Sandwich [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:59 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Oh, in that case you could add lil circles at the shirt for like buttons? |
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 11:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
 I added another shade of black around the edges. (Though I probably need to make it a bit thicker.) |
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| Author: | The Sandwich [ Tue Jul 03, 2007 11:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
That's better. |
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Spoiler: Now all I need... |
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| Author: | The Sandwich [ Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
It's just a one frame shot of Odoroki. He doesn't actually appear animation wise frontal. But here. Spoiler: No real spoilers but meh. |
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| Author: | Ultimate Prosecutor [ Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Cool. (What does C+C mean :S? *shot*) 1. A tip, don't need dark green shading on both sides, just on one (depending on which side the light is coming from, although I'd recommend the far side. 2. While the hair has shading from odoroki, as you've recolored it, the highlights need to be exaggerated more. Black hair often has a white sheen in the light. 3. to achieve the hair of that guy in the pic, put some spikes over the top of his ears maybe? |
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
No, I've got the hair right. It's just similar, not exactly like it. Like this? 
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| Author: | SailorTaurus [ Thu Jul 05, 2007 1:08 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Try and saturate the green a bit so he doesn't look like a walking nightclub sign. ^^" Perhaps add a couple of wrinkles onto the shirt. You could even copy and paste some wrinkles from another sprite and then recolour them into the shirt's shades. |
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| Author: | SailorTaurus [ Thu Jul 05, 2007 1:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
For some reason I can't edit my post, the button has completely dissapeared. I meant to se 'desaturate', as in to make it less vibrant. |
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| Author: | The Sandwich [ Thu Jul 05, 2007 1:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Ultimate Prosecutor wrote: Cool. (What does C+C mean :S? *shot*) Comments and criticism. |
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Thu Jul 05, 2007 3:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
Oh yeah. I almost forgot... *bites Darzie's head off* |
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| Author: | The Sandwich [ Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Alastair, Pheonix Wright style. C+C please. |
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! |
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