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These are some of the sprite edits I've done. They're my first ones, so they're a little pathetic, but I thought I'd share them anyways. If you have any suggestions, let me know!
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Young Grossberg
I actually like this one, though I meant to change his spectacles, since it's unlikely he'd have had the same ones for 35 years.
Court Sheet
Young Gant
Currently, I don't really like the color of his overcoat, but I'm not sure what color to change it to. I tried gray and didn't like that either. Maybe black?
Von Karma
OCs:
My problem with her is that her hair is supposed to be bleached, but here it just looks blonde. Also, she looks nothing like she's meant to but I basically just gave up on that :P
Incomplete sprite sheet of Nejira in the courtroom. This was once Mia. Now, it is not. She only has 2 poses, but they're passable for now. This looks much more like her than the one above. It's pretty clear that it's a work in progress, but like everything else I've posted, it's good enough for now.
Essie (defense attorney):
Lulu:
(more accurate Lulu. I couldn't help myself. XD)
This still needs editing, but if I put it here, maybe I'll leave it alone for a while instead of nitpicking. In case you're interested in what sprites she's made of, her hair is Regina+Ini Miney+Lamiroir's colors (I'm going to redo it darker and with the curls starting lower); eyes are Iris's modified (I need to make them smaller); nose is Elise Deauxnim (I think it's ok, but it'll depend on how she looks after I change the eyes); head is Alita Tiala; lips are Mia; neck is Oldbag; body is Franziska. I drew the lace.
Because I'm too lazy to look it up, how do you do the transparency effect (make the white background not show up)?
I'd love feedback.
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Do you think you could make a young Manfred von Karma sprite sheet? Im making a game which takes place somewhat in the past, so I figure a young von karma would be better. If you cant, thats okay.
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Do you think you could make a young Manfred von Karma sprite sheet? Im making a game which takes place somewhat in the past, so I figure a young von karma would be better. If you cant, thats okay.
Well, my game stars VK, so yeah, that's in the works. I have no clue what I want him to wear, though, so I'm kind of stuck. I figure he might not be quite as wacked out yet, but still have a lot of 17th/18th century influences in his fashion. I'm hoping to get a good fusion of 1650 and 1975, but we'll see. Other than that, I'm not really sure...
You have any preferences for what color he's wearing? I've got him with black hair.
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First, Grossberg in court:
I need to fix his left arm, it looks too straight, but otherwise I think it's ok.
And the Grossjection!
I tried messing around with Young Edgeworth and Von Karma to get something decent, and I'm not really sure what to think of what I came up with. I changed his hair color, but it looks better in the original. Maybe he should wear a lighter color?
"final" VK
before the hair color change
before the clothing color change
I'm seriously at a loss about what to do with him.
I'm also kind of a freakish perfectionist (wonder why I identify with the character?!?) and probably won't ever be happy with anything 
I might try to tuck his cravat into his vest, too. I think that'd be kind of a cool look. But it does sound like PWLib is coming out soon, and if that happens, I'll probably just take the easy way out and focus on programming instead of getting the cravat juuuuust right. XDI also think I'm going to try re-doing Gant to wear lime green, just to see what I think.
Again, suggestions please!
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I kinda figured he would have blue hair like franziska has so i made his hair blue, edited his coat abit making it purple as young edgeworth has a pinker coat so i thought he might have a purple coat instead of blue...I actually think your sprites alot better but i thought i'd show you mine anyway
Here he is...
I don't tink he looks THAT young here anyway lol he just has less wrinkles
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I kinda figured he would have blue hair like franziska has so i made his hair blue, edited his coat abit making it purple as young edgeworth has a pinker coat so i thought he might have a purple coat instead of blue...I actually think your sprites alot better but i thought i'd show you mine anyway
Here he is...
I don't tink he looks THAT young here anyway lol he just has less wrinkles
I actually did a similar edit where I just got rid of the wrinkles and thought he still looked old too. In my new edit, he actually has Edgeworth's chin and mouth, and I think it helps a lot. I like the purple, too.
The shading's a bit fail, and I did a different pose than you, but you can see what I mean he still looks bloody OLD. Like not 65, but 40-some. Clothes are still what he originally wore, though I got rid of the old man collar because I figured that wasn't helping. His hair does look better than in my other edits, though.
Thanks for your sprite!
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I used a tool called usenti to recolor the edgeworth clothes, the skin, and the hair. then I used MS Paint to modify the face, using edgeworths mouth and nose, and got rid of the wrinkles.
Im decent at spriting, if I do say so myself
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I like this one best
you think you can make a sheet out of it? with talking animations and all
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First is an OC (Esmerelda aka "Essie"); I only have 1 pose for her. She's a heavily modded Franziska.
And a sheet with the two Grossbergs I've made so far.
I'd love feedback, especially on Essie. She's the first OC that I spent any time at all on (the first one was just, like "oh, Will's hair + Oldbag + ...random mod = random mod").
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I love all the young Karma ones. :3
And the young Grossberg ones are really good!
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I added a complete (for now) Courtberg sheet to the first post. I'm done with him for now, I think. I'd love suggestions, though, 'cause I think he could use some improvement but I just can't figure out where. The mustache twitch on the 2nd line especially bugs me. I still don't know how to animate them, either.
And an update on the state of the Karma:
In case it's not obvious, I clearly have no idea what I'm doing with him any more. As far as I'm concerned, he can just stay old. 's what he gets for being so difficult.
I'm more interested in making sprites for the characters that haven't got anything even close to their appearance yet. Originally, Grossberg was represented by flippedEdgeworth
Edit: Sudden inspiration. I'm keeping the orange, but maybe not the Edgeworth coat. And I'm adding gray/black epaulettes. I'm gonna have to do them from scratch, but hopefully it'll come out okay. I might end of ditching the tassels and just giving him shoulder pads. We'll see.
This is why I wish I were good at hand-drawn art...so I could work this out beforehand.
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I think you should make a sheet out of this. or at least use the head.
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Lemmy, I can get that to you in sheet form within a week probably. My own VK is still a long time in the making, because I have no clue what he's wearing yet, but I can at least make a talking version of that pose.
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I didn't check for consistency in animation, so I dunno how that'll work out. Apparently, I also modded his chin, which makes the talking animations a little more difficult. We'll see, I guess.
(I know this is stretching out the screen, but w/e. My computer doesn't render sprites that are under spoiler tags :P)
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In love with young Manfred & Marvin!!
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I added a new character at the bottom of the already existing pile. I think she's my best yet, although I am super picky and will keep messing with her until I'm happy.
Her talking is a bit wack, though. It's ok, she only makes a cameo in case 1 of my game. I'm too lazy to make the defendant for that one, he just gets to be Ron. :P I need to work on making a decent Gant...and a decent Von Karma...:S
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I love your ideas so keep the ideas & this thread up!
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Keep it up, and I'll keep checking back.
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Ami, I really appreciate the advice, especially from such a talented spriter!
Are you talking about the 1st Neji sprite or the 2nd set? If it's the 1st, I definitely agree. I think I'm just going to re-do that one. Her face is good, but I think I'll just use the hair from the 2nd one, and yes the body needs 100% overhaul. That was Oldbag, and then I tried to turn it into a suit with inadequate results.The reason her shoulders are so pointy is because I was going for the "shoulder pads" effect, but she just looks kind of like a wrestler in a janitor's suit. :X
I think I'll re-do her with Lisa Basil's suit. Maybe it'll look a little better....
I like to talk too much. me->
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I figured he'd be a little less wacked when he was younger, but I dunno if I normalized him too much. I was originally going for a "pirate captain" look (kind of like Young Edgeworth had
) but I ended up not liking the high collar and didn't want to re-use Pirate Edgeworth's lapels. Anyways, I got this. I really appreciate any feedback, esp. cause he's the most important character in my game! Thanks in advance, everyone!
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)Yarrr, that thar defendant be a salty murderer. Captain! Git this seadog to the brig! At sundown, he walk the plank........of JUSTICE!
oh god. now I HAVE to write a pirate witness. XD
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Sorry, it doesn't look too good, and uhh, looks like the first frame haves some sort of really strange rape device that makes it a bit cutoff on the chest area. You should get that fixed.
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Awesome! Thanks so much, Zero! You're right, it looks like I tried to mess with his shoulders and only got around to changing the first frame. I'll look into that and re-upload
Edit: Grossberg is fixed, no more raep effect as far as I can tell! :D Clearly I need to try animating these more, because I'm sure people's mouths fly all over the place or w/e. I'm bad at consistency. (It's why I gave up being a comic/manga artist
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I'll continue making them!
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about that one. I didn't think it'd work at all. *applauds*
Zero is AWESOME! :D :D
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Oh, and fix the neck... XD
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Zero, I owe you one!
No prob, man, I just can't wait for the game so I'm just trying to help out a bit on how'd it look!
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