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Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [Update: April 6th]Topic%20Title
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Spoiler: Comic 1
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Spoiler: Comic 2
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Spoiler: Comic 3
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Spoiler: Comic 4
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Spoiler: Comic 5
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Spoiler: Comic 6
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Spoiler: Comic 7
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Spoiler: Comic 8
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Spoiler: Tragic Love
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Others for the DS

Spoiler: Shattered Memories
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Spoiler: Battle for the Truth
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Credit to Ceres for Malcom (Finished)
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Tragic Love A Phoenix Wright COMIC (coming soon!)
Credit to Vickinator for my sig!]


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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney,Topic%20Title
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I hate Klaviema >_>

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A few grammar mistakes, and graphical problems (Such as GBA sized textbox and no PW font) But it looks interesting.
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney,Topic%20Title
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nice but remember to announce when you update :P
such as changing the title with "updated etc."
good so far :godot:
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney,Topic%20Title
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You've been hit by, a smooth prosecutor

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Looks like you had the same problem i did with the gavel slam. A better font for the text is Microsoft sans serif. Otherwise good start.
Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 12th Update!]Topic%20Title
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NEW COMICS!
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 13th Update!]Topic%20Title
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YAY! Guess wat time it is?!?!? UPDATE TIME!
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 13th Update!]Topic%20Title
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Alright, you've been updating rather frequently. Let's take a look... pretty solid, but what's with the capitalization. It's like you're trying to Emphasize words by Capitalizing them at Inappropriate Places. And when you do this with "He" and "Him," it creates the appearance that you are referring to God. Also, "definitely" not "definatly" and "an attorney" not "a Attorney." Payne's line in the latest comic should read "Detective, please tell the court exactly what happened that day" not "Detective, please tell the court exactly, What happened that day". By the way, your sprites are acceptable, but what's with the colors? It looks like you're only using Paint's default palette! My friend, you should at least grab colors from other game sprites, if you're having trouble picking them!

Sorry if I sounded angry or rant-y; I'm looking forward to the development of this story.
Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 13th Update!]Topic%20Title
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YggdrasilsSword wrote:
Alright, you've been updating rather frequently. Let's take a look... pretty solid, but what's with the capitalization. It's like you're trying to Emphasize words by Capitalizing them at Inappropriate Places. And when you do this with "He" and "Him," it creates the appearance that you are referring to God. Also, "definitely" not "definatly" and "an attorney" not "a Attorney." Payne's line in the latest comic should read "Detective, please tell the court exactly what happened that day" not "Detective, please tell the court exactly, What happened that day". By the way, your sprites are acceptable, but what's with the colors? It looks like you're only using Paint's default palette! My friend, you should at least grab colors from other game sprites, if you're having trouble picking them!

Sorry if I sounded angry or rant-y; I'm looking forward to the development of this story.

Yeah sorry about that, There were no real colors that would work with him, so I may try changing it by using paint shop pro. I'll post it on my sprite topic, then you can tell me which you like better.
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 13th Update!]Topic%20Title
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You could just recolour it in paint and it'd look better...
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 13th Update!]Topic%20Title
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Guess what time it is???? :godot: UPDATE!
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 17th 8th Update!]Topic%20Title
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Yes I've updated my comics.
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 17th 8th Update!]Topic%20Title
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Hold it one second.

Did you ask Ceres if you could use that example of an improved Malcolm for the boxarts? Plus, don't use sprites for boxarts either. They look kind of bad like that, and undersized.

Anyway, the comic looks good so far.
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 17th 8th Update!]Topic%20Title
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DramaticaXIV2 wrote:
Hold it one second.

Did you ask Ceres if you could use that example of an improved Malcolm for the boxarts? Plus, don't use sprites for boxarts either. They look kind of bad like that, and undersized.

Anyway, the comic looks good so far.


Well..... He made it for me, So why is that a problem? And thank you for constructive criticism, My first one was horrible. (The Beta for Malcom.)
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 17th 8th Update!]Topic%20Title
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He did not make it for you to use. He made it as an example for what you should do to improve it :yogi:
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 17th 8th Update!]Topic%20Title
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RandomJibberish wrote:
He did not make it for you to use. He made it as an example for what you should do to improve it :yogi:


....... :payne: ..........

:yuusaku: Wait a second...... Let me go check......

Ceres wrote:
Hmm, having read the recent post in your comic, t would seem you're still having problems with colours.
I could go on here, explaining in depth on how to fix it, but to make it easier i quickly made this.
Far from perfect, but i rushed it somewhat.

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Remember, colours and shading are 2 aspects needed which make a sprite look good. (Stay away from default paint colours!)
That, and time. Don't rush things (Irony? :p) , Take all the time you need, and it'll look a lot better.

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This is the First Serious sprite I have done, Not just for fun.

lolwhat? There are no serious sprite edits pal, we all do this for fun or out of boredom.
When it stops being fun, don't do it. :P


When you think about it......... I guess He didn't give it to me, But he didn't say it wasn't for me either.
I'll just ask him later.
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 17th 8th Update!]Topic%20Title
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But he's giving you advice to improve it. I'd call what he gave you a complete sprite, so I doubt he'd give you advice to improve it.

Also, you should have asked and credited anyway.
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [March 17th 8th Update!]Topic%20Title
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Ok, Here it is, Credit to Ceres for Malcom (Finished)
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:whip: It looks interesting to me, but its only because i don't really know how to make ones myself but..
:ka-whip: :whip: all i can say is good job on the comic
*whipwhipwhipwhipwhipwhipwhipwhipwhipwhipwhipwhip* Thank you come again *smirk*
Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [Update:Soon.]Topic%20Title
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I'm going to update soon, all I can say is, This ones a doozey!
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [Update: April 6th]Topic%20Title
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Update time.
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Re: Chris Malcom: Ace Attorney [Update: April 6th]Topic%20Title
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I'm posting this on my other topics, such as this one, Falling and my sprite page.

These topics are on hold for now, I will when I get back on my feet,
the end of spring is gonna be very busy, for both me, and maybe all of you, So.......
Can't wait for summer break! See you then!

Twister980
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