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Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09Topic%20Title
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Got a new page!
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Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09Topic%20Title
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Yay!

Krystal is adorable ^^ ah turkey, my new favourite xD
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But... the "d" is silent in "Godot" while it is pronounced in "God"...
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Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09Topic%20Title
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Freyarule wrote:
Yay!

Krystal is adorable ^^ ah turkey, my new favourite xD


Thanks! Turkey IS my favorite! And chicken salad.


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But... the "d" is silent in "Godot" while it is pronounced in "God"...


I thought Godot was pronounced Goh Doh. So the "D" can't be silent, or his name would be Goh, because the T is silent...right? I could be wrong. You're probabley right.
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Keep an eye on the names you put over the text boxes. In one panel, you had Phoenix saying what I imagine you intended for Krystal to say.
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Darn! I promised myself I wouldn't do that...all fixed. Thank you!
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I still see a slip-up. It's on the fifth page.
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The comic is good, but I think there's something missing. Maybe some more...action? Change of scenery? I can't really put my finger on it ,though.
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Patience. Some works are better off starting without a bang.
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General Luigi wrote:
I still see a slip-up. It's on the fifth page.


Really? I found one but I fixed it and it shows up fixed to me...it's the dialogue that starts with "Lukesy", right? It used to say Phoenix but now it says Krystal.

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Patience. Some works are better off starting without a bang.


Yeah! I promise, there will be action really soon! I actually already made some of the action-y parts but don't want to release all my pages at once...
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You should have mentioned you were making a comic in one of your posts... I like the dialouge very much so far, it's very Phoenix Wright-ish, and I really enjoy how you've captured the essential cutness that preludes every case in the game! I can't wait to see the plot! Also, Luke and Krystal are absolutelly adorable.
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Thank you so much for the praise! *dances in the Luke praise* I promise that the plot WILL surface soon!
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_Krystal_ wrote:
Really? I found one but I fixed it and it shows up fixed to me...it's the dialogue that starts with "Lukesy", right? It used to say Phoenix but now it says Krystal.

That's the one, but on my end, it's still showing up as being said by Phoenix. Though you edited the image, did you upload the edited one to a hosting site and replace the old image with it?
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Yup. I can see it now. It says Krystal...
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I still see it. Get the URL of the edited picture, edit your post, and replace the old picture's URL with the new one.
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Ok, that should've fixed it. Btw, a new page is up!
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Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-22-09Topic%20Title
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There we go.

Гм... And now the plot finally shows itself.
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Yup! *BumbumBUM* :zaviaar:
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...

Okay that was sudden.. O.o

MORE! Give us MORE!(1 Comic a day is fine!)
Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09Topic%20Title
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Page number 7 is up...I feel accomplished...
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Pretty nice sprite comic. Luke Atmey seems to have become a more lovable character than I could possibly have imagined.

By the way, if the "D" in Godot was silent and the "T" wasn't, his name would be pronounced "goat."
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Amusing. I get the feeling Krystal will be the source of plenty of laughs.

On a different--though still relevant--note, I find it odd that Krystal has her arms crossed when she's crying.
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Really? I thought that most people crossed arms when they cried. (I do *_*) It closes off the body and makes a person unnapproachable, which is what most people would want if they're sad...at least that's just me...
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I guess I'll take your word for it, considering how long it's been since I last cried.
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Oy Luigi, be nice to the people, manly tears exists. :P

As for the sprites, I guess Crossed Arms can be self supporting during hard times that makes people cry. =P

For Comic: Don't even piss off a woman. It'll hurt. :P
Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09Topic%20Title
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General Luigi wrote:
I guess I'll take your word for it, considering how long it's been since I last cried.


That sounds like something Chuck Norris would say in Walker Texas Ranger. No joke.
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Alright, new page up! Sorry it's late at night, but I was so busy today, it totally slipped my mind! I gots a new belt in Martial Arts! Woo000t.
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Congratulations. If I may ask, what martial art?
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Kyuki-do. It's only 40 years old, but It's really cool. It's a korean MMA with traditional japanese weapons. I like it a lot, but it kinda stinks because it takes about 10 years to get a black belt, because it's important to the creator that the only black belts in the federation are ones who really care about. I think that's good though.
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Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-25-09Topic%20Title
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New page up. Phoenix is pissed...
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I saw. Considering that we never get to see Phoenix meet a client who he believes from the start to be guilty, I can understand why he seems a bit out of character.
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He doesn't have that much reason to believe Atmey is guilty, now does he?
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Well, he's never had a client who has been guilty of murder before. Should I change it? Considering I have more of the comic done though based on this, it would probabley make the comic worse or at least less interesting. As long as the people are in character though, I guess it doesn't matter if the plot is bad, because it's the characters that make the Phoenix Wright games. ^_^
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Correct. And hey, Even Phoenix is human, he does wrong and he's only been pissed a few times before. never in the game though to this part.

Still internesting. And now that he said "no" What should he do ...Hmm.
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Correct.



So I need to redo the page?
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A new page is up, and I officially regret doing this comic. Wo0t!
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Why do you regret it? Turned out to be more work than you thought it would be, or just got bored?
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_Krystal_ wrote:
A new page is up, and I officially regret doing this comic. Wo0t!


Aw, don't say that! :larry: I've been looking at your comic and I really like it so far! I think your characterization has been pretty good so far. You don't need to rewrite it to make it so Phoenix isn't as "mean" or whatever. It adds conflict and interest. I wouldn't worry about it; it works well.

Keep going! Don't get discouraged! :edgy:

P.S. if I was completely off as for your reasoning for "regretting" making the comic, please disregard the message, except for the last part :oops:
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Fourth wall breakdown Eeek!

And no Correct is that he's supposed to be a human as well. And then Out of Character isn't "rare" at all. :)
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No, but this year I took a BRUTAL academic schedule, and now I'm at Martial arts two nights a week and ACT prep one night a week...but I don't want to lag behind on the comic...
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