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Trace Lumiens - Ace Attorney (Updated: 3/9/10)Topic%20Title
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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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Another sprite comic, another topic.

There's a new defense attorney in town!


Spoiler: Profile of Trace Lumiens
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Name: Trace Lumiens
Age: 24
Description: He was hired by the Wright and Co. Law Offices a year after Kristoph Gavin was convicted of the murder of Drew Misham. Trace's a bit of a troublemaker and a little weird, to say the least. And like most of the defense attorneys in this section, his first case is a murder.


Spoiler: People in the First Case
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Name: Libby Reid
Age: 30
Description: Libby works at the local library and is accused of murder. She is a kind and caring person, but is completely strict about overdue books.

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Name: Winceston Winston Payne
Description: After being defeated by Mia Fey, Phoenix Wright, and Apollo Justice, he has lost hope in his prosecuting skills. Will this case save him? (I can't even spell his name right. Is that bad?)

Name: Detective Gumshoe
Age: Calculating
Description: The scruffy detective everyone loves. :D

Name: Arch Quety
Age: 35
Description: An antique collector who is incredibly rich.

More to come!

Spoiler: Cases (May change in the future) And some SPOILERS, I think
1. The Overdue Turnabout- A librarian is accused of murdering a patron at the public library. It's a relatively simple case, but will Trace be able to handle it?
2. Mount Turnabout- After successfully coming home after being one of the youngest persons to conquer Mt. Everest, a boy is murdered in the dead of the night because of his fame.
3.A Snowed In Turnabout
4.Year of the Turnabout- Thinking...


There will be more cases, but these are the ones I have planned for now.


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Introduction

Trial
1. He's Late! No, wait, Early!
2. She Tells Him the Truth. But Is It the Truth?
3. Insert Awkward Silence Here

And hopefully Sprite Comics might live again.

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This Sprite Comic is brought to you by Trial And Co.!
[Signature in construction until I make a new one]
I'm back, mate! Still lurking like a ninja but whatevs :3


Last edited by Dawn on Sat May 01, 2010 9:36 pm, edited 12 times in total.
Re: Trace Lumiens - Attorney at LawTopic%20Title
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FINE

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Dragonclaw23 wrote:

Introduction
"Your books are overdue..."

"???:I was wondering, where are the antique books?
???: Don't you know the dewey decimal system??"
THIS IS WHY YOU SHOULD NEVER MESS WITH A LIBRARIAN
I like the profile pic :-P waiting for the first chapter to be released.
Re: Trace Lumiens - Attorney at LawTopic%20Title
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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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Page one's finally up! Now I shall try and get the next one up as soon as possible. :gant:
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Re: Trace Lumiens - Ace Attorney (Updated: 2/10/10)Topic%20Title
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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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Excuse me for doubleposting.

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The next page is up! And I'll try and get working on the next page as soon as possible.
[Signature in construction until I make a new one]
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Re: Trace Lumiens - Ace Attorney (Updated: 2/10/10)Topic%20Title
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The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*

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I'm impressed by the first two pages, Dawn. I'm looking forward to the trial scenes.
Re: Trace Lumiens - Ace Attorney (Updated: 3/9/10)Topic%20Title
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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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I glanced at the last time I updated and found it to be... A MONTH?

Third page has arrived by the pink man of wimpy people everywhere!

To say the truth, I'm not getting enough time to work on this, so expect the next comic to be either here in the next week or even as far away as Spring Break. And the fact that I got AAI today doesn't help.

Edit: Redid the 3rd page because there wasn't a testimony in the top left corner.
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Re: Trace Lumiens - Ace Attorney (Updated: 3/9/10)Topic%20Title
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Kayworth Supporter

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The first 2 pics are broken.
Also I like where the 3rd part is going.
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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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Hmmm, must've forgotten to do the switch again.

Edit: Fixed the links.
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where is the witness bench?
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Re: Trace Lumiens - Ace Attorney (Updated: 3/9/10)Topic%20Title
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We are one

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Wow! Not bad, Dawn. I like it. :acro:
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Audere est facere.

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Hm...nice story going here. Only a few problems, though. The last three Payne sprites' hair don't match with the first ones. Aside from a few spelling errors, that's the only problem I can find, so please do continue~
I've been away for far too long.
So long, in fact, that all of my signatures now exist behind a paywall.
Bummer.
Re: Trace Lumiens - Ace Attorney (Updated: 3/9/10)Topic%20Title
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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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I have some bad news... my computer's down atm, and we need to completely format the hard drive. I will however, be continuing this comic as I still have the sprites, etc. but I just don't have the time to work on it until the summer. Though thanks guys for the crits, I will be trying my best to get this back on track.

Edit: Comp's back up, and I've decided to redo the Trace sprites.
[Signature in construction until I make a new one]
I'm back, mate! Still lurking like a ninja but whatevs :3
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