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Joined: Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:42 am
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A few quips:
1. Your title takes up half the page, and is written using a large size of paintbrush. I would cut down on the size of the title, maybe even get rid of it altogether unless it's really crucial to the comic.
2. It's kind of hard to tell when your character here is thinking, as she speaks in blue-ish text the whole time and there are no brackets around thoughts. For easier comprehension and to stay close to the source, I'd have speaking in white and thoughts in blue brackets.
3. You may want that person in the main frame there to move a bit more. But that's getting nit-picky.
You are off to a good start, nice sprite-mixing, you seem to have your test boxes in order and you have a sense of humor. Good luck on Riu Itsina!
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