Turnabout Copycat:Updated No More

Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:44 pm

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Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:29 pm

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As things stand, I don't feel as though I can say anything other than "keep going" and "don't get discouraged if a new chapter doesn't yield any responses." It's too early in the comic for me to judge it properly.

I'll always love you, Max.

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:40 pm

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WTF were r teh see-thru text boxxes? lol j00 suck.

Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:11 am

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Oh, well I'm not able to make them see through...I'm not allowed to download anything but MS Paint to my computer.

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:48 am

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Well, everyone is in character, that's for sure. The opaque boxes really don't detract from anything. I look forward to see your actual plot.

Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:50 am

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Thanks...wait, were you joking in that previous post? The one where Joo suck? :udgy:

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:59 am

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Of course :P The background was black. How could I have even known to make fun of the opagueness without that other topic?

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Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:03 am

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OH! That's true! Trickytricktricky! You're tricky! Ok! Sorry! That's true, you can't tell the opaqueness! Tee hee.

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:19 am

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XD... woww ahaha.

But it looks pretty nice so far.
Keep going.

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:36 am

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Is that a good wow? Or a "please stop breathing" wow?

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:38 am

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Haha, not about the comic about how you couldn't detect the sarcasm.

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite comic by Krystal

Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:40 am

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Oh...I can't! Even my parents have to warn me before they're gonna be sarcastic! Oh well. Ok, so I've a got a few more pages done. I think I'm done for today...

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite Comic

Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:04 am

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You can't detect sarcasm so easily can you. You better be careful on this Forum Board then Krystal.^^

But so far, it looks interesting.^^

PS: MY REAL NAME WAS USED IN YOUR COMIC! <3

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 7:40 am

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....ozzy?

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite Comic

Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:34 pm

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Well, it's pretty good. Like it was already said, most people really don't care for textboxes, but they care for what's inside them.
(But I do wish I knew how to do semi-transparent boxes...)

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite Comic

Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:05 pm

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Vordox wrote:

You can't detect sarcasm so easily can you. You better be careful on this Forum Board then Krystal.^^

But so far, it looks interesting.^^

PS: MY REAL NAME WAS USED IN YOUR COMIC! <3

Antony?
Sharon?
Krystal?

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite Comic

Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:09 pm

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...Romeo?

Anyways, on-topic. Well, no real objectionable things yet.
One tip, try to update at regular times, rather than wait a bit then
post a bunch and wait a bit again.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 5:51 pm

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Thanks, Greeny! Is 1-2 pages a week good?

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:40 pm

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Personally, I go for the one page per day/two days, because it gets the plot
far quickly, but at a steady pace.

But, of course, it all depends on how much time you have on your hands.
I guess 2 pages a week (if evenly spread out) would be good.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:49 pm

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What Greeny said seems about right. Still, don't let the need for a schedule compromise your creativity. If you plan on following a schedule, I suggest you keep the risk of writer's block in mind. For example, you could make many comics ahead of time and publish them on a schedule so that if you do encounter writer's block, you'll still be able to publish those comics while you wait for an idea to come to you. I know from experience that writer's block can occur even if you have the story planned out. Heck, my own comic--which is on a different forum due to not involving the Ace Attorney series--has hit a writer's block the size of Olympus Mons, even though I know full well how I want it to end and where many of the areas of the plot leading there will go.

I'll always love you, Max.

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite Comic

Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:59 pm

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Ok, thanks! That should help. Even if I make a lot of pages in one day, if I release one every two days I should ba eble to go at a pretty steady pace.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:18 pm

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Sounds like a good plan =D
I write a bunch of script before hand, and then every couple days but them together.

Btw, Voxies name is Ozzy XD

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:54 pm

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Is it really!?!?!?

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:04 pm

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Oooh, interesting! I like so far!

I cracked up laughing at Phoenix's "oh boy" when Atmey turned up xDD

I like chocolate milk. 8D

Avatar and sig made by the awesome Vicki, and Robyn sprite in avatar made by Sammy.
Thankyou!! <333

Re: Turnabout Copycat: A Sprite Comic

Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:09 pm

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Woot! Finally someone thought there was humor! *dances*. Thanks! Of course, anyone would say "oh boy".

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:31 pm

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Ozzy and Sharon? [Looks up Osbournes] Гм... Of the three couples mentioned, those two are still alive--though it looks as though they've had their share of conflicts.

I'll always love you, Max.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:33 pm

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That's the joke. Also, Crazy train is a big hit by Ozzy Osbourne.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:39 pm

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Ah. I wouldn't know, since I don't care for rock music (I use "rock music" to define the general category; I couldn't care less about what each singer calls their style). I know that the "Romeo and Juliet, Cleopatra and Mark Antony" is a gag from The First Turnabout, though, so I caught that part of the joke.

I'll always love you, Max.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:50 pm

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General Luigi wrote:

I know that the "Romeo and Juliet, Cleopatra and Mark Antony" is a gag from The First Turnabout, though, so I caught that part of the joke.

Wait, I didn't know that! When does someone say that?

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:56 pm

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Payne: Mr. Butz. Is it not true that the victim had recently dumped you?

Butz: Hey, watch it buddy!
We were great together! We were Romeo and Juliet, Cleopatra and Mark Anthony!

Phoenix: (Um... didn't they all die?)

Butz: I wasn't dumped! She just wasn't taking my phone calls. Or seeing me... Ever.
WHAT'S IT TO YOU, ANYWAY!?

I'll always love you, Max.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:59 pm

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Oh man, that kinda stinks... I didn't mean that joke to be in there. Ah well.

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Mon Jan 19, 2009 10:03 pm

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It happens. Heck, some of the music I've written wound up with melodies that have been used by other people--though I assure you it's a coincidence.

I'll always love you, Max.

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Tue Jan 20, 2009 1:00 am

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That's happened to me before...*sigh*

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Tue Jan 20, 2009 5:38 am

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No need to get down Krystal. :) Keep what Greeny had in mind, and this might be a popular fan Comic.
And having tributes to some joke isn't always bad, as long as they don't come too often between eachother

And explaining joke does make the joke less funny. You can't please all with a smile.

And yes my name is Ozzy. :P Thanks for spoiling it Ike, Sammie!

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Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:03 am

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welcome ozzie :P (i am SO gunna call you that now)

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Tue Jan 20, 2009 5:40 pm

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Vordox wrote:

No need to get down Krystal. :) Keep what Greeny had in mind, and this might be a popular fan Comic.
And having tributes to some joke isn't always bad, as long as they don't come too often between eachother

And explaining joke does make the joke less funny. You can't please all with a smile.

And yes my name is Ozzy. :P Thanks for spoiling it Ike, Sammie!

I can't beleive it's the one I didn't guess. But I love your name. Ozzy wins.

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Tue Jan 20, 2009 9:58 pm

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New Page today!

Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-20-09

Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:07 am

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Whooo!

"Romeo" Part made me laugh. Your interpretation of Phoenix's Mind Sarcasm was great. XD

"My new favourite" Some has love sickness.^^ Or Perhaps he is just seeking comfort...?

Guess we'll have to see.

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Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:50 am

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I have absolutely no idea where you're going with this.

I guess that's a good thing? Now I'm wondering what will happen next.

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Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:43 pm

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Don't worry! It has a plot! And an ending!