Board index » Present Evidence » Sprite Comics

Page 1 of 2[ 55 posts ]
Go to page 1, 2  Next
 


The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Laziest Spriter in the West

Gender: Female

Location: USA

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:22 am

Posts: 245

Image

Years before dark laughter echoed through the courtroom - even before Phoenix Wright took the stand - one young defense attorney fought for justice. Little did he know that those first steps to the stand would be his first steps towards becoming the Devil's advocate....




If you were looking for Kristoph Gavin: Ace Attourney, try here!

Welcome to our comic! This is a collaborative effort between graphic artist Glace Leau and writer Lady Vincira.

We're starting with the three-page prologue to give you a taste of what's to come. These will be daily.
Case one won't begin until more resources are finished. Until then, please enjoy!


Image
Page 1: Willkommen
Page 2: Formalities
Page 3: We'll Get Along Fine




Image
-----------Coming soon!-----------




Spoiler: Credits
Lots of stuff is by Capcom!
Writing is by Lady Vincira (save for a few of Glace's suggestions)
Art and graphics are by Glace Leau.
Fonts put into Bitmap Font format by Yuma.
Textbox edited from Ceres' template.
A piece of stock from deviantART: [x]
The rest of the stock is from Morguefile. If you haven't seen it already, check it out; it's a great resource!


Last edited by Glace Leau on Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:53 am, edited 5 times in total.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Tea-drinking Godot Fan

Gender: Female

Location: Shuffling red tape for Arkham Asylum.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:39 pm

Posts: 65

The Writer's Corner

This is where I, the writer of the comic, may speak my own little piece.

Nothing to say right now, other than that I hope you enjoy the comic! I've never written for comic format before, but I hope I don't disappoint!

I feel like I should be saying more here. XD So...a little about me, I guess, since most of you will already be familiar with Glace. I've been writing for a long time for a lot of fandoms. Lots of RP, fic, the works. I specialize in characterization - this includes writing canons. So any canon character you see in this comic, you can rest assured I spent way longer than I should have getting into their head. XD'''''' I'm a psychology enthusiast with a penchant for the over-the-top.

Buckle your seatbelts, kids. :garyuu:
~Writer for "Coolest Defense in the West"~
Avatar by Glace Leau!


Last edited by Lady Vincira on Thu Aug 20, 2009 4:12 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title

Two more games coming up soon

Gender: Male

Location: Paris

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Thu Feb 28, 2008 2:45 pm

Posts: 929

It's too early to tell, but... maybe. Just maybe this is finally the worthy competitor we've been looking for.
I mean, with a spriter like Glace Leau and what appears to be a good writer, what could possibly go wrong?
Now I'll have more than one thread to check in this forum :)
Creator of Apollo Justice Case 5: Turnabout Substitution: Trailer - Download
Co-creator of New Year's Turnabout, Turnabout Revolution, and At Dawn's Break
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

My name is Judge.

Gender: Male

Location: Just Outside Your Peripherals

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:47 pm

Posts: 1607

Wow, this is a really good start, I love all the pictures of cats in her office, Kristoph is in for a hell of a time. I wonder, if he'll face off against his brother?
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Sat Oct 25, 2008 12:47 pm

Posts: 154

Quick question Glace, where'd you score the sweet backgrounds from? I'm liking it so far! :)
ImageImage
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

My name is Judge.

Gender: Male

Location: Just Outside Your Peripherals

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:47 pm

Posts: 1607

One is an edited background from 1-2, the other is the Concept Art for Phoenix's office, shrunk down and also edited.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Laziest Spriter in the West

Gender: Female

Location: USA

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:22 am

Posts: 245

Ping'- o///o Thanks, that's very flattering!

Percei- Ah, thanks. ^^ We're aiming to be as canon compliant as possible and, well, we know about Klavier's first trial, but don't rule out some familiar faces showing up.

Christophomicus- They're what Percei said. One's the outside of Mia's office (I think?), with color balance and levels messed with to make it daytime. I also changed the door and painting.
The office is the concept art, cropped and resized. I took out most of the shelf, put the banner and photos on the wall, and added a blanket to make it cozier.
I've been looking for some backgrounds I might be able to use from others games... Most aren't modern-day enough! XD'' These were the best I found:
http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/etr ... sheet/4168

Anyway...



UPDATE!




Page 2: Formalities

This one has sprites! We're a sprite comic now. XD
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Tea-drinking Godot Fan

Gender: Female

Location: Shuffling red tape for Arkham Asylum.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:39 pm

Posts: 65

Thanks for the kind comments, all. ^^ I'm not near as known on this forum as Glace, but I'm having a blast writing this comic. There's some serious epic coming further down the pipeline.
~Writer for "Coolest Defense in the West"~
Avatar by Glace Leau!
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Property of Big Corporate Things Inc.

Gender: Female

Location: Wait... It depends, which way is up?

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:55 am

Posts: 1425

Mein Gott!
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:30 pm

Posts: 1014

Glace Leau wrote:
Ping'- o///o Thanks, that's very flattering!

Percei- Ah, thanks. ^^ We're aiming to be as canon compliant as possible and, well, we know about Klavier's first trial, but don't rule out some familiar faces showing up.

Christophomicus- They're what Percei said. One's the outside of Mia's office (I think?), with color balance and levels messed with to make it daytime. I also changed the door and painting.
The office is the concept art, cropped and resized. I took out most of the shelf, put the banner and photos on the wall, and added a blanket to make it cozier.
I've been looking for some backgrounds I might be able to use from others games... Most aren't modern-day enough! XD'' These were the best I found:
http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/etr ... sheet/4168

Anyway...



UPDATE!





This one has sprites! We're a sprite comic now. XD

where is the concept art?
Sig.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Tea-drinking Godot Fan

Gender: Female

Location: Shuffling red tape for Arkham Asylum.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:39 pm

Posts: 65

Greeny - CATCHPHRASE XD Seriously, though, I don't speak German, so I hope I'm passable. ^^

DefenceLawer - Under "Official Art" in the main CR site. Also...if you could please not quote whole update posts? ^^' Thank you.
~Writer for "Coolest Defense in the West"~
Avatar by Glace Leau!
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:30 pm

Posts: 1014

Lady Vincira wrote:
Greeny - CATCHPHRASE XD Seriously, though, I don't speak German, so I hope I'm passable. ^^

DefenceLawer - Under "Official Art" in the main CR site. Also...if you could please not quote whole update posts? ^^' Thank you.

sorry won't do it again, and thanks :will:
Sig.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Tea-drinking Godot Fan

Gender: Female

Location: Shuffling red tape for Arkham Asylum.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:39 pm

Posts: 65

DefenceLawer - No problem - and thanks for understanding. ^^'
~Writer for "Coolest Defense in the West"~
Avatar by Glace Leau!
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:30 pm

Posts: 1014

Lady Vincira wrote:
DefenceLawer - No problem - and thanks for understanding. ^^'

your velcome :garyuu:
Sig.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

~I'm a guy, surprisingly~

Gender: Male

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:35 pm

Posts: 969

Hahah, I'm looking forward to the rest, I laughed when I saw the office, just a bit, at the cat photos. xDD
It looks quite professional, the way you've edited the first background enough that I can't realize which you used. :D
So, um... Yeah, you've got a good team, I can tell.
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

I just blue myself

Gender: Male

Location: Kangaroo City

Rank: Medium-in-training

Joined: Mon May 11, 2009 1:42 pm

Posts: 478

Wow. This is a really good idea! Which year is it btw? (2016 is GS1) :P
I'm So Meta, Even This Acronym

But in all honesty, META humour sucks.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Oh man!!! I don´t understand

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:46 pm

Posts: 21

Yes man!!! I like him Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

I are the duck.

Gender: Male

Location: Where all the good people go.

Rank: Medium-in-training

Joined: Thu Jun 25, 2009 4:09 pm

Posts: 367

This is gonna go well....I like this comic already. :gant:
Image

Credit for the above goes to this person here.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Laziest Spriter in the West

Gender: Female

Location: USA

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:22 am

Posts: 245

Dekuran- Thanks! That's flattering.

ReturnofthePhoenix- Currently it's late 2014. That was supposed to be in the first comic, then I realized the date format has no year! XD''

heichy_2_2- Kristoph? I like him too. That's why this comic exists! XD

Freakyalex- Thanks!




UPDATE!




Page 3: We'll Get Along Fine

I know I'm late. I fail. T-T
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

My name is Judge.

Gender: Male

Location: Just Outside Your Peripherals

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:47 pm

Posts: 1607

Very nice updates Glace and Vincira, I really like the characterization of Kristoph's boss, even if I can't stand people like her. I like the subtle addidtion of the headband type thing around her crown, it makes her seem more hippie-ish.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:30 pm

Posts: 1014

Freakyalex wrote:
This is gonna go well....I like this comic already. :gant:

Agreed, I think this has the chance to be the best comic in the thread, maybe even on the web... the world wide web. :will:
Sig.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Property of Big Corporate Things Inc.

Gender: Female

Location: Wait... It depends, which way is up?

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:55 am

Posts: 1425

DefenceLawer wrote:
Agreed, I think this has the chance to be the best comic in the thread

I lol'd
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:30 pm

Posts: 1014

Greeny wrote:
DefenceLawer wrote:
Agreed, I think this has the chance to be the best comic in the thread

I lol'd

...Sorry, I forgot about Francais... sorry Greeny I feel really bad now I said that, erm... I think both comics rule :payne: ... sorry again greeny, just in case you took offence... I'll stop typing now, :payne:
Sig.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

OBJECTION! BOTH ATTORNEYS ARE AWESOME!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Medium-in-training

Joined: Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:51 am

Posts: 394

My only problem atm is that it's kind of OOC for Kristoph to talk in such a heavy german accent[Did Kristoph even use a single German word in all of AJ?]...looking good on everything else.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gettin' Old!

Gender: Male

Location: Scotland

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:30 pm

Posts: 14363

BBdoubleB wrote:
My only problem atm is that it's kind of OOC for Kristoph to talk in such a heavy german accent[Did Kristoph even use a single German word in all of AJ?]...looking good on everything else.


Bear in mind....this is a long time ago, Kristoph has just left Germany, it's only natural for his accent to stick around a little longer and to be worn away eventually.

But looks good, can't wait to see it in court.

Also Kim Baia? I LOVE the pun.
Made by Chesu+Zombee
Image

You thought you could be safe in your courts, with your laws and attorneys to protect you. In this world only I am law, my word is fact, my power is absolute.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

My name is Judge.

Gender: Male

Location: Just Outside Your Peripherals

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:47 pm

Posts: 1607

As Blondie said. This is set at least 10 Years Prior to Apollo Justice, Kristoph has just graduated German law school (in fact, Klavier hasn't even become a prosecutor or started the Gavinners yet), it's only logical he still has a German accent. The reason he doesn't in AJ is that (we can assume) he's practiced law in America for at least 10 Years, which is sufficent time to strip someone of their accent.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Property of Big Corporate Things Inc.

Gender: Female

Location: Wait... It depends, which way is up?

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:55 am

Posts: 1425

DefenceLawer wrote:
Greeny wrote:
DefenceLawer wrote:
Agreed, I think this has the chance to be the best comic in the thread

I lol'd

...Sorry, I forgot about Francais... sorry Greeny I feel really bad now I said that, erm... I think both comics rule :payne: ... sorry again greeny, just in case you took offence... I'll stop typing now, :payne:

I don't think you get it.
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

~I'm a guy, surprisingly~

Gender: Male

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:35 pm

Posts: 969

It's because he said 'Thread', right?
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:30 pm

Posts: 1014

Quote:
I lol'd

...Sorry, I forgot about Francais... sorry Greeny I feel really bad now I said that, erm... I think both comics rule :payne: ... sorry again greeny, just in case you took offence... I'll stop typing now, :payne:[/quote]
I don't think you get it.[/quote]
... get what? :yuusaku:
Sig.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Property of Big Corporate Things Inc.

Gender: Female

Location: Wait... It depends, which way is up?

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:55 am

Posts: 1425

DefenceLawer wrote:
Greeny wrote:
DefenceLawer wrote:
...Sorry, I forgot about Francais... sorry Greeny I feel really bad now I said that, erm... I think both comics rule :payne: ... sorry again greeny, just in case you took offence... I'll stop typing now, :payne:

I don't think you get it.

... get what? :yuusaku:

I suggest you organize your brain cells from one to ten and try again.
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gettin' Old!

Gender: Male

Location: Scotland

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:30 pm

Posts: 14363

Yo Greeny Sarcasm is the most evilest thing in the universe! He's just making an apology and you respond by burning him? :yuusaku:

See what sarcasm does to you?
Made by Chesu+Zombee
Image

You thought you could be safe in your courts, with your laws and attorneys to protect you. In this world only I am law, my word is fact, my power is absolute.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

~I'm a guy, surprisingly~

Gender: Male

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:35 pm

Posts: 969

Herr Blondie wrote:
Yo Greeny Sarcasm is the most evilest ...


... Nnnnng...
Must resist grammar Nazi... urges... Nnng...

@Greeny: There was no need for that, come on. :I

OT: Did I comment on the 3rd part? No? If not, I'm looking forward to the rest!
*Waits in anxiousness*
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Property of Big Corporate Things Inc.

Gender: Female

Location: Wait... It depends, which way is up?

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:55 am

Posts: 1425

You people all take things too seriously.
Image
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gettin' Old!

Gender: Male

Location: Scotland

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:30 pm

Posts: 14363

Dekuran wrote:
Herr Blondie wrote:
Yo Greeny Sarcasm is the most evilest ...


... Nnnnng...
Must resist grammar Nazi... urges... Nnng...

@Greeny: There was no need for that, come on. :I

OT: Did I comment on the 3rd part? No? If not, I'm looking forward to the rest!
*Waits in anxiousness*


good! u resist those Grammar Nazi urges teh bestestest u can!

(Now that was uncalled for)

OT: I hope the court sprites are as good as the out of court ones cause I'm very impressed so far it'd be a shame if Kristoph's sprite were to ruin it.
Made by Chesu+Zombee
Image

You thought you could be safe in your courts, with your laws and attorneys to protect you. In this world only I am law, my word is fact, my power is absolute.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

I'm the one who's supposed to say that!

Gender: None specified

Location: In Texas (Where they shoot you for that)

Rank: Medium-in-training

Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2009 3:33 am

Posts: 391

How the hell can I be a grammar Nazi if I not see grammar?


Anyway, I'm likin' this so far. I hope to see some actual defense going on soon to make the title make sense.
Image
Avast! It's Pirate/Matey Day!
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Laziest Spriter in the West

Gender: Female

Location: USA

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:22 am

Posts: 245

Lots of posts! @_@

Uh..

Everyone - Thanks for the comments!

Percei- Thank you. Her character just sort of... happened. XD Neither of us are anything like that!

DefenceLawer, Thanks, but... isn't it a little early to tell?

BBdoubleB- That was sufficiently explained by Percei and Herr Blondie, but I'm glad that's the only thing you have to complain about. ^^

Herr Blondie- Hehe, I like her name too, it was Vin's idea.
As for Kristoph's sprites... well, refer to our avatars? XD
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gender: None specified

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:30 pm

Posts: 1014

Quote:
I suggest you organize your brain cells from one to ten and try again.

... :sadshoe:

Quote:
Yo Greeny Sarcasm is the most evilest thing in the universe! He's just making an apology and you respond by burning him?

See what sarcasm does to you?

Thanks for standing up for me Herr Blondie, but it dosn't bother me that much because If he keeps on burning anyone he may run out of fire, plus hopefully he might get banned or something, untill he calms down... :sadshoe:
Sig.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Tea-drinking Godot Fan

Gender: Female

Location: Shuffling red tape for Arkham Asylum.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:39 pm

Posts: 65

Er...guys? Could we avoid drama in the thread? ^^' Light as it is, it does get a bit distracting.

Anyway, thanks for all the kind words. <3 Glad you're all enjoying it so far!

It'll be a little while before the first case officially starts, but we're hard at work on it. We wanted to upload the prologue early on so that you'd all have a taste of what was to come. ^^
~Writer for "Coolest Defense in the West"~
Avatar by Glace Leau!
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

Gettin' Old!

Gender: Male

Location: Scotland

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:30 pm

Posts: 14363

Don't sweat it DL, Greeny was in the wrong.

Someone should never be punished for naievity.
God knows I have been often enough.

Anyway sorry for the hassle Lady V.

If you don't mind me asking why will the prologue be so long? Most comics I've seen tend to start at the opening of a trial is there going to be serious pre-trial events?
Made by Chesu+Zombee
Image

You thought you could be safe in your courts, with your laws and attorneys to protect you. In this world only I am law, my word is fact, my power is absolute.
Re: The Coolest Defense in the West (AJ spoilers)Topic%20Title
User avatar

I'd say

Gender: Male

Location: Belgium

Rank: Moderators

Joined: Thu May 29, 2008 10:49 am

Posts: 2480

Wow, This looks great.

Taking both your ava's and the pages up until now into account, this has to be the best looking comic so far.
The accent is going to take time getting used to, but otherwise it looks game worthy so far.



Also a couple of questions for Glace:

-That ' let's name it "Aura" ' around your ava's.
I take it it's not in the comic sprites themselves, right?

Image
-And, in this sprite, while I love it, the collar looks odd.
Too much shirt ratio compare to the vest maybe?
I mean the whole upper chest area of the vest seems kind of "stretched", if you know what I mean?




Keep it up guys, I'll be checking in frequently.
Page 1 of 2 [ 55 posts ] 
Go to page 1, 2  Next
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  

 Board index » Present Evidence » Sprite Comics

Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 22 guests

You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum
Jump to:  
News News Site map Site map SitemapIndex SitemapIndex RSS Feed RSS Feed Channel list Channel list
Powered by phpBB

phpBB SEO