The CR of GvK *MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS*

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Fri May 16, 2008 10:30 pm

I have decided to start a sprite comic of my OC. The Court Record of Ghaleon von Karma!

It takes place after GS4, so spoilers might show up, so please do not read if you are not ready to be spoiled in any way.

Without further ado, the comic!

June 6, 2008: Over 1000 views for the comic. I am very happy to see I have steady readers, so thank you very much and I especially thank those who comment on the comic, for better or worse. Here's to another 1000! :b33r:

PROLOGUE
Page 1: The Rookie
Page 2: Introductions are a Bore
Page 3: Loveless Motive
Page 4: Like, Oh My God!
Page 5: Lies and Innocence Don't Mix
Page 6: Dark Truths
Page 7: The Visitor

CHAPTER ONE: TURNABOUT TRIALS
Page 8: The Von Karma
Page 9: The Mystery Man's Question
Page 10: Past Scars
Page 11: Murder Deux
Page 12: DeLite-ful Meeting

Spoiler: Response from a Typo in the 5th Page

Spoiler: Smileys!

Spoiler: Sometimes, to be perfect...you need extra zip in the morning...

6.26.08: As a joke in the CR Mafia thread, I paraphrased Willy Wonka (Wilder) in a bash attempt. Afterwards, I was challenged to have Ghaleon have a Willy Wonka hat. I delievered:

Spoiler: If You Want To View Paradise...

Spoiler: My Creation!

Spoiler: Newest Addition!

7.3.08
I have decided to work on single pictures of Ghaleon von Karma's family. Again, something extra and a sneak peek of what is to come in the future. Right now, I am still not perfect with my editing, and I can't do necks well, but at least I tried.

Spoiler: First, Ghaleon's father: Baron Wilhelm van Rickter

8.15.08
I was part of a winning Mafia team in VG Mafia Round V. I was Doctor Ivo Robotnik and a challenge was set to alter my avatar to fit this new persona. I try hard not to disappoint.

Spoiler: Will The Real Eggman Please Stand Up?

Tajiri Ami · Post by **Tajiri Ami** » Fri May 16, 2008 11:58 pm

Awesome. I was always hoping someone would point out the faults of his nickname. XD

Sphinx · Post by **Sphinx** » Sat May 17, 2008 9:25 am

Heh, Rookie killer...^^

I like it thusfar! I love the Ghaleon sprite. :D

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Sun May 18, 2008 12:04 am

dude, i didn't pick a better evil badass than GvK! awesome comic. that reminds me..
How does Payne constantly run into brick walls like that?

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Sun May 18, 2008 5:05 am

Tajiri Ami wrote:Awesome. I was always hoping someone would point out the faults of his nickname. XD

I know, I always wondered who would do that...might as well be GvK :karma:

Sphinx wrote:Heh, Rookie killer...^^
I like it thusfar! I love the Ghaleon sprite. :D

Thank you. I plan on updating him in a few weeks.

DokenMan wrote:dude, i didn't pick a better evil badass than GvK! awesome comic. that reminds me..
How does Payne constantly run into brick walls like that?

Because unlike the rookies who face him in the past, GvK is not as humble or naive to allow Payne to bully him.

root_beer_junkie · Post by **root_beer_junkie** » Sun May 18, 2008 5:12 am

DEFENSE ATTORNEY VON KARMA!!! I love it!!! ...That's an interesting name, by the way...
Oh, and in response to the judge's last remark... *head-desk*

Tajiri Ami · Post by **Tajiri Ami** » Sun May 18, 2008 2:37 pm

You have a neat layout, decent writing skills, everything's clean and legible...

You have my complete seal of approval.

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Sun May 18, 2008 10:51 pm

Tajiri Ami wrote:You have a neat layout, decent writing skills, everything's clean and legible...

You have my complete seal of approval.

Alright! I have a seal of approval from Ami! :karma:

Page 3 is up! From hereon, there will be two strips a week (three if I feel generous). I will try to keep up with it, and if anyone wishes to be guest stars or has ideas, please let me know! I am open to suggestions.

Aviv · Post by **Aviv** » Sun May 18, 2008 11:18 pm

Holy shit i lmao'd at the last one.
also, guest stars...? seen my comics, perhaps...? :hotti:

Katana · Post by **Katana** » Mon May 19, 2008 12:09 am

Hah. Never thought von Karma would work so well as a defense attorney. I like the use of his headbang sprite.

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Mon May 19, 2008 3:53 am

Like I said. Payne got Brick Wall'd.

Lynx · Post by **Lynx** » Mon May 19, 2008 3:57 am

This is quality! Love it! Judge in #2 is fabulously accurate.

dullahan1 · Post by **dullahan1** » Mon May 19, 2008 4:26 am

I absolutely love this! Comic #3 is probably my favorite so far. I didn't even notice until I read the comic that aside from AJ, each case 1 murder had to do with some kind of couple. Cindy and Larry, Maggey and Dustin, Dahlia and Phoenix/Doug. I'm really loving your work though and I can't wait to see more!

Sphinx · Post by **Sphinx** » Mon May 19, 2008 3:01 pm

Teehee... I lol'd at the last one, ^^
You sure now how to put Payne's ego where it belongs! ^^
And yeah I'm with Aviv, how about guest stars? :D

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Mon May 19, 2008 4:40 pm

Well, after the first trial is finished...I am open to suggestion. I saw a lot of what other people do on their comics/drawings and I thought it only appropriate if others wanted to jump in if they thought it was something they wanted to be a part of. It was just a thought.

Caelestis · Post by **Caelestis** » Tue May 20, 2008 2:41 am

LOL! Go Producers!... Or West Side Story, if you want to get technical about origination... But Producers made it funny!

Anyway, I'm looking forward to this. The second comic where the Judge accidentally got the court menu (I totally called that, by the way :redd:

) and Payne's psychiatry motivational songs... priceless. :edgy:

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Wed May 21, 2008 4:34 pm

Thank you everyone, for your wonderful feedback. I honestly never thought this would actually nab attention so fast, and I am very happy to see everyone pretty much enjoying it! It keeps me going and really excited to work on the comic. I present now Page 4: Like, Oh My God on the list.

FlashPoint · Post by **FlashPoint** » Wed May 21, 2008 6:11 pm

I like the Ghaleon sprite and it was really funny. 10/10

Ben Credable (PI) · Post by **Ben Credable (PI)** » Wed May 21, 2008 6:58 pm

I'm really shock that I never paid attention to this sooner. This is just fantastic.

root_beer_junkie · Post by **root_beer_junkie** » Wed May 21, 2008 8:33 pm

Like that was like totally funny! ;P

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Thu May 22, 2008 12:43 am

Wow. I didn't expect someone like Ini showing up. Like, making fun of her is like... fun.

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Thu May 22, 2008 12:53 am

FlashPoint wrote:I like the Ghaleon sprite and it was really funny. 10/10

I'm glad you like it :karma:

Ben Credable (PI) wrote:I'm really shock that I never paid attention to this sooner. This is just fantastic.

It's no problem. I never expected anyone to really pick me out when there are regulars here that do better than I. I'm glad you like it :karma:

root_beer_junkie wrote:Like that was like totally funny! ;P

Like, I know :karma:

DokenMan wrote:Wow. I didn't expect someone like Ini showing up. Like, making fun of her is like... fun.

Expect the unexpected here, my friend. It's like the only way like you would understand. :karma:

(That's right! :karma:

's for everyone!)

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Thu May 22, 2008 2:33 am

Okie.

evilomega13 · Post by **evilomega13** » Thu May 22, 2008 3:36 pm

Haha! This is good. I should have seen it sooner. And its very inkeeping with the Von Karma charectar.

Sphinx · Post by **Sphinx** » Thu May 22, 2008 4:55 pm

Like Oh My God! xD

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Thu May 22, 2008 8:52 pm

Von Karma. Only Defense Attorney to not only grill his witnesses, but he roasts them too.

root_beer_junkie · Post by **root_beer_junkie** » Thu May 22, 2008 9:06 pm

would lose against this guy big time. XD

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Thu May 22, 2008 9:11 pm

The boots are impervious to the whip.

Yuriko Oyama · Post by **Yuriko Oyama** » Thu May 22, 2008 9:15 pm

Thumbs up for Defense Attorney Von Karma!
That guy's got charisma!
Like, your comic is, like, very nice! :knock-knock:

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Thu May 22, 2008 9:22 pm

This is for everyone who posted since my last post and those that posted before and to those who just observe. Thank you all very much! I am amazed on how fast in just a short week that people enjoy this character as much as I. I will try my hardest to keep his adventures in court up to date and make sure that he does not disappoint you all in his escapades. Again, thank you all. I feel real honored right now. I will try to get another strip down either Friday or Saturday. Until then, :karma:

is watching you just as much as you are watching :karma:

!

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Thu May 22, 2008 9:41 pm

Now I'd like to know how the witness snaps.

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Fri May 23, 2008 1:05 am

I'm working on the new comic as I speak. I have the script done, just need to do the panels now.

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Fri May 23, 2008 10:25 am

I enjoy doing this much. Page 5 is up, and it's a double length! More fun here! Plus, things start taking a more serious tone, as GvK knows something...but what could it be?

Sphinx · Post by **Sphinx** » Fri May 23, 2008 1:27 pm

LIKE NO WAY! XD
God this is like, well let us just say if I where to need a Defense Attorney I'd really really get my hands on Ghaleon fo' sho.

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Sat May 24, 2008 12:58 am

Who wouldn't? Ghaleon could probably even beat Manfred in a case... given they don't kill each other first.

Ghaleon von Karma · Post by **Ghaleon von Karma** » Sat May 24, 2008 1:15 am

DokenMan wrote:Who wouldn't? Ghaleon could probably even beat Manfred in a case... given they don't kill each other first.

Hmmm....

DokenMaster · Post by **DokenMaster** » Sat May 24, 2008 4:57 am

The Doken Master has spoken.

dibble · Post by **dibble** » Sat May 24, 2008 11:32 am

that was the funniest thing ive seen in a while and ive seen some pretty funny things

root_beer_junkie · Post by **root_beer_junkie** » Sat May 24, 2008 3:11 pm

OOooh, that last one was scary! I got goosebumps! Keep going.

Ryu · Post by **Ryu** » Sat May 24, 2008 6:11 pm

Dude, it's spelled AUTOPSY. :matt:

NOT 'autospy'~