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Pursuit ~ Lying Coldly Remix
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This is my first kind of musical composition that I have published on the internet or anything like that, so some feedback would be nice.
I would also like to thank Crane043 for telling me how to use Domino MIDI and all that stuff.
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Overall, it's a good attempt. Keep it up!
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Re: Pursuit ~ Lying Coldly Remix
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Hm... It sounds good, but it lacks power. It sounds really empty, and some wrong notes here and there. You should use orchestra-hits from time to time.
Overall, it's a good attempt. Keep it up!
Overall, it's a good attempt. Keep it up!
Hey, some input! Thanks.
Yeah, it does lack power and I hear some wrong notes too. I just didn't want to not post it after spending so much time on it. Perhaps this was a bit too ambitious for being a beginner at transcribing?
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needs more bass. and watch the harmony at 1:03 onwards (the descending bass), it gets a bit clashy and there are a few clangers every now and then.
oh and yeah I agree, it is a bit empty. play around with some other percussion sounds, or just more instruments in general. If you do make a version 1.1, do upload it though
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