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So, yeah. After hearing Skankin Garbage's "Examination - Moderato" and GS4's Examination ~ Moderate, I decided to try my hand at making my own theme... But I've hit a roadblock. With only a Virtual Piano and and a Midi Keyboard demo, I've come up with this:

EDIT: The new revised verison is up on Putfile.

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Its kinda repetitive, and it gets kinda high in the middle of each loop...but aside from that, added instruments could make this work. Good luck!
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Brandon Strong wrote:
Its kinda repetitive, and it gets kinda high in the middle of each loop...but aside from that, added instruments could make this work. Good luck!

I did mean for it to be repetitive, since it's usually the Allegro version that adds another part to it. The high part is, I think, where I upped the pitch by a half-step. I could do without it, I suppose.

What other instruments would you suggest? Having a trial midi *shudders* keyboard is annoying, since I can only play so much before a registration thing pops up and cuts all sound off from it...
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For some reason I can't download it. Direct clicking or opening it in a new tab just redirects me back here. Right clicking and saving also saves this page.

Copy and pasting the link brings up a bunch of gibberish.
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Try the alternative link. The first one didn't have url tags, so...

Also, Audacity has messed up on me, so I can't seem to record anything... and right when I found the perfect addition... I think my laptop hates me

EDIT3: Added the revision to first post.
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Make the piano less.... spikey. Smooth it more. And it got some pretty ugly holes, it's not allowed to fade out the individual notes. That makes its sound horrible. Fix that. :javado:
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Its a bit fast, I would slow down the pace and add somehting a little different coming towards the end.
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Bleachlover wrote:
Its a bit fast, I would slow down the pace and add somehting a little different coming towards the end.

I was planning to do that, but couldn't come up with anything to add to it... I'm still working on it, though. (With a lack of the laptop and thus the software, I'm doing it VIA regular piano.)
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Good, but maybay too repetitive...
Little mixing and you are there...
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