Gender: Female
Rank: Ace Attorney
Joined: Wed Aug 08, 2012 2:23 pm
Posts: 9918
ObjectionEarthbound wrote:
Sounds like a total piece of shit
Well, something to add to the "never-read" list. Seeing "sad love story" and "shoujo" together was already a horrible sign to me.
You know, I overall don't
mind making sad love stories that are also shoujo.
As long as the sad parts of it are believeable.
Say I Love You has a sad part for main heroine Mei, where Yamato begins to model and while she is happy to see him succeed and that he has fun during the job, she is feeling down because she feels selfish for
not wanting him to do the modelling. It's a nice part where we can see how she's torn, but talking makes things better. (Actually that manga has various "sad" parts that I think worked... except for the Megumi thing. I never like the "Girl is being a bitch because she was bullied when she was younger" reason.)
Papillon: Hana to Chou has several sad parts in it. Granted, some of the sad parts come from obligatory twin-sister-mix-up and idiotic stunts, but parts of it are still very believeable. Overall, I don't think the manga even ended on such a happy note, but it ended up in a good way and in a believeable way that made me think, "Parts were sad but they worked."
And in
Koizora they just
don't. We start off with the cliché of Near Rape Experience where the hero always saves the girl before it happens, but it turns out that he doesn't save her. Mika does get raped by various guys. That's... actually quite gutsy and unexpected. But then we get the Suicide Attempt, then we go to the fear of a sudden, unwanted pregnancy to short happy time of dreaming of a happy future with the baby,
bam, we have miscarriage! Sadness! Then we have the boyfriend being a jerk, sadness! Hey, a nice guy who actually treats Mika well,
bam, Hiro is still nice but he just has cancer, Sadness! Hiro dies,
SADNESS! Suicide attempt,
SADNESS!
None of it seems realistic, it just looks like one tragic event stacked on top of the next to make the player somehow feel bad and empathetic towards Mika. One sad thing after another
can work, but it's a really delicate thing to get right and if you make one mistake, it all feels forced.
C-A