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The new game I've been working on:

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Case 1:Turnabout Mystery

Spoiler: Credit (Has spoilers!)
Athena Defense Bench sprites: Mijumaru (Idle pose made by Rajin.)
Athena Front/Co-council: mercurialSK (Idle, surprised, and happy were made by Rajin.)
Apollo Co-Council: mercurialSK
Layton sprites: Zinle
Phoenix DD style sprites: Rajin
Mood Matrix (I added in the colored emotions.): LuigiBlackquill
Pearl Fey DD style, and Athena mugshot: Anyare
Thought route: TheDoctor
Special scrolling background: Zinle
Apollo Front: Tap on AAO (jeti drew the original Apollo so credit to him too.)
Miles objection: Silgneris

Thanks to all that is named above!

2026 part:
Defense Leader: Phoenix Wright (First), Apollo Justice (second)
Defense team: Apollo Justice, Phoenix Wright,
Spoiler:
Miles Edgeworth, Maya Fey also help. Trucy Wright helps before she was accused.

Prosecutors: Klavier Gavin (First), Miles Edgeworth (second, hardly does anything.), Franziska von Karma (Last)
Defendants: Apollo Justice (First), Trucy Wright (second)
Progress: 100% done

2028 part:
Defense Leader: Phoenix Wright
Defense Team: Phoenix Wright, Apollo Justice,
Spoiler:
Athena Cykes, Miles Edgeworth, Trucy Wright, Pearl Fey

Prosecutor:
Spoiler: Prosecutor, very spoilish (fake word) :edgeworth:
Apollo Wright, to see him, go to my sprite topic!

Defendant:
Spoiler: Defendant
Franziska von Karma

Progress: 1% done :sadshoe:

What Happens:
Spoiler:
Apollo Justice :apollo: , Trucy Wright :trucy: , Miles Edgeworth :edgeworth: and Franziska von Karma :franny: all get stuck in this tour of a hotel. When they get to Klavier Gavin's office, Edgeworth leaves the hotel, a bellboy (Jake Meralda) goes to the office. Kay Faraday :kay: , trying to find Edgeworth, accidentally goes to Klavier Gavin's office. Kristoph Gavin :kristoph: trying to find Klavier, goes to the office of Klavier. While the bellboy looks around the office for Klavier Gavin, he is murdered :apollo-shock: . Everyone I mentioned (Apart from Edgeworth :edgey: .) is a witness. :phoenix:



Case 2:The Tricked Turnabout

0% done :sadshoe: :sadshoe: :sadshoe:



Comments are allowed!
Tell me if you like or dislike this plot!
The case: Turnabout Mystery is not able to be played until completed.
Game will be on Ace Attorney Online.
Once I start The Tricked Turnabout, people will be able to help. (If you want to help, note me in a PM and I will decide if you can help. I'll send you a link to the editor I you are allowed to help)


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Some information on the plot of the game would be good.Also,it would be a good idea to open a thread for this in AAO,as there would be more people to help you with your trial.
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I have a couple of observations:

  • Don't you think that revealing who are going to testify kind of takes the surprise out of your game? I would recommend to remove that information.
  • Also, some plot would be nice, in order to make people know what kind of story to expect.
  • When you say "Progress: 100%", what do you mean, exactly? Is the game ready to be played already, or you mean that the scripting part is complete?
  • Is it really necessary to point out the final verdict? I mean, sure, it's Not Guilty by default, but I've seen cool projects that not always end in a Not Guilty verdict (and telling it beforehand would have ruined the surprise).

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Mr. Onizuka wrote:
I have a couple of observations:

  • Don't you think that revealing who are going to testify kind of takes the surprise out of your game? I would recommend to remove that information.
  • Also, some plot would be nice, in order to make people know what kind of story to expect.
  • When you say "Progress: 100%", what do you mean, exactly? Is the game ready to be played already, or you mean that the scripting part is complete?
  • Is it really necessary to point out the final verdict? I mean, sure, it's Not Guilty by default, but I've seen cool projects that not always end in a Not Guilty verdict (and telling it beforehand would have ruined the surprise).

I'll remove the testifying parts. :apollo:
100% means the that whole part is done. :phoenix:
And I'll get rid of the verdict part. :athena:

Also expect some more information, BUT NOT A LOT! :edgeworth:
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Hey, I don't wanna tell you how to do your own thing, but you should release maybe a small part of the case to get people interested, aswell as show your progressing in the case.
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Spoiler:
Soooo Klavier has an office in a hotel?

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cesar26100 wrote:
Spoiler:
Soooo Klavier has an office in a hotel?


Totally. :godot:
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Blizdi wrote:
Hey, I don't wanna tell you how to do your own thing, but you should release maybe a small part of the case to get people interested, aswell as show your progressing in the case.

I had already said:


ApolloRocks23 wrote:
The case: Turnabout Mystery is not able to be played until completed.

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Go along! Sorry! :oops:
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To put your case out there, you should just take a screen shot of some random part you have done. It lets them see the sprites in action.
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