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I'm renovating this thread. I'll be adding old things back soon enough and they'll look brand new.
All of these are free to use with credit.
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Canon character sprites

Spoiler: Penny Nichols extra poses
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Spoiler: Lisa Basil extra poses
Most of these (except for damage/nervous) are based off of Android 21 3/7's extra Lisa sprites.
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Spoiler: Turner Grey extra poses
Credit to Putin for the clenching Grey base.
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Spoiler: Maggey Byrde extra poses
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Spoiler: Extra witness sprites
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Spoiler: Candice Arme
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Spoiler: Gregory Edgeworth
His poses are based on his GK2 poses. For a lot of the heads I used Android 21 3/7's Gregory sprites as a base.
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Spoiler: Buddy Faith
The looking away head is based off of Zinle's AAI Buddy Faith sprite.
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Spoiler: Bishop Sharps
Name: Bishop Sharps
Age: 24
Occupation: Junior Defence Attorney at Cotta and Co. Law Offices
Bishops is a rather stoic person, and he doesn't as so much wear his heart on his sleeve as he has it buried 6 ft under and 2 metres more. When expressing his emotions, it's generally a change in his face or maybe the picking up of an arm or two. Bishop has an excellent poker face, but ironically is never any good at the game itself. Generally, he's rather quiet and in his own thoughts, and usually ignores or quips sarcastically at anyone that doesn't interest him. When placed in a leadership position, he can become rather bossy and irritable. He has some bad blood with his twin sister, Natasha, a prosecutor, and they often get into childish fights in court. He works at Cotta and Co. Law Offices with Terry and Aqua, and is the newest member.
His name, if you couldn't figure it out, comes from the Pokemon, Bisharp, as well as his sharp tongue to his sister and others.

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Spoiler: Miranda Zarday
Name: Miranda Zarday
Age: 34
Occupation: Hunter
Miranda was once a decorated solider in the military, and has since retired after her service, after a brutal 2 year kidnapping at the end, to a quiet and easy life on the countryside, living with her family and her pets. Her time in the war gave her a new fear of small, enclosed spaces, as well as a heavy paranoia of people. She doesn't trust anyone that comes near her, due to many of the people she thought as friends during the war betrayed her, and she's always packing heat in her purse. She is quick to anger and jump to conclusions around people she doesn't know, but around her family, she is the kind, compassionate girl they know she is. She now hunts professionally for a living, and rumour has it she often times dabbles in illegal fur trade. She is extremely punctual.
Her last name comes from "tardy," something she tries to avoid being.

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Spoiler: Quinn DiMagi
Name: Quinn DiMagi
Age: 49
Occupation: Senior Defence Attorney at Cotta and Co. Law Offices./Teacher at Themis Legal Academy
Quinn in rather harsh. She can be nasty at times, and doesn't take lip from anyone, especially her students. She is one of the teachers in the Defence attorney course at Themis. She often reads notes she creates in her little black book, or, if you're frustrating her, she'll ignore you and read out of it instead. She is married as has 3 children, whom she will protect at all costs, even if one of them as gone astray from her. She is very protective of her students as well, of which Bishop, Terry and Aqua were. As a lawyer, she works with her three students at Terry's law office, and treats the three of them like her own children. She is a gifted lawyer, and has won a many cases.
Her name comes from the story "The Gift of the Magi," which my class was reading at the time I made her, and the word Magi just got stuck in my head.

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Kain Lewis: Ace Attorney sprites

Spoiler: Kain Lewis
Name: Kain Lewis
Age: 25
Occupation: Defence Attorney at L&T Law Offices, as well as it's founder.
Kain is a quiet man, preferring to keep his thoughts to himself, or with Leon, his husband. The two of them met during law school, at a simulated trial, where Kain was the defence and Leo was his assigned co-council. Long story short, they kept meeting afterwards and eventually they tied the knot and started their own law firm. Kain is a firm man, and is solid in his opinions until proven otherwise. He's very polite and well-mannered, but in his head he can be nastier than Phoenix ever was. Despite being a quiet man, he is not stoic like Bishop, as he does show his emotions much more easily than Bishop does. Kain gets frustrated real easily, can be easily flustered, and somewhat overconfident at times, but is quick to come back down to earth. When angered, he is all ice, cold and uncaring to his adversary until they are frozen by him. He is very protective of his friends and family, especially Leon, and will battle and fight to the end for them. His name comes from the Latin term for grey wolf, Canis lupis.
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Spoiler: Leon "Leo" Terra
Name: Leon "Leo" Terra
Age: 25
Occupation: Paralegal at L&T Law Offices, as well as co-founder.
Leon is, unlike Kain, a loud, boisterous guy. He wears his heart on his sleeve and shows his emotions without shame. He fell for Kain first, and pursued him first, and it worked out rather well for him. Leo is much smarter than his lazy, bum appearance would portray him as (he dresses this way to trick people), often times being smarter than Kain, who is rather smart in his own right. However, despite his book smarts, he is not very street smart, and makes rather rash decisions and drags Kain along for the ride. He's not afraid to speak his mind, and is quick to put someone back into their own place. He's somewhat of a control freak, and gets rather frustrated when something happens outside of his control. His head is more in the clouds than Kain's is, and he is quick to judge someone and quick to change his opinion on someone. He can get rather vicious at times, especially when he's angry, in which, unlike Kain, he's all fire, loud and angry and ready to fight. Like Kain, however, he will fight for the family he loves to the bitter end. His name comes from the Latin term for lion, Panthera leo.
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Spoiler: Kendra Albright Unanimated! Ask before using!
Kendra Albright
Age: 31
Occupation: Homicide Detective
Kendra is a rather uncaring detective. She has little sympathy for the people she works with, including prosecutors, defence attorneys, etc. She's rather lazy when it comes to doing her job, preferring to let her fellow officers do most of the dirty work, while she does the talking. Nonetheless, she's more than willing to help out either side, as she believes in finding out the fact of the matter. She doesn't get much sleep and tends to always end up working too much.
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Spoiler: Victims free to use
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Name: Jonathan Ford
Age: 22
Occupation: Student
Victim of The Simulated Turnabout. A very indecisive man, he got his car stolen from him.
His name comes from Ford, a car company.

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Name: Sunny Deshroder
Age: 53
Occupation: Author
Victim of Turnabout Inheritance. A rich, caring, but not very involved mother of four (Summer, Adam, Wynter and Vera).
Name come from Sun->Sol->Solstice.

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Name: Dean Jay
Age: 32
Occupation: DJ
Victim of Tune Into the Turnabout. A successful radio DJ who died while on air.
Name comes from deejay.

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Name: Wulfric Lewis
Age: 52
Occupation: Unemployed
Victim of Race for the Turnabout. Kain's father who disappeared under mysterious circumstances 11 years ago.
Name comes from Wolf and (Canis) lupus.



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...Hopefully someday... xD

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*Umm...Is there a nice way to say this one?*

Well...If this is a first try; good try, but needs some training.
I'd suggest using Edgeys backhair and adding Phoenix's face and forehead to that.
Unfortunantely, you have to scratch the class's but like allready said: Good try.
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I think you should spend a little time looking at other sprites to learn shading and lines and stuff. You could be great, all you need is practice 8D
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I though to say you could use and edit Payne's glasses for it, but that lame piece of prosecutor doesn't have a close up...
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Well I think young!Klavier has a close up. Yeah it's sunglasses but you get the idea.
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Thanks all you guys,I tried all of that,and now it looks...okay,well thanks for all the help! :edgy:
Though,are they that bad,besides them above,no one else has commented? :payne:
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Race for the Turnabout: Very good! I really like the victims int he background. The only thing that needs to be fixed, IMO, is the white line/dots around Derek.
Other sprites: Buddy Faith does need some fixing. I think that the hat needs to be shaded, the face needs a mouth, and the shirt needs to be a little clearer. But it's still nice. :will:
Front view Nick is very good! I think that the colour of his face and hands are a little pale, though. And, for the third Phoenix, his eyes are little to small - it needs to be a bit bigger, I think.
Witness sprites: I always thought Derek had a large white lab coat [Like Ema], but I'm not sure about that. Lawyer Nick is very good! :redd:
Official art edits: Buddy Faith has a white outline around him - that's the only thing that really needs to be fixed. Some shading for him would be good, though.
Jake Marshall also has tiny whtie dots around him, and also, the uniform [hat and cape] are too pale compared to his sleeves and shirt.
OCs: The first Haden Orwell sprite, his left arm needs to be joined correctly to his shoulder... I don't know how to explain it, but it looks odd. His other arm is a bit to thin and rounded. The second one is pretty good! The third one looks a little like a front-view sprite [of Sahwit?] and his head. The mouth looks a little odd, too. I'm sure you'll be able to fix it, though :keiko:

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I hope you don't think I'm harsh; your sprites are really good. :godot:
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Race for the Turnabout: Very good! I really like the victims int he background. The only thing that needs to be fixed, IMO, is the white line/dots around Derek.
Other sprites: Buddy Faith does need some fixing. I think that the hat needs to be shaded, the face needs a mouth, and the shirt needs to be a little clearer. But it's still nice. :will:
Front view Nick is very good! I think that the colour of his face and hands are a little pale, though. And, for the third Phoenix, his eyes are little to small - it needs to be a bit bigger, I think.
Witness sprites: I always thought Derek had a large white lab coat [Like Ema], but I'm not sure about that. Lawyer Nick is very good! :redd:
Official art edits: Buddy Faith has a white outline around him - that's the only thing that really needs to be fixed. Some shading for him would be good, though.
Jake Marshall also has tiny whtie dots around him, and also, the uniform [hat and cape] are too pale compared to his sleeves and shirt.
OCs: The first Haden Orwell sprite, his left arm needs to be joined correctly to his shoulder... I don't know how to explain it, but it looks odd. His other arm is a bit to thin and rounded. The second one is pretty good! The third one looks a little like a front-view sprite [of Sahwit?] and his head. The mouth looks a little odd, too. I'm sure you'll be able to fix it, though :keiko:

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I hope you don't think I'm harsh; your sprites are really good. :godot:

Ehh,sorry about those dots,GIMP fails getting rid of them. :payne: I did notice that Nick was a little pale,but I don't how to rid of it in GIMP cause,I tried fixing,kept coming out as the same color. :payne:
And I have no earthly idea how to make eyes,and a mouth from the co-concil POV. :payne: And oh,the people in the background aren't the victims of the case,Jake is,poor Jake. :jake: Plus on Orwell's sweating sprite,I used this Ace Fresca's Grey :grey: attorney for it. From here:http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/ace-fresca-pixel-soiree-t18246.html.
Will fix soon. :will:
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Um... Did you ask Jaywind if you could use his Ini sprite?
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Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
Um... Did you ask Jaywind if you could use his Ini sprite?

Yes,yes I did,I asked him if it was okay to use it after I figured out where it was first was.(Thanks Tap!)
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BuddyFaith wrote:
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Um... Did you ask Jaywind if you could use his Ini sprite?

Yes,yes I did,I asked him if it was okay to use it after I figured out where it was first was.(Thanks Tap!)


Okay, well that's good.

Anyway, I will give some criticism -

Greg - Well, it's a start. The dots for the shading are a bit weird but I think this has some promise to it. The hair needs a bit of work and so do the glasses. You need to change the face around a bit to make him look less like Phoenix.

Ini - The Objection pose looks...
...Awkward to say the least. And the arms seem a bit wonky on her "Airhead" pose.

Buddy Faith - ...

...Well...

... :nick-sweat: The sprite looks 2-D and the shading is messy. The hat and legs have none and the coat looks like it's in a different dimension. It needs work. I'm sorry...

Phoenix Front - The lapels look a bit too much like the De Killer's ones and the tie could use some work.

Here is some examples of what the lapels and tie should look like -

Spoiler: Suit Lapels
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This is my front Phoenix. Notice how the lapels are not spiked at the top and ones around the neck are not sunken down like De Killer's are.


Spoiler: Tie
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This one was done by Auraion. Note how the shading around the outside of the tie is not pure black.


Also, there are some loose pixels near the thinking and hand to face pose too.

Payne - Looks fine! :godot:

Derek Stilles - Not enough shading and had pure black lines.

Lawyer Nick at the stand - The legs have red lines and it has some pure black outlines. It is not good to use pure black.

Hayden Orwel - The first pose looks fine but the hand on desk and the Turner Gray pose are pretty messed up. Also, the design looks too much like Phoenix. I would suggest maybe changing the design a bit.

Sprite of you - Looks too much like Kristoph. Maybe frankensprite a bit to turn it into a sprite of your own. And judging by your profile I don't think that you would be that tall at 13. But I think you could change it up a bit.

These are okay for a start and there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep going at it!
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Update-Fixed Mr.Orwell
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Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
Sprite of you - Looks too much like Kristoph. Maybe frankensprite a bit to turn it into a sprite of your own. And judging by your profile I don't think that you would be that tall at 13. But I think you could change it up a bit.
These are okay for a start and there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep going at it!


Thanks, and you'd surprised how tall I am, last time I check I was at least 5' 3", so if we can deduce that Kris is at least 5 ft., I could be that tall, but since they didn't give us official heights for AJ characters, so yeah.

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Ini - The Objection pose looks...
...Awkward to say the least. And the arms seem a bit wonky on her "Airhead" pose.


Well, I had to splice Godot's arm and had to recolor and take some parts off, and her dancing-like pose, she's supposed to be on one of her tilt part.Image

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Buddy Faith - ...

...Well...

... :nick-sweat: The sprite looks 2-D and the shading is messy. The hat and legs have none and the coat looks like it's in a different dimension. It needs work. I'm sorry...

It's better than my first try, though that one was a custom, no other sprites used for it.
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UPDATE!
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Comments and critiques approved and appreciated.
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BuddyFaith wrote:
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Good job, these are by far your best sprites, although Buddy's hair is a little wonky. At least he's not from the second dimension
Also, you might want to change the smile, it looks too much like Portsman's still.


Well, anyways, I definitely see improvement!
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BuddyFaith wrote:
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Comments and critiques approved and appreciated.


Front Cammy and Rhoda look fine but I need to critique Buddy a bit.

First, the hat isn't shaded at all and it really needs to be.
Second, it looks too much like Portsman
Third, the white pixels everywhere are a problem
Fourth, the tie and the manboobs looks wonky.
And finally, the hair does not connect to the head and it needs more shading. Fix those things and you are set!
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Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
BuddyFaith wrote:
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Comments and critiques approved and appreciated.


Front Cammy and Rhoda look fine but I need to critique Buddy a bit.

First, the hat isn't shaded at all and it really needs to be.
Second, it looks too much like Portsman
Third, the white pixels everywhere are a problem
Fourth, the tie and the manboobs looks wonky.
And finally, the hair does not connect to the head and it needs more shading. Fix those things and you are set!


Thanks for the help, I've been using Paint.Net, instead of my usual GIMP, will fix. The hair though? I really didn't edit much of the hair though, since Portsman and Buddy have almost exactly the same hair color.
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The hair has to go down to his neck at the back.
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UPDATE!
Tried to fix Buddy. :yuusaku:
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BuddyFaith wrote:
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Tried to fix Buddy. :yuusaku:
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Well... It's better.

But, there are still some things wrong with it.

1. The hat's shading is WAY off. It needs to be coming from the same light source as the rest of the sprite. Plus it's not as smooth as AAI shading.
2. The hair looks better but is still to Portsmanesque. It needs to come out from the bottom of his hat in the front and needs to be more shaggy.
Spoiler: Like this -
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3. Still some white pixels and I can see some pink left over from Portsman.
4. Eyes still look like Portsman's.
5. The tie's shading is off and so is the overall shape.

Fix those things and you are set!
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They're good for a start. Keep working on the shading. :)
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1. Okay, Buddy's hair and hat are better, but he looks like he has some mental disease.

2. No one could ever have such a tiny and straight arm.
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Chloe wrote:
They're good for a start. Keep working on the shading. :)


Shading, my worst enemy.

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1. Okay, Buddy's hair and hat are better, but he looks like he has some mental disease.

2. No one could ever have such a tiny and straight arm.


Mental disease, care to elaborate for me?
All the other arm sizes looked wonky, so yeah.
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Front Young FranziskaImageNot one of my best. :payne:
Atmey without his ring made for The Pezman.
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Ok, first off, I read my previous post, and realized that I sounded like a total jerk, especially considering how you have been nice to me, so sorry Buddy.

Second, I was tired and cranky, so I probably said something I didn't mean. What I should have said is that the eyes are blurry and look unfocused, the nose is a different colour, and the mouth looks weird. Here's a tip: until you're a master spriter, try taking a similar mouth position and putting on your sprite.

Hope that helps, and if you fix those things, your sprite will look just fine!
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Ok, first off, I read my previous post, and realized that I sounded like a total jerk, especially considering how you have been nice to me, so sorry Buddy.

Second, I was tired and cranky, so I probably said something I didn't mean. What I should have said is that the eyes are blurry and look unfocused, the nose is a different colour, and the mouth looks weird. Here's a tip: until you're a master spriter, try taking a similar mouth position and putting on your sprite.

Hope that helps, and if you fix those things, your sprite will look just fine!


It's okay, anyway back on topic, thanks for the tips, the mouth was actually taken from one of Portsman's frames.
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Well, then I think the problem is that it doesn't match the shape of the surrounding cheek... >.< It's difficult. I'll show you whenever I get on my computer. I'm using my I-Pod right now.
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nudalman wrote:
Well, then I think the problem is that it doesn't match the shape of the surrounding cheek... >.< It's difficult. I'll show you whenever I get on my computer. I'm using my I-Pod right now.


Okay, it would be much appreciated.
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Buddy's hands look like they're not connected to his arm. Must be because you edited Portsman's gloves away. They still look like gloves. xD

But that's just my two cents on the matter. :D
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UPDATE!
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I tried to fix his hand and tie.
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Buddy, one thing you have to keep in mind when shading is that there will be lighting which will affect the shading. Here, I made an example for you:

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Also note that he now has the three thingeys of hair poking out from underneath his cap. Aside from that, you fixed the tie quite nicely, I daresay. :godot:

EDIT: I just noticed I forgot to make it transparent. That's what you get for trying to bite off more than you can chew. :payne:
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Buddy update(hopefully last):Image I'm getting a wee bit tired of doing this one, ready to start on him with coat.
w/ coat now(it's crap, I know :sadshoe: ):Image
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Buddy isn't too chubby person, but he's not an anorectic either.
Feed him a little please ^^
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Zinle wrote:
Buddy isn't too chubby person, but he's not an anorectic either.
Feed him a little please ^^


I know, that's why its crap, but every other size I tried, his head wouldn't fix on, his head was too small, but I'll try. :payne:

EDIT:UPDATE:New pose for Phoenix:
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UPDATE:New OC/Made from scratch, thus why it sucks.
Name:Lil Himigami
Age:18(Same time as Hayden)
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A young college student, studying to be a artist.
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for a scratch sprite it's good, but the anatomy is off.
fix the tiny arms, and it'll look better!
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SuperAj3 wrote:
for a scratch sprite it's good, but the anatomy is off.
fix the tiny arms, and it'll look better!


I know the arms were too small, but I've already started animating it so, plus I fixed up the colors a bit.
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To be honest, I think she looks too small for a courtroom sprite, unless she's from rozen maiden.
But what am I saying?, I've never made a sprite from scratch.
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@Auraion
Yes, I do fear i made the head to small.
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