Joined: Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:10 pm
Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
Um... Did you ask Jaywind if you could use his Ini sprite?
Yes,yes I did,I asked him if it was okay to use it after I figured out where it was first was.(Thanks Tap!)
Okay, well that's good.
Anyway, I will give some criticism -
Greg - Well, it's a start. The dots for the shading are a bit weird but I think this has some promise to it. The hair needs a bit of work and so do the glasses. You need to change the face around a bit to make him look less like Phoenix.
Ini - The Objection pose looks...
...Awkward to say the least. And the arms seem a bit wonky on her "Airhead" pose.
Buddy Faith - ...
The sprite looks 2-D and the shading is messy. The hat and legs have none and the coat looks like it's in a different dimension. It needs work. I'm sorry...
Phoenix Front - The lapels look a bit too much like the De Killer's ones and the tie could use some work.
Here is some examples of what the lapels and tie should look like -
Also, there are some loose pixels near the thinking and hand to face pose too.
Payne - Looks fine!
Derek Stilles - Not enough shading and had pure black lines.
Lawyer Nick at the stand - The legs have red lines and it has some pure black outlines. It is not good to use pure black.
Hayden Orwel - The first pose looks fine but the hand on desk and the Turner Gray pose are pretty messed up. Also, the design looks too much like Phoenix. I would suggest maybe changing the design a bit.
Sprite of you - Looks too much like Kristoph. Maybe frankensprite a bit to turn it into a sprite of your own. And judging by your profile I don't think that you would be that tall at 13. But I think you could change it up a bit.
These are okay for a start and there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep going at it!
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