Clink: OC’s are important to any story. Probobly what keeps a reader hooked and interested.
Clank: The best way to make one is to use one from real life, take Clink for example…funny yet dimwitted. He’d be known as Stue Pido. HAHAHAHAH! STUPIDO!
Clink: Sometimes I wonder why I created you…
9:28 AM, District Court, Courtroom 3.
The court gallery was full of gossip. The sound of people muttering to each other was quite too familiar to the court house. The Wrights sat directly above the defense bench watching over young Crystal, literally. The judge soon walked up to his bench, gavel in hand.
The judge himself looked like he was in his mid 50’s with a black beard and mustache. He had short black hair as well. His eyes were dark brown and had a fierce fire in them. As he sat down he stretched his arms and brought up his gavel into the air.
*BANG BANG BANG*
“Court is now in session for the trial of State vs. Serve.” The judge looked at Crystal his fierce eyes intimidating her. “Well you’re a new face, what’s you’re name miss?” the judges face seemed to loosen up after looking at Crystal.
Crystal was still a tad nervous and stuttered. “C-C-Crystal, Crystal Wright.” She was literally shaking.
The judge gave a hearty laugh. “I’m guessing this is you’re first trial Ms. Wright?”
“Y-Yes…” Crystal meekly replied.
The judge nodded. “I see…anyway is the prosecution ready?” he turned his head to a black haired woman who looked like she was in her 30’s. Her hair was put into a ponytail that stretched down to her back. She wore a lime green suit and a sea green bow tie. Although she was named “the rookie killer” she looked a lot more fragile and serene.
The woman smiled. “The Prosecution is ready your honor, however the defense looks like she is about to collapse onto the floor.” She sickly grinned feeling overconfident.
Crystal grinded her teeth and frowned at the prosecutor. (Who the heck does she think she is!?) She took a breath of air to calm her nerves but still frowned at her.
The judge frowned at the prosecutions’ bad attitude as well but then turned to Crystal. “Is the defense ready?”
Crystal nodded. “Of course your honor.” She wasn’t going to stoop as to insult the prosecution.
The Judge nodded as well. “Alright then will the prosecution begin with it’s opening statements?”
Lola pulled a paper out of a folder a nodded. “The defendant Deedee Serve is a maid at the Richton Estate for 2 years. Yesterday at 4:30 PM the defendant was making lunch for Jacques Swellow and added cumin to the dish which he was highly allergic to. At the first bite of eating, his throat swelled up preventing him to call for help and in a matter of minutes he died with his blood clotting restricting oxygen rich blood to his body.”
She pulled out some items from a bag next to her. “Here is the autopsy report and the bottle of cumin. We also have a Photo of the defendant added the spice to the meal.”
Autopy Report Added to Court Record (Cause of death: allergic reaction. Estimated time of death 4:40)
Bottle of Cumin added to Court Record ( A bottle with a red cap that reads cumin.)
Photo Added to Court Record (Photo of Deedee adding a spice to a meal from a bottle)
Apollo eyed the photo looking in specific detail. “You remember how to use the court record right Crystal?”
Crystal raised an eyebrow. “No, it’s Crystal Wright not Wright Crystal.” She pulled that joke often on Apollo.
Apollo sighed. “Still you remember?”
Crystal played with her thumb. Her face flushed with embarrassment. “Heehee, yeah I-I kind of forgot over night…” she nervously laughed at herself.
Apollo grinned. “You remind me of myself at my first trial,” he frisked her hair playfully. “It’s simple all you’re evidence is in here along with profiles of people. Think of it as your organizer for college in other words,”
“Yah no bigge I remember now.” Crystal was getting annoyed at how Apollo treated her like child still.
The judge reviewed all of the evidence and then nodded. “I see, so Ms. Payne who will you call as your first witness?”
“I call the defendant to the stand. That is if she can stand at all.”
The judge gave an awkward look. “Eh…what is she disabled or something?”
Lola shook her head her pony tail whipping along with it. “The defendant is still in shock about the death of Mr. Swellow. In fact she was found unconscious at the crime scene.”
The judge nodded. “I see, alright then, bailiff! Please bring the defendant to the stand.”
A few minutes later Deedee was nervously shaking at the witness stand barley able to stand one her own to feet. Her maiden outfit complemented her body structure and she was holding a tray with a wine bottle on it.
The judge seemed to be stunned by the woman’s figure.
“Your honor with all due respect your job does not have anything to do with gazing a women.” Lola snapped.
Apollo grinned. “I remember my old judge was always looking at the ladies as well.”
“Yes, I do apologize Ms. Payne but back in my day I never meet women such as these.”
“This only disturbs me as to what women were like back in his days…” Crystal thought.
“Back to the main topic, Name and occupation?” she sternly asked the defendant.
“………………………..” Deedee was unresponsive.
“I’m sorry did I not make myself clear? I said NAME AND OCCUPATION NOW!” she slammed her fist to the desk.
“EEEK!” Deedee cried. She fell to the ground bottom first but surprisingly balanced the wine glass on her tray.
The gallery began to mutter words to each other. “Gee she’s got a bad temper.” Two men muttered. “She’s to rough look what she did to that poor girl!” a bunch of women chattered.
*BAM BAM BAM* the judges gavel slammed. “ORDER ORDER!” The gallery soon became silent. “Ms. Payne I suggest you act less firm with the defendant unless you want a penalty.”
Lola frowned and grunted. “Fine, whatever.”
Crystal grinned. “The first trial I’ve ever been to and the judge yells at the prosecution, heh so far so good.” She thought.
Deedee slowly picked herself up and wiped tears from her eyes. “I-I’m sorry…I was just nervous I didn’t mean all of this to happen...” she took a deep breath before continuing. “My name is Deedee, Deedee Serve. I work as a maid at the Richton Estate.
“That’s better Ms. Serve, now if you had just said that in the first place I would not have yelled at you.”
“I’m sorry…” she looked down.
“Anyway, please testify about what happened on the day of the crime.”
“…Do I have to?” she seemed reluctant to do so.
Lola clenched her fist but kept her tone calm. “Yes you have to unless you want to be found guilty.”
Fear rode down Deedee’s face. “Ok…”
Apollo then faced Crystal. “Now this is the real part of our work. Testimonies.
Crystal seemed to be spacing out and looking into the distance. “Hmm… what was that?”
Apollo sighed. “You remember how to Cross examine right?”
Crystal raised an eyebrow. “Cross what?”
Apollo literally banged his head on the bench. “Ok no big deal remember how the witness gives a testimony right?”
Crystal nodded. “The witness tells about what they’re asked in this case what happened during the day of the crime.
“Right, so then after they testify you get to cross examine them, pressing for information, and presenting contradictory evidence.” Do you remember now?”
Crystal nodded and smiled. “I knew that Uncle Polly I was just testing you!” she playfully smacked his arm.
“Suuuure,” Apollo rolled his eyes. “Do you also remember how the jurist meter works?”
“Eh…jurist meter?” This was a totally new concept to Crystal.
“Yes remember your dad got the new jurist system passed. Now it works like this, see the 12 people on the defense bench.
“I figured those were just scribbles made by other attorneys…” Crystal playfully grinned.
“No…you see half of them are green the other half are red. The people in red believe our client is guilty and the ones in green are the people who believe that our client is innocent.”
“I see…so what I have to do is convince the jurist that my client is innocent right?”
Apollo nodded. “Correct now as you can see right now it’s a pretty even fight. However, sometimes it will start of more lopsided. Anyway convincing the jurist is simple as finding contradictions. The more you find that prove your client innocent the more the jurist believe that he/she is innocent. However the prosecution can do likewise so you never want them to gain the upper hand. If the jury at any point completely believes that the defendant is guilty they will automatically pronounce him guilty.”
“So does it work in the other way around?”
Apollo sighed. Unfortunately not unless we have concrete evidence that it’s true, although at the end of the trial if the jury believes that we gave a valid case then they will pronounce our client innocent. Of course it works the other way around to though…” Apollo then changed his tone. “. Last thing to note is that if you present the wrong evidence you will get a penalty, too many penalties and you won’t be able to present any evidence or press for information and if you do present the wrong evidence some people in the jury may go against our client. So do you get it?”
Crystal groaned. “It was a lot to take in but nothing I don’t understand.”
“If the defense is done gossiping I would like to continue this trial.” Lola grunted.
“Agreed Ms. Serve please give us your testimony now.” The judge firmly said.
“Yes…your honor…”
Witness Testimony
--On That Day…--
“Well I was cooking some spaghetti for my master…on that day.”
“I had used many different spices for the sauce but… I never added cumin from the bottle…”
“After a few minutes of cooking…I left to get a drink of water.”
“Then I came back and finished the pasta and then served it to my master…”
“After that I cleaned the kitchen…I then went to check on the master…he…he was lying on the floor. I went to check on him and…his throat was swollen and he didn’t respond…”
Deedee began to cry and no matter how hard she wiped her face her eyes the tears just continued to roll down her face.
She sniffled and finished. “T-That’s a-a-all I remember...”
The judge couldn’t bear to watch her cry and turned his head. “So it seems that you didn’t know he was dead until you went to go check on him. So when was that?”
“A-Around 4:40 *sniffle*”
Lola grunted and crossed her arms. “Tears won’t bring back the dead,”
The judge fiercely glared at the prosecution. “Ms. Payne if you do not stop these attacks at the defendant I will penalize you, this is my last warning!”
Lola frowned and simply turned her head the other way.
The judge sighed. “Ms. Wright your cross examination please?”
“Yes your honor!” Crystal gleefully answered.
“At least someone is perky” the judge thought.
--Cross Examination—
--On That Day--
“Well I was cooking some spaghetti for my master…on that day.”
“Hold It!” Crystals voiced echoed. For a rookie she seemed to understand this pretty well.
“So does your master prefer his sauce in any special way?
Deedee nodded. “He likes his food extremely spicy… thus the reason I added so many spices.”
“That makes perfect sense as to why he didn’t taste the cumin in his food.” The judge explained.
“Any way…”
“I had used many different spices for the sauce but… I never added cumin from the bottle…”
“Hold It!”
“Two questions first, are you so sure that you never used cumin?”
“Yes…everyone knew of Mr. Richtons allergies so we never have any cumin in any rooms as a precaution.”
“Ok, and second can you tell me about the spices you used and how the bottles looked?”
“OBJECTION!” Lola yelled. “This is irrelevant! None of these other spices have to do with the victim’s death!”
“OBJECTION!” They do and if the prosecution can keep their mouth shut for just a few seconds then I will explain.” Crystal crossed her arms angrily.
“I agree with the defense, the line of questioning will continue.”
Crystal gave a smirk of victory. So Ms. Serve you were saying?”
“Yes…um…I used pepper the bottle was transparent with a black top, I used garlic,….chili powder was in a small red bottle red top, red pepper, red bottle red top, and I also used ground allspice transparent bottle and red top as well.”
Crystal grinned. “See no such spice was ever used in the recipe.”
“OBJECTION!” “Maybe you don’t realize this but maybe she’s lying. It’s so common.”
“OBJECTION!” “Let me ask you a question Lola Payne. Where did you find the cumin spice?”
Lola began to play with her pony tail. “We found it in the spice cabinet in the kitchen.”
Crystal’s eyes twinkled. “Exactly, now tell me didn’t Ms Serve just say that no spice bottles of Cumin were in any rooms or any cabinets?”
Lola grunted her teeth and her ponytail suddenly became sharp like a scorpion tail. “Yes...but she could be lying.”
“Pfft! That’s just crazy talk,” Crystal argued.
“Oh is it?” Alright then Ms. Serve let me ask you a question. “Did you add any cumin to the spaghetti dish at all?”
Deedee squeamishly moved and chattered her lips. “I…I…I…………………”
“Is something wrong Ms. Serve?” the judge asked.
Tears rolled down her face more. “I…*sniffle* I…*sob* I did…*sniffle*”
“WHAT!?” Crystal clenched her head in surprise. “B-B-But you said you never added cumin from the bottle!”
Deedee cried more. “I-I-I didn’t…th-th-the cumin was in a different bo-bottle*sniffle* n-n-n-not the one shown here.”
“Yes this bottle was used to just ensure no one gets mixed up with the other spice.”
Crystal glanced at the jury meter 8 out of 12 people found her guilty and if she didn’t start to turn the tides then she might be done for.
Lola grinned and nodded her pony tail whipping her face. “Your honor I think this concludes the trial,”
The judge closed his eyes and thought. “Hmm it seems that the prosecution has a point. Ms Wright unless you have any objection I will allow the jurist to vote now.”
Crystal stared in awe. Was her trial really going to end like this!?
Apollo grinned and chuckled to himself. “Crystal don’t fret there are multiple flaws in the testimony. There is always a few things a murderer has one is the way of killing, I’m sure you can figure the two other things wrong with the testimony Crystal.”
“…!” A thought popped into her head. “OBECTION!” “Your honor while the prosecution did prove that my client did in fact add the spice cumin to the pasta dish and that she confessed two things are still missing and those two things are…”
CLIFFHANGER!!!
Clink Yeah I had to do it it’s necessary.
Clank: Yes the NAOCAOJASS says we haven’t used enough of them.
Clink: By the way NAOCAOJASS is simply National Association Of Cliffhanger And Other Jack Ass Story Stoppers.
Clank: Yes and because we have used to few we are typing from the inside of the NAOCAOJASS jail hanging upside down while being tormented with Maya/Phoenix Shippers throwing Magatama’s at us!!
Clink: *Gets wacked by Magatama. “STOP IT!”
Maya/Phoenix Shippers:HAWHAW!