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Awww so cute how Wocky shows his fatherly side although a bit rough he's grasping about what father hood will be like.
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nekonohime wrote:
UPDATE- Chapter 10 of OBNW


I'm sorry but in FF.net I can't read it! They say the chapter does not exist!
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Awww so cute how Wocky shows his fatherly side although a bit rough he's grasping about what father hood will be like.

Yes. I imagined Wocky being a bit nervous around young children and not knowing how to act around them, so that's why he's a little rough and awkward with him. I think he'll get used to it soon enough. :will:

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UPDATE- Chapter 10 of OBNW

I'm sorry but in FF.net I can't read it! They say the chapter does not exist!

I looked to see if Chapter 10 is working and it is. Try looking at it again and see if it works now.
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It works, thanks!
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It works, thanks!

No problem. :D
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Ha, I had a hunch that the baby was going to be a girl. I loved the newest chapter, Wocky was so cute in his interactions with the baby. I think this chapter is my favorite so far, simply due to the cuteness/squee factor. Great job ^_^
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Ha, I had a hunch that the baby was going to be a girl. I loved the newest chapter, Wocky was so cute in his interactions with the baby. I think this chapter is my favorite so far, simply due to the cuteness/squee factor. Great job ^_^

Thanks. And if you thought that was cute/fluffy, wait till their baby is actually born :3
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UPDATE- Chapter 11 of OBNW
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UPDATE- Added "Hunger Pains" to my fic list.
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UPDATE- Hello everyone. I've added Chapter 12-14 on OBNW and I removed all of my M rated fics.
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YAY you're back. :)
I was like worried about you. And the major updates have kept me happy, I will miss those M fics you wrote but I'll hopefully still remember them. Still loving the story, it's all cute. I'll get a proper comment done later cause it's getting late.
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YAY you're back. :)
I was like worried about you. And the major updates have kept me happy, I will miss those M fics you wrote but I'll hopefully still remember them. Still loving the story, it's all cute. I'll get a proper comment done later cause it's getting late.

Thanks :)
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UPDATE- As as suppliment to my fics, I made a family tree of sorts (In a ZIP file. You may need Winrar to extract it), including the Feys and the Kitakis (Lots of OC aunts/uncles/cousins there.). If you see "???" as a person's name, it either means their name is unknown or they haven't been mentioned in my fics as of right now.
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UPDATE- Chapter 15 of OBNW
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Adorable chapter!! I love writing fluffy scenes with babies too ^_^ Wocky bonding with Rosa again was sooooo cute! And I got a laugh out of Plum's conversation with Winfred and how quickly her mood shifted. And of course, Rosa's last thought was just precious. Oh squee :D

I had a pretty depressing, draining night tonight, but reading this chapter picked me up a bit. Know that you heightened my mood a little with this chapter. Great job, I loved it ^_^
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Adorable chapter!! I love writing fluffy scenes with babies too ^_^ Wocky bonding with Rosa again was sooooo cute! And I got a laugh out of Plum's conversation with Winfred and how quickly her mood shifted. And of course, Rosa's last thought was just precious. Oh squee :D

I had a pretty depressing, draining night tonight, but reading this chapter picked me up a bit. Know that you heightened my mood a little with this chapter. Great job, I loved it ^_^


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UPDATE- Chapter 16 of OBNW
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UPDATE- I am really sorry for such a long hiatus on this fic, but I've been so busy with school lately, but since the semester is almost over I'm going to start working on my fics again! Stay tuned for more updates!
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I planned on reviewing Chapter 16 on ff.net but it appears I already reviewed another chapter with that same number. Since the site programming doesn't allow two reviews for one chapter I can't review it on ff.net. I could review it here but I would like to know the reasoning for the error on ff.net.
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I look forward for the updates I love you Pocky fanfics!
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GOOD NEWS: I'm an official supporter of Pocky after reading your fanfics!
BAD NEWS: I'm only on the 5th one! Well, not bad considering I only started reading them today.
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GOOD NEWS: I'm an official supporter of Pocky after reading your fanfics!
BAD NEWS: I'm only on the 5th one! Well, not bad considering I only started reading them today.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)
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UPDATE- Added a new section (Stuff I'm Planning). And don't worry, peeps, my writer's block is broken and I'm working on 3 fanfics at once (Our Brand New World, The Bakeshop Turnabout and Christmas With The Kitakis).
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I've only managed to get up to I miss you, Amoire Mio but so far, it's really good. What I mean is the development of Wocky and Pearl's relationship and the whole pairing itself! I would have never guessed Wocky/Pearl could work so well but it surprisingly does.

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I've only managed to get up to I miss you, Amoire Mio but so far, it's really good. What I mean is the development of Wocky and Pearl's relationship and the whole pairing itself! I would have never guessed Wocky/Pearl could work so well but it surprisingly does.

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Thanks, I really appreciate that. :redd:
It wasn't easy writing these fics because I had to replay Turnabout Corner like 3 or 4 times to get Wocky's personality down, and it was easier to write Pearl since you see her more, and I already had a vision of what she would be like when she was older. And yes, they do surprisingly fit together...

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UPDATE- Here's a preview of my Christmas fic. I would like to know what you think of what I have so far:

Spoiler: Christmas With The Kitakis Preview
It was a cold morning as the sun rose over the city, with snow lightly falling from the sky. On the street near the Kitakis' mansion and People Park, there were a few people walking their dogs and jogging, all wearing winter coats. Inside the mansion, the Kitakis were all still asleep, and all was silent... But not for long.

"Mamma, Papa!" The sound of a five year old girl's voice called out as she ran down the hallway out of her room towards her parents' room.

Wocky opened his eyes upon hearing this and said, “W-Whu-”

Before he could anything, the girl jumped on his bed saying, “It's Christmas Eve, it's Christmas Eve!”

Pearl sat up and said, “Yes, Rosa, that's right.”

Wocky chuckled and picked up his daughter.

“Yup, and Santa's gonna bring you lots o' presents”, he said, “”Cause you've been a real good gurl this year.”

Rosa giggled and said, “Uh huh!”

Her father then put her down and said, “You go on with your Mamma to help get breakfast ready, awright? I'll be down in a minute.”

“Awright, Papa”, Rosa said as she walked out of the room with Pearl downstairs to the kitchen.

As he watched his family walk out of the bedroom, he chuckled to himself and thought, “That Rosa's really turnin' out to be somethin'.”

~*~
“What're we gonna have for breakfast, Mamma?” Rosa asked as she and her mother were walking down the hall.

Before Pearl could answer, the sound of a child crying echoed from the room nearby.

“Just a moment, sweetie”, She said as she stopped in front of the room and opened the door to go inside.

They both walked into the room of Rosa's two year old brother, William, who was crying for his mother.

“Mumma”, He said in his tiny voice, “Bad dream.”

Pearl picked her little son up and said, “Oh, it's alright... What was it about?”

William hiccuped and said, “... Bad man hurt people... From TV...”

His mother sighed, shook her head and thought, “Oh, no, not again... I told Wocky to stop watching violent movies in front of the children...”

Rosa looked up at him and said reassuringly, “Don't worry, Willie, that stuff won't real! They were just pretending!”

Pearl looked at Rosa and said, “Yes, but you two are much too young to watch things like that. I'm going to have a talk with your father about this.”

They then headed out of the room and downstairs to the dining room.

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When they got to the dining room, Wocky's parents were already there. His mother Plum was in the kitchen cooking while his father Winfred was sitting in a chair nearby reading the newspaper.

“Good morning, Father”, Pearl said to Winfred.

“'Mornin'”, he said as he put the paper down and looked at his daughter in law.

Rosa went over to her grandfather and said, “Good morning, Grampops!”

He pat her on the head and said, “'Mornin', little Rosie.”

He then looked at his grandson as Pearl placed him in his highchair.

“'Mornin, Willy”, he said.

“Grampops!” William squeaked.

Pearl laughed and said, “Well, I'm going to the kitchen to help Mother with breakfast.”

“Alright, then”, Winfred said.

As she began to walk out, she suddenly stopped and turned back around saying, “Where's Wocky? Has he come down yet?”

“Yeah, he's in the living room watching TV, I think.”

“Oh.”

And with that, Pearl headed back towards the kitchen.

Rosa sat in a chair across from Winfred and said, “Do you know what we're having for breakfast?”

“I'm not sure”, he answered, “But I'm having bacon, eggs, and toast.”

“That's all?”

“Yup.”

“Well, I wanna have pancakes, bacon and eggs.”

“I think that's what your grandma's making for you.”

“Yay!”

At that moment Wocky walked into the dining room and sat down next to Rosa.

“Papa!” Rosa said with concern, “I thought you were gonna be late for breakfast!”

“Are you kiddin'?” Her father said with a chuckle, “I'd neva miss breakfast!”

“Where were you, Papa?”

“I was in the livin' room wrappin' some presents.”

“Ooooooh, who're they for, Papa, who're they for?!”

“Well, there's some for your Mamma, some for Willy and some for...”

He then tickled Rosa's belly as he said, “You!”

Rosa started to giggle uncontrollably as she said, “Stop, Papa, you're gonna make me get the hiccups!”

“Quit roughhousin' at the table”, Winfred said.

Wocky stopped tickling Rosa and said, “Awright, awright...”

He then turned to William saying in a playful tone, “Yo, whassup, Willy G?”

His son giggled and chirped, “Papa!”
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Awww... so sweet! I LOVE your pocky stories.

OFFICIAL POCKY AND eeeerm... TROCCO FAN!
(trocco - trucy/rocco.)

Read right up to the end of the wedding. I'll continue whn i have the time. Again, so cute!
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Awww... so sweet! I LOVE your pocky stories.

OFFICIAL POCKY AND eeeerm... TROCCO FAN!
(trocco - trucy/rocco.)

Read right up to the end of the wedding. I'll continue whn i have the time. Again, so cute!

Thanks! And lol I had no idea why I wanted to pair Trucy with an OC.
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UPDATE- The Misadventures Of Wocky Kitaki chapter added: Home Movies
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UPDATE:

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Meanwhile, back at the Kitaki's mansion, everyone was still getting ready for Rosa's 'welcome home' party.

"They should be here any minute", Plum said to the guests in the living room, "Wocky just called and said they're on the way."

"Horray!" Trucy said, "Did you hear that, Daddy? Wocky and Pearl are coming home with Rosa!"

"Yes", Phoenix said, "But keep your voice down, Trucy, because you don't want to scare her."

Trucy lowered her voice and said, "Alright, I will."

She then turned to Apollo and said, "Isn't this nice, Polly? You know, Rosa wouldn't have even been born if it wasn't for you, because otherwise-"

"I know", Apollo said, "I've heard this a million times, you don't have to repeat it."

"But it's true", Cousin Vinny butted in, "If it wasn't for you takin' his case, Wocky woulda ended up in the clink an' that golddiggin' broad woulda got 'er mits on the family's fortune! I kept tellin' 'em she was bad news, but he was too dumb to listen... But you really helped straighten 'em out, Paulie. You made 'em see the light."

"Are you kidding?! When they took Alita into custody, Wocky was completely in denial about what had just happened! He was furious with me!"

"I know, man, but it took a long time for him to realize that she was usin' 'em, and when it did... He went into some serious depression..."

"Depression?" Trucy echoed sadly.

"Yeah... Uncle Big Wins and Aunt Lil' Plum did their best to try to cheer him up, but nothin'... He jus' kept sayin' that Alita was his one and only true love, and that there won't nobody out there as good as her... But now..."

"... He's happy", Trucy said, "All of those bad memories behind him, and with someone that loves him genuinely."

"That's right, lil' girl", Vinny said, "He'd probly think this is sappy, but... This is the one thing in life that he wanted the most... A family."

"Really?" Trucy said with tears in her eyes, "I knew he had a soft spot, but not one that big!"

"Well, ain't it obvious? Did you see the way he acted with lil' Rosa? It's almost like bein' a family man was in his genes.”

“Awww... O-Oh, Daddy, I-I think I'm gonna cry.”

Phoenix handed his daughter a handkerchief and said, “It's alright, Trucy.”

“H-Hey”, Cousin Franco said as he walked into the room with his brother Phillipe, “Why's Shorty cryin'?”

“I jus' told 'er 'bout Wocky's depression story”, Vinny said.

“Oh”, Phillipe said, “I thought it was 'cause she was still sad 'bout that retarded Chicken Wuss dumpin' 'er for another chick.”

“Why are you bringin' that up? You still tryin' to go after her?”

“Duh.”

Phillipe went over to Trucy, sat next to her and put his arm around her saying, “Don't worry, babe, Wocky ain't sad no more. He's got a wife an' kid now. An' as for that stupid Rocco dumpin' you, don't worry 'bout that, either... I can fix what he broke...”

“No, Phillipe”, Trucy said, “I can't be with you. I'm really not ready to be with anyone right now, you know? Rocco was nice, but it was clear that he got tired of me and wanted to move on. As for you... Well... You're a jerk.”

Phillipe let go of her and said, “What?! Y-You think I'm a jerk?! Chicken Wuss was a jerk for dumpin' you!”

“Well, I don't like the way you talk down on people and you're just really mean and rude! I know you're Wocky's cousin, but it's the truth!”

Phillipe then stormed out of the room and said, “Fine! Be that way! Ain't no guy wanna be with you anyway!”

When he was gone, Trucy clung to her father and cried again.

“Don't worry”, Franco said, “When Dad hears 'bout this, he's gonna get one helluva ass whuppin'.”

Soon Plum came back into the room saying, “They're here! Wocky and Pearl just pulled in!”

Soon everyone got up and went to the front room to greet the new parents at the door.

~*~
Wocky and Pearl had just gotten out of the limo when Paco took Rosa out of her car seat.

“Be careful with 'er”, Wocky said, “Y-You might-”

“Calm down, Wocky”, Paco said, “She's fine.”

He then handed her off to Pearl and said, “Here you go.”

Pearl nodded as they headed to the front door.

“Are you ready to go in?” She asked, “Because once we do, we start our new lives as parents.. It'll be a brand new world...”

Wocky took a deep breath and said, “... Yeah, I think so. Well, here goes nothin'...”

Paco opened the door for them as they walked inside, greeted by all their guests standing in the doorway.

As they walked in, everyone was silent as Winfred and Plum walked towards them to look at the new baby.

“Can I see Rosa for a second?” Winfred asked Pearl as he held out his hands.

“O-OK”, Pearl said as she handed her daughter off to him.

He looked at her silently, taking in all her features as Plum stood next to him.

“She's so lovely”, She said to her husband.

“Very quiet”, He said, “Doesn't seem like nothin' much bothers her... She's just sleeping like there's no care in the world.”

They stayed like this for a few minutes, until Rosa opened her eyes and looked up at her grandparents.

“Look”, Plum said as she broke the silence, “She has Wocky's eyes.”

“You didn't notice before at the hospital?”

“No. I was just so overwhelmed I didn't get a chance to take her all in.”

Pearl spoke up and said, “Um, excuse me, but... What is going on?”

“This happens every time somebody in the family has a baby”, Wocky said, “Pops looks at 'em and tells us if they're worthy of the Kitaki name.”

“W-Well she is, isn't she, Father?” Pearl asked her father-in-law.

“Of course she is” Winfred said, “I sense something really special about her.”

“Really?”

“Yeah... The vibe I'm getting from her... It's nothing like I've ever felt before. I have a feeling this little girl is gonna grow up to be quite a young lady... She could even be next head of the family material.”

Everyone gasped at his comment in awe and amazement.

“W-Wow”, Wocky said, “You serious, Pops? But I thought only men were supposed to be the head of the family...”

“Well, son, it doesn't necessarily have to be that way. If somehow you and Pearl are unable to have a son, then Rosa's gonna have to be head number six.”

“That would be kinda cool, but I don't want Rosa to have that big of a responsibility. I want her to grow up and be like an ordinary girl. And I think it won't be impossible for us to have a son.”

“Oh”, Pearl interrupted, “T-That reminds me. Mystic Maya?”

Maya walked over to Pearl and said, “Yeah, Pearly?”

“Um... Do you think it might be possible for Rosa to learn channeling?

“Hmm... Well, I suppose, since she is of Fey blood, but I think she should make that decision on her own. At this point we really don't know if she has any spiritual power.”

“I suppose that's the best decision. Thank you, Mystic Maya.”

Maya nodded and let Winfred and Plum finish.

“Interesting”, Winfred said, “We might have someone in the family that could do spirit channeling.”

“That would be so frikken awesome, man!” Franco said in an obnoxiously loud voice, “I would totally get 'er to channel-”

Before he could finish his father Giuseppe smacked him on the back of the head.

“You idiot!” He snapped, “Keep your voice down, there's a baby in here!”

Everyone looked at Rosa to see if she was going to start crying.

As she started to whimper, they all got the 'uh-oh' look as they looked from her, to Franco, and to Wocky, who had a death glare at his sixteen year old cousin.

“Shh, shh”, Winfred said as he tried to calm Rosa down, “It's alright.”

“Frank, keep yer big mouth shut!” Wocky snapped at him, “This is a real delicate situation and-”

“Please calm down, Wocky”, Pearl said as she put her hand on his shoulder in an attempt to ease his anger, “He didn't mean it, and Rosa's alright now, see?”

He looked over and saw his father holding his daughter, who went back to sleep.

“She was just startled”, Plum said, “Nothing to worry about.”

“Anyway”, Winfred continued, “It's quite apparent that Rosa seems like she'll grow up to be quite a smart young lady and that she'll be quite capable.”

He then gave Rosa back to Pearl and said, “Rosa Kitaki is now an official member of the family, and here's to her good health and positive future.”

After that everyone clapped softly to avoid spooking Rosa again, then they headed to the living room to sit down and look at her.

**
When they got there, everyone sat down on the couch as Wocky and Pearl sat down as well, their feet tired from standing for a long time.

“Can I hold her, Pearl?” Trucy asked, “I promise I won't scare her. Daddy already said it's OK.”

“Alright, Trucy”, Pearl said as she handed Rosa off to her, “Just be careful.”

“Hello, little Rosa”, Trucy said, “Do you remember me from yesterday? I'm your Auntie Trucy.”

Rosa opened her eyes halfway and looked up at her lazily, puckering her lips slightly as if she sucking.

“Tee hee, you have the same fish face as your daddy!”

“I don't have a fish face!” Wocky said in embarrassment.

“Sometimes when you do your so called 'fighting pose' and try to make a mean face, you end up looking like a fish!”

Trucy then did a fish face at Rosa and giggled again.

“I-Is that true, Pearl?” Wocky asked as he did his 'mean' face in front of a mirror, “D-Do I really have a... 'Fish face'?”

“Of course not”, Pearl said with a giggle, “You have a handsome face.”

“You hear that, Shorty? I ain't got no 'fish face'!”

“I know, silly! I was just playing with you!”

Trucy then turned back to Rosa and said, “What do you think, Rosa? Do you think your daddy has a fish face?”

Rosa just looked up at her.

“I guess that's a no.”

She then showed her to Apollo and Phoenix and said, “That's your Uncle Feenie and your Uncle Polly.”

“Um”, Apollo said, “Hi there.”

Rosa immediately took interest to him and looked right into his eyes, as if she knew something.

“What, do I look funny?”

“Looks like she likes you”, Phoenix said.

“Maybe she's trying to say something”, Trucy said, “Maybe... 'Thank you.'”

“For what?”

“For saving her daddy, of course!”

“O-Oh... Well, your welcome, Rosa... Wait a minute, how do you think she would know about that?”

“Don't you remember what Big Wins said, Polly? Rosa's smart!”

“Trucy, she's only a newborn, she's not capable of understanding this yet.”

“I know, but I think she can sense that you helped him.”

“How?”

“I don't know. Just a feeling.”

Phoenix laughed and said, “She certainly does have an intelligent look about her... Almost reminds me of you, Pearls.”

“Really?”

“Sure. Rosa is part of you, after all. I have a feeling she'll be a lot like you when she's older.”

Pearl blushed and said, "I-I... I suppose so..."

Suddenly Rosa started squirming in Trucy's arms and whimpering again.

"Oh, no! What's the matter, Rosa? Do you want your Mommy?"

She then handed her back to Pearl and said, "I think she wants to be back with you."

"What's wrong now, Rosa?" Pearl said, "Are you hungry?"

She then took out her bottle, handed the baby off to Wocky and said, "I'm going to fill this up. I'll be back in a minute."

"U-Um, a-awright", Wocky said nervously as the fussy baby continued to squirm.

He then held her close to him and rubbed her back as he said, "It's awright, Rosa, Mamma's comin' back with yer bottle..."

"Why did she start crying so suddenly?" Trucy asked.

"Babies do that all the time", Plum said, "Since Rosa's too young to talk, crying is the only way for her to communicate to us what she needs."

"Oh..."

Soon Pearl came back with Rosa's bottle and gave it to Wocky.

"I gotta feed 'er?! B-But-"

"Don't worry, it's fine. If you do something wrong, I'll tell you."

"U-Um... A-Awright, here goes nothin'..."

He tried to remember what Pearl taught him about feeding Rosa as he held the bottle in front of her mouth.

She refused it and continued to cry.

"S-She didn't take it!"

"Let me see her, Wocky... Maybe she's not hungry."

Pearl took Rosa from him and then looked inside her diaper to see if her assumption to her daughter's reason for crying was true.

"... U-Um..."

"What's wrong, Pea?"

"... I-It looks like Rosa needs her diaper changed again."

"Oh, is that all? Lemme se-"

Wocky's face almost went white from what he just saw.

"I am not touchin' that!" He said as he put his hands over his nose, "T-That... That's jus'..."

"Oh, yes you are! I've changed all of Rosa's diapers so far, and I'm going to make you change this one!"

All of Wocky's cousins laughed at him.

"Haha, Wocky's gotta change a dirty diaper!"

"Shaddap! ... Awright, awright, I'll do it! I... I'll be right back..."

As Wocky walked out of the room, Pearl followed him and said, "I'm going to show you how to do it, so don't get yourself worked up too much."

**
Meanwhile, Wocky and Pearl had gotten upstairs to Rosa's room and laid her down on the changing table next to her crib.

"Alright, Wocky", Pearl said as she took Rosa's footsie off, "I'm going to only show you this once, so pay attention."

Pearl gently lifted Rosa's feet up and pretended to take her diaper off.

"You lift her legs up like this and take it off."

Wocky walked up to Rosa and imitated the same action, hesitating as he tried to take Rosa's diaper off.

"I really don't wanna know what she made in there..."

"Wocky, please, just take it off. You don't want her to wear a dirty diaper, do you?"

He took a deep breath and said, "A... A-Awright..."


He proceeded to take the diaper off and his eyes went wide in horror.

"Auggh!"

"Oh, would you calm down?"

"B-But-"

"Alright, now you have to toss the diaper in the trash and wipe Rosa's bottom."

She handed Wocky the box of baby wipes as she took one of them out saying, "You go from front to back, like this."

"U-Um..."

He then lifted Rosa's legs and wiped how Pearl told him, while wrinking his nose and trying to look away.

"Wocky, you can't look away!"

"But it looks so disgusting! And it smells real bad!"

"I know it's not the most pleasant thing in the world, but we have to do this! We're Rosa's parents, and it's our responsibility to take care of her every need!"

"... You're right", Wocky said as he threw the dirty wipe away, "It was our decision to have a kid, and I shoulda known this..."

Pearl smiled and said, "That's right. Now..."

She took a clean diaper out of the cabinet and said, "Now you have to put this on her."

Wocky attempted to put the diaper on and said, "This right?"

Pearl looked at it and said, "You put it on backwards."

Wocky made a straight face as Pearl fixed the diaper.

"There, all better."

She then put Rosa's clothes back on and pick her up into her arms.

"Are you OK now, Rosa?"

She didn't respond as she looked up at her mother.

"C'mon, gurls", Wocky said as he took his wife's hand and walked out of the room, "Let's go on back to the party.

**
When they got back downstairs, Plum greeted them and said, "Is she alright now?"

"Yes", Pearl answered as she rocked Rosa lightly, "She just needed her diaper changed. Wocky did it, don't you know?"

Wocky's mother laughed and said, "Did he now?"

"Yes, but I had to help him put it on; He put it on backwards by accident."

"Oh, I remember Winnie did the same thing."

Pearl giggled and said, "Really? I guesss Wocky's more like his father than he thinks."

Wocky blushed and said, "I ain't nothin' like that ol' geezer!"

"Oh, hush", Plum said, "Now let's get back to the party, shall we? Everyone's been waiting for you.

**

"Welcome back, Pops", Winfred said jokingly as he laughed.

"Hey!" Wocky snapped, "Don't call me 'Pops'! I ain't nobody's-"

He then looked at Rosa and said, "Uh... Never mind."

"Wouldn't you beleive it", Plum said to her husband, "Wocky changed his first diaper!"

"Really?"

"Yes, but the poor dear put it on backwards, just like you did with him!"

Wocky's father chuckled and said, "Oh, I remember that. You gave me such a hard time about that-"

"Did not!"

"Yes you did!"

"I most certainly did not!"

"You most certain-"

"Mooom, Pooops, stop iiiiiiiit", Wocky whined, "You're embarassin' me in front of everybody..."

"Tee hee!" Trucy giggled, "It's cute when they fight."

"Until she sheathes that sword", Apollo said, "If I had a woman like that, I'd let her win every fight, just to keep myself from getting..."

He then gulped.

Phoenix laughed and said, "Trust me, I would too if I had that sherman tank of a mom as a wife."

Trucy giggled at his comment and Apollo didn't bother to react.

Wocky and Pearl sat back down with everyone else and continued to converse with everyone.

"Have you written to your mother about this yet?" Phoenix asked.

"Not yet", Pearl answered, "I'm going to start writing the letter tonight before I go to bed."

"What're gonna tell 'er?" Wocky asked, "I'm kinda nervous 'bout what she might say 'bout Rosa."

"I'm going to give her a picture of her, tell her about how the birth went, and how well you're doing as a father, to ease the fears she may have."

"Thanks, gurl", He said, "I 'prechiate it. I know your mom doesn't like me, but if she hears I good I am with Rosa she might change 'er mind."

"I hope so", She said, "This is her only granddaughter we're talking about, so I hope she'll be able to accept her..."

"Don't worry", Maya said, "I think she will. Even though she did all that bad stuff to us thirteen years ago-"

"I know, Mystic Maya... What she did to make me the Kurain master was cruel and selfish, but I've already forgiven her for it, as you know... Because she's my mother, and I love her, no matter what."

"Wow", Wocky said, "If that was me in that situation, I would never forgive 'em for it..."

"I understand, but what's past is past. You of all people told me that. Remember when we first went to People Park together and told me the story of when she betrayed you? I was so sad over how badly she treated you... But then you told me that you'd gotten over it and that it was in the past, and that you shouldn't worry about it... It made me feel a lot better about my situation, and I was able to forgive Mother after that..."

"... Wow, that's real deep, Pearl."

"Who woulda thunk Wocky could teach stuff like that?" Vinny said.

"I think he learned a lot from that experience", Plum said, "To not take his life for granted, and to be more careful with choosing his women."

"Mooom..."

Everybody then looked back at Rosa, who was fast asleep in Pearl's arms.

"Aww, look", Trucy said, "Looks like this party pooped her out!"

"I'm going to go put Rosa to bed", Pearl said as she walked out of the room, "I'll be back in a minute."
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That was cute and funny. I thought Wocky was really well in character. =)
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That was cute and funny. I thought Wocky was really well in character. =)

Thanks. It's really hard to try to put him in this type of scenario, but I'm glad I seemed to have pulled it off XD

Chapter 18 is coming soon :)
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Spoiler: Our Brand New World-Chapter 18
The party has winded down and Wocky and Pearl are spending time together with Rosa.

Pearl walked up the stairs to Rosa's room as she held the sleeping baby in her arms.

"This has been quite a surreal experience", She thought as she walked into the room and sat in the rocking chair, "I always knew someday I would be married and have a child, but I had no idea how... Enlightening it was going to be..."

She looked down at Rosa in her arms, all bundled up in the pink and yellow blanket that Plum had made for her.

"Rosa is such a sweet little baby; I didn't think she would be, considering who her father is."

Rosa opened her eyes a little and looked up at her mother.

"Hello, my little Rose", Pearl said with a smile, "Did you like the party?"

The baby continued to look at her.

"I hope you did, because your Gramma started planning it the day I found out I was pregnant with you."

Rosa blinked in response.

"I still have to write to your other grandmother, who is my mother of course. I don't speak to her much now, since she's been in prison since I was eight years old. It's a bit hard to explain what happened, so maybe I'll tell you about it when you're older..."

The baby yawned and closed her eyes.

"... And maybe I'll try to contact your aunt Iris. She was in prison too, but they let her out four years ago, so I think she's back in Hazakurain, hopefully. I haven't seen her in so long, I don't think she'd recongize me if she saw me."

At this point Rosa was fast asleep, being soothed by her mother's voice.

"Oh", Pearl giggled, "I guess I bored you with my little banter, huh?"

She then stood up from the chair and put the baby in her crib.

She kissed her on her forehead and whispered, "Have a nice nap... My Little Fox Cub."

Pearl then walked out of the room and went back downstairs to the party.

**
"I'm back", Pearl said as she walked back into the living room.

"Rosa's sleepin'?" Wocky asked.

"Yes, I just put her down for a nap."

"Phew... Now we can get a lil' break..."

Wocky then slouched on the couch and yawned.

"Bein' a parent is a lot harder than I thought it was."

"Haven't we told you that all along?" Winfred said.

"Well, yeah", His son answered, "But you're lucky you got such a quiet one... Boy, with you, you were always fussin'!"

"No he didn't", Plum said, "He only fussed when he needed or wanted something, just as Rosa did just now."

"No, Plum... Even when he got what he wanted he would start cryin' over something else."

She shook her head and said, "Oh, you..."

Her husband then looked at his brother and said, "Wasn't Wocky a crybaby? Don't you remember?"

Both Plum and his wife Catarina glared at him.

"N-No, I don't!"

"You babysat Wocky plenty of times, Giuseppe! Catarina, don't you remember?"

"Of course I do", She said, "That's when we were thinking about having kids of our own, so I guess he was our 'practice' baby..."

Giuseppe and Winfred went blank faced.

"Stoooooop", Wocky whined.

"Look", Vinny said as he laughed and pointed at him, "He's whinin' now, jus' like you did when you were in diapers!"

"How would you remember?! You were five back then!"

"Yeah, but I was old enough to remember your loud mouth!"

Wocky stuck his tounge out at him and gave him a raspberry.

"Alright, that's enough", Winfred said as he hushed them up.

He then looked at the clock and said, "Six o' clock..."

"Dinner should almost be done", Plum said as she walked back into the kitchen, "I've been cooking all day..."

"Mind if I help you?" Pearl asked.

"Oh, no, you need rest. You've just given birth a day ago for goodness sake! Paco's in here helping me, so don't worry."

"A-Alright..."

"Very helpful, that one", Giuseppe said, "Almost makes me wish I had a daughter..."

"Hey!" Phillipe and Franco said angrily.

Pearl sat down on the couch next to Wocky and put her arms around him.

"What's the matter?" He asked.

"Mother told me to rest. I've just given birth, you know."

"Well why doncha go to bed?"

"And miss dinner? No, I can't..."

He picked his wife up in his arms and said, "Naw, gurl, you look real tired. You've been on your feet all day. If Mom says rest, you'd better listen to 'er."

As Wocky walked to their room, Trucy sighed dreamily and said, "I wish someone would sweep me up in their arms like that..."

Phoenix chuckled and said, "Maybe someday, Trucy."

**
When they got to the bedroom, Wocky tucked Pearl into the bed and sat down next to her on his side.

"Aren't you going back to the party?" Pearl asked.

"Naw", Wocky answered, "I wanna stay here with you."

"What about dinner?"

"I'll just tell Mom to bring it in here."

"Oh."

They sat silent for a few moments.

"Pearl?" Wocky asked a while later.

"Yes?"

"You like Rosa so far? I mean, is she OK to you?"

"Of course she is; She's such an angel."

She then looked at the baby monitor on the nightstand that Paco set up eariler.

"It was a good idea to get one of these, since Rosa's room is all the way upstairs."

They listened to the monitor, which at the moment was silent, since Rosa was still sleeping.

"Things've been quiet so far", Wocky said.

"Good", Pearl said, "That means we've been doing things right."

Suddenly Winfred came into the room and said, "Dinner's ready. You comin' or what?"

"I'm stayin' in here with Pearl", His son said, "Tell Mom to brings us plates, will ya?"

"Sure thing, Your Majesty", Wocky's father said jokingly as he walked out of the room.

Wocky then looked back at Pearl and said, "Do ya think Rosa can hear us through that thing?"

"I'm not sure", She answered, "I think it's only made that you can only hear one way."

"Probly."

They sat silent again as Pearl pulled out two pieces of paper, a pencil, and two copies of a photo taken of Rosa that was done at the hospital.

"Whatcha doin'?"

"I'm going to write my letter to Mother, and another to my sister Iris."

"Oh. Yer gonna send 'em pictures too?"

"Of course! I want them to know what she looks like!"

Just then Plum walked in with their dinner plates.

"Here you are", She said as she sat them down on the table nearby.

She looked at Pearl and said, "You writing your letter to your mother?"

"Yes", Pearl answered, "And to my older sister Iris."

"I see. Well, I hope they respond back and say good things."

"Me too."

Wocky's mother then walked out of the room as she said, "If you need anything, just let me know."

Pearl then turned back to her stationary and started to write her letter to her mother.

"Make sure you tell 'er I'm a good dad, OK?" Wocky asked as he ate his food.

"Don't worry", Pearl said as she wrote and ate at the same time, "I'm definately not leaving that part out."

"An' say that Rosa's a real nice baby, and that she's cute, an'-"

"Alright, Wocky, slow down! You're talking faster than I can write!"

Wocky then stopped talking and proceeded to stuff his face.

They said nothing as Pearl furiously wrote her letter, and after about twenty minutes she stopped.

"There", She said as she looked at the letter, "All done!"

"Can I read it?" Wocky asked.

"Sure", Pearl answered as she gave it to him.

"Awright, let's see..."
Dear Mother,

How are you? I'm doing fine. I'm writing to tell you some very special news.

At the time I am writing this, I finally gave birth yesterday afternoon. I was at Mr. Nick's home when I went into
labor. Don't worry, though, he got me the help that I needed, and when the baby was born, the paramedics took me
to the hospital.

We had a baby girl, and we named her Rosa (Wocky picked the name). I put a picture of her with this letter, so you can see what
she looks like. Mystic Maya thinks she's the cutest baby she's ever seen. She's a very sweet baby, and she's very attached
to Wocky. She seems to have a very special bond with him, which I'm glad of. Don't worry Mother, Wocky's
been a responsible father so far.

Maybe someday when Rosa's older, I'll let her meet you in person, because I want her to know you. I'm not sure what
she'll think of you being in prison, but hopefully she'll love you no matter what. I have a feeling she will, as I do you.

Love,
Pearl

"What do you think, Wocky? Is it good enough?"

"Yeah, that's good."

Pearl then wrote the address to the prison on the envelope and put the letter inside.

"I'll mail that off to you tomorrow", Wocky said, "On my way to work, OK?"

"Alright, that sounds-"

Suddenly the baby monitor picked up the sound of Rosa crying.

"Oh, no", Pearl said in a worried tone, "Sounds like Rosa's awake..."

As she proceeded to get up, Wocky stopped her and said, "Naw, gurl, let me go tend to 'er. You've been with 'er all day, so you stay here an' rest while I go up there."

Pearl layed back down and said, "Thank you."

As her husband left the room, she smiled and thought, "I'm glad he's this enthusiastic about this..."

**
Wocky headed up the stairs to his young daughter's room, going to see why she was crying.

He walked inside the room and headed to Rosa's crib, as she lay on her blanket on her back with her little eyes and nose wet from tears.

"C'mere", He said as he picked her up and wrapped her up in the blanket.

Rosa still cried as her father tried to calm her down.

"Don't cry angel", He said softly, "Daddy's gonna take good care of ya..."

He then walked out of the room with her and proceeded to the kitchen to get her bottle.

**
"Awright", Wocky said as he got Rosa's bottle and went to heat up her baby formula, "Don't worry, Rosie, I'm gonna feed ya, jus' hang on..."

Wocky's mother walked into the room and said, "Oh, well look at you, Mr. Man! Fixing Rosa's bottle for her, are you?"

"Yeah, Mom", Her son said as he waited for the formula to heat up, "I wanted to give Pearl a break, so I'm doin' this for 'er."

"That's very nice of you", Plum said as she took Rosa out of his arms, "Let me take her for a moment so you don't have your hands quite so full."

She then rocked her granddaughter and said, "It's alright, Little Rose..."

"Heh", Winfred chuckled as he walked into the kitchen to put away the leftovers, "Little Plum is holding Little Rose."

"Oh, you", His wife laughed.

Wocky then came back with Rosa's bottle filled up.

"Awright", Wocky said as he took her from his mother, "Here's yer bottle, Rosie."

He put the bottle in her mouth and she took it gladly took it.

"That's a good gurl", He said as he walked back to his room with her.

"Isn't that sweet?" Plum said as she hugged her husband, "It's like looking back in time to when you were tending to Wocky like that."

"Yeah", Winfred said, "I'm glad he's handling this so well. I wasn't sure if he could do it, but now that I see it, he can."

Plum let Winfred go and said, "I know..."

She then sighed and said, "Now that the party is finally over, would you mind helping me clean up?"

"Sure, dear", He said as he began to load up the dishwasher.

**
Wocky walked back into the bedroom with Rosa, and saw Pearl writing again.

"You still writin'?" He said as he sat down next to her.

"Yes", She said as she looked up from her stationary, "I'm writing to Iris now.”

“You sure she's gonna still be at that temple?”

“She should be... She was sentenced to seven years in prison for being an accomplice of the murder of my aunt, Mystic Misty...”

“What?! You never told me that! Your sister helped somebody murder your aunt?!”

“I thought I did.”

“Well, I don't remember hearing all that!”

“... I-I'd rather not go into it now... It's very hard for me to talk about...”

Wocky went silent, feeling stupid.

“I-I see”, He said a few moments later.

“Anyway”, He said as he tried to change the subject, “I finally got Rosa calmed down; Gave 'er 'er bottle an' she went out like a light.”

Pearl giggled and said, “She looks so cute when she's sleeping.”

“Yeah”, Wocky said with a smile, “Like a lil' kitten or somethin', with her slanty lil' eyes...”

“Aww, she does...”

Pearl reached out and petted Rosa's soft brown hair.

“Hello”, She said, “How are you this evening?”

Rosa didn't respond as she was snuggled into her father's chest.

“You really love your father, don't you?”

She opened her eyes and looked up at Pearl curiously.

“You have very pretty eyes, Rosa.”

Rosa continued to look at her.

“She seems real shy”, Wocky said, “Well, I mean that she's probly gonna be shy when she's older.”

“Maybe”, Pearl said, “But perhaps she'll be like you: Strong-willed, stubborn and sharp tongued?”

She then giggled as Wocky said, “Hey!”

“I'm sorry”, She said, “It's just that we have such different personalities, I'm not sure which side of the spectrum she's going to be on.”

“She'll probly be like both of us... She looks like me, but she could end up being like you and me.”

Wocky looked at the letter in Pearl's lap and asked, “Did you finish writing to yer sister?”

“Yes”, Pearl answered, “Would you like to read it? I must warn you though, it's a little long...”

He wrinkled his nose and said, “Hmm, naw...”

Pearl giggled lightly and said, “Alright, then, I'll just put it in the envelope and you can send it off tomorrow.”

“Awright.”

They then looked back at their daughter, who was asleep again in Wocky's arms.

“She is so sweet”, Pearl said with a smile as she put her stationary away.

“She sure is”, Wocky agreed as he stroked Rosa's cheek with his finger.

Pearl looked at the clock and read 7:00 PM.

“I guess everyone has gone home”, She said, “The party must be over by now.”

“Yeah”, Wocky said, “When I went in the kitchen earlier everybody was gone an' Mom an' Pops were cleanin' up.”

“Oh.”

They looked back at Rosa, who was still sleeping.

“I can't get over how beautiful she is”, Pearl said as her eyes started glittering with tears, “I couldn't have asked for anything better.”

She then looked at Wocky and said, “Thank you for giving me such a good baby.”

Pearl then leaned in and kissed him.

He blushed and said, “T-Thanks, I guess...”

Rosa opened her eyes at this moment and started cooing and flailing her arms.

“What's the matter, Rosie?” Wocky asked his little daughter, “You want a toy?”

“I'll take her”, Pearl said as she grabbed Rosa from his arms, “And will you go set up her bassinet and find her her Foxie-Chan, please?”

“Pea, she has her own room”, Wocky said, “Why can't she jus-”

“Do it. Now.”

“Awright, awright...”

As Wocky put Rosa's bassinet next to their bed he thought, “So much for getting to have our 'alone time'.”

“Where's Foxie-Chan, Pearl?”

“It's in her room, I think.”

“Awright, I'll be back.”

As Wocky left the room, Pearl held Rosa close to her and rubbed her back.

“It's OK, little one”, She said softly, “Papa's coming back with Foxie-Chan.”

She then got up and put her in her bassinet and kissed her on her cheek.

“Phew”, Pearl thought, “Taking care of a baby is hard work, I'm glad Wocky's here to help me.”

She then climbed back into bed and lied down on her pillow.

“I hope Iris and Mother will be alright with Rosa... I'm sure Iris will, but I'm not sure about Mother...”

Pearl started to think back to when she was eight years old, when Morgan was first sent to prison for her accomplice charge.

“I... I still can't believe that Mother wanted Mystic Maya dead... Just because of...”

Her mind then jumped to two years later, when Maya summoned Dahlia's spirit away from her so she wouldn't be killed by her.

“I almost let Dahlia kill Mystic Maya... I...”

She then snapped out of it and said aloud, “That was eleven years ago! I don't need to be worrying about that anymore...”

Pearl looked at Rosa, who had her eyelids shut tight.

“Rosa”, She said softly, “I promise I will be a better mother to you...”

Her eyes then began to well up with tears as she said, “... Than my mother was to me... I-I... If you end up having a great talent or power when your older, I promise I won't try to take advantage of it like Mother did to me...”

Tears were rolling down her face at this point.

“I was so stupid back then!” Pearl shouted as she started to cry more.

As this was happening Wocky walked back into the room with Foxie-Chan.

He looked at Pearl and said, “Pearl, I got-”

When he saw her crying, he went up to her and said, “What's wrong? D-Don't tell me yer havin' post-pardon depression like what Mom told me 'bout.”

“I-It's not that”, Pearl said to him, “I... I was just thinking about the past, and it upset me, that's all.”

“You thought 'bout yer mom and yer sisters again?”

“... Y-Yes...”

Wocky wiped her face with a tissue and said, “Why are you still upset 'bout that? Yer mom's in prison, Delilah's... Well... Dead, and Iris sounded like she was in the wrong place at the wrong time.”

Pearl sniffed and said, “You're right. However, I promised Rosa that I will never treat her like how my mother treated me. Yes, I love her, but thinking back now... She took advantage of my powers as a spirit medium. She wanted to use them for her own personal gain.”

“Yeah, I know the story... She wanted Maya dead so you could be the village leader instead of her, right?”

“Yes.”

“And Delilah-”

“Dahlia.”

“Whatever- She won't all that either, was she?”

“No... She was a horrible, cruel woman... Hidden behind a fake innocent demeanor...”

“Kinda reminds me of Alita.”

“I thought the same when we saw her in the prison that one day. I couldn't help but notice that they had the same air of vanity. “

“Yeah... But, that's all in the past now. I got over my issues, didn't I? Sure, I was real upset 'bout it for a long time, but things got better after that.”

“I know...”

Wocky then hugged Pearl and said, “It's awright, we're fine now... We're married and we got a little girl right there...”

He then pointed to Rosa, who had slept through the entire conversation.

Pearl looked over to her and smiled.

“That's right”, She said, “We need to focus on Rosa... She really needs us now.”

“She'll always need us, Pea. We're her parents.”

She nodded and said, “Uh huh.”

She then kissed him and said, “Here's to a hopeful future for Rosa... Our perfect little princess...”
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Spoiler: Our Brand New World Chapter 19
The sun was rising over Eagle Mountain. This region is much like Kurain Village, except that it was settled in the mountains, and has a much larger landscape.

Such landscapes here include Hazakura Temple, which houses the spirit mediums of the Fey clan who are guardians of the Master of the Kurain Channeling Technique, who is that this time Maya. Two notable members are Sister Bikini and Pearl's sister Iris.

Bikini is Iris' adoptive mother of sorts, because her father had left her there when she was very young, so she was raised by her. She is much like Plum in personality, except that Bikini is much shorter and she claims often that her back likes to act up 'violently', and wears a robe and hood, indicating that she is a nun.

Nearby is Heavenly Hall, a simple, rundown shack that doesn't seem to be used for much except for storage.

If you walk past there, you'll come across Dusky Bridge, which is an old suspension bridge over Eagle River that lets you get to the Inner Temple if you cross it.

When you do cross it, you get to the Inner Temple. This area is used for spirit mediums to train under the 'Special Course', which involves sitting on a block of ice, being doused by freezing cold water, and reciting a chant thirty thousand times. It also used to have a hanging scroll with a picture of Misty Fey, the former Kurain Master, which has now been replaced with a new one with Maya's image.

Iris was walking down the path out of the temple to the mailbox to check the mail at Bikini's request.

"I haven't heard from Pearl in quite some time", She thought as she opened the mailbox and pulled out some envelopes and a magazine of some sort, "It's been about four years, hasn't it? Since we visited Dahlia's grave..."

She then turned around and walked back to the temple to meet with Bikini for breakfast.

**
When Iris got back to the main hall, she saw Bikini setting plates for their breakfast.

"Did we get any mail, dear?" She said as she looked up at her.

"Yes", Iris answered as she put the envelopes down on the table, "We got a few things."

Bikini looked through all the letters as she said, "Junk, junk, junk- Oh, my 'Entertainment Digest'!"

"You subscribe to 'Entertainment Digest', Sister Bikini?"

"Of course I do!" The sixty year old woman laughed heartily, "I gotta keep up with what's going on in the world!"

"Right..."

Bikini continued to flip through the mail until she came across a letter with some sort of special seal on it.

"Oh, my", She said as she looked at the return address, "T-This can't be!"

"What?" Iris asked in a worried tone.

"T-This letter is from... Pearl Fey... 'Kitaki'?"

Iris looked at Bikini confused and said, "That's our Pearl Fey, right?"

"It must be, but... Oh, let's just open it and find out what's going on!"

She then handed the letter to Iris and she proceeded to open it, careful not to tear the fancy fox seal.

Inside were many sheets of paper, indicating a very long letter.

"Oh, my", Iris said, "Pearl wrote quite a bit!"

Bikini looked at Iris frantically and said, "What are you waiting for?! Go on, read it!"

"A-Alright, then..."

Iris then cleared her throat and began to read the letter aloud:

Dear Iris,

How are you? It's been a while since I last spoke to you. I beleive it was around the time after you got out of prison four years ago, when we went to visit Dahlia's grave. Hopefully you and Sister Bikini are doing well at the temple.

Anyway, I'm writing to tell you that a lot has happened in the past four years. About a year after we visited the grave, I went to stay with Mr. Nick and Trucy for a while. If you're wondering, Mr. Nick adopted her when her father passed away. She's two years younger than me. She's a magician; You know, like the ones on TV? She also has a half-brother named Apollo; He's a lawyer like Mr. Nick.

"Mr. Nick?" Iris thought, "Can that be...?"

"Sounds like she's still keeping in touch with that Phoenix fellow", Bikini said, "He was such a nice man. And that was nice of him to adopt a child."

"I suppose", Iris replied.

"I wonder if he remembers me... Oh well... Anyway, back to this letter..."

Well, while I was there, Trucy took me to a little pastry shop, and I met the strangest looking boy I'd ever seen in my entire life. His name is Wocky Kitaki. I put a photo in with this letter so you can see, because it's hard to describe what he looks like with just words.

Bikini giggled jovially as she said, "Well, I'll be! Looks like little Pearl's found herself a new friend!"

Iris took out the photo that Pearl indicated in the letter and her eyes went wide.

"Oh, my", She said as she put her hand over her mouth.

"Let me see", Bikini said as she looked at the photo.

"Oh, would you look at that", She said, "What an adorable boy he is! A little offbeat looking, but adorable nonetheless!"

"Y-Yes", Iris said nervously, "I guess he is..."

She then went back to the letter:

At first I thought he was really scary and that he had a rough personality, but the more I got to know him, the more I realized how sweet he was. We became friends after that, and then about a month later, we went on a date. By the end of it, I knew he was my 'special someone'.

"Aww", Iris said, "That's so sweet..."

"How lovely", Bikini said with a laugh, "That's like Pearl; Always trying to see the good in people."

"That's what I always liked about her", Iris said, "She was a very strong judge of character; She was quite honest when it came to her feelings, and this seems like she really loves this... 'Wocky Kitaki'."

"Go on, go on!" Bikini said as she sat on the edge of her seat, "What else does she say?!"

We had some good times together; That is, until three months later, when I had to go back home to Kurain. Wocky was devistated that I was leaving. The whole experience made me realized that I loved him and that I couldn't be without him, so six months later, I left the village and came back to live with Mr. Nick and Trucy, so I could be with Wocky.

And that very same day I returned, Wocky had asked me to marry him. I of course said yes, and we got married seven months later. I wish you could've been at the wedding, Iris; It was so beautiful. Maybe if I get a chance to come up to Hazakurain I'll tell you more about it.

"Oh, that is soooo romantic~", Bikini cried as she blew her nose into her hankercheif, "I can't beleive we missed out on that!"

"I can't beleive it either", Iris continued, "Pearl is all grown up... She's a married woman now."

"Yes, yes", Bikini said cheerfully, "I bet she's so happy... Oh, come now, read the rest of the letter!"

Iris nodded as she continued:

Wocky and I had a very happy first year being married, and that also brought something more special: About a few weeks after our first wedding aniversary, I found out I was pregnant. I was very nervous about it, since I didn't know what to expect, or what the baby was going to be like, but it turned out alright.

"Oh, my", Bikini cried again, "And she has a baby now, too?! Oh, I'm just getting sooo ooold~"

"That's amazing", Iris said, "Pearl was really brave to do that; I'd be too afraid to have a baby."

She then went back to reading the letter:

And, as of yesterday afternoon, I gave birth to a baby girl: We named her Rosa. I put a picture of her in this letter as well, because she's just too beautiful for words. She's a very sweet and lovely baby, and she's very attached to us, especially Wocky.

"She gave birth yesterday?!" Bikini said in an excited tone, "Oh, my, Iris! I'm a grandmother! A-And your a-"

"I'm an aunt, Sister Bikini", Iris said with a smile.

"Rosa', huh?" Bikini continued, "What a cute name."

Iris then looked for Rosa's photo in the letter and took it out.

"My", Iris said softly, "Look at her, Sister Bikini..."

Bikini looked at the photo and gasped loudly.

"Oh my goodness~ That's little Rosa? She's just as cute as a button!"

She then compared the photo with Wocky's and pointed at their cheeks simultaneously.

“She even has his little whisker marks”, She said, “That is so cute~”

“Aww”, Iris said, “She is very sweet looking... She's definitely Pearl's daughter.”

“You bet!” Bikini said with a hearty laugh, “I can't wait to meet her!”

Iris then finished reading the letter:

I hope she grows up to be a strong woman, because I don't want her to become influenced by power and greed like Mother was... I want her to be strong like Mystic Maya and Mystic Misty...

Well, I guess that is all I have to say for now, Iris. I hope I get to see you soon.

Take care,
Pearl

After Iris had finished reading the letter, she and Bikini both fell silent at the mention as they thought about that trial from eleven years ago.

"... Oh, Pearl", Iris said as her eyes filled up with tears, "I... I'm so sorry that I contributed to that horrible incident..."

"It's not your fault", Bikni said as she tried to comfort her, "It was all Morgan's doing! She is an absolute sham to the Fey name, commiting all those petty crimes just so she could be part of the main family!"

"Sister Bikini..."

"But that's all in the past now, right Iris? That woman was served justice... And, well, you did your time, as well..."

"I know... I'm glad Pearl is happy now with her own family. I can't wait to meet them... I just don't see why she hid all this from us for so long."

"Maybe she was afraid of what we would think of Wocky", Bikini assumed.

"I'll ask her when I send her a letter back", Iris said, "There's a lot of things I want to know about him... He seems a bit... Suspicious."

"What do you mean? He looks like an absolute sweetie!"

"I don't know... I just have a feeling that there's something bad about him."

"Oh, that's nonsense! Pearl said herself that he's a goodhearted fellow!"

"I'll take your word on it, I suppose. I'll ask anyway so I get all my assumptions out of the way."

Bikini then sat down and said, "Now then, shall we have breakfast?"

"Certainly, Sister Bikini."

And with that, they began to eat their breakfast and continued to chat about Pearl.

**
Meanwhile, about two or three hours away at the city prison, Larry Butz was making his rounds at the order of his boss, the Warden.

"This job is so boring", The thirty-seven year old man said to himself as he walked down the dark, lonely hallway, “But it was worth it, because I met the love of my life...”

He then pulled out a clover pendant of some sort as he said dreamily, “Alita Tiala.”

Larry kissed it and then put it back in his pocket, and continued to walk, until he ran into his boss.

“Hey!” The warden said sternly, “Come here!”

Larry walked to him briskly and saluted him as he said, “Y-Y-Yes, sir?! What would you, like, sir?!”

“I'm a woman, you numb-nuts!” The warden said in her deep voice, surpassing Plum's level of huskiness.

“S-Sorry, sir- I-I mean ma'am!”

She then handed him a stack of letters and said, “I'm puttin' you on mail duty! I want you to deliver these to ALL the inmates, you understand me?”

“Y-Yes, sir-”

The warden glared at him as Larry corrected himself, “Ma'am, ma'am!”

She snorted again as she said, “And when yer done, you report back to me... Got it?”

“Y-Yes... Ma'am...”

Larry boss then turned her heel and walked off as he went to deliver the mail to the inmates.

As he was walking to the area where the inmates were housed, he looked through all the letters to see if any of them were for Alita.

“Hmm... Hmm... I don't see any letters for her...”

He then gave up and went inside the door, leading to the prisoner's cells.

**
After he got there, he went straight to Alita cell to chat with her.

“I wonder how she's doing this morning”, Larry thought as he walked past all the scary inmates staring at them from behind bars, “I'll definitely bright up her day with a visit~”

When he reached her he noticed that she was writing in a notebook from what he could tell.

“Hello, my little four leafed clover~”, He said cheerfully to his 'girlfriend'.

Alita looked up when she heard Larry's voice and turned to him.

“Good morning... Larry”, She said plainly, “I'm sorry, but... I'm a bit busy right now.”

“With what?”

“It's none of your business.”

“Aww, c'mon, babe, I thought you could tell me anything...”

Alita sighed in annoyance and said, “Alright, fine, but you better promise not to tell anyone.”

“Alright”, Larry said as he nodded.

She then looked around and whispered in his ear, “I'm planning to break out of here.”

“Oh, wow, really?! How're gonna do that?!”

“Shh!”

“O-Oh, sorry...”

“Well”, Alita said with a devilish smirk on her face, “I was sort of planning on getting you to help me...”

“Really? But... I can't do that! The boss would-”

“Who cares about that bloated whale of a warden? She's too stupid to notice anything around here... Anyway, I was going to wait until everyone was asleep...”

She then leaned in closer so she made sure no one could hear her but Larry.

“... And get you to take the cell keys from the warden.”

Larry's face went white at the thought of doing this; He knew if he did, the warden would would be furious.

“B-But Alita”, He said, “I-I can't do that... I might get fired!”

Alita then looked at him innocently and said as she batted her eyes, “Don't you love me, Larry? Don't you want me to be free?”

Larry then tilted his head in thought and said, “Yeah, sure... Well, alright, I'll do it... For us.”

She then giggled and said, “I knew I could count on you!”

“Sure”, He said, “I'll do anything for you, sweetness~”

Larry then realized he still had the mail the warden wanted to deliver to the inmates.

“You're on mail duty again, I see?” Alita asked.

“I guess so”, Larry answered, “I didn't see anything for you in here...”

“Who cares?” She said, “Nobody ever sends me anything; Not even my parents.”

“Oh...”

Larry kept looking through the letters until he came across something he'd seen before.

“Hey, it... it's that fox seal again...”

“What are you looking at?” Alita asked as she saw him staring at the letter closely.

“This letter... It's from-”

“Let me see that!”

She snatched the letter from his hands and scoffed when she saw the address label.

“The Kitakis again?” She thought, “Why can't I get away from them?”

“I think it's from Pearl again”, Larry said, “Y'know, that little girl I used to know?”

Alita payed no attention to him as she opened the letter that was meant for Morgan Fey.

“Alita, what're you doin'?! Don't-”

“Shut up”, She said as she looked at the letter, “Can't you see I'm being nosy?”

She then began to read it to Larry:

Dear Mother,

How are you? I'm doing fine. I'm writing to tell you some very special news.

"That you finally divorced Wocky?" Alita thought as she snickered to herself.

"Special news?" Larry asked, "What could that be...?"

At the time I am writing this, I finally gave birth yesterday afternoon. I was at Mr. Nick's home when I went into
labor. Don't worry, though, he got me the help that I needed, and when the baby was born, the paramedics took me
to the hospital.

"Wow", Larry said in amazement, "She had her baby at Nick's place?!"

"This is just too hilarious", Alita thought again, "That stupid girl actually had that brat's baby?! I bet it's hideous."

We had a baby girl, and we named her Rosa (Wocky picked the name). I put a picture of her with this letter, so you can see what
she looks like. Mystic Maya thinks she's the cutest baby she's ever seen. She's a very sweet baby, and she's very attached
to Wocky. She seems to have a very special bond with him, which I'm glad of. Don't worry Mother, Wocky's
been a responsible father so far.

Alita took out the photo of Rosa from the envelope and had an expression of disgust.

"Just as I thought", She thought as she looked at the picture, "Looks like a little rat."

"Can I see the picture?" Larry asked as she handed him the photo.

"Aww, she's cute", He said, "Don't you think so, Alita?"

"Adorable", She lied.

"I'm so happy for them", He said, "I bet Nick and Maya have their hands full!"

He then laughed as he thought about his old friends.

Alita continued to be in her own little world as she shook her head.

"I can't beleive I almost married that little punk! What on earth was I thinking?! Well, he had a lot of money, and there was no way I could pass that up... And only a year after I was sent here he finds some other broad and spreads his seed... How sickening."

"You OK, my little peach?"

"Yes, yes, I'm fine, sweetness", Alita said, reverting back to her 'innocent' side, "Just planning our little rendevous for tonight."

She then gave the letter back to Larry and said, "Here, take this back. I'm done with it."

Larry then attempted to seal the letter back up to hide that someone opened it.

"So, uh", He said as he was heading out, "I'll see you later; Gotta go deleiver these letters."

Alita waved sweetly as she said, "Bye~"

When he was gone she put on her evil grin again and chuckled to herself.

"Finally, I'll finally get out of this prison and get my revenge on that little brat!"

**
Morgan Fey was in her cell in solitary confinement, looking at her past letters she'd recieved from Pearl.

"Oh, my precious Pearl", She thought as she sighed, "I still can't beleive that you're going to have my grandchild... And with some... G-Gangster's son..."

She then folded the letter up and put it away.

Pearl's mother still had a bit of a grudge towards Wocky, mostly due to the fact that she did not approve of his background, but she tried to reassure herself that Pearl knew what she was doing and would keep him in line.

"Pearl's a smart girl, she wouldn't let him make any bad decisions..."

Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

"Come in", Morgan said as the person on the other side opened the door.

Larry walked in and handed her the letter that Pearl wrote to her.

"Another letter from your daughter, ma'am", He said.

She took the letter as she said, "Thank you, I've been waiting for this."

He walked out briskly before she somehow found out that Alita had opened it.

When he was gone Morgan proceeded to open the letter, not noticing that it had been opened.

She then started to read the letter:

Dear Mother,

How are you? I'm doing fine. I'm writing to tell you some very special news.

"Oh, dear", Morgan said aloud, "D-Don't tell me..."

At the time I am writing this, I finally gave birth yesterday afternoon. I was at Mr. Nick's home when I went into
labor. Don't worry, though, he got me the help that I needed, and when the baby was born, the paramedics took me
to the hospital.

Morgan gasped as she said, "Oh, my! You should've been at the hospital in the first place... But I suppose you didn't know what labor pains felt like. Good thing you were there, dear."

We had a baby girl, and we named her Rosa (Wocky picked the name). I put a picture of her with this letter, so you can see what
she looks like.
"I have a... Granddaughter?" She said with a smile, "Hopefully all of your beauty shines through to nullify the genes of that... Boy..."

She then took out the photo of Rosa lying on a blanket at the hospital dressed in a pink footsie outfit.

Morgan's eyes softened as she saw the baby's face.

"She's so lovely", She said, "Even though she looks like... Erm... 'Wally', was it?"

She didn't mind at all that Rosa was dominated by Wocky's features; She still found her beautiful, no matter what.

"I can't have ill feeling toward this child just because of her father", Morgan said, "This is Pearl's child as well, and I won't deny that. I finally got my wish for a granddaughter, and what I got... Was what I expected."

Mystic Maya thinks she's the cutest baby she's ever seen. She's a very sweet baby, and she's very attached
to Wocky. She seems to have a very special bond with him, which I'm glad of. Don't worry Mother, Wocky's
been a responsible father so far.

"That's a good girl, Pearl. Keep that Wally straight!"

Maybe someday when Rosa's older, I'll let her meet you in person, because I want her to know you. I'm not sure what
she'll think of you being in prison, but hopefully she'll love you no matter what. I have a feeling she will, as I do you.

Sincerely,
Pearl

"That would be lovely", Morgan said as she folded up the letter and put it in her collection of other letters, "I hope she turns out as perfect as you, dear Pearl."

She then took out some stationary and a pencil and wrote a letter back to her.
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OBNW's last chapter is coming up soon, and the first chapter of my new fic, Every Rose Has Its Thorns is done, so those will be put up soon!
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About a week later, at the Kitaki's mansion, Wocky was walking down the driveway and to the mailbox, checking to see if Pearl got any letters from her family yet.

"She's been waitin' on 'em for a week", He thought as he reached the mailbox and opened it. He pulled out a few bills, a magazine and two letters addressed to Pearl.

"Looks like they came."

Wocky walked back up to the front door of the house and went back inside.

**
"Did we get any mail, dear?" Plum asked as she set the plates on the dining room table for breakfast.

"Yeah", Wocky asked as he closed the door behind him and put the mail down, "We got some bills, one of your 'home' magazines, and some letters for Pearl."

"Oh... Well, Pearl's still asleep, so put those letters somewhere safe so she can see them later."

"She's still sleepin'?!" Wocky asked as if he was shocked.

"Son, she's a new mother", His mother said, "She was up all night with Rosa, wouldn't you know."

"She should've asked me for help! I would've taken over for her."

"When I went to check on her last night, when I got up to use the restroom, I asked her if she asked you to help. She said, 'It's alright, Mother, I can handle it. I don't want to wake Wocky up.'"

Wocky looked at Plum and said, "Rosa is both of ours... We should both be takin' care of 'er."

"I know, sweetie, but I guess she didn't want to disturb you."

"Well, Pearl needs to stop bein' so-"

"So, what, Wocky?"

Wocky and Plum both turned around to see Pearl standing there in her sleeping gown, her hair completely loose and a little messy.

"U-Um, g-good mornin', Pea", Wocky said nervously, "Didn't see ya there..."

"What do I need to stop being?"

He didn't say anything as Plum interjected, "He said he wants you to stop being so beautiful! You're the light of his life, don't you know..."

"Really...?" Pearl asked in a doubtful tone.

"Y-Yeah", Wocky answered, "Mom's right! You're so beautiful it almost hurts to look at you!"

She blushed a little and said, "Oh... T-That's very sweet."

"Phew", Wocky thought as he picked up Pearl's letters off the table, "That was a close one!"

"Some letters came for you", He said as he gave them to her, "They're from your mom and your sister."

"Oh, good!" She said, "But before I read them I need to get Rosa and feed her."

"Awright", Wocky said as he and his mother walked to the living room, "We'll be in the den."

"OK, I'll be there in a minute."

**
In the den Wocky and Plum noticed tha t Winfred was already in there, reading the newspaper.

"Mornin', Pops", Wocky said as he sat down on the couch, "Didn't know you was here."

"Yep", His father responded, "Been up since six in the mornin'."

"Sheesh", His son said, "Ever since we had Rosa, that's what time me and Pearl usually go to bed..."

"Pearl was still up when I got up. She was tendin' to Rosa, but I noticed that you were still sleepin'. I thought that 6:00 AM was your shift, son."

"I know, but Pearl kept tellin' me she didn't need help. She wanted me 'To get my rest'."

"Taking care of a child is a joint effort", Plum added, "You were doing so good with the hourly shifts."

Soon Pearl walked into the room with Rosa in her arms nursing her bottle.

"I'm here", She said as she sat down next to Wocky, "Now give me the letters, please."

Wocky handed them to her and said, "Awright..."

Pearl took the top envelope and opened it to see a two page long letter with the special Hazakura Temple stationary.

"It's from my sister", She said.

"Go on", Plum said, "Read it to us... I'd like to hear what she said."

"Alright..."

Pearl then cleared her throat a little and began to read the letter:

Dear Pearl,

It's nice to hear from you again, after not doing so for about four years. Sister Bikini says hello as well.
Pearl smiled when she thought of Sister Bikini.

"Who's that?" Wocky asked, "You never told us you had another sister."

Pearl giggled and said, "Oh, no, no! She's not my sister! That's the title all the nuns have a the temple. Sister Bikini is the head nun at Hazakura Temple... She's the same age as Father, I think..."

Plum looked at her husband, as if to say, "Don't you get any ideas."

Winfred just looked at Pearl and said, "She sounds like a very nice lady."

"She is", Pearl said with a smile.

She then continued the letter:

I'm very glad that you've found your 'special someone' and that you have a daughter.
I feel like I've missed out on a lot after being in prison for seven years...

"Oh", Plum said, "Poor thing..."

Well, everything is fine here. Sister Bikini is still having back problems, but she still manages to hang in there.
We've been getting a lot of mediums in training trying out for the 'Special Course'. We recently had someone named
Kumiko who actually managed to pass, which hasn't been done in quite some time; Most people give up after a few
hours. I have a feeling she has potential to be the next Kurain Master, but unfortunately, like you and I, she's not
in the main family, of course. She is most certainly welcome to join the Hazakura nunhood... Though she told me
she had a 'long distance' boyfriend...

"Wow", Pearl said, "Kumiko passed the Special Course! Mystic Maya didn't tell me that before."

"Hey", Wocky said, "That's that girl that my little cousin Donnie was tellin' me about!"

"Isn't ten years old a little young for her to have a long distance boyfriend?" Plum asked, "I mean, I met your father when I was around nineteen or twenty."

"You had boyfriends before me, dear", Winfred said.

"But you're the only one that counted", His wife said.

"That's cute though", Pearl said, "It's never too early to find your 'special someone'."

"Yes", Her mother-in-law agreed, "I guess it's so..."

And also, if it isn't too much trouble, I would like to invite you and your family to come visit us at the temple.
Whenever you can make it here is fine, just let us know. Sister Bikini wants to see little Rosa very much, as do
I.
She looks very cute from what I saw from her picture. She eminates your gentleness, Pearl, and I have a
feeling she'll grow up to be like you... Or maybe she'll be like your Wocky, though I'm not sure what
he's like.
Well, I have to go now; Sister Bikini and I have to go look after the novice mediums in the Inner
Temple.

Sincerly,
Iris

"I'm glad Iris is doing well", Pearl said as she set the letter down and put Rosa's bottle down.

"Your sister sounds like a very nice girl", Plum said, "How old is she? You never told us, I don't think..."

Pearl looked at her and said, "Oh... Well, she's much older than me. She's going to be thirty seven this year."

"Dang", Wocky said, "Your mom must be older than my mom!"

Plum looked at her son and said, "How rude!"

"I-It's alright", Pearl said, "Honestly... I don't even know how old my mother is... All I know is that she is Mystic Misty's older sister, and she would've been sixty one this year if she were still alive."

"Oh."

"So yes, Wocky", Pearl continued, "She would be older than your mother, I suppose. She is quite young compared to her, anyway."

"Oh, my", Wocky's mother said as she blushed.

Pearl then went to the second letter and picked it up.

"And speaking of my mother", She said as she opened the letter, "I'm going to read what she said... Hopefully she took all of this as well as Iris did..."

She then began to read it:

Dearest Pearl,

It is very nice to hear from you again, and congradulations on your new baby. She's very beautiful, and I hope
she'll grow up to be as lovely and brilliant as you someday. It really brightened my day up.

Pearl looked at what she had written in disbelief.

"Wow", Wocky said in disbeleif as well, "She... She actually likes Rosa?!"

"It looks that way", Pearl answered, "I'm a bit shocked, really... I thought she would disown her because of... Well, you know..."

"Well I'm glad", Winfred said, "Your mother loves you, and because of that she's going to love your granddaughter as well."

"Y-You're right, Father", Pearl said, "Mother does love me very much... She even got herself in trouble for me... I hope when Rosa is older she will love her back and not be cold towards her once we tell her about what she did."

She then continued:

As for that... Boy, I'm glad he's stepped up and is being a good father to your little Rosa. You better keep an eye on
him and make sure he makes good choices for her, alright? This is my first granddaughter, and I want
the best for her, just like I wanted the best for you.

Pearl looked at Wocky and smiled.

"I think Mother is starting to warm up to you", She said.

"I dunno", He said, "She might jus' be sayin' that."

"Maybe so, but at least she wants the best for Rosa."

Pearl then finished reading the letter:

I know in the past that I made some really bad decisions... I was just so jealous of my sister being in the main
family, and look what it lead to... Oh, well, we all make mistakes, don't we? You could've been a great master
for Kurain, but I suppose Mystic Maya was the most appropriate choice, I suppose...

Well, I don't want to droll on any longer, my dear, so I bid you adieu and farewell.

Take Care,
Mother
Pearl put the letter down and said nothing.

"She really wanted you to be the leader of that place, huh?" Wocky asked.

"... Yes", Pearl answwered as she rocked Rosa in her arms a little, "But Mystic Maya was the rightful Kurain Master, not me... But, as I said before, that was long ago and it's all in the past now."

She then looked at Rosa and said, "... This is what I have now... I have a family and child of my own. I wouldn't trade anything in the world for this."

She looked back up at the Kitakis and said, "I'm glad I met you all... Mother Plum, Father Winfred..."

"... And you, Wocky."

They didn't respond as they continued to hear her speech.

"I didn't think I would ever be involved with people such as yourselves, but you are all really the nicest people I've ever met."

"Thanks", Wocky said as he scratched the back of his neck.

Pearl smiled at him and said, "This was definately a difficult experience, Wocky, but... It was worth it. It was worth going through all that pain, because if I didn't, I wouldn't have Rosa."

Rosa was fast asleep in Pearl's arms at this point.

"And I wouldn't have this lovely family I have now."

Pearl then stood up and said, "This was always my dream, since I was eight years old... To find my 'special someone' and have a family of my own."

"I never thought about it", Wocky said, "I jus' wanted to marry somebody back then jus' so I could continue the family... That's why I got engaged to Alita all that time ago."

He then looked at Pearl and said, "But I'm glad things didn't work out with her because I'm much happier with you, Pea."

"I know", Pearl said with a smile, "And I'm happy with you."

Plum then stood up and said, "Shall we go the backyard and have some tea, then?"

"Sure", Pearl said as she and everyone else followed her to the back door leading to the garden.

**
Back at the mansion, the Wocky and Pearl were still sitting in the backyard having tea, while Rosa had her bottle. Winfred and Plum were off on the other side sitting at their own table.

“It's a nice day, isn't it?” Pearl asked as she looked out to the koi pond.

“Yeah”, Wocky said as he did the same.

She looked at him and said, “I didn't know you liked tea.”

“Gotten used to it”, He said, “Since I'm gettin' old an' stuff.”

“Twenty three isn't old...”

“I feel like it, though, since we've had Rosa.”

He then took another gulp and said, “I remember Pops used to always tell me, 'Havin' a kid will change your life forever. When me an' your mom had you I had to start makin' decisions based 'round you.'”

“That's true”, Pearl said.

“An' now that we have a kid... I have to do the same thing.”

Wocky looked back out to the pond and went silent.

Pearl too went silent as she put Rosa's bottle down on the table and held her close.

“Rosa is so calm”, She said, “She must like it out here.”

“Must be the nature lovin' type”, Wocky said.

Pearl giggled and said, “Maybe she is.”

“You know”, Wocky said, “If I would've married Alita, I honestly think I wouldn't have been as happy with her as I am with you.”

“We already discussed this”, Pearl said.

“I know, but... I jus' can't let go of it! I'll never forgive her for what she did to me... An' I feel sorry for the next guy that falls victim to her schemes.”

“Yes, but she's in prison now, so you don't have to worry about her anymore... Look what you have now.”

Wocky turned his head towards Pearl and looked at her, and then down to the very young girl she was holding.

“This is it”, She said, “This is your new life, your brand new world...”

He then stood up and put his arms around her.

“No”, He said, “This is our brand new world.”

“Oh”, She said as she turned around and kissed them.

They then turned their heads back out to the pond, thinking about the future they were going to have with little Rosa.


Spoiler: Our Brand New World Epilogue
Meanwhile, on the streets of the city, a man with blue baggy jeans, sneakers, scruffy blonde hair and goatee, orange jacket and white t-shirt was walking down the street with a woman with black hair up to her shoulders wearing large sunglasses and a pink sun hat, sundress and platform sandals.

"You like livin' with me so far?" The man asked as they walked towards the small house down the way.

"I suppose", The woman answered as she examined her pink nails.

"I... I still can't beleive we didn't get caught last night... Alita."

The woman now revealed to be Alita Tiala looked at the man and said, "Well, it's like I said before, Larry... That warden is an old hag, she doesn't pay a bit of attention to what's going on, making my escape much easier than I thought."

"I just hope she doesn't find out about this", The man, Larry Butz, said, "But if she does... I might as well have to find another job."

Alita snickered to herself and thought, "This was all too easy! I knew this brainless idiot would do anything I say! Now I'm free, and I'll be able to get back at that stupid brat Wocky Kitaki!"

They then reached Larry house and they walked inside after he unlocked the door.

**
"It sure is nice to be outside in fresh air again", Alita said as she sat down on Larry's couch, "Being in prison for four years has done a bit of damage to my overall beauty."

"I don't think so", Larry said, "You're beautiful no matter what!"

Alita giggled and said, "Why, thank you!"

"But", He added, "I wish you didn't dye your hair black... I liked it better when it was your original color."

"I had to change it", She answered, "I don't want anyone to find out who I am, so I had to change my look."

Normally Alita wore a frilly yellow dress with blue trim with feathers on the front with a clover brooch in the middle. She also wore blue platform sandals that Wocky had given her when she was still with him, but she ended up losing them due to them being evidence in the crime she was convicted of. She wore her hair in a bun as well, but with her disguise she decided to wear her hair loose and replaced her blue earrings with pink studs.

"I know, baby", Larry said, "But I liked you better the way you were."

Alita paid him no mind as she thought of a way to get back at her old fiancee.

"Maybe I could pretend to flirt with him and make his wife think he's cheating on her! That would be hilarious... Or I could kidnap their baby and hold it for ransom... No, that's too risky. I like the first choice better..."

"Hey, Alita?" Larry asked, "Somethin' wrong?"

"Oh, no", Alita answered, "I'm fine, but... My name isn't Alita anymore."

"What?" He asked, "It's not?"

"No", She said, "Since I changed my look, I have to change my name... So my new name will be..."

She then put on her sunglasses and said, "Adela Adeal."

"'A dollar a deal?" Larry asked.

Alita rolled her eyes and said, "No... Adela Adeal. I just thought of it on the spot."

She then reverted back to her 'sweet' facade and said, "Aren't I clever?"

"Yeah", He answered, "Of course! I would've never thought of that!"

He then thought for a moment and said, "Though I too had a pen name: Laurice Deauxnim."

Alita snickered and said, "Laurice? How on earth did you come up with that?"

"I used to be an artist", He said, "But after my mentor, Elise Deauxnim- Well, we ended up finding out that she was really Misty Fey, Nick's friend's mom and used to be the leader of her village or something like that."

"Sounds like that girl Wocky married had quite a bit of a background", Alita thought, "She probably has more money than the Kitakis!"

"So, yeah... Her sister, Morgan Fey, was in the prison I worked at... A-And the one you just broke out of..."

"You mean the woman that kept getting all those letters?"

"Yeah... Her daughter, Pearl, was the one that wrote them, obviously."

Alita looked off to the side and said, "I've met that girl before..."

"You have?" Larry asked.

"Yes", She answered, "According to what you told me, I'm guessing she was there to visit her mother... And she was with that... Brat."

"Brat? Who're ya talkin' about, babe?"

"Her... Ugh... 'Husband' she spouted on about in those letters we read! Wocky Kitaki!"

"Oh! So you know her husband, then?"

"All too well..."

Alita then went silent.

Larry went up closer to her and asked, "... Did something happen between you?"

She continued to look away from him and said, "... He's the reason I was thrown in that nasty prison."

Larry gasped in shock and said, "What?! What did he do to you?!"

"This is all too easy", Alita thought as she looked at her 'boyfriend' with fake, tearful eyes.

"He did horrible things!"

"Like what?"

"He... H-He framed me! He framed me for murdering some doctor I used to work for!"

"Wow..."

"A-And I tried to tell them! I tried to say that Wocky was the true criminal! But... Nobody beleived me! I was just a simple girl trying to get by in the world... And what happens? Some gangster punk goes and ruins my life!"

Alita at this point was crying, and Larry was buying every bit of her fake sob story.

“Oh, Alita”, Larry said as he hugged her, “It's alright... But... Oh, no...”

“What?” Alita asked.

“H-He's Pearl's husband... A-And... What if he's treating her bad like he did you?”

“Probably, but that girl is probably too stupid to notice anything...”

“Maybe...”

“S-Speaking of which”, Alita said as she continued to sob, “I... I-I-I was engaged to that horrible man!”

“What?!” Larry exclaimed.

“Y-Yes”, She said, “I-It happened when I was still working as a nurse at that clinic... W-With the doctor I was accusing of killing... Anyway, he pretty much forced me to marry him... A-And if I refused his proposal he was going to put me on his hit list!”

“Oh, babe”, He said as he continued to hold her, “That's so terrible... If only Pearl could see the light at realize that that Wocky dude is bad news...”

“And she had a child with him”, She continued, “Oh, she's probably going to come out as bad as him! If only I could save her and make her my own... To get her away from that gangster trash...”

“Yeah...”

Alita then pulled away from Larry and said, “But enough about that.”

She then walked towards Larry's bedroom and said, “I'm going to take a shower... I'll be back.”

“Alright”, Larry said.

As Alita walked out of the room, she put on a Cheshire Cat style grin and thought, “What a doofus! He completely fell for that! Now the only thing left to do is to find the Kitaki's mansion from here... And pay them a little visit... As Adela Adeal.”

**
Morgan Fey was being escorted back to her cell after breakfast. She still thought about her new granddaughter, and was actually very excited to meet her.

“I don't care who Rosa's father is”, She thought as she walked down the dreary hallway, “I bet she'll turn out to be brilliant and a prodigy, just like my Pearl... However... She might end up not having any spiritual power, due to it being drowned out by that Willy fellow... Somehow that's unlikely, because Pearl's powers are very-”

“ARRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHH!”

Morgan and the guard she was with jumped as she shouted, “Oh, my! What was that horrible screech?!”

The Warden came storming down the hallway from the cell room and headed towards them.

“W-W-What's wrong, ma'am?” The guard asked fearfully.

“We've got a problem, Rick”, She said, “A huge problem!”


“What happened?”

“Well”, The Warden said as she paced around, “One of the inmates is missing, is what! I haven't seen Alita Tiala since last Friday!”

“N-Now, Bernice-”

“That's Ms. Bernice to you, youngin'!”

“M-Ms. Bernice, maybe Ms. Tiala was moved to another cell...”

“I gave no such orders”, Warden Bernice said.

“U-Uh oh...”

“And”, She continued, “I lost the cell keys around that time! I had to get the spares from the other warden!”

Rick didn't say anything.

Bernice then got up in his face and said, “And do you know where I finally found the missing keys?”

He gulped and said, “W-Where?”

“On the floor at your guard station!” She yelled.

“What?! I-I wasn't even on duty on Friday night! My shift ended at 5:00 PM!”

“Well, if it wasn't you, then who was it?!”

“W-When I got off my shift”, Rick continued, “Larry Butz took my place at my station, and was there for the rest of the night... So it had to be him!”

Bernice started to fume even more and yelled, “WHAT?! THAT DUNDERHEAD BUTZ STOLE THEM?!”

“It had to be!” Rick said, “He was the last person at my station yesterday! And what makes it even more apparent is that he has a huge thing for Ms. Tiala! I saw them together a lot!”

The warden slapped her forehead and said, “Why didn't I see this coming?! I knew that Butz kid was nothing but trouble! But... To break out an inmate?! That's just inexcusable!”

She then walked back to her office and said, “That's it, I'm firing him right now! And later I'm gonna go put out a prison escape alert! We've gotta catch that Tiala!”

“A-Alright”, Rick said as he walked Morgan to her cell, “I'll see you later, then.”

He then turned to Morgan and said, “Sorry, Ms. Fey. The warden gets very upset when things such as this happen.”

“I see”, She said as she continued to think about Pearl and Rosa, not paying attention to the situation at all.


Spoiler: Every Rose Has It's Thorns Chapter 1
Nine years...

Nine years since that fateful trial... When I was accused of murdering Pal Meraktis, the doctor that failed in removing the bullet that nearly killed me...

... And since the woman I was supposed to marry... The woman I thought that loved me... Betrayed me...

... Alita Tiala, the nurse present at the time of the operation. I was madly in love with her, willing to do anything her heart desired... But it was all for nothing.

She wanted nothing more than to wait for my death and put her icy cold claws on my family's fortune.

... And thanks to Apollo Justice, the lawyer that was defending me, revealed her as the one who killed that pathetic doctor, and was sentenced to life in prison.

I... I was in complete and utter denial by the end of the trial... I couldn't beleive my Alita, my Fallen Angel, had done me wrong. I thought she loved me, as I loved her...

... But it all ended up being one big lie.

I went into a deep, spiraling depression after that day. I thought I would never find a woman that would truly love me for who I was, not just for my material possessions...

... Until I met her.

Pearl Fey, a girl from Kurain Village, had entered my life a year after the trial, while I was working at the shop. Honestly, we didn't hit it off at first, since she was unsure of me, and to be honest, I was a little unsure of her...

... But after we got to know each other, we ended up becoming best friends, and eventually soulmates.

Pearl and I spent a lot of time together, just about every day, and I loved every minute of it.

... However, about September of that year, she had to go back home. I was devistated, and I thought I was never gonna see her again.

But eight months later, she came back to me. She said she couldn't stand to be without me in that village, so she decided to sneak out and chose me over her spirit medium duties.

And from that moment on, I knew that this was the right woman for me. She's as pure and innocent as they come... Well, much more so than Alita, anyway.

So on that very day, I proposed to her, and she said yes, and we were married that November.

A year later, not to long after our first aniversary, Pearl and I found out that we were expecting our first child. I was of course extremely nervous at first, since I had no idea what to expect.

I thought we were going to have a son, but when the baby was born, I was proven wrong. We ended up having a daughter, who we named Rosa.

She's five now, and she's a very sweet little girl. Smart too, just like her mother. She's getting ready to start kindergarten this year, so I hope she'll do well.

Rosa's pretty excited about it though, since she found out her little friend Gloria's gonna be in her class. She's my friend Dino's niece, and she and Rosa are only a few months apart.

Speaking of Dino, he's been doing well. He and Natsumi got married about four years ago and they had a little boy named Takeo. He's three now, I beleive, and he's just like his dad, with him being clumsy and stuff.

Also around that time, Pearl was pregnant again, and once again I was nervous. We had a boy this time, and we called him William, or just Willy for short.

He's only two, but he sure likes to get around and cause mischeif. Mom says I was just like him at that age. Like father, like son, I guess.

Rosa loves to play with him, and Willy likes to play with her too. He calls her 'Sis'. Cute, ain't it?

As for me, I've been doing pretty well. I'm the fifth head of the family now, wouldn't you beleive it? Didn't think Pops would give his seat up so soon, but I guess he's getting tired of it. He's gonna be sixty-five this year, so I guess he thought it was time to retire.

I'm also the manager of the shop now. Y'know, that little pastry shop Pops opened up so he could make 'clean' money? It's not that bad, I guess, and bossin' them kids around is kinda fun.

Plus I let Rosa and Willy come in there with me so they can watch us work. And they get free samples too.

Mom's doing alright, too. She's pretty much the same as always, cookin' and cleanin' and lookin' after the kids when Pearl and I go out. We need a break sometimes, y'know?

Last I heard from my friend Al was that he and Yoshiko were gonna elope, since her parents didn't approve of him at all. I'm not sure if they went through with it or not, though...

Rick broke off his engagement with Masami, sad to say. Apparently he saw her with another guy and completely broke his heart. Guess he wasn't good enough for her.

My aunt and uncle Guiseppe and Catarina are loving the kids. They come over almost every day just to see them, and they've offered to babysit them a few times. Guess they're suffering from 'Empty Nest Syndrome' or somethin'.

Phillipe, their oldest son and one of my cousins, moved out of the house on his twenty-first birthday, since he thought he was ready to live on his own. Aunt Cat was devistated, but Uncle Seppe helped her cope though. It's been four years since then, and he's actually been doin' pretty well.

Franco, his little brother, turned twenty-one himself this year, but he decided to stay with his parents, since he's a big mama's boy and all.

Vinny, one of my other cousins, finally married his girlfriend he's been with forever, Alice, last year. They haven't said anythin' about havin' kids yet, but I'm sure they will eventually. Vinny's gonna be thirty-three this year, so he'd better hurry up before he's too old to do it!

Remember Rocco, my cousin that dated Shorty- er, uh- Trucy for a while? Well, after he broke up with her during the time before Rosa was born, he gave up on datin' all together, since the girl he was with after her- I forget her name- broke up with him, basically. I feel sorry for him, man. Such an unlucky guy...

Vitalia finally settled her divorce with her ex-husband a few years ago and has full custody of her son, my little cousin Donnie, who's gonna be fifteen this year. Last time I heard he's quite a hit with the ladies, but he says his 'true love' is Kumiko, one of the girls from Pearl's village. Heh.

Pearl and I still get along of course. Our seventh wedding anniversary is coming up this year, which is hard to beleive since I feel like I've been with her forever. I didn't think she'd want to put up with me for this long, or even at all, but she loves me, and that's what people do when they love each other, right?

Pearl's family's been doing good too, from what she told me.

Her mom, Morgan Fey, is still in prison. Pearl still writes to her though and she writes back. Man, she almost ripped my head off when she first met me. I had no idea her mom was gonna be such a bitch. Thank god she wasn't that way with the kids. She actually adores Rosa, which I find surprising. She said that she reminds her of Pearl when she was younger. As for Willy, she's indifferent towards him. Pearl told me that the men in her family are basically cast aside.

Her cousin Maya is still the Master of Kurain. I can't beleive she's thirty-six years old and she still hasn't gotten married yet. I always thought her and Nick had a thing for each other, even though they deny it. You never know...

Speaking of Nick... That old fart still hasn't retaken the bar exam, according to Trucy. Guess he doesn't wanna be an attorney anymore. She told me that he thought what he did was enough and that he wasn't really willing to go back to it. Who knows, he might change his mind...

Trucy... She's grown up a lot since I first met her. She's twenty-four now. I know, I can't beleive it, either. She finally formed the magic troupe that she wanted and she's currently traveling with them. Man, when Trucy comes over, Rosa goes nuts. "Auntie Trucy, will you show me Mr. Hat again?" She would say to her, "Oh, I wanna see you pull Foxie-Chan out of your hat, too!"

Apollo. Man, he's pretty much my bro, you know what I'm saying? I still see him sometimes, but he's been so busy lately with cases that he hasn't had time to stop by. From what I heard he has his own law office now: 'Justice & Co. Law Offices.' Heh, has a nice ring to it. Trucy I think also told me that he's dating Vera Misham, a girl that I was interested in before I met Pearl, but it didn't work out between us. Glad she found the right guy for her, though.

Hmm... Who else, who else... Well, I guess Eldoon is still around sellin' his noodles, that old fart. Still salty as always. The face Rosa made when she first tried them was funny, but she wasn't laughing, though.

I still haven't met Pearl's older sister Iris. She writes letters to us, and from what I've read from her she sounds alright. Pearl says she wants to go up to... Uh... 'Hozukuren Temple' to visit her soon. I asked her why we haven't visited her before, and she just said, "It's because I wasn't ready to show you to her yet." Right...

Now, if you're wondering if the Rivales are still messin' with us... Well... Not really. Honestly, I haven't seen them in years. Ever since Pops quit the 'business', I guess they gave up on us and moved on to rival with another family. Last thing I heard about them was that the boss' son, who is the same age as me, became the new boss in his place, since he too retired. Coincidence, much?

… And I bet you're wondering if I know what's happened to Alita, right? Well, she's been rotting in prison for nine years, that's all I know. The last time I saw her there was when Pearl and I visited her mother before we got married. That was a long time ago, so I have no idea what she's doing now. I assume she's just mooching off some guy just like she did to me. I wouldn't be surprised if she's hitting on the security guards. Feh.

Well, actually, if it wasn't for Alita, I wouldn't have met Pearl, and I wouldn't have opened my eyes and realized that the way I acted back then was stupid.

I can't believe how immature and naïve I was during that trial. My views on the whole situation was just so screwed up. But hey, I was only a kid, brainwashed by the gangster lifestyle that I was living. It made me think that I actually was one, even though I wasn't. Yes, I am able to admit it now: I was an idiot.

But I'm not like that anymore. I've grown up, and I'm gonna make sure Willy doesn't end up like I did. Same with Rosa, too, I guess... But she's a girl, so it's a little different.

I definitely lea-

“Papa!”

Wocky had stopped writing in his notebook as he heard a tiny voice outside the door to his office.

He looked up and said, “Who is it?”

“Your Little Princess”, The voice said cutely.

He laughed as he got up to open the door.

“Alright, I'm comin'”, He said as he let a small girl into the office, who was wearing a little pink dress and white shoes, carrying a fox plush toy with her.

Wocky bent down to her level and said, “What's up, Rosa? You need somethin'?”

Rosa shook her said and said, “Uh uh, I jus' was gonna say that Mama said lunch is almost ready.”

“Lunch?” Wocky asked, “What're we having?”

“Sandwiches”, Rosa answered as she teetered back in forth cheerfully, “Any kind we want!”

“Oh, I see.”

Rosa then took her father's hand and said, “C'mon, Papa, let's go! Mama an' Willy an' Gramma and Grampops are waitin' for us!”

“Hang on, Rosie”, He said, “I'll be there in a second.”

“OK, Papa”, She said sweetly as she skipped out of the room.

Wocky put his notebook back in the drawer of his desk and thought, “That Rosa sure is somethin'.”

He then walked out of the room and headed to the kitchen.

**
In the kitchen, Rosa and Winfred were already sitting at the table, while Pearl was putting William in his highchair.

“You're just in time”, Pearl said to Wocky as she went up to him, “Mother's almost done making the sandwiches.”

“Good”, He said as he sat down, “'Cause I'm starvin'!”

“Me too!” Rosa said, “I want a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, Mama!”

“Alright, alright”, Pearl said with a laugh, “They're almost here, don't worry.”

And at that moment, Plum walked in with a plate of various different types of sandwiches.

“Here you are”, She said as she passed them along, “Hope you like them!”

Rosa had her peanut butter and jelly while William had the same, except it was cut small enough for him to eat.

“Jelly!” He said happily as he licked the jelly off the bread.

“You don't eat it like that, Willy”, Rosa said, “You have to keep it together.”

She then ate the sandwich the 'right' way and said, “Like this, see?”

The adults chuckled as Plum said, “He's only two years old, sweetie, he doesn't know any better!”

“Oh”, Rosa said, “Well... Eat it however you want then!”

Everyone then continued to eat until Wocky asked, “So are you ready for school next week, Rosa?”

“Uh huh”, She answered, “I can't wait to go! Gloria's gonna be there!”

Her father chuckled as he said, “That's right; You guys can help each other out while you're there.”

His daughter nodded vigorously as she said, “Yeah!”

“Sis go bye bye?” William asked.

“Yeah”, Wocky said to him, “But she won't be gone for long; She'll be there every day for six hours.”

“Six hours?!” Rosa said, “That's a really long time!”

“I know, Rosie, but when you're at school, you have to do all kinds of subjects!”

“Like what, Papa?”

“Well, there's Language Arts, where you learn your alphabet and the teacher reads you stories.”

Rosa looked at him in interest as she said, “Like when Mama reads me and Willy a bedtime story?”

“Uh huh”, Wocky answered, “And you learn how to write and read too.”

“I wanna learn how to read, because I wanna read stories by myself!”

“That's good”, Pearl said, “And when you learn how to write you can make your own stories for other people to read.”

“Really?! I can do that?!”

“Yeah!”

“Oh, goody! I can't wait to learn how to read and write now! What else is at school, Papa?”

Wocky thought for a moment, and then said, “There's also Math, where you learn how to count.”

“I know how to do that! One... Two... Um... What's after two?”

“Three.”

“Oh... I forgot about that.”

Wocky laughed again as he said, “Don't worry, you'll get better.... There's also Music, where you learn about singing and songs.”

“I can do that too!”

She then started to sing the 'Steel Samurai' theme song.

Pearl laughed and said, “That's very good! You'll do great in music class.”

“Thanks, Mama, I hope so!”

“There's Science, too, where you learn about how your body works and stuff like nature and the weather.”

Rosa looked outside the window and said, “Well, I know that it's... Um... 'Crowdy' outside.”

Winfred chuckled and said, “You mean 'cloudy', Rosa?”

“Uh huh! Crowdy!”

She then looked back at her father and asked, “Is there anything else, Papa?”

“Hmm... There's Social Studies.”

“What's that?”

“That's when you learn about money and reading maps and stuff like that.”

“Oh... Sounds boring... I wanna hear some more fun 'subjects'!”

“OK... Maybe you'd like Art class.”

Pearl cringed a little bit as she heard that.

“I was never good at art”, She said, “I remember when I broke Mystic Ami's vase... I wasn't too much older than you, Rosa.”

Rosa looked at her in interest and said, “Really, Mama? You mean that pot that has 'AMI' written on it and looks cracked?”

“Yes”, Her mother answered, “I had such a hard time putting it back together... I actually misspelled her name as 'IAM'.”

“I am?”

“Yes. I wasn't good at spelling, either...”

“It's OK, Mama”, Rosa said with the same 'eyes closed' smile as Wocky's, “You spell good now!”

Wocky laughed and said, “Oh, Rosie.”

“School sounds fun”, Rosa said again, “I can't wait to go!”

“That's my girl”, Wocky said as he patted his daughter on the head, “You're definitely more into this than I was... I hated school.”

She tilted her head and said, “You did?”

“Yeah”, He answered, “I wasn't good at it... High school was really tough, y'know? I almost didn't graduate.”

“'Grajitate'? What's that, Papa?”

“It's when you finish all the grades in school. Right now you're going to kindergarten, which is pretty much the first year for you, then in fifth grade you leave elementary school and go to junior high.”

“Junior... High?”

“Yeah. It's a lil' different there; You do harder classes and stuff...And there's no recess and nap time.”

“No recess?!”

“Nope... Unless you count P.E.”

“Oh... How long are you at junior high?”

“From sixth grade until eight grade... And then in ninth grade you go to high school, and when you get to twelfth grade you graduate.”

“Wow”, Rosa said, “I'm gonna be in school for a long time!”

“Yeah... Thirteen years.”

“That's a big number, Papa.”

“Yeah, it is, and in thirteen years you'll be eighteen... You'll be all grown up.”

Wocky tried to imagine her at that age, but he couldn't do it.

“It kinda scares me that she ain't gonna be this lil' forever”, He thought, “It won't be long till she wants to go off and do her own thing.”

“What 'bout Willy, Papa? Will he go to school too?”

“Yep”, He said, “Though he has three more years until he starts school.”

“School!” Willy shouted cutely at his father.

“I hope when I'm... Um... 'Ate-Teen'”, Rosa said, “I'm pretty like Mama.”

“Aww”, Pearl said as her face went slightly red, “Thank you, sweetie.”

“But you got a long time till then, Rosie”, Wocky said.

“I know, Papa.”

Rosa then got down from her chair and went off to her room to play, “I'm gonna go play in my room.”

“Alright”, The adults said, “We'll come check on you later.”

**
Rosa walked up the stairs to her room, thinking about going to school for the first time.

“Wow”, She thought as she turned the corner of the hallway and walked into her room, “I have to go to school until I'm ate-teen? I'll be a grown up by then!”

She then started to look for a toy to play with, but she didn't feel like playing with Foxie-Chan or Mr. Bunnykins today, and she got bored of her dolls.

“I wonder where Mama's old ball is?”

Rosa then walked back out of her room and downstairs to her parents' room.

**
She walked into the room quietly to make sure she wouldn't get caught.

“The last place I saw it has here”, Rosa thought as she looked under the bed, “But... It's not here.”

She continued to look around the room for a few minutes for the ball, and then decided to check one more place before giving up.

“I'll look in Papa's drawer.”

Rosa went over to her father's dresser and looked in all the drawers, pulling out clothes carefully as she looked for the ball.

She had no luck in finding it, until suddenly she found what looked like a pendant in one of the drawers, buried under a pile of junk.

Rosa held it up and found that it was indeed a pendant with a gold chain, which was attached to a green jeweled four leafed clover.

“Wow”, Rosa said out loud, “This is so pretty...”

She put it on, and it sagged all the way down to her belly button, being that the chain was so long, and then took it off and put it in her pocket.

“I wonder why Papa had this in his drawer... Mama says she always puts her jewelry in her jewelry box.”

Rosa then walked out of the room and went to the living room to see if her family was there.

**
When she got there, she saw that everyone was sitting on the couch watching TV.

“Hello, Rosa”, Plum said, “Did you get bored playing by yourself?”

“Uh huh”, Rosa said as she nodded, “I tried to look for Mama's ball, but I couldn't find it...”

“Oh”, Pearl said, “Well, did you check under me and Papa's bed?”

“Yeah, but it won't there... I looked all over for it, but I didn't find it.”

“Did you put everything back in its place if you moved anything?” Wocky asked.

“Yes, Papa, I did.”

She then remembered the pendant she found and said, “Oh! While I was looking for the ball...”

She then took it out of her pocket and showed it to everyone.

“... I found this pretty necklace in one of Papa's drawers.”

Wocky, Winfred and Plum's eyes went wide.

“I think a leprechaun left it for you on 'Sand Patties Day', Papa!”

Wocky immediately stood up, walked towards Rosa and swiped the pendant from her.

“Don't go through my things without asking!” He yelled, “Didn't Mama and I tell ya that?!”

His daughter looked up at him with teary eyes and said nothing.

“As of right now, your play date with Gloria tomorrow is off! Now go to your room an-”

“That's enough, Wocky!” Winfred bellowed, which was something he rarely did, except when he had to discipline his son.

Rosa then ran over to her grandparents and mother and cried in Pearl's chest.

“Why are you acting this way?!” Pearl asked angrily, “Getting angry over Rosa finding a piece of jewelery you seemed to be hiding!”

“I won't hidin' it, Pearl!” Wocky shot back, “I didn't even know I had it!”

“Well, apparently you did know”, His wife responded, “Because you're practically being verbally abusive to our daughter over it!”

“Alright, please”, Plum said in a worried tone, “Why don't we take this outside, shall we? I would like to know why you still have that pendant yourself.”

Pearl looked at her mother-in-law and said, “You knew he had it?”

“Of course”, She answered.

Pearl then let Rosa down and said, “You stay here while Gramma, Grampops and I have a talk with Papa, OK?”

“Alright, Mama”, Rosa said as she sniffled and hiccuped a little as she laid on the couch and hugged the pillow.

“Papa's never yelled at me like that before”, She thought, “What was so bad about that necklace?”
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They're great ! Good job! Are you going to post them on FF.net? That would be cool!
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