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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
OfflineAce Attorney Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:48 pm
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You're a good writer Lida. These were fun to read. =)
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Ohhh, Maya and Phoenix posing as a couple....

I can almost see the childish tauntings of his friends.

"Phoenix and Maya sittin' in a tree..."
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Woah. Sorry, people. I already had the part planned out, but I kept stopping because of so many RPs and PMs to respond to. ^^ But I'm updating my short now, so I hope that somewhat makes up for it.

@ IlovephoenixwrightXD: I'm glad you like the idea. ^^ Thank you.

@ FlameInferno: Then I'm sorry to make you wait this long. And thanks.

@ GDM: Thank you. xD

@ mrdean: Er...This is a short, so I'm not going to introduce too many characters...But I might write a story of Phoenix in high school sometime. ^^ Or just have him randomly flash back during one of my stories. Whichever works. And thanks. Glad you like the idea.

@ C.Gholy: Awww. Thank you. *Blushes deeply*

@ eliasbloodmoon: None of that, unfortunately. Or maybe there will be something like that. *Suspenseful music*

Spoiler: High School Reunion Part 2
Phoenix and Maya walked into Crest Falls High, over to the familiar cafeteria.
"It's amazing how little has changed since we went here," Phoenix said. "The lunch I spilled is still here." He gave it a disgusted look.
"Hey, is that...Phoenix Wright? Squeee!" a woman shouted. Phoenix was instantly tackled by three cute, blond women. Cute, blond, desperate women.
"Marry me!"
"No, marry me!"
"You know I always loved you," the three girls said. Phoenix gently pushed them off.
"I have a girlfriend," he said. The three women looked at him blankly.
"So?" one of them asked, and the three of them began moving in again. Phoenix backed away...Right into a big, burly man.
"Sorry," he said, turning around.
"Well, if it isn't Phoenix Wright," the man responded. Phoenix looked at the man, and immediately had absolute hatred in his eyes.
"Hello, Brody Armstrong," he greeted with loathing. Maya's eyes darted between the two.
"You knew each other?" she asked casually.
"Yeah, we did," Brody replied. "I used to mop the floor of the boys' room with his spiky hair. Those were good times."
"For you," Phoenix shot back. Brody shrugged.
"It wasn't my fault you never paid protection money," he said. Phoenix's face grew a nasty shade of red.
"I could never afford it," Phoenix responded through gritted teeth.
"But your friend could, couldn't he?" Brody taunted. Phoenix grew even redder. "I remember, I would be using you to mop the floor, but your friend, Larry, was it? He would just stand there and watch as you tried to fight back, floundering around like a fish out of water. And he never once tried to help you for fear that he would be beaten up, too."
"That's enough," Phoenix answered angrily.
"And then there was one time I decided to let him join in. I told him to beat the crap out of you or else our contract would be broken."
"I said that's enough!" Phoenix shouted.
"And he did it. He beat the crap out of you. And you never even tried to fight back like the wuss you were."
"Enough!" Phoenix yelled. He punched at Brody, who grabbed his hand and threw him aside like he was nothing. He walked towards him, but Maya got in the way.
"Leave Nick alone," she ordered. Brody stopped.
"Hey, you're a pretty face," he said. "Hm...Very well. I'll leave "Nick" alone if you go outside with me." Maya looked at Phoenix, who was getting back up. She cast him an apologetic glance before walking out of the high school with Brody.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
OfflineMedium-in-training Sat Aug 08, 2009 9:38 pm
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Heeeey. Great fanfics.

I think you should update your first page :P.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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NO MAYA! DON'T DO IT!...

Of course, Phoenix'll just bust down the door with a fireman's axe.

And those were good times. Good times...

Nice work.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Poor Phoenix, yet somehow I could just imagine all that happening.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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@ ReturnofthePhoenix: Thank you, and I'll update that first page sometime soon. I've already updated it a little, but there's still a bit more to add.

@ eliasbloodmoon: Maybe it's Phoenix's turn to over dramatically jump in front of Maya, eh? xD And thanks.

@ FlameInferno: W00t! I made this imaginable! :D

Er...I've lately been going through yet another medical thing which requires birth control pills to fix. So I'm a bit over emotional right now. I'm also in pain, so both combined=no rational thoughts whatsoever. Just in case my stories wind up going too crazy or I make the characters a little more OOC than usual, you'll at least know why.

Spoiler: High School Reunion Part 3
"S-so...Uh...Why did you take me out here? So there would be no witnesses?" Maya asked. Brody laughed.
"No," he answered. "I just wanted to talk to you. You're incredibly sexy, you know that?" Maya blushed. "So, I was thinking...Would you like to model for me?"
"Whaaaaaat?! I-I mean...Me? A model?" Maya asked, dumbfounded.
"Of course. I run my own modeling agency, and you would be perfect for it." He leaned closer towards her, and Maya felt her hair stand on end. He put his enormous fist under Maya's head and pulled it up so Maya was making eye contact with him. "Absolutely perfect." Maya backed away. "What's wrong?"
"Um...I...I think you got the wrong girl," Maya answered as she continued to back away.
"Nonsense. You're gorgeous." He took one step forward and pulled Maya into a hug. "Absolutely gorgeous." He pinched Maya's butt.
"Let go of her!" someone shouted. Maya recognized that voice instantly. It was Nick.
"Want a rematch?" Brody asked, smiling a toothy grin. Phoenix stiffened.
"Just let her go," Phoenix replied.
"Fine," Brody said. He let go of Maya, who walked toward Phoenix...Only to be grabbed by Brody again. "After this." He pulled her into a kiss. Maya was too shocked to do anything. It was so unexpected and yet...She could feel herself relaxing. She liked it! She was vaguely aware of Phoenix screaming out in fury.
There was a sob from somewhere in the distance and the kiss stopped too soon in Maya's opinion.
"I thought we went over this, Brody," a woman said. Even in the darkness, she was clearly attractive, a vibe only Iris and Dahlia gave off in Phoenix's opinion. "And now you're doing it again!" She stomped her foot and walked away.
"Baby, come back. It wasn't what it looked like," Brody explained, bounding after the woman.
"Yes, it was exactly what it looked like, Brody. You were making out with some poor, unsuspecting girl. And I know why, too," she said, her voice shaking.
"You do?" Brody asked skeptically.
"Yes, I do. It's obvious you don't care about this marriage, and you certainly don't care about me," the woman snapped.
"Baby, that's not true at all-"
"I'm getting my things. This is the last straw," the woman said. A tear trickled down her cheek. "I'll see you in court." She looked down and walked away. Brody stood still for a while and Maya felt her head hurt. She felt dizzy.
"N-Nick," she stuttered. Phoenix turned to her and saw her shaking. He was going to try to comfort her, but he didn't get the chance. Brody turned maliciously toward the two. His eyes seemed to glow red.
"You made my wife run away. I'LL KILL YOU!" he shouted, running straight towards Maya. Phoenix jumped in the way and gulped as Brody approached.
"Get out of here, Maya. I'll try to stop him, or at least stall him. Just go," he whispered. Maya nodded and began running toward the high school, but she collapsed along the way.
Maya...Please be safe, Phoenix thought as Brody rammed into him. He fell only to get back up. This put fuel on the fire and Brody showed no mercy. Phoenix could feel himself getting hit everywhere and everything passed by in a blur. He saw a fist coming towards his face, then nothing at all. Then, he saw the image of Maya on the ground not far away.
No! Maya! He then felt a sharp pain in his stomach. He became aware he was being pulled up by his hair. Suddenly, he was on the ground again, blood coming out of his mouth. But he didn't see Maya at all.
"Ugh...Maya..." he mumbled, feeling himself get hit again. Everything went black.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Oh no!! Poor Phoenix! This was a very exciting one. I can't wait til the next update.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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OMG! NICK! Can't wait for the next chapter :P
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Oh sweet justice, poor Phoenix. Yay for the cliffhanger chapter.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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@ FlameInferno: Thank you. I'll update now. ^^

@ ReturnofthePhoenix: I'll jump on it, then.

@ IlovephoenixwrightXD: Thankies.

@ JasmineJustice: Well, there had to be one somewhere. xD I think I'll end the story with this update, though.

Er...Some swearing in this chapter, but not much. And I apologize if it seems a little rushed.
Spoiler: High School Reunion Part 4
Brody raised his fist. There was no way he'd let that asshole, Phoenix Wright, get away with destroying his life.
"Stop!" someone shouted, and Brody obeyed, stopping short.
"Who are you?" he asked, turning toward the familiar voice and leaving Phoenix alone for a few moments.
"You can't tell me you don't recognize your own mother, Brody," she replied. Brody was freaked out by this. He put his head down.
"You can't be Mom...She died years ago..." he tried to reason.
"So, what? Since I died, you can't take responsibility for your own actions, is that it?" the lady asked. Brody looked up.
"H-huh?!"
"I've been watching you, Son," she responded. "You are a major disappointment to me. I thought you wanted to change the world for the better, not pick on those weaker than you." Brody didn't know what to say to this. His mother, in Maya's body, grabbed his shoulder. "I know he reminds you of your father, but he isn't him. Not at all. Are you really willing to kill him for no reason?" Brody glared at his mom and clenched his fists. "Brody...Look at that man. Look at what you've done to him. And all because he got in your way." She glared back at her son. "Leave him alone. He has done nothing wrong."
"But...Lucy..." Brody choked out.
"Has left you because of your actions. Not his. And it still isn't too late. You can still stop her from moving away." Brody sobbed. "Don't cry, Son. Not until the end." She hugged Brody. After a few seconds like that, she pushed him back and looked him in the eye.
"Look, Brody, I don't have much time left. But know this: you are strong and smart. You are capable of doing great things. You always have been. Now is the time to choose. Do you want to be a good guy and repair your relationship? Or do you want to be a bad guy and kill this man who has never wronged you in any way?" Brody looked down. "You don't have to answer right away. I'll know soon enough what you'll choose. But you also need to know that I love you. Always have and always will." She gave him one last hug. Then, she walked away.
"Mom?" he asked in a dreamlike state. He looked around, but he didn't see her anywhere. It was as if she died all over again. Brody cried.

~*~

"Maya!" Phoenix screamed, waking up. He sat bold upright, but found it hurt to move. Everything was white and plain. He looked around as people in white coats conversed with each other. One seemed to notice him.
"Hello. I am Dr. Petrelli," he said. "Do you know where you are?" Phoenix didn't have to look around to know.
"A hospital..." he responded with a groan.
"Very good. Now, do you know why you are here?" Dr. Petrelli asked.
"Ugh...It might have something to do with all the pain..." Phoenix replied. "Pain...He came at me and...Maya!" The scream startled the doctor. "I have to see Maya!"
"You have to rest," Dr. Petrelli said. "You took quite a beating..."
"But...Maya..." Dr. Petrelli shook his head.
"I'll get her for you. Just be patient," he said. He walked away. Phoenix realized that it had hurt to talk. He was sore everywhere. What happened? He couldn't remember...
"Nick!" Maya called. Phoenix inclined his head to see her. "You look terrible, Nick." Phoenix smiled slightly, an action he regretted as the pain came hard. He winced.
"W-what happened, Maya?" he asked. Maya smiled.
"You saved me, Nick. Oh, and I had this note in my outfit..." Maya answered. "'Let's see...Please forgive my son, Brody. His dad killed me and then committed suicide, and he never got over seeing that. He can't get revenge, so he takes it out on anyone who looks like his father...Too bad that person happened to be you, Phoenix Wright.'
Sincerely,
Melissa Armstrong.' Do you know her, Nick?"
"N-no..."
"So, what do we do now, Nick?" Maya inquired.
"Well, I was thinking...We could do the usual. Watch Steel Samurai reruns," Phoenix replied. Maya's eyes lit up.
"Well, if we're going to do that, we have to watch episode 38 again, Nick..." she said. As Maya continued talking about episode 38 of the Steel Samurai, Phoenix grinned. While it hurt to do so, he couldn't help but feel everything was going to be just fine.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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His mom?! Dayum, I was expecting Gumshoe XD. That was a pretty good twist. Man, I didn't expect that to happen.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Wow! That chapter was great! I especially like the ending. Very Phoenix Wrightish.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Nice ending! Although when I saw the name 'Armstrong', I was half-afraid he was related to a certain restaurant owner.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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@ FlameInferno: Yup. xD I try not to be too predictable. ^^ Thank you.

@ ReturnofthePhoenix: Thanks. :D I try.

@ JasmineJustice: Thank you and, well, there would be no hope for either of them if they were related. xD

Well, still have writers' block, but I think I'm starting to get a creative streak going, so it won't be long before I get these stories both updated. Until then, enjoy this short.
Spoiler: Short: The Event That Never Happened Part 1
"Hey, Nick, I was thinking..." Maya began.
"A dangerous past time," Phoenix said.
"I know, but...Hey! That wasn't very nice, Nick," Maya responded as Phoenix laughed. "Anyway, you know those crazy adventures we keep going on?"
"Yeah," Phoenix answered.
"We should make a movie out of them!" Maya shouted excitedly. "I have all the security tapes and everything!"
"Um...What about the stuff that didn't show up on a camera?" Phoenix asked. Maya gasped.
"You're right, Nick. Hold on," she replied, typing on the computer.
"What are you doing?" Phoenix inquired.
"Well, you never know what's online. Perhaps someone on here has tapes or something...Or I could recreate everything on here or...Something. I just have a feeling we'll find something here," Maya answered. Phoenix sighed.
"Let me know when you're done, okay? I have some e-mail to check."

A few hours later...
"Nick, come here!" Maya shouted urgently.
"What is it?" Phoenix asked. "Are you finally done using the computer?"
"No, but look. It's really creepy," Maya responded.
"A Series of PW Events," Phoenix read aloud.
"Click on the spoiler tag, Nick," Maya ordered. Phoenix obeyed and gasped.
"S-she chronicled the marathon! And the hamburger eating contest. And our little facebook experience. Oh, dear."
"That isn't even the worst part, Nick. Look."
"P-people are responding to it?!" Phoenix asked, shocked.
"Yes, Nick. Look at how many people there are," Maya responded.
"Hold it! A-all these people know about this and don't do anything about it?!"
"We have got to find out who this person is, Nick. I'll call Gumshoe," Maya said. Phoenix stopped her.
"No, Maya. Knowing Gumshoe, he'd just get a kick out of this. No. We have to get Edgeworth. He will prosecute this person and put her behind bars."
"Um...Nick? How do you know this person's a she?" Maya inquired.
"Lida Rose, Maya. That username is quite obviously for a girl." He smiled. "I'll call Edgeworth and we'll get this all sorted out."

At the prosecution's office, Edgeworth had just finished his work for the day and was busy studying his cases, when Edgeworth's theme blared loudly from his cell phone.
"Wright? What is it?" he asked.
"Edgeworth, you have got to see this. Get over here now," Phoenix said urgently before hanging up. Edgeworth sighed. If Phoenix thought for one second that Edgeworth wanted to see another episode of The Steel Samurai, he was wrong. But he had nothing else better to do, so he went to Wright and Co.
"What is it, Wright?" he asked.
"Look!" Phoenix answered, pointing at the computer screen. Edgeworth's brow furrowed.
"This person knows of our blind date?!" he inquired.
"Y-yes, and..."
"All these things between you and me...They could damage my career! We've got to find out who this Lida_Rose person is!"
"I know. Lida Rose needs to be..."
"No, Wright. It's Lida underscore Rose. With an underscore," Edgeworth corrected. "Hm...I'll send her a PM. Just give me a moment to write it." And with that, Edgeworth commandeered the computer.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Ah, I see. You put yourself and your stories in the story? Smart! Why didn't I think of that? btw, I don't suppose you're including me in this, are you? Eh, probably not.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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I loved High School Reunion, that was funny and sweet.

The Event that never happened looks god too. Can't wait for the next part. =)
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Oh dear! This ought to be interesting. Poor Phoenix and Edgeworth!
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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@ IlovephoenixwrightXD: Not unless you want to be involved. Or if you offend me, but I see the former one being much more likely. xD And thank you.

@ C.Gholy: Thanks. I shall get to work on writing the next part now.

@ FlameInferno: Thanks. I love making Phoenix and Edgeworth suffer.

So, I got this PM from Miles Edgeworth at 11:10 pm. It read:
"Lida_Rose,
Your stories are creepy and revolting. How could you possibly chronicle every detail of these events unless you have been stalking us? Please stop writing about us. If you don't, I will pursue legal action.
Miles Edgeworth."

Maybe I should stop writing...Nah! xP What are they going to do? I don't exist in the Phoenix Wright universe. ^^ So, what? Are they going to arrest me or something?
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Spoiler: Short: The Event That Never Happened Part 2
"W-what?!" Edgeworth asked grumpily. "Somebody actually wants to be involved in all this madness?!"
"Looks like your PM didn't do anything, Edgeworth," Phoenix said. "What now?"
"We'll find her, Nick! It can't be too hard," Maya insisted.
"Hahahahaha!" someone laughed. "You can't find me. You don't even know who I am. Hahahahahahahahahaha!"
"L-Lida Rose..." Phoenix said.
"No, it's Lida underscore Rose! With an underscore!" Lida shouted.
"We'll find you, Lida_Rose," Edgeworth warned.
"Yeah, right. There is no way for anyone to find me," Lida responded. Then, there was knock on her door.
"LIDA ROSE, COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP!" Officer Meekins screamed into his megaphone.
"IT'S LIDA UNDERSCORE ROSE! WITH AN UNDERSCORE!" Lida shouted back before realizing what was happening.
"THIS IS YOUR LAST WARNING!" Meekins warned.
"Look, I can't go out yet. I have to finish typing this story," Lida responded.
"YOU HEARD HER, MEN! GO IN AND GET HER!"
Great, Lida thought. How did these guys find me anyway? Her door was banged down.
"Freeze!" A few officers shouted in unison.
"No, you freeze. I'm still typing," Lida said. Suddenly, none of the policemen could move. "I hope you understand. I don't want to disappoint any of my fans. Especially GDM, IlovephoenixwrightXD, and eliasbloodmoon." Suddenly, Lida was grabbed from behind, and began typing with her feet. "No! Please..." It was amazing how she still managed to have good grammar as she was dragged away from the co
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NO!! OBJECTION!!! Leave Lida_Rose alone, or at least let her finish this update and the rest of the stories she's working on!

I can't stop laughing here! Awesome update.
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XD That was so hilarious. I loved it. Poor Lida. XD
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HOLD IT! If Lida has been taken away, then who hit the submit button? :think-think-think:
Lol, great update. Hope you escape!
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I like it! No, I love it! This has to be one of your greatest ideas yet, Lida! :maya: :pearl: :phoenix: :edgy: :shoe:
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Ahh! Can't reply to all of your wonderful comments. This computer is now evidence in the trial, so I don't have much time.
Spoiler: The Event That Never Happened Part 2.5
"Phoenix punched himself in the face," Lida typed. Just when she finished, Phoenix's left hand balled into a fist and it went up and punched him in the face. He rubbed his cheek.
"Ow! What was that for?" he asked.
"I believe I proved my point," Lida replied. "Unless you'd like another demonstration."
"Um...No, that's okay," Phoenix said as the bailiff came up to take the computer. Lida tried to make him freeze so she would have the chance to explain what was happening to all of her confused fans, but it didn't work. The bailiff began prying the computer out of her hands, and Lida only hoped she wouldn't cut off mid-sen
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ROFL, this is getting funnier and funnier! Once you get the computer back, make Phoenix and Edgeworth kiss or something.
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^Don't do that! You'll make them even more angry! XD Just kidding. This is a really cool concept! Moar plz! :edgy:
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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Wow. What a crazy day I had. You know how, in the game, you play through a trial and it turns out that in the PW world, it lasted five hours? Well, my trial wasn't like that. It was all messed up. I guess I might as well tell everyone what happened in the form of a fan fiction. xD

@ FlameInferno: Thank you very much x2, and that is a good suggestion. Yes. I got an evil idea thanks to it. xD

@ C.Gholy: Thanks. And yes, poor me. :D

@ mr.dean: :testimony:
I hit the submit button as I was being dragged away.
And thanks.

@ IlovephoenixwrightxD: Thanks a lot x2, you made me blush x2, I was more than happy to include you, and I guess I'd better get on making more, eh?

This shall be the last part.

Spoiler: The Event That Never Happened Part 3
The Day Before The Trial
Detention Center

Lida was sitting in the plain room, staring at the glass window. Before her was Phoenix Wright in his blue suit and attorney's badge.
"Thanks for coming," Lida said. "I know you probably didn't want to..."
"What's this about?" Phoenix asked. He seemed very agitated, and Lida was sure she knew what he would do.
"I would like you to be my lawyer," she replied, looking Phoenix directly in the eye. He shook his head.
"I can't defend you. I know you're guilty, so..."
"Then lose the trial on purpose!" Lida interrupted. "I don't care. I just need to be called to the stand once to clear my name, okay? I can't do that if I'm defending myself." She looked down. "Just give me a chance."
"Well...Okay. I'll defend you," Phoenix said. "Why don't you start by telling me the truth about this?" Lida laughed.
"I can't do that Nick...Er...Mr. Wright," she responded. "You'll have to wait till the trial to know. It will be a big surprise." She smiled. "Now, don't you have another case to work on?" It was clear to her that Phoenix was slightly frustrated by this, but he left without a word. She then decided the case Phoenix and Edgeworth were working on at the time would make a good fan fic, but she didn't have a computer with her, so she couldn't type one up. She sighed as the guard brought her back to her cell. This would be one boring day.

Trial Day
Courtroom

The spectators had filed in and talked among themselves as everyone waited for the judge, who didn't take long to enter. He banged his gavel, and the court became silent...Except for one person who shouted, "Objection!" Everyone turned to Lida, who blushed.
"Just practicing..." The judge cleared his throat.
"We are here for the trial of Lida Rose..."
"Objection!" Lida shouted, extending her finger to the judge. "It's Lida underscore Rose. With an underscore!"
"Er...Okay. We are here today for the trial of Lida underscore Rose with an underscore."
"Objection!" Lida shouted again.
"What is it this time?" the judge asked.
"It's just Lida_Rose," Lida responded.
"Fine. We are here today for the trial of Just Lida_Rose." Lida smacked her forehead. Oh, well. Close enough. "Is the prosecution ready?"
"Of course the prosecution is ready, Your Honor," Edgeworth answered.
"The defense is also ready," Phoenix said.
"The prosecution calls Detective Dick Gumshoe to the stand." As Gumshoe took the stand and began testifying, Lida zoned out.
"We arrested Ms. Lida_Rose because blah blah blah..." Gumshoe's voice explained.
"Objection! Blah blah!" Phoenix's voice shouted.
"Objection! Impossible blah blah blah," Edgeworth's voice responded.
"Overruled. Um...Blah," the judge said.
"Lida_Rose was blah blah blah blah."
"Hold it! BLAH! Blah blah blah blah blah!" Lida soon didn't hear anything that was going on as she lost interest. Until...
"Thanks, Detective. You may step down. The prosecution calls Officer Mike Meekins to the stand," Edgeworth said. And Lida zoned out again. Were they winning or losing? It didn't matter until Lida would be called to the stand. After a while, the judge declared a recess, but Lida didn't want to leave. Phoenix wound up having to drag her into the lobby where she sat down and waited for the trial to start again. It was pretty pathetic, but she could see the accusation in Phoenix's eyes, and she didn't want to put up with trying to talk to him.
After what seemed like an eternity, but was really only fifteen minutes, the court proceedings continued. Finally, Lida was called to the stand.
"I am Lida_Rose and I'm a full-time mom," Lida said, not wanting to waste time. She waited a minute, looking at all those eyes. They all thought she was guilty and she knew it, but she was determined not to lose her nerve. Lida did much better with big crowds anyway. She took a deep breath.
"I am no stalker," she explained simply. "My writings are all just things I make up off the top of my head and nothing more. The fact that they happened to describe certain events is a coincidence." She could tell no one bought it.
"Objection!" Phoenix shouted, extending his finger at her. "There is no way you could describe all these things so perfectly and have them just be coincidences!" Lida smiled.
"You're right. I've been wanting to tell the truth for a long time, so I might as well just spit it out." She looked around, making sure everyone was paying attention. "You are all nothing more than pixels. It's because I write these stories that they happen, not the other way around." The crowd gasped.
"Do you have proof to back this up?" Edgeworth asked.
"Yes. All the proof you need is on my laptop," Lida replied. The bailiff left and brought back Lida's laptop, where she typed Part 2.5 of her short. "See?" she asked. The camera zoomed in on all of their shocked faces. "But you guys can never know this truth, so I must disappear and make you all forget about this ever happening."
Well, if I'm going to forget this anyway... Phoenix thought. He tackled Edgeworth and kissed him passionately as Lida disappeared.

Shortly After
In Wright And Co. Law Offices.

"Ugh. What is that foul taste in my mouth, Wright?" Edgeworth asked. Phoenix looked at him blankly. Odd. I have the taste of jolly ranchers in my mouth, Phoenix thought.
"Why do you always assume I know the answer?" Phoenix responded.
"Hey, Nick!" Maya shouted. "I got an idea!"
"Yes, Maya?" Phoenix asked.
"DANCE PARTY!" Maya shouted, grabbing the uncomfortable-looking Edgeworth and swinging around with him. Phoenix shook his head and smiled. Oh, that Maya.

Meanwhile, Lida continued writing her fan fictions, protected by the fourth wall. Now, no bunch of pixels can ever find her as she forces them to go on all kinds of crazy adventures.
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Hahahaha! Great story!

I love the end. I hope that was you tricking them and not the actual Maya!
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YAY! A happy ending! So, what is Lida_Rose's next fanfic going to be?
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Hah! AWESOME!! I loved that chapter. Sweet! Can't wait to see the next update.
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That was brilliant. I loved the underscore part with the judge, I can imagine that would be exactly what he would do.
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@ ReturnofthePhoenix: Thankies. As for the ending, whether it's a cruel joke by me and not the real Maya, well...That is for your imagination. xD [/cheap ploys to avoid angering any of my fans.]

@ IlovephoenixwrightXD: Thanks. And, well...I might want to continue my stories now. But I'm partial to any ideas for shorts/stories to write on the side. ^^

@ FlameInferno: Aww. Thanks.

@ mrdean: Thank you. And I could picture the judge doing that, too. xD

Spoiler: Twilight The Musical: A PW Production Part 6
Adrian Andrews let herself into the crowded Wright and Co. Offices. Lots of people were there, and she felt herself get a little nervous.
"Hello, Ms. Andrews," Pearl said sweetly. Adrian looked down at the adorable little child.
"Hello, Pearl," she responded. "Are you excited for your big day?"
"Yes!" Pearl shouted. "...But there are so many people here..." Adrian smiled. "I have to talk with Phoenix," she said.
"Mr. Nick is upstairs. Along with Mr. Edgeworth and Ms. Von Karma." Adrian thanked Pearl and walked upstairs. It seemed as if she interrupted something very important.
"Hello, everyone," she said. "Phoenix, I'll need you to give this to Pearl. It's a clue that leads to another clue and so on. It will lead her all around town, and they'll keep her busy for several hours. We'll need her to be gone in order for us to rehearse. And all of you need to come downstairs. I have the cast list all ready." She turned and walked away, leaving the others alone.

Spoiler: About This Chapter...
The good stuff with the list and everything happens in the next part. This is just here to set some of it up. Oh, and to have it catch up with Poems Galore. Now I'll start updating them at the same time.
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I hope you get over your writer's block soon, because I WANT MORE! No pressure, though. If you get stuck again, just write another story like 'The Event That Never Happened'.
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The Event that Never Happened...Great name, great story, and TWILIGHT UPDATE!
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Oooh, I can't wait til the rehearsal. This is going to be interesting.
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@ IlovephoenixwrightXD: I'm trying hard to get over my writers' block and am glad you want more. Thanks. And I might have to do another short sometime soon.

@ JasmineJustice: Thankies.

@ FlameInferno: Maybe even more interesting than you imagine. xD

Um...I've read back over Twilight, an act I regret. xD And I have ideas. But I don't know if I'll be able to update until next week. I'm starting college tomorrow. ^^ I might have to start pacing myself at an update once a week. Depends on how much homework I get. Anyway, just wanted you all to know. *disappears*
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Now for an update! I know, longest week ever. In all fairness, I had to do lots of college things. That makes a nasty combo with writers' block. But I just figured it's Labor Day weekend. Time to get to work!
Spoiler: Poems Galore Part 22
The slamming of the gavel on the judge's bench was enough to wake up everyone in the courtroom.
"We are here today for the trial of Phoenix Wright. Is the prosecution ready?" the judge asked, only to get whipped. "Ow!"
"Foolish fool. I wouldn't even dare show my face here if I wasn't ready," Franziska replied.
Huh. She's in a bad mood, Edgeworth thought.
"And is the defense ready?" the judge inquired. Edgeworth took a second to respond. In all honesty, he wasn't even close.
"Mr. Edgeworth," the judge said impatiently.
"Sorry, Your Honor. The defense is prepared as always," Edgeworth lied.
"Okay. Prosecution, your opening statement, please," the judge responded.
"Phoenix Wright is guilty of rape and murder. He will pay for those actions, even if it has to be through my whip."
Ouch. Be careful, Wright. I think she really means it.
"Er...That was...Violent," the judge stated.
"The prosecution calls Detective Dick Gumshoe to the stand," Franziska continued. The scruffy detective took the stand, looking depressed. Franziska whipped him.
"Ow!" Gumshoe screamed.
"Name and occupation, fool," Franziska said.
"Er...My name is Dick Gumshoe. I'm a detective on the police force. For now, at least," Gumshoe responded.
"What do you mean by that, Mr. Gumshoe?" the judge asked.
"Oh, I didn't do so well on my evaluation...Ow!"
"We did not come to court today to hear about your foolishly pathetic life, Detective Dick Gumshoe," Franziska explained, whip in hand.
"Sorry," Gumshoe said. "I guess I'll get on with the testimony..."

Spoiler: About This Chapter
Grah! Writers' block strikes again! I couldn't come up with how to accurately phrase the testimony! O_O Guess I'll save that for the next chapter. I'm sorry.

Spoiler: Twilight, The Musical Part 7
"Hi, Mr. Nick," Pearl greeted as Phoenix walked over to her.
"Hey, Pearls," Phoenix responded. He knelt down. "We have the perfect gift for you."
"Really? What is it?" Pearl asked excitedly. Phoenix smiled.
"I can't tell you that, Pearls," Phoenix replied. "It would ruin the surprise. But you're going to be getting something pretty special." Pearl gasped.
"Mr. Nick, I thought you didn't have enough money to..."
"Shh. Pearls, this is a secret, okay? I had these clues made for you to follow. It will take you where you need to go. But you can't tell anyone I gave you these, all right?" Phoenix interrupted.
"Not even Master Mystic Maya?" Pearl asked. Phoenix smiled warmly.
"Not even Master Mystic Maya," he confirmed.
"But then...Who will look over me?" Phoenix didn't have a ready answer for this. But then, as if on cue, there was a knock on the door. Phoenix smiled and walked through the crowd to answer it. His mood was instantly shattered when he saw who was at the door.

Dun dun duuuuuun. Suspense!
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Awww poor Gumshoe...a bad evaluation and getting whipped to shreds. Great job getting Franziska's personality!
I wonder what Phoenix's surprise to Pearls is. Hmm, who could be at the door. It'd be creepy if it were Dahlia or something.
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