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| Author: | Jade Edgeworth [ Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:05 pm ] |
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Deleted because hahaha no. |
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| Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jade Edgeworth: The not so Perfect Prosecutor. |
Let me just get this out of the way: Jade Edgeworth wrote: "Jade Edgeworth? Is that her name? Miles nodded as the door creaked open slightly, a girl walking in a second later. She looked about the age of fifthteen, her hair and her eyes were the same colour as Miles', A spelling mistake. It should be "fifteen". That out of the way, a good start. I thought Wright overreacted to the fact he has a sister, though. Keep on writing more. I tend to like OCs. |
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| Author: | Jade Edgeworth [ Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jade Edgeworth: The not so Perfect Prosecutor. |
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