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By the way, please forgive the bad grammar in the first chapters, it gets better later.
Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles
I will make a post here, when I finish a a new chapter, I hope you enjoy this story.
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The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*
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I can't quite express how much I enjoy reading this fic, my new friend. You kept all the characters very much in character. But what really gripped me was your original character Hugh Fey. His eagerness and loud personally instantly won me over. I couldn't tell you how hard I laughed after that first trial. If anthing, I think this would also make an excellent Sprite comic as well!
I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
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Well, You are a good writer, I loved the sarcasm and Hugh Fey's reactions, Special attack lol. xD
Keep up the good work. =D
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EDIT: The chapter is up, if can't find chap11 on the list, go to chap 10, check the list again, chap 11 will be there.
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No problem. I had some thought designs from Hugh already!
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The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*
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Sage of Law
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EDIT: The new chapter is up!
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I'll always love you, Max.
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I'll always love you, Max.
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heh
awsome story btw which makes waiting for the update so muuuch harder 
oh well hope its soon
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One problem I often have with reading fan fictions is that sometimes the authors change the characters too much and it feels unnatural. In your story, this doesn't happen and I forget that I'm reading a fan fiction and not a game script :D
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One problem I often have with reading fan fictions is that sometimes the authors change the characters too much and it feels unnatural. In your story, this doesn't happen and I forget that I'm reading a fan fiction and not a game script :D
Thanks for reading my fanfic, I really appreciate it, and thanks for your comment, that's what I'm planning, I was actually worried for not being loyal enough to the games, especially the trial part, also that brings another question that I would like to ask, is about the case, is it confusing, or it makes sense? I'm really worried about it making sense.
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One problem I often have with reading fan fictions is that sometimes the authors change the characters too much and it feels unnatural. In your story, this doesn't happen and I forget that I'm reading a fan fiction and not a game script :D
Thanks for reading my fanfic, I really appreciate it, and thanks for your comment, that's what I'm planning, I was actually worried for not being loyal enough to the games, especially the trial part, also that brings another question that I would like to ask, is about the case, is it confusing, or it makes sense? I'm really worried about it making sense.
ahh dont worrie about it, it makes plenty sence and its more loyal to the game than u think.
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By the way, does any of you know or is a good artist, to make a banner for my story? Of course I also need someone, to draw Hugh, he has to be in the banner.
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and if u give me a description of hugh i'll have a shot at drawing him but it might only be a pencil scetch
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)Also, if you want a description of Hugh:
, his kimono is very light blue, the belt thing around his waist( I don't know what is called) is marine blue, the sleeves of his kimono are long, covering his hands, there isn't anything special on his hands, he is just to lazy to pull the sleeves, he wear socks on his feet, and his sandals are the sames as Maya's. And last, his magatama amulet is also blue, and he hangs it on cord( or something similar) that is over his neck.And thank you, if you do the drawing. I really appreciate it.
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and yer da do requests [i should know im a member ^_^ heh]
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ok i know it aint the best pic ever and at some point ,if i remember, im gonna re-draw it and coulor it [if i can ever find a free copy of photoshop
] but yer so tell us what u think 
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, the hair is a bit different from what I imagined, but it's better!
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btw the main part of the midium outfit is sleveless so hence the coat thingy ^^; but i'll bear it in mind to edit the outfit next time i draw him
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And your English is okay, there are only a few mistakes ^^
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I wonder wheres Godot and Matt Engarde?
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