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Author:  Fey Sage [ Tue Sep 23, 2008 6:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles (I'm back!)
This is an idea that I've had for some time, I always liked the fics about Phoenix meeting the Fey again, but they always made Phoenix overshadow Apollo, I always wanted to see Apollo opinion on the Feys and such, so thats why I made this fic, it's multi-chaptered, and I planning it to be quite long, I'm making many cases, but I hope you keep reading it!
By the way, please forgive the bad grammar in the first chapters, it gets better later.

Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles

I will make a post here, when I finish a a new chapter, I hope you enjoy this story.
Author:  Ben Credable (PI) [ Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:16 pm ]
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First to comment! Woot!

I can't quite express how much I enjoy reading this fic, my new friend. You kept all the characters very much in character. But what really gripped me was your original character Hugh Fey. His eagerness and loud personally instantly won me over. I couldn't tell you how hard I laughed after that first trial. If anthing, I think this would also make an excellent Sprite comic as well!

I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
Author:  TimHead [ Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:51 pm ]
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Yay second. ^^

Well, You are a good writer, I loved the sarcasm and Hugh Fey's reactions, Special attack lol. xD

Keep up the good work. =D
Author:  Fey Sage [ Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:22 am ]
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The next chapter is already done, I'm just waiting for it to be beta read, so I'm posting it very soon, by the way, I would like to ask a favor could someone draw or make sprites of my OCs for me? (I have lots of them) I would really, really appreaciate it.

EDIT: The chapter is up, if can't find chap11 on the list, go to chap 10, check the list again, chap 11 will be there.
Author:  Ben Credable (PI) [ Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:10 pm ]
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Fey Sage wrote:
The next chapter is already done, I'm just waiting for it to be beta read, so I'm posting it very soon, by the way, I would like to ask a favor could someone draw or make sprites of my OCs for me? (I have lots of them) I would really, really appreaciate it.



No problem. I had some thought designs from Hugh already! :ron-jazz:
Author:  Fey Sage [ Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:15 pm ]
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Thanks Ben, do you need me to send a description or something?
Author:  Ben Credable (PI) [ Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:20 pm ]
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If you want something specific, then that's alright. Just tell me what you would want for each character.
Author:  Fey Sage [ Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:39 pm ]
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Sorry, there will be no new chapter this week! I had a bit of problem, but don't worry! It will come on thursday, if not sooner!
Author:  Fey Sage [ Thu Oct 09, 2008 8:21 pm ]
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Sorry, double post, just to say my interenet will be back by tomorrow as well, the new chapter. (I'm postimg this from my school)
EDIT: The new chapter is up!
Author:  Ben Credable (PI) [ Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:14 pm ]
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Wonderful, just wonderful! Keep up the good work!
Author:  Fey Sage [ Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:01 pm ]
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A new chapter is up! For whoever is reading this story, I hope you like this chapter.
Author:  General Luigi [ Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:05 am ]
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My apologies. I'll try to read through this work. I have a great deal of difficulty really getting into a work if there are problems with spelling or grammar. It's an unfortunate weakness of mine; otherwise incredible works might be ignored simply because I'm bothered by the grammar. I wish it didn't annoy me so much. I try to make it my policy to read at least one work by each person who has taken the time to read my own stories.
Author:  Fey Sage [ Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:13 am ]
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I'm sorry, I know my grammar is terrible, I try correct it, it will make easier for everyone to read.
Author:  General Luigi [ Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:19 am ]
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Forgive me if I'm on the wrong track with this question, and I mean no offense with it, but I noticed the location you gave in your profile. Is English your native language?
Author:  Fey Sage [ Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:59 am ]
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Nope, I'm brazilian, English is not my native language, that probaly why I made so many mistakes, but don't worry, they are already being corrected.
Author:  General Luigi [ Thu Oct 30, 2008 1:42 am ]
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That's what I figured from what your profile said--not to mention some of the grammatical errors were in sentence structure or wording, which native speakers typically know quite well. Still, writing a story in a language you only have limited knowledge of takes a great deal of confidence, and is certainly respectable. I know a tiny bit of Spanish and Russian, but I wouldn't dream of writing a story in anything but English with my current knowledge of the languages.
Author:  Fey Sage [ Fri Oct 31, 2008 4:43 pm ]
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A new chapter is up, I hope I'm being loyal to the games!
Author:  cb93 [ Mon Nov 03, 2008 6:18 pm ]
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ohh so its u whos wrighting this awsome story :eh?:

heh :odoroki: awsome story btw which makes waiting for the update so muuuch harder :payne:

oh well hope its soon :hobohodo:
Author:  Fey Sage [ Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:51 pm ]
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New chapter is up!
Author:  Jesswee [ Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:47 am ]
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Left you some reviews. Keep up the good work n.n-b

One problem I often have with reading fan fictions is that sometimes the authors change the characters too much and it feels unnatural. In your story, this doesn't happen and I forget that I'm reading a fan fiction and not a game script :D
Author:  Fey Sage [ Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:52 am ]
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Jessweeee wrote:
Left you some reviews. Keep up the good work n.n-b

One problem I often have with reading fan fictions is that sometimes the authors change the characters too much and it feels unnatural. In your story, this doesn't happen and I forget that I'm reading a fan fiction and not a game script :D


Thanks for reading my fanfic, I really appreciate it, and thanks for your comment, that's what I'm planning, I was actually worried for not being loyal enough to the games, especially the trial part, also that brings another question that I would like to ask, is about the case, is it confusing, or it makes sense? I'm really worried about it making sense.
Author:  cb93 [ Wed Nov 12, 2008 8:36 am ]
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Fey Sage wrote:
Jessweeee wrote:
Left you some reviews. Keep up the good work n.n-b

One problem I often have with reading fan fictions is that sometimes the authors change the characters too much and it feels unnatural. In your story, this doesn't happen and I forget that I'm reading a fan fiction and not a game script :D


Thanks for reading my fanfic, I really appreciate it, and thanks for your comment, that's what I'm planning, I was actually worried for not being loyal enough to the games, especially the trial part, also that brings another question that I would like to ask, is about the case, is it confusing, or it makes sense? I'm really worried about it making sense.



ahh dont worrie about it, it makes plenty sence and its more loyal to the game than u think.

Spoiler:
but then again i never did understand how apollo didnt notice hugh and trucy walking past hime and out of the cort rooom since they couldent jump high enouth to get to the gallary so the only other way is to go past apollo which him nor anyone else noticed
Author:  Jesswee [ Fri Nov 14, 2008 4:58 am ]
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Nope you're doing great, I'm not confused at all (and that means more than you probably think, I'm easily confused xD).
Author:  Fey Sage [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:15 pm ]
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New chapter is up! I think you're gonna have a big suprise at the end. (Well, maybe not that big, but I'm sure none of you saw it coming.)
Author:  cb93 [ Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:59 pm ]
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well u got that right
Author:  Fey Sage [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 12:31 am ]
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Thanks for the comments again guys! :edgy: By the way, does any of you know or is a good artist, to make a banner for my story? Of course I also need someone, to draw Hugh, he has to be in the banner.
Author:  cb93 [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 7:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles ( Looking for an artist)
erm u could try deviant art

and if u give me a description of hugh i'll have a shot at drawing him but it might only be a pencil scetch
Author:  Fey Sage [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles ( Looking for an artist)
Sorry to ask, but why deviant? They do requests there? (Really, I don't know :eh?: )
Also, if you want a description of Hugh:
Spoiler:
His hair is silver-colored, and it looks similar to the beta Phoenix hair :beta-phoenix2: , his kimono is very light blue, the belt thing around his waist( I don't know what is called) is marine blue, the sleeves of his kimono are long, covering his hands, there isn't anything special on his hands, he is just to lazy to pull the sleeves, he wear socks on his feet, and his sandals are the sames as Maya's. And last, his magatama amulet is also blue, and he hangs it on cord( or something similar) that is over his neck.


And thank you, if you do the drawing. I really appreciate it. :edgy:
Author:  cb93 [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles ( Looking for an artist)
right ill give it a shot but i've never drawn a kimono befor but ill still give it a shot

and yer da do requests [i should know im a member ^_^ heh]
Author:  Fey Sage [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles ( Looking for an artist)
Thanks, again! I really, really, appreciate it. And thanks for the info about deviant, I'll take a look around.
Author:  cb93 [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles ( Looking for an artist)
youre welcome :)
Author:  cb93 [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 9:46 pm ]
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ok i know im posting twice in a row and im sorry for that but i really have to show ya'll this :hobohodo:

Image

ok i know it aint the best pic ever and at some point ,if i remember, im gonna re-draw it and coulor it [if i can ever find a free copy of photoshop :karma:] but yer so tell us what u think :will:
Author:  Fey Sage [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 9:54 pm ]
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The picture is great :butzthumbs: , the hair is a bit different from what I imagined, but it's better!
Author:  cb93 [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 10:04 pm ]
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rally coz i think the hiar is the worst part of the pic - mainly coz i only ralised that i'd lefe a bould type patch on the left side of his head after i had inked the pic ^^;
Author:  Fey Sage [ Tue Nov 18, 2008 10:16 pm ]
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Don't worry, by the way, Hugh doesn't have that little coat, that Maya and Pearl have. But again don't worry. :godot:
Author:  cb93 [ Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:14 am ]
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well the kimonos in the game are like that but since i've never seen any male mediums [obviously] i have no idea what they look like

btw the main part of the midium outfit is sleveless so hence the coat thingy ^^; but i'll bear it in mind to edit the outfit next time i draw him
Author:  KamiyaYoriko [ Wed Nov 19, 2008 2:46 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles ( Looking for an artist)
OMG, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, I adore it so far :D You are a great author :maya:
And your English is okay, there are only a few mistakes ^^
Author:  Fey Sage [ Sat Nov 22, 2008 8:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Apollo Justice: The Fey Chronicles (Looking for an artist)
New chapter is up!
Author:  Seishin [ Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:04 am ]
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I read the newest chapter and it was freakin hilarious. Good idea to bring back the PW villians (and the others in AJ).

I wonder wheres Godot and Matt Engarde?
Author:  Fey Sage [ Tue Dec 02, 2008 8:41 am ]
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New chapter is up!
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