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Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 12/2/09)Topic%20Title
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A beautiful world indeed.

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Here is my first multi-chapter fic in a while. I've been doing one-shot's lately, but I think I now have the dilligence to actually see this one to the end. Anyway, any constructive criticism will be appreciated.


Title: Forbidden
Author: neoswordmaster
Rating: T (mostly for later chapters)
Genre: Romance/Drama
Status: In-progress
Pairing: Apollo/Trucy
Summary: Through thier lives, they faced much opposition to thier relationship, but they didn't care. All they knew was that they were in love.

Chapter 1-Diary

Chapter 2-A drive

Chapter 3-A Nightmare & a Dream Come True

Chapter 4-Calm

Last edited by neoswordmaster on Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:18 am, edited 5 times in total.
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A spirit possessor of a thousand souls

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These are great. I'd like to see more of these. :phoenix:
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A beautiful world indeed.

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Second chapter is up.

Spoiler:
The plot thickens.


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Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/23/09)Topic%20Title

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Aw, you tricked us. Wow. I really thought there WAS a chapter, but, no, there wasn't. :yuusaku: My bad. I just saw it.

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Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/23/09)Topic%20Title
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A beautiful world indeed.

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Mr. Doom Bringer wrote:
Aw, you tricked us. Wow. I reakky thought there WAS a chapter, but, no, there wasn't. :yuusaku:


I'm sorry I don't understand. How is it not a chapter?
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/23/09)Topic%20Title
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Rebirth

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neoswordmaster wrote:
Mr. Doom Bringer wrote:
Aw, you tricked us. Wow. I reakky thought there WAS a chapter, but, no, there wasn't. :yuusaku:


I'm sorry I don't understand. How is it not a chapter?


OP thought the spoiler tags would have the chapter in it. OP forgot to check the first post and notice that the link to the second chapter is right below the link to the first chapter.
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/23/09)Topic%20Title

A spirit possessor of a thousand souls

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I just saw that. Sorry. I'll do something about that post.
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/23/09)Topic%20Title
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don't lok at his eye. ARGH i looked

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your reaaly good you should write more go you
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Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/23/09)Topic%20Title
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All You Need is Love. ♥

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*melts into a puddle on the floor*

This is adorable. ADORABLE. Will be following this. <333
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Daughter to eliasbloodmoon and ApollaJustice.
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/25/09)Topic%20Title
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A beautiful world indeed.

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Chapter 3 is up. Remember all chapters are on the first post.

Spoiler:
Today's chapter contains everything from foreshadowing to a Big Lipped Alligator Moment.
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/25/09)Topic%20Title

A spirit possessor of a thousand souls

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Awesome chapter. These aare just... Fantastic.... I don't have words to describe.
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/25/09)Topic%20Title

i'll get an avvy later

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Great fic neo

i never really cared about the half-sibling thing, even when i found out everything. The reason behind that is cause that damn Klavier ruined everything by being both handsome and possibly gay, prompting him to be paired with both them and Ema. Personally, i prefer him dead. Ha, I'm kidding, it's Kristoph who should be dead. I'm just quoting Falco right now (SSBB noobs, real phrase is "Personally, I prefer the air", but i heard dead instead of air) anyway, death to yaoi and get :odoroki: x :minuki: to become world-famous!

Hell, they're the reincarnation of :phoenix: x :maya: in just every way i can think of! But i am not a fan of pearl's actions and i thing edgy should stick with :franny: . But I digress.

BYE!!!
Spoiler: All AA games
the following people are EEEEEEEVIL:
karma, gant, morgan le fey, slashface aka engarde, penguin/atmey, black dahlia, and devil's hand (aka hirohiko aka figure it out yourself)
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Aww this is cute! Will there be any more? :odoroki:
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Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 11/25/09)Topic%20Title

i'll get an avvy later

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there better be, cause i'm posting his story on my faves on fanfiction

if you need me, ill be reading up on that mia fanfiction right next door
Spoiler: All AA games
the following people are EEEEEEEVIL:
karma, gant, morgan le fey, slashface aka engarde, penguin/atmey, black dahlia, and devil's hand (aka hirohiko aka figure it out yourself)
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 12/2/09)Topic%20Title
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A beautiful world indeed.

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New chapter is up. I'm glad to see a few eager fans. You guys are the reason I even write so keep up the reviews and critisims.

Spoiler:
This chapter is a little short. Sorry guys.
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:)

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I'm loving the story so far Neo.~ It's so cute and passionate.
Re: Forbidden (Apollo/Trucy) (Update 12/2/09)Topic%20Title

i'll get an avvy later

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I'd rather make comments on fanfiction.net
Spoiler: All AA games
the following people are EEEEEEEVIL:
karma, gant, morgan le fey, slashface aka engarde, penguin/atmey, black dahlia, and devil's hand (aka hirohiko aka figure it out yourself)
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