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| Author: | Arkillian [ Mon Feb 23, 2009 10:18 am ] |
| Post subject: | Dress down day at the office- Miles X Phoenix smut |
Title: Dress down day at the office Author: Arkillian Rating: M rated yaoi Genre: Relationship with a bit of humour Status: One shot- complete Pairing: Miles Edgeworth x Phoenix Wright Summary: Edgeworth interupts Phoenix on his way to work with a large coffee / food stain down his suit, and asks if he can borrow another from Phoenix... But is this his only intention? This smut fic does contain adult content, so to read the whole fic, you'll need a Paperdemon account and be over 18 Register on this account to view the whole story if you are of age In the mean time, I'll give you a small taste of the clean side of the fic. Spoiler: Aside from that, Do comment if you've read it... I may post more smut... May write more even... ^^ |
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| Author: | Pearls1975 [ Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dress down day at the office- Miles X Phoenix smut |
So, I had to go to the website specified and read the full story because I'm a sucker for PxE smut. I made myself an account and found your other story on there as well, I will probably comment here, because the forum = love! At any rate, I like this little one shot, its good!
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| Author: | Arkillian [ Mon Feb 23, 2009 10:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dress down day at the office- Miles X Phoenix smut |
Pearls1975 wrote: So, I had to go to the website specified and read the full story because I'm a sucker for PxE smut. I made myself an account and found your other story on there as well, I will probably comment here, because the forum = love! At any rate, I like this little one shot, its good!Lol. It's my first and only PXE smut fic so far... I'm not very good at smut cause my funny side comes out too often XD I get bored to easily with romance... I always seem to cut it short and jump into some action XD This one isn't too bad though. My silliest one is a Green Lantern X Flash one I did... I think my best one is this one here Ignition-When fire touches air, where I slashed two of my OCs for fun, but I never seem to get much crit feed back on my smut fics so I wouldn't have a clue how good they are >.> |
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| Author: | Pearls1975 [ Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:34 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dress down day at the office- Miles X Phoenix smut |
Arkillian wrote: Lol. It's my first and only PXE smut fic so far... I'm not very good at smut cause my funny side comes out too often XD I get bored to easily with romance... I always seem to cut it short and jump into some action XD This one isn't too bad though. My silliest one is a Green Lantern X Flash one I did... I think my best one is this one here Ignition-When fire touches air, where I slashed two of my OCs for fun, but I never seem to get much crit feed back on my smut fics so I wouldn't have a clue how good they are >.> Well, to be honest, from reading "Turnabout Attorney", you do write action very well, and suspense! There were a couple silly moments in your story, but that's what makes it more believeable. The smut story was good, but I think your strength lies in action and suspense! However, someone once told me that when you are stuck, its good to write random scenes with the characters that you are working with. I share this, because, you wrote in your fanart thread that you were having a hard time finding your muse...
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| Author: | Arkillian [ Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:53 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dress down day at the office- Miles X Phoenix smut |
Pearls1975 wrote: Well, to be honest, from reading "Turnabout Attorney", you do write action very well, and suspense! There were a couple silly moments in your story, but that's what makes it more believeable. The smut story was good, but I think your strength lies in action and suspense! However, someone once told me that when you are stuck, its good to write random scenes with the characters that you are working with. I share this, because, you wrote in your fanart thread that you were having a hard time finding your muse... ![]() Yeah- I figure that too... It's a shame... I'd like to write a believable romance ^^ I guess it's cause I don't watch many romance movies XD They're usually to slow for me :3 Oh well- at worst, they're worth reading once- just not twice XD Thanks for your honest opinion
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| Author: | Pearls1975 [ Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dress down day at the office- Miles X Phoenix smut |
Arkillian wrote: Yeah- I figure that too... It's a shame... I'd like to write a believable romance ^^ I guess it's cause I don't watch many romance movies XD They're usually to slow for me :3 Oh well- at worst, they're worth reading once- just not twice XD Thanks for your honest opinion ![]() Oh my, please don't stop trying...keep at it... I think you have the potential to write a believable romance, with lots of action! LOL At any rate, I hope i didn't discourage you from writing more romance...that was not my intention at all!
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| Author: | Arkillian [ Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dress down day at the office- Miles X Phoenix smut |
Pearls1975 wrote: Oh my, please don't stop trying...keep at it... I think you have the potential to write a believable romance, with lots of action! LOL At any rate, I hope i didn't discourage you from writing more romance...that was not my intention at all! ![]() I'm not discouraged- don't worry ^^ I just like to hear honest opinions- not the usual "ZOMG MILES AND PHOENIX IS HAWT 4EVAH!!" type comments ^^; I don't get to learn from that >.> |
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