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Here's chapter 2!

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Chapter 2
“Sensei? I’m no sensei! My name is…what is my name?” I said.
“What the hell is wrong with you!? Your Kakashi-sensei! You know our teacher.” the blonde haired boy said.
I looked at him. His hair was not brushed (that’s what it seemed to me) and he had three marks on each of his cheeks. He wore some sort of jumpsuit. And he was also obviously color blind because blue and orange don’t go together.
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Where am I?’ I thought again. I got up and tried to walk. I walked right into a tree. “Oww!!” That was when it struck me. My left eye was covered…with something.
“Sensei…Are you okay? You don’t seem like yourself.” It was that feminine voice again. I looked at her. She had shiny, pink hair. She had some sort of head band. When I saw her she reminded me of Maya.
“Who are you guys? And once again, where am I?” I told them.
This time the boy with jet-black hair sighed. “Did you drink too much last night Kakashi-sensei? You don’t even remember us. Your own students. Just cut the crap and get sober. I heard the Hokage wants us for a mission.”
“Okay. I’ll play along. But I have two questions. One, what is a hokage? And two, why is my left eye covered? I don’t remember ever having a problem with my eye.” I asked.
The boy with the black hair just stared at me. That was when I saw something weird happen. His eyes went from black to red. It’s like he was peering into my soul.
“Hmm…If you want to know about your eye just look into the river. You’ll see why.” he said.
I didn’t trust him. Or any of them for that matter. But I decided to do what he said and just looked into the river.
“Oh my god!” I yelled. I couldn’t believe it. I know it’s me…but the body isn’t me at all. I looked into the reflection again. “This isn’t me! What happened to my black spiky hair, my blue suit?! Everything’s gone!” I said as I curled up into the fetal position. But then I realized something.
“Hey. If this isn’t my body why do I still have a blue eye? You! Kid with the pink hair!” I yelled out.
She looked stunned. “Kakashi-sensei…I have a name. It’s Sakura, don’t you remember?” she said sadly.
I didn’t even listen to what she said. “What color was your sensei’s eyes?” I asked her.
“Uhh…I believe they were black or some shade of gray, the other was red. Why do you want to know?” Sakura asked me.
“I have the answer to that. This isn’t Kakashi-sensei. Who the hell are you and what have you done with Kakashi?” The black haired kid said again.
“I’ll only introduce myself after you guys do.” I said sternly.
“Fine. My name is Uchiha. Sasuke Uchiha. I’m apart of the well-known Uchiha clan whose special ability is called the Sharingan. It’s a special ocular ninjutsu that can send you into a different dimension or copy techniques.” he said.
I had no idea what he meant by “ninjutsu” or “Sharingan”. All I did was nod my head. I looked at the boy with the blonde hair.
“Uhh…I guess it’s my turn. My name is Naruto Uzumaki. I’m a kick-butt ninja! And the main thing I want is to become hokage and have everybody treat me with respect! I also like ramen and jokes.” he said with a smile on his face.
“Okay. Now, what about you? Upon meeting a girl always ask her for her name and occupation…Gak!!” I said. ‘I’ve been hanging around Godot to long…’ About Godot, he’s a coffee addict who loves to torture me in court. That’s all about him for now.
“Well…You sure a gentleman mister. My name is Sakura Haruno. I guess you can say that I’m a ninja.” She said while blushing.
“My turn. My name is Phoenix Wright. I’m an attorney of law in a city called Los Angeles. My purpose is to protect those who are falsely accused of doing crime.” I said proudly.
They just stared at me blankly.
Meanwhile in an alternate world…“Ughh…Is this what I get for drinking and falling asleep under a tree. Man, does my head hurt.” I said.
Then I heard something. Sounds like a girl crying. It isn’t Sakura or Anko. Who is it?
“Nick! Can you hear me!? Don’t cross the river! Don’t go into the light! Wake up!” she said.
“Whose
‘Nick’? My name isn’t Nick.” I said.
The girl just looked at me. Then she stared into my eyes.
“Why are your eyes two different colors? Who are you? What happened to Nick? Where are you from?” she bombarded me with questions.
“Ack! One question at a time. Please. First, it’s complicated- how did you know I have two different colored eyes?” I asked.
She pulled out a mirror. I looked into it. ‘This isn’t my body, look, or hair.’ I thought. The only thing that was the same was my left eye. One was blue the other was red. Other than that everything was different.
I just thought to myself before answering her next couple of questions. “My name is Kakashi Hatake. I’m from a place called the Leaf Village. And I don’t know what happened to this person called ‘Nick’. Maybe you should tell me a little about him, seeing that I’m not returning home for quite a while. I may need to live as him for the time being.” I said cooly.
“Umm…Okay, Mr. Hatake. Maybe I should introduce myself first. My name is Maya Fey. I’m 19 and I’m Nick’s…I mean Phoenix Wright’s assistant. But my main occupation is that of a spirit medium from the Kurain Channeling Technique.” she said.
I nodded my head. “Okay. Now tell me about Mr. Phoenix Wright.”
“Let’s see…Nick is a lawyer at Wright and Co. Law Office. He is so far undefeated in court. He is also a bit dense when it comes to some things. Nick is also 26 years old.” Maya said with a smile.
“Hmm…So he’s the same age as me. Well honestly my guess is that we somehow switched bodies. Back at home I was napping under a tree. Tell me what happened to him.” I asked.
Hope you guys like it.
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