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Title: Imperfection.
Author: Amy.
Rating: K.
Genre: Romance, Comfort.
Status: Complete, one-shot.
Pairing: Phoenix/Franziska.
Summary: Imperfection song by Skillet. This was written for Nat. Songfic. Nat was complaining that there were no new P/F fics, so I told her that I'd search myself, and I was writing this instead.

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“Franziska. Don’t worry. You don’t have to live a lie.”

“B-but, I’m a von Karma. I have to be perfect!”

“Nobody’s perfect. Not even von Karmas. But you’re pretty close to it.”

You're worth so much
It'll never be enough to see what you have to give
How beautiful you are
Yet seem so far from everything you're wanting to be
Wanted to be


Franziska wiped her eyes.

Tears falling down again
Tears falling down


“Th-thank you, Phoenix Wri- Phoenix.”

At the mention of her using his first name, he relaxed. He knew that this girl was willing to let go, after all those years. She fell down, next to him.

You fall to your knees
You beg, you plead
Can I be somebody else for all the times I hate myself?
Your failures devour your heart in every hour
You're drowning in your imperfection


“Relax. Don’t be who you aren’t.”

“Thanks.”

“You don’t have to do it. Nobody’s forcing you. You don’t have to be perfect.”

You mean so much
That heaven would touch the face of humankind for you
How special you are
Revel in your day
You're fearfully and wonderfully made
Wonderfully made


“I’ll never leave you. I'll be here... forever and ever.”

“Are you sure? You could love this imperfect fool?”

“I already do.”

Tears fall down again
Come let the healing begin


“Breathe.”

She crys, on his shoulder. But this time, not with sorrow, but with love. For the fool Phoenix Wright.

You're worth so much
So easily crushed
Wanna be like everyone else
No one escapes
Every breath we take dealing with our own skeletons
Skeletons


“We’ve all got secrets, Franziska. Even people who are ‘perfect’.”

You fall to your knees
You beg, you plead
Can i be somebody else for all the times i hate myself?
Your failures devour your heart in every hour
You're drowning in your imperfection


“Trust me. I’m not perfect either”

“I love you, fool.”

“I love you, too.”

Won't you believe it?
Won't you believe it?
All the things I see in you
You're not the only one, you're not the only one drowning in imperfection.


“Franziska. Be yourself. Don’t worry. You don’t have... to live a lie.”

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Sorry, it's short. And sorry for the lack of smut, Nat. But I hope you like it nonetheless.
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I liked it... the song lirycs suited the story... maybe you were inspired by these lyrics to write this fic?
I would have liked a fic with more story, it's not that is short but it's too... I don't know how to say this... but it is, quite abrupt. If it's the right word and right spelled.
I like how it ended though: "I love you fool" - "I love you, too" It's a perfect impersonation of Franny... she tells to the man she loves: fool.

Don't worry about it, It's quite good although I read it in about... three minutes :payne: .

I :will: look forward for you to keep writing PXF Fics.
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i liked it. :godot:
I think Nat's gonna love it too. =)
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Phoenix/Franziska will live!

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I loved it! It's really great and I'm really glad I got you to listen to the song! It's a great fic! Can't wait for another! *Hint hint*!
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Thanks, guys. I'm proud of this fic. And, the inspiration was actually Nat. She loves that song so much, I decided to kill two birds with one stone and write a songfic with her favourite pairing and favourite song. Thanks for the reviews again.
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its awesome!!! i dont usualy ship them but awwww. i totally approve of that one!!! lovely!!! could you maybe write some more bout phoenix and franzy??? do you mind if i chav your idea of song lyrics??? i wanna do what hurts the most, maya and phoenix, when she has too go back to kurain to be master after the case with elise dieing.
please. i wanted to ask you first in case you'd get offended,lol
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Last edited by ilygodot on Sat Aug 01, 2009 7:53 am, edited 1 time in total.
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i loved it. the lyrics fit n perfectly. it was short but there wsnt a lack of anything, and it didnt drag on!!! well done!
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I love it!
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Thanks for the reviews. Ilygodot, go ahead. I'm not the first one to make a songfic, after all. Just... type it in MS word first. And use the spell checker. And the grammar checker. Big time.
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kay!!! thanks! :pearl:
me+bad grammar are usually best friends!!! :godot:
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It doesn't help people like you, quite the opposite. I suggest you make with the grammar already or Lunaria will find you.
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thanks for the warning :)
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