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a beachy reunion (phoenix/maya + more)*spoilers GS1-4*Topic%20Title
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Title:a beachy reunion
Author:do i have to bother to answer this :Hoboright:
Rating:T (13+)
Genre:romance/friendship
Status: (more chapters on reqeust)
Pairing: phoenix/maya apollo/ema edgeworth/franiska
Summary:
after AJ last rial (4-4) phoenix live began to be much better,
not only maya could visite him again,
but he got an invation to a poker tournement, in HAWAI!!!

please don't mind the grammer :godot:

chapter 1 on our way to hawai
Spoiler:
wright anything agency
''daddy whats wrong?''trucy asked her father (who FINALY shaved)
''i got a invation to a poker tournement''phoenix replied
''really? where?''
''hawai, and i can take seven persons with me''phoenix said, thinking about who he should take with him
''well, me and polly go right?'' trucy asked.
''i will think about it''
_ _ _ _
kurain village
''mystic maya!!!!!'' pearls screamed.
''you got mail, its from Mr. Nick!!!''
maya runned in.
''really???''
''oh yeah!!!! we are going to hawai, take youre stuff, hurry!''maya said
''huh?!''
''nick has a tourement in hawai, and he can take 6 people with him'' maya said, while putting a few clothes in her luggage.
_ _ _ _

high prosecutor office's

in the one of the high prosecutor office's two prosecutor were snogging.
''mr edgeworth! You have.....'' the guard tracked of when he saw the two prosecutor.
*whip*
''fool!!!!''
''please be calm franziska, please what do i have?''edgeworth said
''you have mail from phoenix wright''
''why do you get foolish mail from a foolishly foolish fool??'' franziska said, whit another whip at the guard.
''he invite's us to hawai, we need to meet him at his office right away, were going for quite a few days''
how can he afford that?? he thaught,''really, thats great'' she replied
''thank you officer''
''youre welcome sir''
_ _ _ _
back at the office
''so youre ready trucy, apollo?'' phoenix asked
''urm, for what?'' 'hope not a trip to mr eldoon' apollo thaugt
''were going to hawai'' trucy replied, jumping up and down
''thats why you want me to take my stuff'' apollo said, a bit reliefd
''yeah we are meeting them in a few minutes or so'' phoenix said
''NNNNNNIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'' maya screamed, and runned at nick, she hugged him and then trucy and shook apollo's hand.
''oh, mr. Nick, so good to see you'' '' where must the lugage go?''
''don't worry about it, edgeworth is coming soon'' nick replied.
*whip*
''foolishly foolish fool'' franziska said with a glare.
''calm franny'' edgeworth said to her.
''franny??'' nick laughed
*whip*
''we have to go then, put youre lugage in my car'' edgeworth said, trying to hold back his laugther


next chapter will be there shortly
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Re: a beachy reunion (phoenix/maya + more)*spoilers GS1-4*Topic%20Title

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i think you meed to spellcheck your work more eg. Hawai hawaii. but there is many things you can do with the story from here :will: i do think you should continue though :edgy:
:hobohodo: :minuki: :odoroki: :maya: :pearl: :franny: :edgy: all in this, yay
maybe make pics to accompany your story
I am a Phoenix/Maya shipper
I also support Fransizka/Edgeworth, Mia/Diego and Apollo/Vera.
Re: a beachy reunion (phoenix/maya + more)*spoilers GS1-4*Topic%20Title
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Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:
i think you meed to spellcheck your work more eg. Hawai hawaii. but there is many things you can do with the story from here :will: i do think you should continue though :edgy:
:hobohodo: :minuki: :odoroki: :maya: :pearl: :franny: :edgy: all in this, yay
maybe make pics to accompany your story

yes i know i should contineu,
and indeed, i need a spellcheck
but i didn't really had the time,
first i had soooo many test in one week (5-7 test last week)and after that i had to help with all the christmas things here at home, and yesterday i found out that krazykaro (my mom in CR) is leaving
all in all, not one of the best weeks i had
i almost finished the next chapter, it would take some time,
maybe tommorow
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