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I will make a new one though. But I'll see if this can pull through.
You'd better be nice to Mr. Judge!
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Oh and another tip: when you use a conjunction, you should put the two different sentences in one by using a comma, if you know what I mean. Like this:
As they discuss their plan. A song bursts on the radio
becomes
As they discuss their plan, a song bursts on the radio
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Next part:Almost ready
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Chapter 3:In the works
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However, I do like the plot. Gant is alive and out of jail? Causing chaos? Yes 
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Done: A rainy day, A weathery case.(Goodbye Turnabout)
Rating:Teen
A rainy day brings about a weathery case. From a murder shifting to a mass-kidnapping. How can Phoenix Wright solve such cases?
Scrapped: 21st Century Turnabout (Fic above.)
Rating: G
With an imminent bombing threat from an old enemy. Can Phoenix Wright and Apollo Justice save once again all the people they saved before?
Working on: Atroquinine my Love
Rating: Teen
An attempted re-murder of Vera planned by Kristoph Gavin is set into motion. Too bad his own brother Klavier would do anything to save her.
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Rating:Teen (Blood, Kidnapping, Violence)
Pairings: Klavier x Vera (I know it really isn't canon.)
Genre: Suspense/Romance/Drama
Synopsis: An attempted re-murder of Vera is set into motion by Kristoph Gavin. Too bad, his own brother Klavier will do anything to save Ms. Misham
And let's get this party started with Chapter 1
Rock on some more with chapter 2
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Well, I can now continue on this.
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But I do like attempted murder on Vera, and Kristoph trying to murder again. But... why is he going to kill her? And how is he out of jail?
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I wonder where Kristoph and Vera are?
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I like that line! It's pretty funny, to me.
I like the chapter, too. Ema is pretty smart
I'm looking forward to the confrontation!
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:)
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You have nice ideas :3
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Looking forward to the end!
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Tense, much? I thought that the girls would've been killed immediately by the atroquinine drops, but it's going slow
Will the next chapter explain everything?
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What a horrible brother. And I thought my brothers were bad...
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But here is the new chapter Chapter 9: Almost Ready
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This chapter is good.
Especially since it seems a 'turnabout' is in place, and Vera will be saved.
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Chapter 10: In the Works
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