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Author: | HeroMan66475 [ Sun Sep 17, 2017 7:54 am ] |
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DrOcsid wrote: Yeah, super-popular stuff like FNAF has way worse fandoms than Ace Attorney. The AA community is pretty tame as far as fandoms go, honestly. must explain why everybody wishes the series to be dead and that eshiro an yamazaki are ruining it and there's o hope for the fuutre. tame. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sun Sep 17, 2017 10:53 am ] |
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Sounds to me like you're hearing this from a rather vocal minority, Hero. I haven't heard that in a while honestly. In fact, I've been seeing more love for Yamazaki games recently. At least we're aren't filled to the brim with as many....children as we were about a decade back *coughcoughdanganronpacoughcough* |
Author: | HeroMan66475 [ Sun Sep 17, 2017 4:01 pm ] |
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Socot wrote: Sounds to me like you're hearing this from a rather vocal minority, Hero. I haven't heard that in a while honestly. In fact, I've been seeing more love for Yamazaki games recently. At least we're aren't filled to the brim with as many....children as we were about a decade back *coughcoughdanganronpacoughcough* if only you knew which side of the fandom i had to witness day after day after day. |
Author: | DrOcsid [ Sun Sep 17, 2017 4:02 pm ] |
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HeroMan66475 wrote: DrOcsid wrote: Yeah, super-popular stuff like FNAF has way worse fandoms than Ace Attorney. The AA community is pretty tame as far as fandoms go, honestly. must explain why everybody wishes the series to be dead and that eshiro an yamazaki are ruining it and there's o hope for the fuutre. tame. If by "everybody" you mean "a very small amount of people" then sure. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sun Sep 17, 2017 4:03 pm ] |
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HeroMan66475 wrote: Socot wrote: Sounds to me like you're hearing this from a rather vocal minority, Hero. I haven't heard that in a while honestly. In fact, I've been seeing more love for Yamazaki games recently. At least we're aren't filled to the brim with as many....children as we were about a decade back *coughcoughdanganronpacoughcough* if only you knew which side of the fandom i had to witness day after day after day. Which side is it? |
Author: | TurtleCat [ Thu Sep 28, 2017 5:27 pm ] |
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Hey, anybody know where the undone sporking list went? |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Thu Sep 28, 2017 5:33 pm ] |
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TurtleCat wrote: Hey, anybody know where the undone sporking list went? AFAIK it hasn't even been updated in over a year now. Interest has been slowly waning down lately sadly. |
Author: | TurtleCat [ Thu Sep 28, 2017 7:26 pm ] |
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I figured, but it is still going along and I wanted to try another sporking. Why not, right? What was the last page it was on - about a year ago, you said? Edit: And I don't know, theres nlots of good fic out there, and I'm pretty sure we're sporking out of love... right? |
Author: | Skittlemask [ Fri Sep 29, 2017 12:45 am ] |
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Ah, I updated the list last, over a year ago. Here's the link. But yeah, it's kinda old. Also, this thread kinda devolved from "Let's spork bad fanfiction" to "Let's spork fanfiction that would be fun for the characters to react to," hahaha. |
Author: | Pessimistic_Fool [ Fri Sep 29, 2017 11:43 pm ] |
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Well, it was always allowed to spork one-sahwit rated fics (my very first spork was of a pretty decent fic because I just saw lots of ways to have fun with it). Plus, while the awfully bad fics are very sporkable, I think they work best as highlights inbetween other sporks (of fics with a friendlier rating). Too much of them in direct order gets old and the awfulness loses its effect. So I'd say go ahead and spork whatever you want, just rate it accordingly. (And now that I'm back to read this forum again, I'd happily read your spork and comment on it. :)) |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Thu Oct 26, 2017 2:40 pm ] |
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Hello everyone! It's been a while since the last sporking, eh? So I've returned with one, also posted on the beta forums! Introducing... Québécois by Pearl the Barrister Rating: This one honestly isn't too bad. It's actually pretty funny in some parts, and it has a strange kind of charm to it. One sahwit is simply for the mild OOCness in the fic as well as the out of nowhere OC. The other is for the fact that Franziska invites every AA character to the wedding (which is in Miami for whatever reason). Even the animals, killers and victims. Geez. But it's still a fun fic overall, and I think it'll be something good to spork and have more fun with. Anyway, introducing....the sporkers! - "I hoped that this break would be permanent. Apparently not." - "If only, Wright. You're too optimistic considering what we go through in this accursed theatre." - "Well, there's only 2 Sahwits this time, so it's not like it's gonna be that bad, right?" - "Eh? Mystic Maya, what's a 'Sa-Whits'?" - "How foolish it is that I must undergo this once more." - "Geez, I've actually been properly invited to this place for once?" Well, let's get started now! Spoiler: Sorry for cutting it short there. I felt that the spork was at an ideal length so I'll be posting the second part...hmm, about next week. See you all then! Please do give (constructive) criticism though, it really helps more than you could imagine. Bye guys! (Credit goes to DarkAgea for proofreading and giving general criticism about the characters and such.) |
Author: | Pessimistic_Fool [ Fri Oct 27, 2017 8:32 pm ] |
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Some observations while reading through: - Pearl has actually been in the sporking theater before. In the old one, before it got erased. Because it got erased though, it's easily justifiable that the characters don't remember it. I guess we could think of it as a different timeline. (I am not sure if she has sporked in this thread before. I'd have to recheck all the pages, and am too lazy to do that, so I'm just gonna assuzme that if she did, somebody else will mention it.) - Dang, your management is polite. Saying "please" and all, and even "asking" sporkers to come. Those sporkers better appreciate it. - I'm a bit confused on how Pearl gets "Kyu-beck" out of hearing Edgeworth say "Quebec". Wouldn't she get something more like "Kay-beck" out of it? Or does Edgeworth really pronounce it weirdly? - Minor nitpick: Please use asterisks to mark sound effects. If you just put them in cursive, it looks like the character is just saying them with emphasis. Although it is pretty funny to imagine Franziska angrily shouting "Whip crack, Miles Edgeworth!". ;) - That mental image of a plane full of ordinary wedding guests, corpses and escaped murderers is also hilarious. :D - Quote: Franziska: Grrr! I would never change my perfect name of von Karma for such a fool as Miles Edgeworth, whom I see no more than a little brother. This sounds a tad expository. I would prefer the characters to talk more naturally in this thread, which is part of a message board dedicated to Ace Attorney, a video game franchise. See what I mean? ;) - Quote: Kay: Huh? Yeah, you're right. The author said that you were directly behind Mr. Edgeworth, but that'd be seat 8E in that case since he's in seat 7E. Not quite. The fic put Edgeworth in seat 8E. Although I'm not sure the fic knows what it's doing with the seats either way. (And I also wonder how one would manage to sit a row "and a half" behind anyone. Did Maya climb onto the chair in front of her? Or cut through it?) - I love the little bit where Kay escapes through the front door. ^^ Nicely written! - I also love Phoenix' snarky comments where you used them. Poor guy must be SO done with this. - I like the cliffhanger at the end. I wonder who it is. _______________________________________________________________________ --> All in all, a fairly nice spork! I found its length very pleasant. At times, the charracters seemed a bit off to me, but not too badly so. I'm looking forward to the next part! |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sat Oct 28, 2017 3:26 am ] |
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Thanks corn- I mean, for the criticism! Spoiler: Never forget Dr. Ocsid |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Tue Oct 31, 2017 9:19 am ] |
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And welcome back, everyone! This is part 2 of Québécois! If you don't know what this is all about, then read part one first. Everything necessary like the rating and sporkers is given right there for your little eyes to devour. Anyway, moving on, let's continue the spork! (Also on the beta forums but you know the drill) Spoiler: Well, thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed this. It was fun to work on. Constructive criticism is appreciated as always. Have a good day, everyone. I've got a long nap to take now. |
Author: | TEG [ Fri Nov 24, 2017 8:40 am ] |
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Hi there! I was considering sporking this monstrosity, which was mentioned in this thread a while back: http://archiveofourown.org/works/1168494?view_adult=true Since it's VERY NSFW I'm assuming it'll need to be censored. I was just checking for tips on exactly to what degree I need to censor it to post it here, as well as any other etiquette I should be aware of for sporking. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Fri Nov 24, 2017 10:56 am ] |
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AO3 wrote: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings What a mistake that was. Anyway, I suggest that for these types of fics, you host it elsewhere. Mainly because most of the terribleness comes from the NSFW parts, and without it there wouldn't be much material to spork. You could do little summaries in between like Blacmail too, but that might actually make the sporking super short. Just my two cents. This thing is an absolute monstrosity. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Fri Nov 24, 2017 11:57 am ] |
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And hello, everybody! Today I'm back with a double sporking of these two fics! This is going to be... The Klema Duology Rating: Normally, I'd go into detail about the fics and why they deserve this rating but...honestly, it's best to let them speak for themselves. It really is. You'll see. Now, introducing the sporkers! - "It's times like this when I wish I was back in Khura'in." - "Aw, but we've missed you, Polly!" - "Indeed, Herr Forehead. We've hardly met in the last few months, ja?" - "MUNCH MUNCH MUNCH MUNCH MUNCH" Anyway, let's start the show! Spoiler: Hope you enjoyed. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Good night. I hope you guys are having a merry thanksgiving or whatever you call it. |
Author: | TEG [ Sat Nov 25, 2017 6:40 am ] |
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Southern Corn wrote: AO3 wrote: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings What a mistake that was. Anyway, I suggest that for these types of fics, you host it elsewhere. Mainly because most of the terribleness comes from the NSFW parts, and without it there wouldn't be much material to spork. You could do little summaries in between like Blacmail too, but that might actually make the sporking super short. Just my two cents. This thing is an absolute monstrosity. Alright, sounds like a plan. Any suggestions about where to host it? I'm not sure exactly what fanfiction.net's policy on this sort of erm... story is and I'd like to post it somewhere where I won't have to deal with the hassle of it getting removed. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sat Nov 25, 2017 6:58 am ] |
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Preferably some place where the BBCode remains so everything looks normal. The last sporking hosted elsewhere I believe was Stiff, and Airey hosted that on her own blog (which had an NSFW warning iirc), so maybe your own place if you have that? Or if you don't, you could create your own :P Though ff.net definitely allows these kinds of stories there, I doubt they'll allow MSTing of others' works there. |
Author: | TEG [ Sat Nov 25, 2017 9:19 am ] |
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Spoiler: I was actually expecting someone to reference the very, very obvious ripping off of Avatar: The Last Airbender here, since it's as subtle as a brick to the face and extremely groan-worthy if you're familiar with that series. Pretty good! I had some chuckles and the two stories tied together well thematically. Quote: so maybe your own place if you have that? I do but... it's a personal blog and I really don't want to put something this dirty on it. I haven't used it in a while, but there are still people who read it who would not appreciate that. What's a good place where I can set up a new BBCode blog that won't link to any of my other accounts? |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sat Nov 25, 2017 9:30 am ] |
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TEG wrote: Spoiler: I was actually expecting someone to reference the very, very obvious ripping off of Avatar: The Last Airbender here, since it's as subtle as a brick to the face and extremely groan-worthy if you're familiar with that series. Pretty good! I had some chuckles and the two stories tied together well thematically. Was it? I've never seen the show before so that one might have slipped past me XD Glad you liked the sporking, and thanks! Quote: Quote: so maybe your own place if you have that? I do but... it's a personal blog and I really don't want to put something this dirty on it. I haven't used it in a while, but there are still people who read it who would not appreciate that. What's a good place where I can set up a new BBCode blog that won't link to any of my other accounts? WordPress has a few plugins for BBCode if that counts. Unless you already have an account there. Maybe blogspot, then? |
Author: | henke37 [ Sat Nov 25, 2017 11:54 am ] |
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The thing with wordpress is that it is both a service and a product. The service is hosting your blog. The product is the software used to run the blog. They may both be free, but only the later gives you full customization capabilities. Plugins like these are literally chunks of code that you add onto the software. No way that they are going to let you run code of your choosing on the free hosting. |
Author: | TEG [ Sun Nov 26, 2017 5:10 am ] |
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Okay! So I hosted the sporking a free WordPress blog. It's not an ideal setup, since customization is limited, but it should do the job at least for now. I had no idea if either Apollo or Athena have met Godot before in the sporking theater, so I had them introduced here. I know sporkings tend to play somewhat loose with continuity so it shouldn't be a big deal. And so, without further ado: "Tried" (aka: The final resistance- by WoodenHacker) Warning: NSFW, or anywhere, really - Some people might argue that this deserves a Dahlia. The only reasons I didn't give it one are: 1)It's fairly short, 2) There's quite a bit of unintentional comedy, and 3) The spelling and grammar stay in "mostly readable" territory throughout. The writing is pretty poor, but it's the offensive premise that really kills it. The story can best be described as "a lighthearted romp about female on male rape, with a side of incest". So yeah. It takes the subject matter just seriously enough while still treating it as a joke to be incredibly uncomfortable. You've been warned. Tonight's sporkers: Hey! No fair! I did my time! I served my nickel! Let me oooouuuttt! How do you think I feel? Do you have any idea how many times they've dragged me here? What are we in for today, I wonder? Well well well. What do we have here? The sporking: https://tegsporking.wordpress.com/ |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sun Nov 26, 2017 5:45 am ] |
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I really like the unfitting subtitle for the blog: Quote: Peaceful Thoughts for Happy Folks Anyway, nice sporking! Some extra notes: Spoiler: |
Author: | TEG [ Sun Nov 26, 2017 7:39 am ] |
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Southern Corn wrote: Spoiler: Quote: Oh, by the way, are you putting this sporking (or at least, the link to it) on the Beta forums? The subforum for sporks is currently a bit deserted at the moment. Sure. Just give me the link and I'll put it up. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sun Nov 26, 2017 7:59 am ] |
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Here you go. You'll just have to sign in with the same username and password as here and then post it. Keep in mind that the Beta is still, well, a beta, so the smilies won't show up like normal. I suggest putting the character names as a temporary replacement. |
Author: | TEG [ Sun Nov 26, 2017 10:56 pm ] |
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Alright, it's up now. The only thing I couldn't figure out was how to add that red bar between the intro and the rest of the sporking. How do you do that? |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Mon Nov 27, 2017 2:06 am ] |
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TEG wrote: Alright, it's up now. The only thing I couldn't figure out was how to add that red bar between the intro and the rest of the sporking. How do you do that? That's the tag labelled Code: [hr][/hr] Normally here it looks like this: But on the beta you need to select it like this: Code: [hr] Then the red line will show. |
Author: | Sky [ Mon Dec 11, 2017 1:45 pm ] |
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I'm not sure if some of you remember this, but I remember someone on did one for a fan fiction where Klavier has a new phone and he goes pranking everyone with it and when he pranking Franzy she ends up giving him a pregnancy test. Does anyone remember the name of the fan fiction? |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Mon Dec 11, 2017 2:02 pm ] |
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Here you go. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Sun Dec 31, 2017 7:14 pm ] |
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Hey, y'all! Happy New Year! It's been quite a while since the last sporking, huh? To start this year of 2-4 and 3-2, let's have ourselves a new series! Introducing... Loving a Bloodsucker (Part 1) Rating: This is only for the first few chapters. The premise is…well, it's a Phoenix/Iris fic, except that Iris is a vampire. I'm not joking, and it's just as crazy as it sounds. That's all I'll say here, because you really need to see it for yourself. This will be in separate parts, of course, because this is 13 chapters long. And yes, I'll be doing all of it. I…I hope I can survive. Also, before anyone mentions it, I'll say that this fic is based on this anime. Currently, this may just seem strange, but keep this in mind for the later chapters. Now, introducing the sporkers for this: - "That title sounds pretty ominous…" - "Wait, why am I here, pal?" - "Hey, guys! How's it goin'?" - "Ahh! I'm not a vampire, I swear!" - "Um…" Starting…now! Spoiler: Thanks for reading! Constructive criticism is appreciated. At this point, I use autocomplete to write that for me, but it really does mean a lot to me. Especially with this one, since I'm still a little unsure on how I wrote some of the characters. Anyway, goodbye, and have a happy 2018! |
Author: | TEG [ Tue Jan 02, 2018 6:05 am ] |
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Not bad. I liked the running gag where young Phoenix thought the fic was some kind of defamation against him by Doug Swallow. I also kind of liked the moments where Iris was the only sane person while everyone else was getting worked up about "vampire discrimination". Would the management really be that upset over being accused of being "vampirecist"? They always seemed kind of... heartless to me, what with everything they subject the sporkers to, but I guess they can be whatever writers want them to be, since technically they're OC's. Spoiler: This seems kind of harsh for Maya. In fact, Maya in general seems a bit uncharacteristically mean. I know Mia got pretty annoyed with young Phoenix when he was on trial, but she had a lot more reason to. And Maya teases people, but usually not with genuine malicious intent, unless they've done something to really deserve it. I think if you want someone to directly insult other characters so brutally, a different character like Edgeworth or Franziska would be a better choice. Although I did like the "I can see how he was friends with Larry now" joke. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Tue Jan 02, 2018 12:47 pm ] |
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it overall. Just a few things though: 1. The Management was supposed to actually just be infuriated with the sporkers on their sudden vampire rights tangent that they just gave up and left. That was what I was aiming for, anyway. 2. The thing with Maya is definitely a valid criticism, and probably my biggest fear when publishing it. In fact, what you're seeing now is a toned down version from the original draft. That one line you spotted actually got there by accident and wasn't supposed to be there in this version. I'll remove it after this post. But yeah, I'd hope that gradually being annoyed with Feenie would make it a bit better, but I guess not, that's definitely going to be lessened to a great deal in the next parts. 3. It's also a little funny that you mention Edgeworth and Franziska, but I do actually have plans to bring them in for the next parts as well. Mostly to balance things out, but also to poke fun at the fic's other pats. Because it gets real stupid later on. |
Author: | TEG [ Wed Jan 03, 2018 3:24 am ] |
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Southern Corn wrote: 1. The Management was supposed to actually just be infuriated with the sporkers on their sudden vampire rights tangent that they just gave up and left. That was what I was aiming for, anyway. Ah. Yeah, I didn't get that. They seemed defensive. I think some hints to their true feelings would've gone a long way here. Maybe an exasperated sigh at one point and an "Oh for the love of..." at another. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Wed Jan 03, 2018 2:08 pm ] |
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Sure, then. I've added that. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Thu Jan 11, 2018 11:44 am ] |
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So…I found this little fic when I was searching for Luke Atmey stuff, and I think we've got some sporking material on our hands. I'm busy with something else, but anyone else is free to claim this. It'll be pretty short to spork, but you could potentially bring in Luke himself for the sporking, which'll be pretty neat. But yeah, do with this what you will. |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Fri Jan 26, 2018 7:57 am ] |
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Exactly one year ago, on this very day, I released my sporking of the very terrible Mayo's rattelsnek advuntre. Ever since then, I've done quite a lot in terms of sporking, and we still continue to this very day! So in honour of today, I'm releasing the second part of Loving a Bloodsucker! I tried to take into consideration what everyone told me to improve on in this part, so hopefully you like it. For now, though the fic's rating stays the same, it won't be too long before it descends into madness. Now introducing…the sporkers! - "Aw, back to this propaganda again?" - "This is no good, man!" - "Are we already going here?" - "May I ask what exactly all this fuss is abo-" - "Edgeworth? Is that you?!" So now that we've gotten that out of the way, let's begin! Spoiler: Thank you guys for reading. As always, honest and constructive criticism is appreciated. I hope this part was an improvement over last time's. But that's all for today, so bye! |
Author: | TEG [ Wed Feb 07, 2018 4:36 pm ] |
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I really liked the awkward situation with young Phoenix and everyone else once Dahlia entered the fic. It's kind of a shame it ended so quickly after that. I may do something with that Luke Atmey fic, if I have time. I've been pretty busy lately though, so if anyone else wants to take it, feel free. |
Author: | Skittlemask [ Fri Mar 16, 2018 1:24 am ] |
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Revive, thread. Revive! Title- Twelve Charms: Chapter 3 Rating- Personally, I don't think this fic is that bad to warrant 3 Sahwits like Ben Lyon gave it, or at least it's not all that bad in the beginning. It's obvious the author was just having fun when she was writing this, and it shows through in her work. Later on, though, it would probably get more Sahwits because it started getting too nonsensical for even me to ignore. Also, I'm gonna try something a bit different. Well, not too different. I think Airey has done this before, and maybe even Rubia, but I never have. I hope it turns out OK! Let's meet our sporkers! Hobo Phoenix! "That isn't my name, management!" Apollo Justice! "I haven't seen Mr. Wright in that ratty outfit in what feels like ages!" and Trucy Wright! "Hmm, the title of this fic looks kinda familiar…" [We open in our sporking theatre. It's seen little use lately, but it's surprisingly rather clean. All three of our sporkers are a bit… confused.] Apollo: Mr. Wright, are you feeling OK? Phoenix: Hm, why're you asking that, 'Pollo? I just asked why Agent Lang's men aren't guarding the doors. Trucy: But, Daddy… Lang's men haven't guarded the doors in, um, at least two years! Phoenix: …Oh. Really? Perhaps I just didn't notice… Huh. Anyway, I bet you're both excited to continue this fanfic of ancient ruins, supernatural bracelets, and illegal romance! Apollo: …What? Trucy: Oh yeah, I forgot all about that fic! I knew the title sounded familiar! You didn't even notice, Polly! Apollo: …Mr. Wright, you couldn't remember that Lang's men haven't been here for years, but remember the plot of a fic that we haven't read since, I dunno, 2012, like it was just yesterday. Phoenix: Hmm, well, it wasn't yesterday. But it was only about three weeks ago. Apollo: … Trucy: …Methinks Daddy was teleported. Apollo: Yeah, but what for? Speakers: For a refresher, duh! We're not going to sit here and explain what happened in two chapters for free, y'know. Better off have Hobo Nick do it. Apollo: But why didn't you teleport Trucy and me from that time period? Then you wouldn't need any explanations! Speakers: Don't question my ways, horn-head! Trucy: *whispers* I think the management just didn't think of it… Speakers: FYI, we totally did. But we decided against it for continuity's sake, OK? We're smarter than you kids give us credit for. *sigh* Narrator, roll the fic! [Sir, yes sir!] Spoiler: [The lights come on.] Trucy: Wait, that's it? Phoenix: Yep, anticlimactic and boring, right? Apollo was right about this being a mostly useless and boring chapter. Almost everything after getting out of the ruins felt a bit like a waste of time. Trucy: Why did we even come back to this fic, then? Phoenix: *shrugs* Ask the management, I guess. Apollo: …Thank you, Mr. Wright. For apologizing. I was never mad, but it was nice to hear you say it. Phoenix: *smiles* Don't mention it, Apollo. Now how about I buy you two dinner? I think we all need a break. Apollo: That'd be great, thank you. Speakers: Sorry to rain on your sappy forgiveness parade, but Phoenix has to go back to his timeline, remember? Phoenix: Huh. I actually forgot that I came from a different year. Apollo: (Only he could ever forget something like that…) [Before anyone could say anything more, a blue light filled the room and when it cleared, Phoenix was gone.] Trucy: Aww, he even offered us dinner, and he never does that! How are we going to get dinner now? Apollo: Umm… (Please spare my wallet, just this once. Please?) Trucy: I know! I'll tell current Daddy that he owes us! He made an irresponsible promise in the past and now he has to honor it! Yeah, that always works! C'mon, Polly! Time for dinner! Apollo: Coming! (Wait, what did she mean by "that always works?") [And so, another fantastic sporking comes to an end in our sporking theatre! See you all next time! And hey, do you think Phoenix could buy me dinner, too? I'm starving!] Speakers: Not a chance, narrator. [Aww…] |
Author: | Southern Corn [ Fri Mar 16, 2018 9:25 am ] |
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Pretty fun to read overall, though maybe you should've put in another chapter since, as you said, this was just kind of filler. Still, pretty good. I always enjoy the dynamic between the AJ characters. Not sure what the different thing was either, though maybe that's just me. |
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