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New "Blake Turner" Sprite: opinions? (EDITED)Topic%20Title
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Painting by Denerop

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For those of you who have read my sprite comic:
Many of you who have commented of my Blake sprite, saying that I should fix it. Well, I seem to have followed your "advice" and I made a new one. Here it is:
(I made a
EDIT 2: Completely changed hair - Fixed suit
Spoiler: 3rd Blake Sprite
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Please comment on this one, whether you prefer it or not, and on how can I improve it.


Here's the prevous one just in case

Spoiler: 2nd BlakeSprite
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Now the question is whether I should:
  • A) Make the rest of Chapter 1 with the new sprite
  • B) Finish Chapter 1 with the old one and start using the new one at the start of Chapter 2
  • C) Never use the new sprite, the old one is better

I hope you can help me improve it further and make a choice out of these three.
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Last edited by Blake on Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:52 am, edited 2 times in total.
Re: New "Blake Turner" Sprite: opinions?Topic%20Title
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looks better as the first one ~

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the hair needs work
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forget to say: shading need work~
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They don't :c

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Make the hair look a bit more AA-style, fix the shading, and it's perfect.

Good to see you've fixed his head!
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The head looks good, but it might need more anti-aliasing in the suit. Fix some of the dark gray lines on the suit too.

And maybe you can use it along with the sprites you have already?
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Hmm, yeah, good advice, people. The hair could do with some fixing, and the shading I'm not too sure what you mean exactly, so I'd like you to be more specific (where the shading is wrong, how should I fix it)
Also, you're right about the suit. I made a mistake with the colors and one which should be light is very dark and it looks bad. I'll fix it soon.
Thanks again!!

EDIT: Edited the sprite with a completely new hair, and edited the suit. Hope you like it better!
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i know what the problem is.
the head. it just doesn't fit.
or maybe you can use the ''desenfocar' or "Blur'' on photoshop
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