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Spoiler: Non-Request
Spoiler: Requests
I'm looking for some request to get work done.
I only take 3 request at a time.
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3.
I've quit, I don't care if you use them or edit them, but you probaly don't want to. Later.
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Good effort though. Maybe if move up that section of hair on his face and give him some forehead.
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I made a Older Phoenix, he doesn't have any wrinkles but you'll notice that he has a beard his suit looks a bit more shaded to attempt and show wear and his hair is a little more gray.
I'll do something more complex next, but here is a shorter hair Phoenix, he was a bitch to make.
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Kitisuimo wrote:
Hey! I made some new sprites!
I made a Older Phoenix, he doesn't have any wrinkles but you'll notice that he has a beard his suit looks a bit more shaded to attempt and show wear and his hair is a little more gray.
I'll do something more complex next, but here is a shorter hair Phoenix, he was a bitch to make.
I made a Older Phoenix, he doesn't have any wrinkles but you'll notice that he has a beard his suit looks a bit more shaded to attempt and show wear and his hair is a little more gray.
I'll do something more complex next, but here is a shorter hair Phoenix, he was a bitch to make.
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You. Have. Got. To. Be. KIDDING Me!!! The Short hair Phoenix was a bitch to make!? Are you serious!? Because All I would have to do to make something so SIMPLE is take the Eraser tool, Hold Shift, click the left mouse button and go up from the back of his neck!! Rinse and repeat with the front!! I mean my god! I don't even know how you can show something off like that and expect a serious compliment!
I'll keep it short and simple for the other sprites!
Hobo Phoenix needs a forehead!
I don't know how you screwed up Apollo's color scheme. Clap clap you erased his antenna.
And wow, you smeared black paint on Phoenix's chin and cheek, and spilled some on his suit.
I need an aspirin...
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For 1, I accidently freaking erased his neck, so I had to redraw it.
For 2, that old Phoenix is not even freaking done and I plan on probaly updating it tomaro.
Oh, and another update, I managed to update the HoboHodo sprite with a bit of a forehead, I can't go onto Imageshack cause Anti-Virus says it has adware, so, it will be some time.
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You don't need to be an ultra pro in order to have common sense. Did you REALLY look at what you did before you decided to show these off? Take your Phoenix with the... uh... facial hair... I could have made a couple of guesses as to what you did to him if you didn't say it was a beard. Here's what I would have thought that smear was if it wasn't a beard:
1. A Chin Strap.
2. A whacked out head set.
3. Black paint.
See, I would have been totally confused. It's laughable to think that you could call it a beard.
I don't care what kind of excuse you have for your snip and clip Phoenix. In my point of view, it's lazy editing. And if i see something lazy, I'm gonna tell you it's lazy. I mean c'mon! You even erased part of his ear. Did you even notice? There are some people on this board that I've had a few quips with, but even they put in effort in their work. This work, I can't even say one good thing. It has nothing to do with being good. I'm not even an... guh... an Ultra Pro. I still have a ways to go myself before I can even claim to be in the league of some of the best sprite artists. You need to really hunker down, download all the sprites you can, and study them. I mean it. LOOK at them! Examine every corner, zoom in on every color, Study them until you see dots. Hell, Look through out the entire board and see what they're doing! Even some of the beginners first sprites that were shown off were 10 times better then these... and I didn't care for them that much.
Oh and use Spell-check. I don't know my accidently from my tomaro. Were you trying to say tomato?
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Oh and use Spell-check. I don't know my accidently from my tomaro. Were you trying to say tomato?
Have you ever thought of taking up a career in comedy Silent? I cracked up laughing at that. Sorry Kitisuimo but use spell check next time.
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now then all of what I can suggest for you is take your time and start looking through sprites (whether it be official sprites or creations of others...just don't go editing other peoples stuff) and studying how there shaded and sized, play around with your tools until you understand what there capable of, experiment, maybe look at a bit of anatomy if your having trouble correctly making the body properly proportioned, ask for help if troubled (remember don't expect praise...if anything criticism is far better for you actually learn), finally keep working at it.
I hope this helps
and please...no more lazy edits
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and in the hatless hobo one you sorta killed most of his head.
I'm really sorry for commenting this way
but I am just trying to help you. Spriting isnt that easy...
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I also support Fransizka/Edgeworth, Mia/Diego and Apollo/Vera.
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1. He needs to get more of "Apollo's" forehead. Either that or resize Phoenix's hair from the old sprite.
2. This is simple, but fine, except for the fact that you cut out his right elbow.
3. The "beard" looks more like a piece of duct tape. You could have done better by just giving him stubble.
4. This looks like you just cut it straight off. You could try making the cut rounder.
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-You did a great job with Apollo!
-For older Phoenix, you could try making the beard look more real? You could also add wrinkles.
-For shorter hair Phoenix, put the back of the head back together, and try to make the back of the hair more realistic.
These sprites may need some work, but like they say: "Practice Makes Perfect!"
With practice, I definitely will see much improvement in these sprites! Keep up the good work!
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Jaron wrote:
Thanks for a nice comment, I got a updated Hodo, anti-virus say's Imageshack's got some adware, so yeah.
My RP banner thing actually has it in black and white
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How about photobucket?
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I drew some head my self, yeah more lazy editing
I know some of his neck is missing, I'm gunna try drawing that in as well.
And for the messed up colors.
Blame MS Paint.
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Jaron wrote:
Anti-Virus said it doesn't now, so I got the updated Hobo Nick up.
I drew some head my self, yeah more lazy editing
I know some of his neck is missing, I'm gunna try drawing that in as well.
And for the messed up colors.
Blame MS Paint.
I drew some head my self, yeah more lazy editing
I know some of his neck is missing, I'm gunna try drawing that in as well.
And for the messed up colors.
Blame MS Paint.
This took two minutes to and half of it was just getting the Hobo Phoenix and Normal ones from CR.
Spoiler: Incomplete though
See how I did mine? You should aim for something like that and do not use W7 MS Paint's auto-shading tool. It does bad stuff to sprites.
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Personally, I use Paint.NET (a free alternative to Photoshop) with the anti-alias tools off for spriting, that way I can also do sprites without the white backgrounds, but I don't know how well that would work out for you, to be honest.
Your actual spriting, though... that's another story. Jaron, I want to believe you're trying, man, but seriously... the way you're pulling it off could fool anyone. You show promise, that's for sure, but rushing through stuff to get faint praise is usually a recipe for creating complaints, and nobody wants that... you oughta look your work over a bit before you post it for quality control. That way you can check for things like Nick's neck being the same width as the spikes in his hair in your last post, or just ask someone else, a chat buddy, family member, or IRL friend who's over to visit, for a second opinion on what you can improve before calling it "done".
Your Bearded Nick, antennaeless Apollo and Hobo sans-hat have potential with a little bit of work; Apollo, even if it is a weak edit, would be a perfect job if it weren't for your discoloration, but I'd call for a "try again" on that fourth one. It's like everyone said, it looks like you just used the square-select tool to erase the back of Phoenix's head to get attention... the least you could've done was try to round it out a little for a more convincing effect. But hey, trial and error. We've all gotta learn somehow.
I look forward to seeing how you grow and improve from this, but until then...
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I'd say
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Corona!01 wrote:
Yeah, like Ptapcc said, if I could only give one suggestion to help you learn spriting it'd be five simple words: STOP. USING. MS. PAINT. 7.
blablabla
I look forward to seeing how you grow and improve from this, but until then...
blablabla
I look forward to seeing how you grow and improve from this, but until then...
Wow, You're an idiot.
There's nothing wrong with Paint, and don't try to tell people otherwise.
And nice job on that picture, always fun to give people the finger. :/
Don't be an ass.
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Ceres wrote:
Corona!01 wrote:
Yeah, like Ptapcc said, if I could only give one suggestion to help you learn spriting it'd be five simple words: STOP. USING. MS. PAINT. 7.
Wow, You're an idiot.
There's nothing wrong with Paint, and don't try to tell people otherwise.
You don't have to stop using Paint. After all, I use Paint for a majority of my sprites and only use GIMP or Jasc when I need to use a certain feature.
Just, disable that auto-shading feature. It makes your sprites bad.
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TBH, I actually do a large part of my spriting in MSPaint too, mostly due to the more familiar interface. I just use the classic version that came with pretty much every Windows OS pre-Vista since I haven't had a chance to upgrade from XP yet.
@ Ceres: Thanks. I deserved every bit of that kick in teeth. Sorry about that, I was just kinda surfin' in a bad mood earlier and got set off... mix that with a pic you're itching for an excuse to use and it's a recipe for disaster.
I did mean everything else I said in that post, though. That original Hobohodo pic, in spite of the lack of a forehead and discoloration, still looked pretty well-put-together. When I first saw it, it actually took me a few moments to notice what was wrong. If Jaron keeps at it with some practice and a little more focus on what he's doing, I'm convinced we could see some pretty amazing stuff from him.
EDIT: I'm actually kinda surprised after reading my last post again... it doesn't sound anything like me. Sorry about that, guys.
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Corona!01 wrote:
If Jaron keeps at it with some practice and a little more focus on what he's doing, I'm convinced we could see some pretty amazing stuff from him.
Thanks, due to some of these recent comments an stuff, I'll do some more work on my hatless HoboHodo
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I really can't say much else, besides advising you to take a look at the "How to make sprites" thread.
Good luck
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Jaron wrote:
A shorter hair Phoenix, he was a pain to make, I erased some of his back head and had to re-add it my self.
I know right? I tried to make this sprite myself, but obviously it was no where near as good as yours. It took me about 2.3 hours to line up the box juuuuuust right to click "cut" and remove not only his hair but also the back of his head and neck. No matter how many times I did it, I just couldn't make it as good as yours. Do you think some time you could take a break from your pro-art tour to teach me how you cut off phoenix's neck so well? It would really be a treat.
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Do you see the black one...or the white?
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I really couldn't tell if you were joking or not, but I did it anyway.
This is true lazy editing
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Jaron wrote:
A shorter hair Phoenix, he was a pain to make, I erased some of his back head and had to re-add it my self.
I know right? I tried to make this sprite myself, but obviously it was no where near as good as yours. It took me about 2.3 hours to line up the box juuuuuust right to click "cut" and remove not only his hair but also the back of his head and neck. No matter how many times I did it, I just couldn't make it as good as yours. Do you think some time you could take a break from your pro-art tour to teach me how you cut off phoenix's neck so well? It would really be a treat.
Your loving fan, Balrog.
Ah yes, classic sarcasim, I wasn't gunna double post, so I just edited this in!
I don't know why, but I think I need to stop posting my practise sprites
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Jaron wrote:
I really couldn't tell if you were joking or not, but I did it anyway.
This is true lazy editing
This is quite possibly your best work since that Apollo edit.
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Corona!01 wrote:
Jaron wrote:
I really couldn't tell if you were joking or not, but I did it anyway.
This is true lazy editing
This is quite possibly your best work since that Apollo edit.
I know!
It was so hard to press the eraser button, erase the head, then click on the brush, draw it across with the color red. Then use Edgey's hair color to feel free and make a crap beard
I feel so proud of my self!
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Corona!01 wrote:
This is quite possibly your best work since that Apollo edit.
Seconded. Unfortunately, you definitely need to take a look at the How to make sprites guide. We need to see some serious changes around here.
Also as amusing as the edit is, I don't believe red scribble was apart of the aforementioned criteria.
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Anyway, I hope we can put all this behind us, because I really do admire your mastery of the art of spriting and I hope that you will reconsider my offer to meet up for a one on one lesson sometime. As a peace offering I made this short-haired Mia sprite, it took many hours of hard work so I hope you like it.
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Yeah, well maybe if I wasn't so much better than everyone else, I wouldn't have to talk about it so much.
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Balrog wrote:
After re-reading my post, I see how you may have mistaken it for sarcasm which I can assure you it is not. I must have an odd ascent because all of my friends mistake my admiration for sarcasm as well; unless I actually intend to be sarcastic in which case, they think I am being sincere. In fact just the other day I was talking to a friend of mine who asked if the dress she was wearing made her look fat, and I sarcastically told her that she was always fat. I said it sarcastically to make her feel better, because she weighs about 350 pounds. I didn't get the reaction I was expecting though, instead of her smiling and thanking me for the sarcasm, she instead punched me in the gut and then proceeded to stomp on me, which no doubt hurt much more then it would if it had been someone of normal weight. No need to worry about me though, because I am fine but she was arrested and had to spend the night in jail.
Anyway, I hope we can put all this behind us, because I really do admire your mastery of the art of spriting and I hope that you will reconsider my offer to meet up for a one on one lesson sometime. As a peace offering I made this short-haired Mia sprite, it took many hours of hard work so I hope you like it.
Anyway, I hope we can put all this behind us, because I really do admire your mastery of the art of spriting and I hope that you will reconsider my offer to meet up for a one on one lesson sometime. As a peace offering I made this short-haired Mia sprite, it took many hours of hard work so I hope you like it.
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I shouldn't be laughing but the sprite was hilarious. And please refrain from triple posting and goading Jaron (Kitisuimo).
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tha's awesome, how did you made the boobs? they're so detailed.btw, awesome haircut, i'll cut my hair like that.
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I really like his sprites.
And I mean Really.
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ChocolateXCheese wrote:
Nice... you guys scared him away. You could've at least softened up the critisism and made it CONSTRUCTIVE critisism. I know, the sprites weren't very good, but no need to be so mean about it.... How would you feel if I came to your topic and was like "THIS SHIT IS CRAP! D=<" Seriously, that's not right.
We told him the truth and gave him advice. It was up to him whether or not to take the constructive criticism and apply it to his work. Bottom line: His sprites sucked. There's no need to defend someone who can't listen to others when they are trying to give help.
And shit IS crap... Duh!
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