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Rose Remina:
Description: Rose Remina is a 16-year-old girl who goes to a well renowned, famous college. She's an outcast and isn't very popular. She has an unknown ability to randomly have predictions on the future; she still hasn't figured out her power.
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Right now, she's about 99% custom (only the nose and mouth aren't). I still need to fix a few things, but I posted this up as a small preview.
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"She has an unknown ability to randomly have predictions on the future"
Reminds me of a sitcom I watched a few years ago... "That's so Raven"? But still good. I like the work you're doing!
But in all honesty, META humour sucks.
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Never seen "That's so Raven", but, I guess the future prediction is more or less something to make things more interesting and make her more unique since her design is supposed to be purposely bland when compared to the rest (when I make them). :P
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http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/mayaphoenix-sprites-t19769.html#p1109987
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Nice otherwise though.
see how it withers before my flower of justice
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Thanks!!
Nice otherwise though.
Yeah, I was first spriting her as you said, leaning a tiny, tiny bit to the side to make her more unique, but then at the last minute I changed it. I do know of the problem and thanks!
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next thing i can point out is the jagged lines which could use some smoothing out speaking of which her skirt could use some work...are the lines the creases or just a pattern on the skirt?
if there creases they needs to be worked on quite a bit if there a pattern you just need to work on smoothing and straightening them out a bit.
her left arm, body and skirt seem to be positioned oddly on her left side when compared to her right take the skirt while her right goes out quite a bit, her left is far to much inward.
anyways again its a good start so keep at it
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There still exists no male in his likeness.
...Hopefully someday... xD
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I think it could be an edit of Maya, but I can easily be wrong here.
Anyways; Me likey.
EDIT:
@Nyuugen
- ...You do realize that it's easy to just draw on Mayas body? :P
Last edited by Zinle on Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I'm workin' on it.
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Your first sprite? That's amazing!
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...Heck, for an experienced artist this is amazing.
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