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mmh ?

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Hi everyone !

I'm a French spriter and here are you can see my works :ashley:

The sprites:
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Here my first Character that I'll rework:

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Name: ???(FR)/???(EN)/Momo Asaguroi (means "Black peach")(JP)
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[color=#FFFFFF]Name:Aghate précieux(FR)/Diamond Spark(EN)/Hikari Shôgyoku(JP) (means "sparkle precious stone"or"Sparkle jewel)

Age: 15 (in the case where she's the defendant, like her best friend, Jenny)

Occupation: schoolgirl (but she studies Paint and sculpture)
Physical Description: A short woman,who has blond hair and wears a Red sweat (sometimes she wears an apron)

Personality Description: An hopeful girl,She's very collected even when she is in trouble (or when she's lying).

Connection to canon characters: Jenny shadoh is her best friend.


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[color=#FFFFFF]Name: Not yet...

No update yet, i'm too lazy to finish it now


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Misc:

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Young Badd:
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Not finished yet too :knock-knock:

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Re: My WorksTopic%20Title
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Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

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Wow, i think she's great! (I mean the sprite). I especially like how you did the hair.
These are really good and you made them from scratch i take it?

Keep up the good work, you're really good at spriting!

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...Hopefully someday... xD

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If I could get a penny...or dollar...whenever I read something like:
- My work isn't good, I'm horrible, etc.

'Cause it's pretty good.
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I won't lie, it's not the apex of awesome, but I also think everyone can improve. You have a lot of talent and potential, kid, and I really like what you did there. I also like the creativity used with the little mouse.

...hope babelfish likes me today...

I won' ; mensonge de t, it' ; s pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais moi pensent également que chacun peut s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de talent et le potentiel, l'enfant, et moi aiment vraiment ce que vous avez fait là. J'aime également la créativité utilisée avec la petite souris.
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...The fuck?

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It's horrible my foot. For a first sprite, it's awesome! It looks like you free drew everything and still made it look good. Thats something I could never accomplish!

I'm hoping to see more! :kyouya:
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That's not a Mouse but a Borginian Tiger :will:

I forgot to say what is the name of my characters, The girl's name is "Jenny Shadoh" (it's my friend who decided to call her like this), and the small tiger is called "Biscuit".
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French wrote:
That's not a Mouse but a Borginian Tiger :will:

I forgot to say what is the name of my characters, The girl's name is "Jenny Shadoh" (it's my friend who decided to call her like this), and the small tiger is called "Biscuit".


SO ZETTA CUTE! :minuki: :maya: :pearl: :shoe:
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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"Biscuit"?
*dies laughing and is happy*
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Awh Biscuit
Thats cute.
It looks really good for a first sprite.
I wish I could do scratch work XD

I only know how to order food, and tell the date, and my age, and tell someone my name in French XD
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...The fuck?

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Biscuit.. Yum! :edgy:
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Bonjour! :godot:

They look really good for your first sprites. Are they completely made from scratch?

Biscuit! How cute!
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Yes, it's 100 % custom (it was hard to make that :draw: ).

And i'll add One more pose.
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Well I see your problem, and maybe I can give you a good suggestion:

Meat up those limbs! She looks skinny in some parts and spread too wide in others. Once you fix that, you'll be fine.
And remember to shade and highlight when necessary.

Good luck~ and your English is fine enough, you probably speak it better than most native speakers!
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Enter The Jaws Theme wrote:
Well I see your problem, and maybe I can give you a good suggestion:

Meat up those limbs! She looks skinny in some parts and spread too wide in others. Once you fix that, you'll be fine.
And remember to shade and highlight when necessary.

Good luck~ and your English is fine enough, you probably speak it better than most native speakers!


I supposed you talk about her arms, I think they are too thin :beef:
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Enter The Jaws Theme wrote:
and your English is fine enough, you probably speak it better than most native speakers!


Such a harsh truth nowadays.

Anyways, I can't wait to see the new sprites, French! ^^
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...The fuck?

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Hmmm.. Now that I think about it. It does look like what ETJT said. Shape that up, and she'll be better than ever!
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Update:

I reworked the arms of my Character and added Sad pose.

http://www.zimagez.com/zimage/spritesheetv2wz5.php#
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It's pretty good. However...

- The curve of the hair seems...unnatural.
- The lighting source is off. It's from above on the torso, but from below on the arm.
- Some of the borders between hair, torso, arm, etc. seem ill-defined at times.

Otherwise, you are improving quite well, and anticipate great things from you.
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Objection... Hold it!

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You should view the sprite like this, because some people can't see when they click the link.
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Sig and Avie created by awesome Vicki!!

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genodragon1 wrote:
I won't lie, it's not the apex of awesome, but I also think everyone can improve. You have a lot of talent and potential, kid, and I really like what you did there. I also like the creativity used with the little mouse.

...hope babelfish likes me today...

I won' ; mensonge de t, it' ; s pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais moi pensent également que chacun peut s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de talent et le potentiel, l'enfant, et moi aiment vraiment ce que vous avez fait là. J'aime également la créativité utilisée avec la petite souris.


I think this is what you mean:
'Je ne peux pas mentir; ce n'est pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais je pense tout le monde peuvent s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de le talent et le potentiel et j'aime vraiment que vous avez fait. J'aime aussi le créativité vous avez utilisé avec la petite souris.'

Lol, I am in French 3; I know nothing :payne: Honestly, I wasn't trying to show you up, genodragon; I just wanted to see how close I could come :oops: Anyway, disregard; I need my little time to prove I can do something somewhat correctly. Move along folks!

On a side note, those sprites look great, especially for being hand drawn! The only suggestion I have is that for the sprites with her left arm down, you might want to move it more closer to her body. Only a suggestion for an amateur sprite-artist. :payne:
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Caelestis wrote:
genodragon1 wrote:
I won't lie, it's not the apex of awesome, but I also think everyone can improve. You have a lot of talent and potential, kid, and I really like what you did there. I also like the creativity used with the little mouse.

...hope babelfish likes me today...

I won' ; mensonge de t, it' ; s pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais moi pensent également que chacun peut s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de talent et le potentiel, l'enfant, et moi aiment vraiment ce que vous avez fait là. J'aime également la créativité utilisée avec la petite souris.


I think this is what you mean:
'Je ne peux pas mentir; ce n'est pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais je pense tout le monde peuvent s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de le talent et le potentiel et j'aime vraiment que vous avez fait. J'aime aussi le créativité vous avez utilisé avec la petite souris.'

Lol, I am in French 3; I know nothing :payne: Honestly, I wasn't trying to show you up, genodragon; I just wanted to see how close I could come :oops: Anyway, disregard; I need my little time to prove I can do something somewhat correctly. Move along folks!

On a side note, those sprites look great, especially for being hand drawn! The only suggestion I have is that for the sprites with her left arm down, you might want to move it more closer to her body. Only a suggestion for an amateur sprite-artist. :payne:


Don't worry about it. I used a translator. Looking back, I have no idea what I said. :larry:
Oh, and you can call me Geno. :gant: It's shorter and lazier!

Oh, and danke, ksunwoo6. It takes forever to load the site.
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Hello everyone !

Here a new Character (i'll try to finish it soon)

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Name: French: Aghate précieux (Précieux means Precious, and Aghate is a reference to a precious stone)
English: I don't know


Enjoy !
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Looks good so far :godot:

Maybe her name should be Ruby Diamond?
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I made her face :franny:

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I hate Klaviema >_>

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The bottom of the nose appears to be missing...
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Fixed !

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Much better :godot:
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What do you think about it ? it look good enough ?
Yes, I know,it Need to be more shaded.

I tried to feat with the AJ style. :hobohodo:

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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Truly.
So far so good.
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Update ! :odoroki:
that's not finished yet !

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Update !

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It looks good! I like the sprite of her on the witness stand.

Your English is coming alone nicely, too. My mother has been in Canada for 16 years and can't speak as well as you are. :payne:
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Hi !

1/I added the background of Diamond Spark. :will:
2/I'm working on an unnamed character and on Shumi shinju.
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I'm back with a new character (and a Map)

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And the character:

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I'll finish these soon (not for now).

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So i'm back from the dead after 2 years (I think :knock-knock: ) of...hum...I don't have any reason (except that I was lazy).

And I only have this: Image

Enjoy, (or not).

More to coming...
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Like I said a long time ago, I've totally redone my first OC. And I tried to improve, but I don't know if it's really better :yuusaku:

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I will try finish soon the miniature version of the character,and after, add some poses.
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Comparing this version of your OC to the first one you really have improved much. I like the new version much better, and I still envy you for being able to draw free-handed sprites which look good :phoenix:
The mini char is lovely I'm waiting for the full sheet :edgy:
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Magic Monkey wrote:
Comparing this version of your OC to the first one you really have improved much. I like the new version much better, and I still envy you for being able to draw free-handed sprites which look good :phoenix:
The mini char is lovely I'm waiting for the full sheet :edgy:



Thanks ! :will:
But I think I must improve more for the hands, or maybe I'm just a bit too perfectionnist.
I will probably try to add some poses for my character, but I don't really have an idea yet :payne:
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That's nothing, but it's my first try to make an evidence: a package of chewing-gum :lana:
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So, this time, I decided to remake my first OC (again ?!), and I think this last version is much better.

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I'll fix up the fingers later (they were deformed by the resizing) :phoenix:
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