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Objection... Hold it!
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And the blinking pose is supposed to have three pose.
One, Eye wide open,
Two, Eye half open,
and threee, eye closed.
Also for Kristoph,
His glasses are unnatural.
Try looking at the original kristoph.
You'll figure out...
Except that, good... I guess.
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The glasses: You mean for the old sheet or the new one? They look much better to me in the new one...
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The glasses: You mean for the old sheet or the new one? They look much better to me in the new one...
Oh and i forgot one thing...
When you blink...
make it straighter and smoother..
Right now the blinking sprite looks like you just erase the eyes then pasted a half circle...
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Will fix it up later
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Maybe you can make you're older Pearl sheet next ???(suggestion just suggestion)
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- Love the jewel.
- The shirt seems to stand out in a bad way w/detail issues.
- His holding of the wand in the front pose seems awkward somehow...
- I like the addition of throwing the manilla folder!
- It's pretty obvious to see it's Apollo for the most part.
- Why is his hat tilted in court, but not out of court?
EDIT: Btw, how's Ami doing?
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And the hat tilt thing: .... ermmm.... You have too much attention to detail
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Yes, this is just a bump
EDIT: Forgot the white band thing. Gimme a sec...
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But now, I decided to get some advice on my new and improved edits, so Here we go...
Please comment! Constructive Criticism welcome
This is for Maya only xD
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I'm sure you don't need me to say anything about Maya's point.
You don't HAVE to have blinks.
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MY FIRST SLIGHTLY DECENT CUSTOM!!! WITH FULLBODY THING!!!
It's a WIP... Any suggestions?
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MY FIRST SLIGHTLY DECENT CUSTOM!!! WITH FULLBODY THING!!!
It's a WIP... Any suggestions?
...ok stay calm...dont nuke his work...
jk
ok...lets start with the eyes...anatomy suggests we have pupils and retnias (sorry if i didnt spell it right :P)...next the hair lookes odd because each looks like its actually spikes and the shading (if it were spikes) is off suggest if not spikes try to connect hair...next we have the neck it looks as if his neck makes a perfect 90 degree angle and the cloth look as if there grafted to the skin...the shirt under the vest looks as if it may need a button itself also needs abit more shading and finally the vest would probably ark at the bottem because no vests ever perfectly match up at the end.
sorry if i really hammered on the work youve made but i honestly feel these suggestions will help improve your work
edit:ow and also totally forgot...round the chin abit more
I'd say
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But personally I feel the only thing "useable" is the "shirt collar", The rest needs quite a bit of work to say the least.
Still, nice design, Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Edit: Missed Cold52 post there.
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I'll Work on it
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Like you wouldn't be hooked on this...
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Anyway, some stuff I have...
A pretty much complete revamped Phoenix sheet:
And more Young Apollo poses (I know they are just a reuse of his older one's head, there'll be some more unique ones soon.
And I've updated the scarred twins with half blinks and fixed side-turned heads.
Also, I'm turning off requests for a while, I'm getting a little overloaded...
Of course I wil finish anything I'm halfway through...
Could anyone who has requested and hasn't recieved it yet other than Geno and Lee Ji Hoon please remind me in the thread? I accidentally deleted a bunch of PMs
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Phoenix revamp makes me WANT to use him in a game.
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I don't usually post requests in here, but something's bugging me...
It's incomplete (Obviously)
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You had to put the... odd... rock in that banner, didn't you?
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I fail at drawing rocks
I'd say
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They're for case 1 of my fangame. Not really spoiler, but the victim has a face, and you can sort of see the "killer"(your defendant). Both appear in the intro to the case :mrgreen:
Also, I'm working on an older Edgey (don't say you didn't see it coming :P)
Comparison on the right.
I'll give him a nice cravat next, as well as revamping the shading and making him a little happier (He's no longer the grumpy edgey of GS1 -3)
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Anyway, Edgey looks like he's coming along nicely. Good luck with the Cravat.
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) But Edgey is going to have glasses or something too... Just to make him look different
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Simple, but someone might find a use for them...
No credit or permission required :mrgreen:
I might post an improvement on my custom prosecutor soon, too...
I'd say
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Perhaps something to incorporate into casemakers?
nice job.
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