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i think i sh** my pants
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I'm only going to use it for the profile picture, so is it ok?
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I'm only going to use it for the profile picture, so is it ok?
sure...i dont mind...just as i said before with it just credit me :P
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but i think its awsome
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No DSis in the courtroom please.
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I think the strap should have a little more shadow under neeth, where it like connects with the cloth and what not...
*Is confused about what I'm saying myself XD*
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Green: Add a bit longer arm on it, as make sure the elbow looks proportional with the Yellow Line.
Brown: With the fluffy ness of the clothes(Which rawks!)Perhaps just Shorten the "hang" just a bit with the yellow line.
Yellow: About how it should look.
Otherwise. I LOVE it! Fun style.^^
Perhaps I made the yellow line too long. >< Bah! It was only showing why it looks a bit odd from my eyes.
It doesn't need change. He might have it tilted more backward.^^ So it's all fine.
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This could be sensei appearentice in the next advance wars, eh?
I like it. It's pretty much A work (or like in here: 10. OR...If we are talking bout my school: 5...Soon 3)
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I agree with Vordox, but that tiny mistake is very hard to notice (I didn't notice it until vordox pointed it out) so other than that I really like it
and it's a really well done sprite 
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Green: Add a bit longer arm on it, as make sure the elbow looks proportional with the Yellow Line.
Brown: With the fluffy ness of the clothes(Which rawks!)Perhaps just Shorten the "hang" just a bit with the yellow line.
Yellow: About how it should look.
Otherwise. I LOVE it! Fun style.^^
Perhaps I made the yellow line too long. >< Bah! It was only showing why it looks a bit odd from my eyes.
It doesn't need change. He might have it tilted more backward.^^ So it's all fine.
I see...i want sure myself...but now i know :D
creating quality customs for my fangame is hard work...(hopefully someone will offer to help soon)
I'd say
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Just wondering, looks great nonetheless.
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Now presenting...
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Hair could need a bit more shading as well, especially the brighter color.
Otherwise, proportionally. It's good. :)
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Also, just for consideration, his hair lacks any real definition... it looks like its molded like that. Maybe adding some lines there would help?
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Also, just for consideration, his hair lacks any real definition... it looks like its molded like that. Maybe adding some lines there would help?
I know...ive always been terrible with shading hair...for that matter anything to do with hair
on a side note...anyone like my avitar
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The dancing Sakura petals; only in such grace do we see the beauty of the world.
Lovely wife PandaPrinzessin, charismatic sons Meenyman and Romeo, and talented daughters Reiji and sparkleranger78.
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XD My first reaction on his expression.
It looks good, Although the colour balance could be a bit better.
Godot's Younger brother? XD
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finally getting myself to work on lilly :D
Edit
well...its done...but even though it looks nice...something...seems off...but i cant see what it is
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Anyway XD
It looks nice, especially that weird, godot gummy scary awake dude XD
The prosecutor looks nice, but what Skele said about the hair is true.
Then the newest OC...
Hmm, I might be wrong, but her hair?
Like, I get her hairstyle, but it might be too much up, like too much puff?
I suck at trying to desribe what I mean XD
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the lines on Lilly's scarf and belt thing look a bit dark, but i can't really put in words how.
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and also...you can tell i was probably boerd...it started as a drawling...but...yea xD
maybe ill start a forum up with requests available :P
I'd say
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and also...you can tell i was probably boerd...it started as a drawling...but...yea xD
maybe ill start a forum up with requests available :P
Your Grammar is making my eyes bleed.
Euhm, sprite looks nice, nice details but perhaps she's a tad too short.
She looks like she was resized vertically , I can't explain it well, more like a "lack of neck".
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as for the grammer...sometimes i dont pay attention enough...my bad xD
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proportion!!!
She looks fat, because she has a small head.
You could::
make the body less fat-looking or whatever, and grow some neck,
or just modify the head and let her grow some neck.
either way, it'll make the sprite better.
Oh, and your detective reminds me of a certin Character in Naruto...
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try 4
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Unless it was meant to be like that. She looks like Lain, from "Serial Experiments Lain." Good anime, messed up though XD
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Howard Cartus...he still needs work i suppose D:
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He's extremely stretched and/or squashed
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He's extremely stretched and/or squashed
xD
yea...like i said...still alot of work to go on him...(and on a side not all the other characters as well) <explodes do to so much work>
...Hopefully someday... xD
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- Short body.
I guess it's easy to figure out by that ^^
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...Hopefully someday... xD
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(to put it bluntly...Peace?)
It's going better, though, and IS much better.
I hate Klaviema >_>
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but what do you think?
by the way ive updated his face since last time
Edit...new i forgot somthing...its not grey enough xD
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