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Then it needs to be less visible. The way it's sticking out right now it looks like the arm is going INTO his back rather than behind it.
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Tried working a bit more on his eyes, I think it looks better, any and all critiques are still welcome :)
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Tried working a bit more on his eyes, I think it looks better, any and all critiques are still welcome :)
well it looked better from the first try but what I saw there were a few areas that had slight problems...there as follows
Outline: it was lacking and I could tell because the sprite still seemed jagged.
Eye and that side of the face also suffered a bit due to the outline being jagged.
nose: while i was looking around I noticed how odd the nose was...almost looking like it bent a little too far...so I moved the front portion of the nose up a bit.
right eye: well the problem was simple but i don't know the proper words to use...I think it lacked some space for the right side of the right eye...I think that's it >_>;;;
also something I didn't edit...just an opinion...you should brighten out the hair a bit...as it is now its hard to see where shades change making it hard to edit.
anyways as always hope this helps perc.
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Well, since I made an executive decision on making Jacob Bordain Percei's assistant, I decided to give him a revamp for the game. I really am not sure how to feel about this one. I've worked hard on it, but I feel like it just doesn't look that great. His right arm was a pain in the ass too. So any and all critique is ENCOURAGED!
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It should probably go this way..
And maybe you could move the zipper a bit more to the left, so it'd fit in more with the jacket.
..Hope that kind of helps. D=
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Based on Edgeworth's AAI sprites, I created an entirely new set of bench sprites for everyone to use, no permission needed, credit is appreciated though. I'll put an addendum on later that shows the positioning and such.
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Well but it looks to much AAI style... or not. 
your other sprites are very good. 
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It's actually not AAI style, when put against a bench it looks perfectly sized and has the same amount of colors as Klavier.
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What kind of techniques did you used on revamped Edgey?
I'm curious, it looks perfect!
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The eyes look good to me.
but maybe it's just me. I don't know.
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The eyes look good to me.
but maybe it's just me. I don't know.
yes his bench sprite is a smaller version from AAI, but my I edit it like, well... as the "new Edgeworth" with the eyes from young edgeworth. I think the Old Edgeworth from the AA sheet is an fail with the eyes, cause, the young edgeworth become new eyes. but in the faceshot, you see the Eyes looking very similar
then i think the first version was a "fail" by the Original game, in AAI the eyes are fixed 
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I ALMOST FELL FROM MY CHAIR WHEN I SAW OLDER EDGEWORTH XDDD
i didnt know about these sprites existed until now..o-o
its funny how i also..edited mine with just a glass and a muddy coat...without the pony tail ofcourse...rofl..XD
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I ended up animating most of those Edgeworth animations, but I did come across some problems with some of the poses. I'll send them to you via PM later today.
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First the eyes seem a tad more curved on this then the original
and second though im sure you know the hair is off...I believe it has to do with how the hair line seems to completely curve from left to right rather then curve downward a tad before going back and around the other side.
just an opinion jood job either way...also on a side note like your new layout for your sprite page...really gotta try fixing mine up a bit some time.
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