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Re: Nudal's World of Sprites! (Update: Analiesse Grau WIP)Topic%20Title
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GantStare wrote:
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Coming up in January I think... Anyways, there is an announcement :phoenix:
Thanks, I'll be sure to follow your work :redd:


Thanks, always glad for a supporter:)

Hopefully I make it to the final round (you too, you're a pretty good spriter yourself)!

Although, there were some pretty good sprites last year...

Woohoo! Two pages!
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nudalman wrote:
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nudalman wrote:
Coming up in January I think... Anyways, there is an announcement :phoenix:
Thanks, I'll be sure to follow your work :redd:


Thanks, always glad for a supporter:)

Hopefully I make it to the final round (you too, you're a pretty good spriter yourself)!

Although, there were some pretty good sprites last year...

Woohoo! Two pages!


Haha, Thanks, but those sprites from last year should just push us harder to make a sprite of an Gyakuten Saiban game quality. Congrats on two pages!
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Okay, sorry, but I can not upload the new sprite like I promised, hockey fitness training was a lot longer than I thought it would be :(
Okay, to make up for it, I will upload a sprite that I'm still working on.
Only the head and arm will make the final cut:
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As you can tell, it's Analiesse in her aide mode! And in the final, there will be no background!

Also, if you haven't heard, I want to enter the OC contest. Which sprite should I enter? (I will make more poses, etc.)

First sprite to reach three votes wins! :)
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Your sprites are really nice and well made but there's a tiny problem I can see with Analiesse regarding the two poses you've made for her. I'll try to explain but it's hard. ><

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Basically, we can see how she's small in the first sprite however in the aide, she appears to grow by half a head! If we look at Ema who is a good example, we can see how in both sprites, they appear to be relatively the same size. Since I can't really explain with words, I made a quick pic. (Apologies for lack of transparency.)

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I hope this explains the point that I'm trying to get across. If not, well. ><


Other than this inconsistency, she's really good! You could do with a few more shades to make it tidy but she's quite nice at the moment. ^^
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She has a pretty tiny head in the front and side sprites..
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Tap wrote:
Your sprites are really nice and well made but there's a tiny problem I can see with Analiesse regarding the two poses you've made for her. I'll try to explain but it's hard. ><

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Basically, we can see how she's small in the first sprite however in the aide, she appears to grow by half a head! If we look at Ema who is a good example, we can see how in both sprites, they appear to be relatively the same size. Since I can't really explain with words, I made a quick pic. (Apologies for lack of transparency.)

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I hope this explains the point that I'm trying to get across. If not, well. ><


Other than this inconsistency, she's really good! You could do with a few more shades to make it tidy but she's quite nice at the moment. ^^


First of all, thanks you for the nice comments :)

Second, you and Looby are right, her head is tiny because she is a small person. But as you pointed out, she is way bigger in her aide sprite. That is the reason that the aide sprite is a literal pain in the butt. However, I will thankfully be completely redesigning her body after I noticed the same thing :P
So yes, I will be resizing and reshading the sprite. But, thankfully, I made the head the same size, which will save me a ton of trouble.

Yeah, proportions are not my forte.
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Edit: Oops, completely useless double post! :beef:
So far, the vote stands at:
Rudi: 1
Analiesse: 1
Veri: 0
Tarre: 0

Okay, my new sprite is finally done, but not animated yet. Here he is:
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I know he looks a little like Tarre, but they're in the same band, so their attitude and behaviors are the same...
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BumpUpdate

OK, first off, I would like to present this awesome banner made by PandaPrinzessin. All thanks goes to her :)
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And next, I uploaded my next character, Gui's friend Trommel. Any critique, please?
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Great Work on Devon, Only critique is to give him a slightly bigger head.
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GantStare wrote:
Great Work on Devon, Only critique is to give him a slightly bigger head.


Thanks :)

Which part of the head should be bigger?
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Bump Update!

Okay, not much of an update, I just wanted to show you guys something I'm currently working on. And no one (Except GantStare) commented on my new sprite yet.

Okay, the sprite I'm currently making is Andrew Flint, your mentor in my fan game. So I will present it to you with... A mediocre tutorial I'm working on! It's not even much of a tutorial, but it might be neat to see how I create some of my sprites. So here it is. Steps, 1-5, Part 1: The Body.

Spoiler: Here's half a tutorial?
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And I forgot to put, in step 4, I also erased his moobs XD

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By the power of my dark staff, may you let me perform the necromancy of this sprite page!Ancient Thread Revival!

Full Tutorial:
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Spoiler: Andrew Flint
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Criticism Please, not entirely pleased with how this guy came out.

Also since no one posts here anymore, says the desperate comment begger.
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Well, not bad and nice tut also. But I unfortunately have to criticize a bit :edgeworth: ...in my opinion the head is to small for the large body it looks a bit weird, also a smaller point is the hard shade contrast in the colors of the shirt and jacket well but maybe I'm just picky :larry:
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Yeah, I have to agree, not my best work :(

But thanks for the crit!
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A new sprite made for DCD's fangame... In other words, a sprite of me!

Spoiler: I seriously looked like this before my haircut, OK?
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For some reason, I always imagined you like the guy in your avvy. :P
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No, trust me, check the "Post your pics" thread if you want to see what I look like. He's just my favourite singer.
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Lol, I didn't say I didn't believe you. =D
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Oops, my bad :)
Let's bring this discussion back to sprites, shall we?
Any constructive criticism?
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I love Rudi's sprites, though I have to ask, why is he not wearing his glasses in his sad sprites?
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Thanks ^_^

Oh, I'm eventually going to make an animation where he takes off his glasses.

I'm probably gonna enter this guy in the sprite contest. Any crit?
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OK, I have a few updates. The first is "The Receptionist", a character for Don's fangame.

Spoiler: "The Receptionist"
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He's supposed to be a foul and unpleasant guy, so hopefully I captured the emotion.


Next, a slightly better version of my self-sprite. Here it is:
Spoiler: Nudal
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The last is a character edit for Zxblaze's fangame. My first edit ever, I actually had fun with this one. Oh, and before I forget, the gloves/arms are by BuddyFaith :)
Spoiler: Maggey Bryde?
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As you can tell, Maggey in a wedding dress. A very cheap wedding dress at that.
"Gumshoe, you could afford this wonderful dress, just for our wedding? Maybe my luck is beginning to turn!"


Also, I decided that I think I'm good enough to start taking requests now. So, the request info is in the first post!
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Wonderful work ;D

~ Nah, really. It's really good. No critism or anything :D
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You're awesome at spriting! I wish I was that good... :kasuma:
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I've tried to write this message for five minutes now, but I just can't...
I don't know why, but the receptionist makes me laugh silently so much that my stomach hurts by now.
Maybe it's 'cause of his moustache or something, I don't know...

Anyway...There's no flaws really in them,
so...

Edit: And yes, this too was a comliment,
no matter how akward it looks like.

...I...I'm not good with this kinda things... sigh... :uramidn:
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Mary Faraday wrote:
Wonderful work ;D

~ Nah, really. It's really good. No critism or anything :D


I wouldn't say I'm that good, but thanks :D

Megan-Chan wrote:
You're awesome at spriting! I wish I was that good... :kasuma:


Thanks a lot!

Zinle wrote:
I've tried to write this message for five minutes now, but I just can't...
I don't know why, but the receptionist makes me laugh silently so much that my stomach hurts by now.
Maybe it's 'cause of his moustache or something, I don't know...

Anyway...There's no flaws really in them,
so...


Umm, thanks I suppose...? :karma:
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nudalman wrote:
Mary Faraday wrote:
Wonderful work ;D

~ Nah, really. It's really good. No critism or anything :D


I wouldn't say I'm that good, but thanks :D


You're welcome, but I say, you are good. 'Kay? :D
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Zinle wrote:
Edit: And yes, this too was a comliment,
no matter how akward it looks like.

...I...I'm not good with this kinda things... sigh... :uramidn:


No offense Zinle, but you're losing me...xD
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...Gh...
*head on the desk*

Sprites: Good.

...Time to go to bed...I guess...It's nearly midnight over here and I've been up 36 hours straight...
...Meh...Maybe just few minutes playing Dragon Quest before going to bed...
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Zinle wrote:
...Gh...
*head on the desk*

Sprites: Good.


Thanks very much :D

Zinle wrote:
...Time to go to bed...I guess...It's nearly midnight over here and I've been up 36 hours straight...
...Meh...Maybe just few minutes playing Dragon Quest before going to bed...


Guilty xD


OK, I know I tried this before, but I keep having identidy crisisis. I decided I would enter Rudi in the OC contest, but then I started really liking "The Receptionist", and now I can't decide. Argh.

So once again, I'm asking you, benevolent citizens of CR. Who should I enter?

*Cue epic music*
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nudalman wrote:

OK, I know I tried this before, but I keep having identidy crisisis. I decided I would enter Rudi in the OC contest, but then I started really liking "The Receptionist", and now I can't decide. Argh.

So once again, I'm asking you, benevolent citizens of CR. Who should I enter?

*Cue epic music*


OC Contest is announced in March. Entries close in early June if I remember correctly. You still have quite a long time till the next contest so I wouldn't worry about it now. ^_^

I really like The Reception sprite. You definitely captured the foul emotion. :)
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Tap wrote:
nudalman wrote:

OK, I know I tried this before, but I keep having identidy crisisis. I decided I would enter Rudi in the OC contest, but then I started really liking "The Receptionist", and now I can't decide. Argh.

So once again, I'm asking you, benevolent citizens of CR. Who should I enter?

*Cue epic music*


OC Contest is announced in March. Entries close in early June if I remember correctly. You still have quite a long time till the next contest so I wouldn't worry about it now. ^_^

I really like The Reception sprite. You definitely captured the foul emotion. :)


Thanks :D

OK, my bad. I thought entries closed in January, and I know I've probably told some one that...

So never mind, I guess I still do have a lot of time. >.<
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Random Update:

Spoiler: Don't click if you want to retain your dignity. Period.
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"Swimming, anyone? (*Rapist Laugh*)
This was (obviously more of a joke edit xD
*Note* .:looby:.'s Cammy base was used.

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Waahh my eyesXD but somehow cool...just one thing add a neck than it's perfect in it's own special way :gant:
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Oooooh looby approves.

This made me laugh AND gave me a boner <3

I was wondering what you wanted to use the base for. I like XD
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Oh my god. I will never unsee that. NEVER. :beef:
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Thanks everyone! Always nice to hear even nicer comments :P

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His neck is covered by his beard, should I make it more obvious?
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His neck is covered by his beard, should I make it more obvious?


You should move the head up quite a bit because as you look at it now, if the beard wasn't there he'd definitely be a no-neck.
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Well, you said you accept critics, and even though I'm not a spriter [the work was too tedious for me] I used to hang with people that were very good at it. I'll pass what I know on :]
Spoiler: Rudi Grau
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Image- The hands, especially the left, look awkward. The left one looks unnatural, I think if you changed the thumb a bit it would look better. His eyes also look different in here than the other two.
Image- I don't know if it's because of the lack of glasses, but he looks stoned to me.

General opinion: Really nice. Character design isn't bad, though the left side of his suit has an awkward-looking line that if was done on purpose looks like it wasn't. The suit could use a bit of improvement around the chest, too.

Spoiler: Veri Distraught
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Hair and neck could use more shading, they look fake and inconsistent with the rest of the sprite. The dark lines on the jacket look distorted, as if it was shrunken down and not cleaned up properly. Also, the black outfit could use more contrast with base/shading. Mouth animation is smooth, but the blinking is eh. Knife and hands look good though. :]

Spoiler: Gui Tarre
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Cool design! This one looks fantastic but his head looks a little too small for his body. His eyes also look a little strange, but I can't pinpoint what exactly.

Spoiler: Devon Trommel
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This one looks great too, especially the hair. Might want to touch up the design and make it a bit more "standout" though because otherwise it makes your bases more obvious.

Spoiler: Andrew Flint
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Same problem as above, head is too small for the body. I really like this design though.

Spoiler: Me!
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Aww you're not a noodle :c my hopes have been shattered. XD

Looks pretty plain but unlike your previous plain design, your bases aren't so obvious, so nice work there. Top could use more shading, as could the hair. Right arm looks thinner than left.

Spoiler: "The Receptionist"
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Hahaha! Great design! Spriting looks great too, though the shading colour for the suit looks like it contrasts too much - try picking a lighter yellow.

Spoiler: Maggey Bryde?
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CREATIVE IDEA. I'd like to see some other characters like this, too! Where the right arm connects to the body looks off though, and the dress could use more shading to make it look more natural, especially around the chest.


Great stuff! If I had anything to request I'd do so, but not at the moment. :]
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