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Re: Justin Liberty's Sprites (GS5 Sprites)

Fri Aug 01, 2014 8:07 pm

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You could do what I did and get an older version. It's much more worth it than learning a whole new program.

Re: Justin Liberty's Sprites (GS5 Sprites)

Sat Aug 02, 2014 10:09 pm

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Teenie-Tiny Update

Spoiler: Prosecutor in the works

Spoiler: Rework of Justin Liberty

I have been thinking of fully re-working my Sprite Gallery for quite some time, and since i have a good few weeks of absolutely nothing ahead of me, i've decided now is better than ever, so i will be recreating all my character's base sprite and will need your opinions as to whether they are good or not, i have posted my unfinished re-work of Justin Liberty to give you an idea. When i started making OCs i was pretty bad at making sprites :yogi:

(look to my Case 1 and Case 2 sprites for a point of reference) but now i have a basic understanding as to what it takes to make a half-decent OC (check my Case 3 character) So expect somewhat frequent updates :phoenix:

Re: Justin Liberty's Sprites (GS5 Sprites)

Sat Aug 02, 2014 10:38 pm

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JustinLiberty wrote:

Teenie-Tiny Update

Spoiler: Prosecutor in the works

It's a nice concept, and it uses Edgey with a nice combination and some good customization. However, from what it looks like from the sprite, his arm/sleeve seems to shrink. Since that'll probably be on the desk, it's no big deal.

Also, the brightest color on his shirt is a bit TOO bright, perhaps push it down a few tones?

JustinLiberty wrote:

Spoiler: Rework of Justin Liberty

Justin screeches of customization, being a fairly original looking OC Sprite (That's a good thing of course, congrats!)

One problem is that the shading on his hair seems really off, it doesn't match up with his suit's shading. I'd also suggest a midtone for his hair, along with a darker outline for the hair (I'm having trouble seeing if there is one.)

Nonetheless, good sprites that definitely show potential! Keep on trucking!

Re: Justin Liberty's Sprites (GS5 Sprites)

Sat Aug 02, 2014 11:18 pm

JustinLiberty

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Detective Equius wrote:

JustinLiberty wrote:

Teenie-Tiny Update

Spoiler: Prosecutor in the works

It's a nice concept, and it uses Edgey with a nice combination and some good customization. However, from what it looks like from the sprite, his arm/sleeve seems to shrink. Since that'll probably be on the desk, it's no big deal.

Also, the brightest color on his shirt is a bit TOO bright, perhaps push it down a few tones?

JustinLiberty wrote:

Spoiler: Rework of Justin Liberty

Justin screeches of customization, being a fairly original looking OC Sprite (That's a good thing of course, congrats!)

One problem is that the shading on his hair seems really off, it doesn't match up with his suit's shading. I'd also suggest a midtone for his hair, along with a darker outline for the hair (I'm having trouble seeing if there is one.)

Nonetheless, good sprites that definitely show potential! Keep on trucking!

Thanks for the feedback as well as all constructive criticism you've sent in the past, I really appreciate it!

About the prosecutor's suit, yeah i see it now, i'll need to tone it down and make his arm more slender at the top, thank you for the insight! :edgey:

Re: Justin Liberty's Sprites (GS5 Sprites)

Sat Aug 02, 2014 11:34 pm

JustinLiberty

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Detective Equius wrote:

JustinLiberty wrote:

Teenie-Tiny Update

Spoiler: Prosecutor in the works

It's a nice concept, and it uses Edgey with a nice combination and some good customization. However, from what it looks like from the sprite, his arm/sleeve seems to shrink. Since that'll probably be on the desk, it's no big deal.

Also, the brightest color on his shirt is a bit TOO bright, perhaps push it down a few tones?

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Did i do it?