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Re: ATTN Great Spriters 2/18/09 Geno+Victoria (poses?), KRISTINETopic%20Title

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Smiley looks weird when he moves the hand.
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MrCheeze wrote:
Smiley looks weird when he moves the hand.


It looks okay to me. I like that coin flip thing with the sprite btw.

And I have for you a new pose:
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Got a new pose for Flash:

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It's a normal pose.
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Well happy unbirthday to me!

Lemme start responding to the awesome.

Bazzoka wrote:
Hmm... it seems I've forgotten the sleeve as well. Guess I'll fix it up quick.

EDIT:
"Fix it up quick" I say. That took a bit too long just to add in a small sleeve |V

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Cold52 wrote:
well i just made this very simple edit upon yours :P
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edit: whoops xD totallt fogot the sleeve

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You. Guys. Are. Awesome! I positively LOVE these sprites.

Cold52 wrote:
well aint i having fun xD

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I'm TOTALLY adding this to Ace Attorney Online Mafia's emoticon section. If anyone feels like making emoticons for the rest of my characters, they can and will be added to the site. ^__^

foxxis wrote:
MrCheeze wrote:
Smiley looks weird when he moves the hand.


It looks okay to me. I like that coin flip thing with the sprite btw.

And I have for you a new pose:
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I really like this pose a lot as well! It really captures a cool, calm, yet better-watch-out-before-you-get-a-groin-kick attitude. And the squint is a very nice touch. Very good work!

RandomJibberish wrote:
Got a new pose for Flash:

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It's a normal pose.


*Shakes fist* If only Ace Attorney Online Mafia: The Tenniversary Round were still going, I'd have used this. =(

Ah well. It's a really nice job, and I really like how he is turning out (since he is a rather flat teddy bear, it makes for interesting poses, considering a.) the other AA characters are human and b.) actually have a physical depth).
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XD, I'm sorry I am being so slow :P

Next game you GM, maybe :godot:
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Sorry for the lack of updates. Here's some pose ideas for Det. Simons:

***WARNING*** Theater blocking terms about to be used.

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- At 1/4 Right, his arms crossed, his head tilted down a little, his eyes closed. The expression should be of that of someone in deep thought.
- Full front, facepalming, his mouth not obscured so we can see him talking. Whether or not we can see his eyes is optional, but we should be able to see enough of his face to see the stressed expression.
- At profile, head turned towards the audience, pointing his lucky magnifying glass at the audience like one would hold a knife.
- His arms akimbo, facing full front, his head tilted back, a huge, smug grin on his face.
- His lips are pursed, facing full front, his body visibly tense, and he tugs on his cape thingy with both hands, his right hand grabbing the left side, his left hand grabbing the right side.

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Quote:
- At 1/4 Right, his arms crossed, his head tilted down a little, his eyes closed. The expression should be of that of someone in deep thought.


Eheheh, I hope this is at 1/4 right? Not too good with visualizing math.
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I'm a bit confused about "At profile, head turned towards the audience."
If it's a profile shot, then the head can't be turned towards something, right?

What would that head draft I posted last time fit into?
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sasaee wrote:
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- At 1/4 Right, his arms crossed, his head tilted down a little, his eyes closed. The expression should be of that of someone in deep thought.


Eheheh, I hope this is at 1/4 right? Not too good with visualizing math.
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I'm a bit confused about "At profile, head turned towards the audience."
If it's a profile shot, then the head can't be turned towards something, right?

What would that head draft I posted last time fit into?


Wonderful sprite! Exactly as thought! However, the angle that the arms are crossed seems weird, and seems a little 2-D...other than that, wonderful!

As for "profile", I'll use Maya as an example:

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Notice how her body's turned to the side. This is what, in stage terms, is called profile. There's profile left (the audience's right) and profile right (to the audience's left).
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This is just a reminder that I'll be sending reminder PM's soon. Things have been rather slow... TT___TT
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Ah, sorry, I forgot I'd finished another pose already and hadn't uploaded it :godot:

Link as it doesn't loop.
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RandomJibberish wrote:
Ah, sorry, I forgot I'd finished another pose already and hadn't uploaded it :godot:

Link as it doesn't loop.


Pretty good, but...

The shocked description actually refers to:

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(Posting this for my convenience)
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Normal poses:
- Normal front pose talking: Arms are akimbo. Nothing more special than that.
- Shock: Mouth goes wide ("WHAAAAAAAAT!?!?!?!?" kinda motion), movement similar to Maya's shock animation.
- Wha?: The first pose you did, but talking.
- Angry: Bent over, arms crossed.
- Sad: Gaze averted to the left, slightly slumped forward.
- Happy: Arms crossed, a grin on his face.
- Mischievous: Rubbing the nubs of his arms together, a look on his face as if a huge heist is aboot to commence.
NEW: - Something's up!: ...what you just drew...

Co-Council poses:
- Head turned to the attorney, body facing the desk.
- Both nubs on the desk, Flash looking offscreen left.
- Head is on the desk, the nubs on the back of his head.

Re: ATTN Great Spriters 2/18/09 Geno (poses?), KRISTINETopic%20Title

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Hi Geno. I'm working on an Kristine, if you're ok with that. I've made a bit of progress, if you'd like to take a look.
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Psyche Lock wrote:
Hi Geno. I'm working on an Kristine, if you're ok with that. I've made a bit of progress, if you'd like to take a look.


Hm...the hair is good, but I'm trying to have my sprites as original as possible, and if sprites are used for reference, I don't want it easily recognizable.

But it is definitely a good start. ^_^
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genodragon1 wrote:
Hm...the hair is good, but I'm trying to have my sprites as original as possible, and if sprites are used for reference, I don't want it easily recognizable.

But it is definitely a good start. ^_^


Thank you. And don't worry, its still got a lot of editing to go through. :)
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Hey. I'll make you some sprites. I dont care which, i just want a challenge. :godot:
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Henham wrote:
Hey. I'll make you some sprites. I dont care which, i just want a challenge. :godot:


Alright, let me give you a test:

Make the profile pic for Bee Spellings. She has no previous sprites, and has only a description.

Bee Spellings:
Age: 48
Appearance: Big glasses, dreadlocks in a ponytail, brunette (graying), frail, simplistic dress.
Bio: Wife of Myst Spellings. Killed in first case.


And please, please, PLEASE do not use previous attempts at Bee Spellings that have been posted on here as a resource, it was not what was imagined when the character was created.

EDIT: Oh, and please make the sprite up to Apollo Justice standards of spriting or higher.
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genodragon1 wrote:
Henham wrote:
Hey. I'll make you some sprites. I dont care which, i just want a challenge. :godot:


Alright, let me give you a test:

Make the profile pic for Bee Spellings. She has no previous sprites, and has only a description.

Bee Spellings:
Age: 48
Appearance: Big glasses, dreadlocks in a ponytail, brunette (graying), frail, simplistic dress.
Bio: Wife of Myst Spellings. Killed in first case.


And please, please, PLEASE do not use previous attempts at Bee Spellings that have been posted on here as a resource, it was not what was imagined when the character was created.

EDIT: Oh, and please make the sprite up to Apollo Justice standards of spriting or higher.



Ok, so now for the finer details:
-Do you want the glasses blocked out or transparent
-Which direction should the ponytail be facing
-How much grey do you want in her hair
-What colour dress
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Henham wrote:
genodragon1 wrote:
Henham wrote:
Hey. I'll make you some sprites. I dont care which, i just want a challenge. :godot:


Alright, let me give you a test:

Make the profile pic for Bee Spellings. She has no previous sprites, and has only a description.

Bee Spellings:
Age: 48
Appearance: Big glasses, dreadlocks in a ponytail, brunette (graying), frail, simplistic dress.
Bio: Wife of Myst Spellings. Killed in first case.


And please, please, PLEASE do not use previous attempts at Bee Spellings that have been posted on here as a resource, it was not what was imagined when the character was created.

EDIT: Oh, and please make the sprite up to Apollo Justice standards of spriting or higher.



Ok, so now for the finer details:
-Do you want the glasses blocked out or transparent
-Which direction should the ponytail be facing
-How much grey do you want in her hair
-What colour dress


In that order:

- Transparent.
- It's a regular ponytail (except with dreadlocks).
- It should show signs of graying, but not completely so.
- Something with a pattern of daisies.
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New pose :D
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Does everything look okay? I've been looking at the sprite too much so I dunno how it looks to everyone else. :meekins:
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foxxis wrote:
New pose :D
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Does everything look okay? I've been looking at the sprite too much so I dunno how it looks to everyone else. :meekins:



YAY! I really really love this sprite, mostly because Victoria has to be one of the lovable characters in AA history. If I could do it, I'd make a plushie of her!

Anyway, keep up the good work! I can't wait to see the rest. =3
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If you look at it wrong, it looks like a grimace.
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Sorry for the delay, is this any better?

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I made the arms more horizontal and added more shadows at the bottom so it looks like the arm is pushing out the cape.

Thanks for the clarification on "at profile," i though you meant profile like in photography.
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sasaee wrote:
Sorry for the delay, is this any better?

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I made the arms more horizontal and added more shadows at the bottom so it looks like the arm is pushing out the cape.

Thanks for the clarification on "at profile," i though you meant profile like in photography.


Sasaee...

You are very, very awesome. <3 Det. Simons with this pose! Keep up the good work!
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Update:

I've uploaded some of the songs, and I've changed Kristina's name to Katherine.
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I was wondering if you wanted any more spriters because I would love to help on this project. I'm pretty good with male sprites but I would be willing to do female sprites if needed.
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Darklord Qwerven wrote:
I was wondering if you wanted any more spriters because I would love to help on this project. I'm pretty good with male sprites but I would be willing to do female sprites if needed.


Hm...if you feel like you can keep it up to the standard of other finished products, then welcome aboard. Which do you want to work with? Ami? Katherine? Mia Fey?
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I think I would like to try Katherine.
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Darklord Qwerven wrote:
I think I would like to try Katherine.


Then go ahead. I cannot wait to see what you can do.
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Detective guy's arms still look flat... Try adding perspective (as in, the elbow ends of the arms closer than hand ends)
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Since I am already working on Ami(almost finished!), can I take something else? :)
Sad to say, I've left C-R. I may still occasionally come on, but, y'know...
I just lost interest, but, this is still an awesome site.
I'll live on through my sprites, I hope. And my major contributions to the Max fanclub. ^_^
Bye ;_; ^_^
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Miss Tetra wrote:
Since I am already working on Ami(almost finished!), can I take something else? :)


Please finish what you are already doing before continuing to something else. Multitasking can be hard.
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Its not nearly finished, but I was wondering if this is a good basic shape and good shading on the head.

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Darklord Qwerven wrote:
Its not nearly finished, but I was wondering if this is a good basic shape and good shading on the head.

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If anyone else has helpful critiques, please say so, since, any positive contribution is a good one.

Anyway, few notes from another fellow spriter and I, which will only be on the head (obviously, the body needs tons and tons of work):

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- Her eyes are rather uneven.

- Her hair seems to have a bump that makes it look like she has a lump on her head.

- Use more colors for shading, to make it more GS4-ish.

- A quote from a fellow spriter (i.e. not me): "Then study study study other sprites, and their shading and face structure, and it will be great."

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What Geno said, and also it's really tiny. Put her on a background and see :godot:
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Have I posted this yet? No? I should post things when I make them, this is from a week ago XD.

I improved the shock animation how you said:

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Ooh, a real drumroll. Nice.

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Jibs, you might want to try foreshortening the arms a bit.
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Hahex wrote:
Jibs, you might want to try foreshortening the arms a bit.


I concur. Otherwise, I love it.
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Where is the arm foreshortening needed? I can't see where you mean.
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Ooh, a real drumroll. Nice.

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He needs foresohrtening around when his arms go in a sort of 'w' shape.
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It looks fine to me....
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