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I like how you're doing a 'younger' version of her XD
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I like how you're doing a 'younger' version of her XD
Thanks! .:looby:. I hate you for making me google search that. lol
*UPDATE*
TADA! I used Ini's mouth as a base, and I didn't put the mole because it is on the other side of her face. I also added the correct amount of tentacles.
Thanks for the criticism! More please!
Looks great! The only I can say to make it look more like her is add her eyeshadow, othere than that, it's great!
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But she looks AMAZING! I can tell you put a lot of effort into that sprite so good on you, and it really shines through. This is your best sprite yet
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Ahaha sorry.
That Ursula sprite is FABULOUS.
Because my eyes are always drawn to tits though, I noticed they look a bit off. I can't quite put my finger on it, I think it's the dress.
Also the back of the hair looks a little unfinished.
But like I said, fabulous!
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Daryalita!
D'aww :3
But she looks like.. sad?
Good work! Oh, have I say this?
You are so good. I'm officially stalked your thread now!
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Oh, yes, indeed :D
YOU'RE WELCOME!
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Oh, yes, indeed :D
YOU'RE WELCOME!
LETS BE STALKER BUDDIES!!
AGREED!
EDIT:
Ohh.. Ffffffffffffffff..
That is AWESOME! Really! *dies of laughter* XD
Stalker buddy - that sprite changes my day (: - Actually, I'm more for Klavier, but hey.. That is EPIC!
Good work! And also the young Engarde..
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Gaah... That's so hot. Well, I think, he's just looks very pretty in pink.Since I love the pairing AxK, this 'pink-thing' is normal for me..
Good work! And thanks !
EDIT: Oh crap.. I can't see the sprite after I posting my reply. D:
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I recoulored the suit, rid him of some wrinkles, and changed the face. And yes, you are correct, it was before the scars.(The old suits colours were so.... dull.)
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@Mary Thanks!
Check Em OUT!
Ahh, I see, it looks good. Daryan likes hugging people, epic.
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I love how Pearl, Machi and Vera's faces are terrified! I love your Reg. Jean/ Norm. Jean! I can't believe how many differences there are...
I love your sprites, Clam!
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Thanks Buddy! More people need to be good commenters and regular criticizers like you *EH HEM*!
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And my OC's Damage Sprite
They're very good, her damage sprite is well done.
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I too. It's so.. hmm.. hot?
By the way, I love ur set, Meg (:
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Might as well give some criticism...
Also, please don't take me as rude.
Well the thing is, these are all nice edits. Cleanly done, I can't find any problems, and that's the thing: Personally, I think you have to push yourself harder as a spriter. You definitely have potential, but you're not using it the right way ('cept for the Ursula sprite, that's one was more challenging) I think that you should move away from the copy and pasting stage, to do something more difficult. Then I'd be impressed. Maybe try to create a new outfit for Ema, or something like that. Like I said, then I'd be impressed.
And 'bout your OCs, they're not original enough. For example, that Morgan one. It looks exactly like Morgan, just with a different face. Maybe try and set goals for yourself. Maybe you can take 5 random sprites, and using only those sprites, try to create an OC. It takes a certain amount of skill to seamlessly blend a lot of sprites into one that looks original. Ceres is a master at this. Quoting myself again, then I'd be impressed.
Well anyways, that's just my opinion, and you can disregard it if you want, but other than that, nice sprites! ^^
Hopefully you can take my crit and create something even better than what you already create :)
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Sometime, what I try to do, (and it can be quite fun) is to take 5 - 10 random sprites, and see what I can make - especially difficult if you selected mixed genders.
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Charlette Nikoms
Charlette pending.
That's good, but her lips must be below.. I dunno, but it looks weird X'D
Anyway, great work at your sprites (and I love your OC.. Hurr, hurr..
), stalker-buddy. ;)
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...Hopefully someday... xD
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Her right cheek looks bit broken near the edge of the glasses.
Try editing the right lens to look like there's some skin next to her eye to fix it.
Her head looks a bit like...Well I don't know the right words for this, but unnatural.
Other than that it's great.
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The hair you took from Grey and put on Charlette needs the colour matching a bit more, you can tell it's just cut off another sprite and stuck on.
But that and your other OC are good Frankensprites.
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