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my first edit. hope its good. anyway i call it THE GOBOT9000 (robot+godot) :godot:

if i'm anygood at this i will take requests
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First, of all, before I say anything else, the background is huuuuggggeeeee!!! Trying cutting back on the background. Well, if you actually have a program that can do that. I'm sure Gimp will help. It's a program you can download off the 'net.

Second, there are a few pixels on Gobot9000's right arm that are white. I take it that they're supposed to be red?

Otherwise you're doing fine. But I think you should practice more before taking on any sort of request.
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I'd say

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Indeed, it's good for a first sprite, but try to hone your own skills first before taking requests, and try to save it the same as the original sprite's dimensions. (it's too big atm)
Other then that, pretty good so far.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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That is coog and pretty interesting.
And like the pal and gal already said:
Training makes champion.
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Ah, I believe Mr. Zinle means "Practice Makes Perfect", yes? ^_^;
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Why you little! XD
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Heh, I've kind of been waiting to do that. >___>;
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ok so things i need to fix are the background and the pixels on his arm. ok i will try to. :phoenix:
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ok. so i changed the following

1. thined out the outline
2. eliminated any white pixels
3.fixed the data on visor
4. added the litlle wire for fun :godot:

srry if its big
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Now it's more of a pixelated, stretched drawing than a sprite.
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The problem is the size, Herr Law.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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....Same too...
Other than that: I Still like it.
Just needs to small down a bit...
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^^Isn't that Olga as a Grammeraye, ORLY?

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Agreed size is the problem, maybe want to shade the visor a bit, only two colors at the moment
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lol well practice makes perfect i suppose

so now i need to bring the size down and give more thickness to the outline. oh and fix the colors of visor correct?
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^^Isn't that Olga as a Grammeraye, ORLY?

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I_LAW wrote:
lol well practice makes perfect i suppose

so now i need to bring the size down and give more thickness to the outline. oh and fix the colors of visor correct?

Color-wise a couple of variations of red and blue might shade it in ad give it more depth.
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Gramaorly? wrote:
I_LAW wrote:
lol well practice makes perfect i suppose

so now i need to bring the size down and give more thickness to the outline. oh and fix the colors of visor correct?

Color-wise a couple of variations of red and blue might shade it in ad give it more depth.

alright, i will have the sprite by tomorrow, srry you'll need to wait a while :yuusaku:
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