thanks geno...
ill start working on the in-court talking sprite next

edit: ok now i got court talking done



Also the sheet

Its OK, to me, the positioning's off, thats the kind of positioning and angle youd see from an aide bench sprite.

Also, like I said I'd do so long ago, I'll try my hand at Neal Holt.



Giving credit where credit is due, I combined Ceres' and Ike's faces for this one, then combined Kristoph's collar and jacket seam with Gant's.

thanks geno...
ill start working on the in-court talking sprite next

edit: ok now i got court talking done



Also the sheet

Geno, if I may be so bold as to comment?

I quite like how the visor looks in this one. However, upon further inspection, the red sleeve appears abnormally shorter than the black sleeve. More importantly, I believe the original design had long sleeves, but I like it either way, you should ask Geno about that.

I'm fond of the pose, especially how nice the vest looks from this angle, and the suites on them look perfect. But as had been previously stated, the pose fits a defense's bench aide better than that of a prosecutor. The face looks very nice, though. The arm with the black sleeve bothers me, because of the fact that if a person were trying to put their hand in their pocket, their elbow will go back farther than what has bee depicted in your drawing. Go ahead, stick your hand in your picket. Notice how far back your elbow goes.

If I may?


I was going to say some stuff, but it was simpler just to show you. XD

The palette is the biggest problem, I think. Most sprites have 15-40 colors; your spritesheet has 483.
Also, avoid using pure black (#000000), it makes copy and pasting the sprite hard. XD And it isn't used in the games.


I really like the way he's looking, though.

*lurks* I like the, the...uh...*waves hands around wildly, trying to explain* The new stuff.

Payne is coming along...if you want good news, plug your eyes...(I don't know why I said that? I was thinking plug your ears and shut your eyes at the same time...) because he's coming along badly. =) I only recently got the arm to look close to right...but it'll happen eventually. (If anybody wants to tell me how elbows look when they're reaching into, say, a pocket, I wouldn't mind, y'know.)

... My perfectionist nature protests.

But, against my will, I took a screenshot. I guess if necessary I can save it normally, but I'm notttt quite certain it deserves the extra space ><

Something about the arm just...irks me. Really badly. Or the arm in conjunction with the side or...I dunno.

yea...im abit of a perfectionist myself but ive set that aside because i know with help i can only get better and so can you

so heres what i think...I see one big problem...where you placed his back...his body looks too thin,small,ect. so I suggest spacing it out more it may help the arm also (I cant really see the full arm so...I cant really comment on it) thats the best advice ive got

I see...btw it could also be a result of having the arm stretched out to far

I'm sorry to bother all of the talented people here, (I've been lurking for a while, but never posted) but is this perhaps what you need for Payne? I just fiddled with the screenshot to iron out what looked iffy to me with the shoulder (ignore the random border)... I hope it at least might give you some ideas for a fix?

YO I DID THE VISOR!
As for the transparency, it looks kinda weird in the gifs.
I'll fix it!
Man whenever I get to see this thread at the library, I feel like I miss a lot T.T

I swear I'm doing stuff on him T.T
My computer at home just won't let me go on like half on the topics on the forum >.>
So I have to catch up when I'm at the library...
*sad*

Sorry for the double post, y'all, but I thought of the Flash sheet.

Well then!
Would you look at that...
Blinking.
Woo!




Gimme a sec on the court view...
I gotta re-transparent the thing...
T.T

ok so making an arm move is still pretty tough so that might take awile...but i did somthing so im adding it here i thought he may have a time to look serious so...