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Author:  French [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 2:55 pm ]
Post subject:  French's sprites workshop.
Hi everyone !

I'm a French spriter and here are you can see my works :ashley:

The sprites:
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Here my first Character that I'll rework:

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Name: ???(FR)/???(EN)/Momo Asaguroi (means "Black peach")(JP)
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[color=#FFFFFF]Name:Aghate précieux(FR)/Diamond Spark(EN)/Hikari Shôgyoku(JP) (means "sparkle precious stone"or"Sparkle jewel)

Age: 15 (in the case where she's the defendant, like her best friend, Jenny)

Occupation: schoolgirl (but she studies Paint and sculpture)
Physical Description: A short woman,who has blond hair and wears a Red sweat (sometimes she wears an apron)

Personality Description: An hopeful girl,She's very collected even when she is in trouble (or when she's lying).

Connection to canon characters: Jenny shadoh is her best friend.


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[color=#FFFFFF]Name: Not yet...

No update yet, i'm too lazy to finish it now


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Misc:

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Young Badd:
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Not finished yet too :knock-knock:
Author:  Missile. x [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:02 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Wow, i think she's great! (I mean the sprite). I especially like how you did the hair.
These are really good and you made them from scratch i take it?

Keep up the good work, you're really good at spriting!

:phoenix:
Author:  Zinle [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
If I could get a penny...or dollar...whenever I read something like:
- My work isn't good, I'm horrible, etc.

'Cause it's pretty good.
Author:  genodragon1 [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
I won't lie, it's not the apex of awesome, but I also think everyone can improve. You have a lot of talent and potential, kid, and I really like what you did there. I also like the creativity used with the little mouse.

...hope babelfish likes me today...

I won' ; mensonge de t, it' ; s pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais moi pensent également que chacun peut s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de talent et le potentiel, l'enfant, et moi aiment vraiment ce que vous avez fait là. J'aime également la créativité utilisée avec la petite souris.
Author:  Bletz [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
It's horrible my foot. For a first sprite, it's awesome! It looks like you free drew everything and still made it look good. Thats something I could never accomplish!

I'm hoping to see more! :kyouya:
Author:  French [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
That's not a Mouse but a Borginian Tiger :will:

I forgot to say what is the name of my characters, The girl's name is "Jenny Shadoh" (it's my friend who decided to call her like this), and the small tiger is called "Biscuit".
Author:  genodragon1 [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:28 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
French wrote:
That's not a Mouse but a Borginian Tiger :will:

I forgot to say what is the name of my characters, The girl's name is "Jenny Shadoh" (it's my friend who decided to call her like this), and the small tiger is called "Biscuit".


SO ZETTA CUTE! :minuki: :maya: :pearl: :shoe:
Author:  Zinle [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
"Biscuit"?
*dies laughing and is happy*
Author:  SupwithyouSammie [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 9:58 pm ]
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Awh Biscuit
Thats cute.
It looks really good for a first sprite.
I wish I could do scratch work XD

I only know how to order food, and tell the date, and my age, and tell someone my name in French XD
Author:  Bletz [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 11:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Biscuit.. Yum! :edgy:
Author:  Spiker [ Sun Nov 16, 2008 11:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Bonjour! :godot:

They look really good for your first sprites. Are they completely made from scratch?

Biscuit! How cute!
Author:  French [ Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Yes, it's 100 % custom (it was hard to make that :draw: ).

And i'll add One more pose.
Author:  Enter The Jaws Theme [ Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:50 pm ]
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Well I see your problem, and maybe I can give you a good suggestion:

Meat up those limbs! She looks skinny in some parts and spread too wide in others. Once you fix that, you'll be fine.
And remember to shade and highlight when necessary.

Good luck~ and your English is fine enough, you probably speak it better than most native speakers!
Author:  French [ Mon Nov 17, 2008 6:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Enter The Jaws Theme wrote:
Well I see your problem, and maybe I can give you a good suggestion:

Meat up those limbs! She looks skinny in some parts and spread too wide in others. Once you fix that, you'll be fine.
And remember to shade and highlight when necessary.

Good luck~ and your English is fine enough, you probably speak it better than most native speakers!


I supposed you talk about her arms, I think they are too thin :beef:
Author:  genodragon1 [ Mon Nov 17, 2008 9:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Enter The Jaws Theme wrote:
and your English is fine enough, you probably speak it better than most native speakers!


Such a harsh truth nowadays.

Anyways, I can't wait to see the new sprites, French! ^^
Author:  Bletz [ Mon Nov 17, 2008 10:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Hmmm.. Now that I think about it. It does look like what ETJT said. Shape that up, and she'll be better than ever!
Author:  French [ Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Update:

I reworked the arms of my Character and added Sad pose.

http://www.zimagez.com/zimage/spritesheetv2wz5.php#
Author:  genodragon1 [ Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
It's pretty good. However...

- The curve of the hair seems...unnatural.
- The lighting source is off. It's from above on the torso, but from below on the arm.
- Some of the borders between hair, torso, arm, etc. seem ill-defined at times.

Otherwise, you are improving quite well, and anticipate great things from you.
Author:  ksunwoo6 [ Thu Nov 27, 2008 12:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
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You should view the sprite like this, because some people can't see when they click the link.
Author:  Caelestis [ Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
genodragon1 wrote:
I won't lie, it's not the apex of awesome, but I also think everyone can improve. You have a lot of talent and potential, kid, and I really like what you did there. I also like the creativity used with the little mouse.

...hope babelfish likes me today...

I won' ; mensonge de t, it' ; s pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais moi pensent également que chacun peut s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de talent et le potentiel, l'enfant, et moi aiment vraiment ce que vous avez fait là. J'aime également la créativité utilisée avec la petite souris.


I think this is what you mean:
'Je ne peux pas mentir; ce n'est pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais je pense tout le monde peuvent s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de le talent et le potentiel et j'aime vraiment que vous avez fait. J'aime aussi le créativité vous avez utilisé avec la petite souris.'

Lol, I am in French 3; I know nothing :payne: Honestly, I wasn't trying to show you up, genodragon; I just wanted to see how close I could come :oops: Anyway, disregard; I need my little time to prove I can do something somewhat correctly. Move along folks!

On a side note, those sprites look great, especially for being hand drawn! The only suggestion I have is that for the sprites with her left arm down, you might want to move it more closer to her body. Only a suggestion for an amateur sprite-artist. :payne:
Author:  genodragon1 [ Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Caelestis wrote:
genodragon1 wrote:
I won't lie, it's not the apex of awesome, but I also think everyone can improve. You have a lot of talent and potential, kid, and I really like what you did there. I also like the creativity used with the little mouse.

...hope babelfish likes me today...

I won' ; mensonge de t, it' ; s pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais moi pensent également que chacun peut s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de talent et le potentiel, l'enfant, et moi aiment vraiment ce que vous avez fait là. J'aime également la créativité utilisée avec la petite souris.


I think this is what you mean:
'Je ne peux pas mentir; ce n'est pas l'apex d'impressionnant, mais je pense tout le monde peuvent s'améliorer. Vous avez beaucoup de le talent et le potentiel et j'aime vraiment que vous avez fait. J'aime aussi le créativité vous avez utilisé avec la petite souris.'

Lol, I am in French 3; I know nothing :payne: Honestly, I wasn't trying to show you up, genodragon; I just wanted to see how close I could come :oops: Anyway, disregard; I need my little time to prove I can do something somewhat correctly. Move along folks!

On a side note, those sprites look great, especially for being hand drawn! The only suggestion I have is that for the sprites with her left arm down, you might want to move it more closer to her body. Only a suggestion for an amateur sprite-artist. :payne:


Don't worry about it. I used a translator. Looking back, I have no idea what I said. :larry:
Oh, and you can call me Geno. :gant: It's shorter and lazier!

Oh, and danke, ksunwoo6. It takes forever to load the site.
Author:  French [ Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Hello everyone !

Here a new Character (i'll try to finish it soon)

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Name: French: Aghate précieux (Précieux means Precious, and Aghate is a reference to a precious stone)
English: I don't know


Enjoy !
Author:  RandomJibberish [ Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Looks good so far :godot:

Maybe her name should be Ruby Diamond?
Author:  French [ Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
I made her face :franny:

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Author:  RandomJibberish [ Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:16 pm ]
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The bottom of the nose appears to be missing...
Author:  French [ Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Fixed !

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Author:  RandomJibberish [ Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Much better :godot:
Author:  French [ Sat Nov 29, 2008 9:21 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
What do you think about it ? it look good enough ?
Yes, I know,it Need to be more shaded.

I tried to feat with the AJ style. :hobohodo:

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Author:  Zinle [ Sun Nov 30, 2008 10:00 am ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Truly.
So far so good.
Author:  French [ Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Update ! :odoroki:
that's not finished yet !

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I hope you like it Image
Author:  French [ Mon Dec 01, 2008 7:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
Update !

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Author:  Spiker [ Mon Dec 01, 2008 9:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: My Works
It looks good! I like the sprite of her on the witness stand.

Your English is coming alone nicely, too. My mother has been in Canada for 16 years and can't speak as well as you are. :payne:
Author:  French [ Wed Dec 03, 2008 5:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites Update (background of a character)
Hi !

1/I added the background of Diamond Spark. :will:
2/I'm working on an unnamed character and on Shumi shinju.
Author:  French [ Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites Update Background of Diamond Spark.
I'm back with a new character (and a Map)

The map:

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And the character:

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I'll finish these soon (not for now).
Author:  French [ Wed Jun 16, 2010 1:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites (or how to make bad sprites)!
So i'm back from the dead after 2 years (I think :knock-knock: ) of...hum...I don't have any reason (except that I was lazy).

And I only have this: Image

Enjoy, (or not).

More to coming...
Author:  French [ Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites workshop.
Like I said a long time ago, I've totally redone my first OC. And I tried to improve, but I don't know if it's really better :yuusaku:

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I will try finish soon the miniature version of the character,and after, add some poses.
Author:  Magic Monkey [ Sun Jun 27, 2010 7:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites workshop.
Comparing this version of your OC to the first one you really have improved much. I like the new version much better, and I still envy you for being able to draw free-handed sprites which look good :phoenix:
The mini char is lovely I'm waiting for the full sheet :edgy:
Author:  French [ Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites workshop.
Magic Monkey wrote:
Comparing this version of your OC to the first one you really have improved much. I like the new version much better, and I still envy you for being able to draw free-handed sprites which look good :phoenix:
The mini char is lovely I'm waiting for the full sheet :edgy:



Thanks ! :will:
But I think I must improve more for the hands, or maybe I'm just a bit too perfectionnist.
I will probably try to add some poses for my character, but I don't really have an idea yet :payne:
Author:  French [ Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites workshop.
That's nothing, but it's my first try to make an evidence: a package of chewing-gum :lana:
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Author:  French [ Thu Jul 15, 2010 12:37 am ]
Post subject:  Re: French's sprites workshop.
So, this time, I decided to remake my first OC (again ?!), and I think this last version is much better.

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I'll fix up the fingers later (they were deformed by the resizing) :phoenix:
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