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Hello! I just made my first sprite and I seem to have a small problem. I'm satisfied with the appereance but he seems to be missing something. I need some comments on an "add" I gave him, a tattoo.

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Which of these is the better one?
NOTE: Ignore the tiny white dots, first time using Gimp's transparency.
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For a recolour it's quite nice, but the thing on his arm (which is the only custom part) looks strange and it really isn't clear what it is, so the 1st one is probably best at the moment.
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Nose wrote:
For a recolour it's quite nice, but the thing on his arm (which is the only custom part) looks strange and it really isn't clear what it is, so the 1st one is probably best at the moment.


OK! Thanks. Also, what should I give him? I've tried many things but they keep turning into something that doesn't fit. But thing would you reccommend me to scratch for this sprite?
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You'll have to decide that for yourself I'm afraid. But I'd advise if you're making this into an OC you'll need to change some of the clothes, face/hair, so it doesn't look like a carbon copy of Apollo.
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Nose wrote:
You'll have to decide that for yourself I'm afraid. But I'd advise if you're making this into an OC you'll need to change some of the clothes, face/hair, so it doesn't look like a carbon copy of Apollo.


OK! Thanks for you help!
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Its a pretty good recolor, but it does looks like Apollo.
You might want to change the hair, the outfit, just to make him look different.
Then The tattoo looks a little strange, but idk how to fix that hha.
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As to the colors you've chosen for this guy, I have a little question:

Why so serious?

Also, there is a white pixel trapped in his hair.

As for your own question, I'd probably say the one furthest to the left.
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