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Update:
I tried myself on a running Klavier. <3



Okay.
Now I tried myself on doing/editing sprites <3
It's not much, but there will be some more in the next time :3
So, I did two GS4 Character Edits and one bg edit.
Hope you like'em and tell me what I could do better, ja? (You know I'm a beginner in making sprites =3)


Spoiler: Character Edits
*Daryan Hair down :haha:
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*Klavier "dang" :rock'n:
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Spoiler: BG-Edits
*My idea what Daryans Cell might look like <3
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Spoiler: little Sprites (GS Charas in GK style)
*Klavier running
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I am always happy about feedback <3
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It's time to Rock
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I really liked the edits, keep up the good work :butzthumbs:
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Indeed, indeed.
Though...I wouldn't say "mad" Klavi...More like..."dang" Gavin.

Hmm...A bit too clean for Klavis room, eh? =D
Naah...It's pretty damn good.

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Zinle wrote:
Indeed, indeed.
Though...I wouldn't say "mad" Klavi...More like..."dang" Gavin.

Hmm...A bit too clean for Klavis room, eh? =D
Naah...It's pretty damn good.


Ah~
Yeah I didn't know the right word for it xD
Gonna edit it <3

Well,... it's daryans Cell xDD not klaviers room xD
But yes, it's too clean, i guess xD


Thank you <3
I guess I put up asome more stuff if I get ideas (and finish my damn oc xD)
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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Not bad for your first few =D
Just keep going.
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Your edits are really sweet so far, well done stuff. I just think that Daryan's hair needs to be a lot bigger and longer - Look at his hair in his normal sprites, that's a lot of hair there.
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Perrydotto wrote:
Your edits are really sweet so far, well done stuff. I just think that Daryan's hair needs to be a lot bigger and longer - Look at his hair in his normal sprites, that's a lot of hair there.


Well at first his hair was a bit bigger, but this looked kinda strange, so I edited it x'D
And the length... well.... Yeah I guess it is too short. Maybe I'll try to change it <3
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Good. It will surely look a lot better and more natural then! :)
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Eidted Daryans hair and put up the new version <3
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So~
I like the Daryan with the short hair.
Otherone looks... weird :yuusaku:

The Klavier looks too funnie! xD
I love it!

I like you're edits, and I want to see more :minuki:
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Hot damn! These are good!
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These are pretty good, the Daryan hair edits work especially well.
Just to remind you, Zinle was saying to give him credit for the sig, it's understandable if you didn't get that though, his English can sometimes be a bit off.

Also a bit of CC, on the background you've made a few errors, the perspective of a few of the items is a bit off, such as the items on the billboard. Also it's fairly obvious you've smudged the floor to make it clean, looks a bit strange.
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Nose wrote:
These are pretty good, the Daryan hair edits work especially well.
Just to remind you, Zinle was saying to give him credit for the sig, it's understandable if you didn't get that though, his English can sometimes be a bit off.

Also a bit of CC, on the background you've made a few errors, the perspective of a few of the items is a bit off, such as the items on the billboard. Also it's fairly obvious you've smudged the floor to make it clean, looks a bit strange.


Okay. I edited it in my sig now ^^°
I didn't know he was the one who did it >_>""
And thanks for nice comment on my daryan ^_^ I'm now working on a frontview of hair-down daryan... but it is definetly hard x'D

I know that I've made a few errors in the bg.
Looking at it some days after I made it I saw them x'D but I didn't know how to change the perspective... kind of xD
maybe I should try to make it better next time.
Thanks. <3 :rock'n:
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Did an Update :kyouya:
GS Charas in GK little sprite section is now there <3
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Daryan's hair down sprite is pure awesome and Klavier's face is hilarious. But I have one problem with the running sprite. Did his jacket turn rather...pinkish? I could've sworn it was darker than that. XD I do love how his necklace moves as he runs though...
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ChocolateXCheese wrote:
Daryan's hair down sprite is pure awesome and Klavier's face is hilarious. But I have one problem with the running sprite. Did his jacket turn rather...pinkish? I could've sworn it was darker than that. XD I do love how his necklace moves as he runs though...



Well, Yeah, I somehow missed the color because for fanarts I always use this color, although its not so original. Maybe I'll make a more purple one if I have the time <3

Aw, thanks <3 (The necklace was one of the hardest Parts, but whatever, Daryans Hair will be harder Dx) :kyouya:
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