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And of you want to critisize, please do it constructively.
Now this is my first sprite, an adult version of Machi Tobaye (it was inspired by ze one only, Dramatica.)
I have another OC comin' soon. So stay tuned!
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Just needs editing.
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I’m sorry I had to say it like this but I’d rather state the truth rather then full you ambition for editing with false praise. You won’t get any better if you’re told it looks good, because it doesn’t. I’m sure you can do MUCH better then this. If you have the time take a look at Tajiri Ami’s sprite section and look at her edits. She pays attention to details of sprites, so study her work and maybe you can get better.
Editing or creating new sprites, takes hours, days, weeks to do. It all depends if want to make your sprite’s look as good as the one’s in the Ace Attorney Games.
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Err... no. Not always.
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It does if you want a to look good. I didn't mean one Sprite out of hundreds on a sheet. I meant a whole sprite sheet all together.
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It does if you want a to look good. I didn't mean one Sprite out of hundreds on a sheet. I meant a whole sprite sheet all together.
Yes, I suppose that's true... I noticed all yours are from scratch, so that may take a while.
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As with Machi, well it's back to the drawing board. Mind you I could try harder.
And this is a concept for my charater, Kristina:
http://ongenkianimalcrossing.wikispaces ... t_copy.jpg
So comment, and say what should be better. And remember, constructive critism.
...Hopefully someday... xD
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Much better then the first.
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If someone is going to be Blunt with you, it might as well be now. There have been plenty of times where I had to hear harsh stuff from other sprite artists about making my work look better, and I took that harshness from them, and applied it to my work. Your “Adventure is Spriting” will be for naught if you can’t improve on your work.
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1. Should I use Paint or GIMP rather than Photoshop? It would make colour editing better.
2. Do you want me to draw my OC's like you rather than mix and match with existing sprites? I would rather use exsiting sprites then work myself up to drawing.
And thanks to Vordox and Zinle for your kind comments.
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I recommend Gimp/PSP.
2: Depends on how good and certain you are about your own creations(mixes.). Most spriters goes for Edits of current available sprites, some mix and match, some Customs(On the mix and matches), and then we have the Fully scratch done sprites. Depends on where you feel you can do good. For you I think you should be somewhere around Mix + Match, then custom/Draw/remove/add on those edits/matches/Rips/mixes.
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That should take you less then a minute, if you’re in a hurry.
2. I can’t tell you how you have to edit characters. That’s up to you. But unless you don’t want them to look like Frankenstein creations, you’ll have to be creative and see what you can do on your own. Make sleeves for Ema’s arms, draw a moustache on her face, whatever. just make sure you study some Ace Attotney Sprites and pay attention to detail. As long as you can make something that doesn’t look to close to the original, It can probably considered it a proper edit.
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I been trying really hard to fix up the colours.
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Not hard enough, from what I see. It looks like Ema spilled juice on her chest and it’s running down between her boobs. You’re also taking shortcuts again with the coloring. The black spot in the middle of the red looks uneven and bad. Skin color is also mismatched. Just take the pick color tool and put the skin color on Ema’s face in the secondary color tray, and edit the skin on her arms. I’m not sure what I’m seeing , but did you use a noise filter on the bun of her hair? Whatever it is, it looks weird. Also, don’t show us your examples with Jpeg’s. Use PNG or Gif. That’s a Number 1 rule when saving Sprites.
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The spot in the middle of the shirt is uneven compared to her cloth, try and center it a bit more.
Oh and also, as Silent said, Do save in PNG or Gif.
NEVER EVER Jpeg.
Since it mixes up the colour and creates "blurs" and "pixeldisasters" Not to mention you have to clean it up again if you want to work on the sprite.
Otherwise, I like it. Just need a bit more editing. =)
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Here is the final result:
I am really happy with this result. Is this what you're looking for SBX? I sure hope so.
Oh, and the otehr pic of this sprite was when I was still working on it. That wasn't what I was going for.
This one is.
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Here is the final result:
I am really happy with this result. Is this what you're looking for SBX? I sure hope so.
Oh, and the otehr pic of this sprite was when I was still working on it. That wasn't what I was going for.
This one is.Nice.
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I don't see too much difference, to be honest.
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EDIT: Checked with photoshop. The face color code is F8E0D0 and the shoulder color code is F6E6D5. That's pretty darn close.
Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!
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