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Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Sun May 24, 2009 7:08 am ]
Post subject:  JAYDRICK0620's Sprite Center! Last Update:08/29/09! New BGs!
Hi! Jaydrick0620 Here! Sprites made with Love, Hardwork, And Awesomeness!
Spoiler: Updates Center
Last Update:August 29 2009, Added BGs.
August 6 2009, Added Emily Armando.
August 5 2009, Added Grodot and Scarface Dahlia.

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OCs :phoenix: :franny: :maya: :redd:

Spoiler: Mira Culles
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This is Mira Culles, my OC entry and Beloved first sprite.

Spoiler: John Bale
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Another one of my OCs, John Bale. Interpol agent, and all-around good guy.
My first animated sprite! :acro: :acro:


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Nameless...


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Nameless...

Spoiler: Vanessa Ricks
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This is Vanessa Ricks, John's girlfriend. She's "madly" in love with him.

Spoiler: Lili Monteiro
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OC, Random. You see, I was bored.

Spoiler: Polly Sefores
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Play on words with the words "Police Force"

Spoiler: Emily Armando
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Godot/Diego's Niece. Thinks she's better than everybody.
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Sprite Edits :eh?: :will: :keiko: :yuusaku: :hobohodo:


I also made a Misty Fey sprite (Not Elise)
Sorry this is a prototype Misty. It's not done yet.
Spoiler: Misty
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Spoiler: Emo Edgey
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I took emo Edgeworth to the next level and put the emo hairstyle on him.
Also with a black suit

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A Random edit of Redd.

Spoiler: 80's Franny
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It's Franny from the 80's!!


Spoiler: Subway Musician Maya
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This is a random sprite made out of boredom. Here Maya is a subway musician.

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Alternate Phoenix Pose.


Spoiler: Scarface Dahlia
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Credit to Zin 4 The base. Scarface Dahlia! A great connection.

Spoiler: Grodot
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Godot+Grossberg= 2 in 1 law office! :edgy: :edgy:




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Evidence Edits :odoroki: :grossburg: :edgy: :hotti:

Spoiler: John's Phone
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This is John's phone given by the Interpol.



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Other Videogame "Sprites" :lana: :jake: :yogi: :shoe:

Spoiler: Anna Williams
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This is Anna Williams, from the TEKKEN series. Here she is wearing her P2 outfit in Tekken 5: DR.


Spoiler: Jin Kazama+Edgey
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Suckish-ness do to laziness.

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Screenshot Edit/s :cards: :youngmia: :Bikini: :psycho-lock:

Spoiler: Custom Screenshot
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Backgrounds!
Spoiler: BGs!
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Completely Unrelated

Spoiler: Ghost Trick
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Yes, it is Sissel transferring from Objects. Use with credit, please.

Please Comment :megaphone: :megaphone:

Criticize Me! I need tips! Heeellpp Meeee!!

Pls. Disregard next 2 posts.
Author:  Lind [ Sun May 24, 2009 7:09 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Erm... one small problem, these are too small. AA Sprites are 256 X 192.
Author:  RandomJibberish [ Sun May 24, 2009 7:15 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
They were probably resized by the image host. Could you rehost them?
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Sun May 31, 2009 12:45 pm ]
Post subject:  JAYDRICK0620's Sprite Viedeck! Updates Weekly!
Let Me Repost Them...
Author:  Lind [ Sun May 31, 2009 12:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
jaydrick0620 wrote:
Let Me Repost Them...
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Well, the color scheme... how do I put this lightly... they're eyesores.

Also, you could edit your first post with the update.
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Well Sorry! I just put the first color that popped into my head. :igarashi:
Author:  Volty [ Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
jaydrick0620 wrote:
Well Sorry! I just put the first color that popped into my head. :igarashi:


No need to get snappy with Lind, or any other person for that matter.

He's just giving you advice. Sure, it may seem like he's being harsh, but it's constructive criticism. You wanna be an awesome spriter like Lind or many other people here on CR, then you gotta take the criticism and not get mad at it.

Don't wanna seem like a douche or anything, just attempting to help. :godot:
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:04 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Thanks for the tip. I'll try to remember that.
Author:  Lind [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
jaydrick0620 wrote:
Well Sorry! I just put the first color that popped into my head. :igarashi:

...which is REALLY something you want to avoid doing. Try using complementary colours.

...and I still don't get why your sig has an apology to me in it. You didn't steal from me!

EDIT: Also, you should really post here to let us know when you update. If I hadn't just so happened to scroll down, i'd never have known there was new stuff.
Author:  Christophomicus [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 3:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Your 80s Franny, bar the leftover green outline from Lotta's top, is great. Actually made me crack a smile.

I think you just need to work a little bit on your colours. You seem to be picking strong, vivid colours, or what I like to refer to as the MS Paint Default Palette. :) Have a look at the official GS sprites, or even some of the good spriters around this forum (Zinle, Kyn, Ceres, RandomJib, Cold52, Lind, just to name a few off the top of my head (whoever I didn't mention, I'm sorry! I'm sure you're good, too!)) and notice their use of colours; they're more subdued, and sorta... I dunno, pastelly? They're not like BAM THIS IS 255 RED, 0 BLUE AND GREEN, BITCH, which is what a few of your sprites suffer from. ALSO jaggies; have a look into anti-aliasing and I'm sure your sprites will turn out better.

I don't really know how to describe it, but just make sure your sprites look GOOD. That's a really dick thing to say, and I don't mean it in a negative context, but your sprites to me just convey a bit of a lack of polish. Spend that extra hour working on 'em, you know?

Good luck with your future spriting endeavours, I'd like to see how you improve!
Author:  Lind [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 4:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Christophomicus wrote:
Your 80s Franny, bar the leftover green outline from Lotta's top, is great. Actually made me crack a smile.

I think you just need to work a little bit on your colours. You seem to be picking strong, vivid colours, or what I like to refer to as the MS Paint Default Palette. :) Have a look at the official GS sprites, or even some of the good spriters around this forum (Zinle, Kyn, Ceres, RandomJib, Cold52, Lind, just to name a few off the top of my head (whoever I didn't mention, I'm sorry! I'm sure you're good, too!)) and notice their use of colours; they're more subdued, and sorta... I dunno, pastelly? They're not like BAM THIS IS 255 RED, 0 BLUE AND GREEN, BITCH, which is what a few of your sprites suffer from. ALSO jaggies; have a look into anti-aliasing and I'm sure your sprites will turn out better.

I don't really know how to describe it, but just make sure your sprites look GOOD. That's a really dick thing to say, and I don't mean it in a negative context, but your sprites to me just convey a bit of a lack of polish. Spend that extra hour working on 'em, you know?



Woah. For someone who doesn't appear to frequest these forums, that was one hell of a peice of advice!

Also, NAMECHECK WOO!
Author:  Volty [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Oooooooooooh, Lind messed up a quote! :karma:
Author:  Lind [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Travolta3335 wrote:
Oooooooooooh, Lind messed up a quote! :karma:

Big deal.
Author:  Christophomicus [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Christophomicus wrote:
Your 80s Franny, bar the leftover green outline from Lotta's top, is great. Actually made me crack a smile.

I think you just need to work a little bit on your colours. You seem to be picking strong, vivid colours, or what I like to refer to as the MS Paint Default Palette. :) Have a look at the official GS sprites, or even some of the good spriters around this forum (Zinle, Kyn, Ceres, RandomJib, Cold52, Lind, just to name a few off the top of my head (whoever I didn't mention, I'm sorry! I'm sure you're good, too!)) and notice their use of colours; they're more subdued, and sorta... I dunno, pastelly? They're not like BAM THIS IS 255 RED, 0 BLUE AND GREEN, BITCH, which is what a few of your sprites suffer from. ALSO jaggies; have a look into anti-aliasing and I'm sure your sprites will turn out better.

I don't really know how to describe it, but just make sure your sprites look GOOD. That's a really dick thing to say, and I don't mean it in a negative context, but your sprites to me just convey a bit of a lack of polish. Spend that extra hour working on 'em, you know?



Woah. For someone who doesn't appear to frequest these forums, that was one hell of a peice of advice!

Also, NAMECHECK WOO!


Hahaha, I have the unfortunate ability to be pretty good at spriting/graphics in in general, but I have shit-all ideas so I never make enough sprites to make my own topic here. :( Lurking here and checking out all the sick new sprites that everyone posts is my guilty pleasure ;-;
Author:  Lind [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Christophomicus wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Christophomicus wrote:
Your 80s Franny, bar the leftover green outline from Lotta's top, is great. Actually made me crack a smile.

I think you just need to work a little bit on your colours. You seem to be picking strong, vivid colours, or what I like to refer to as the MS Paint Default Palette. :) Have a look at the official GS sprites, or even some of the good spriters around this forum (Zinle, Kyn, Ceres, RandomJib, Cold52, Lind, just to name a few off the top of my head (whoever I didn't mention, I'm sorry! I'm sure you're good, too!)) and notice their use of colours; they're more subdued, and sorta... I dunno, pastelly? They're not like BAM THIS IS 255 RED, 0 BLUE AND GREEN, BITCH, which is what a few of your sprites suffer from. ALSO jaggies; have a look into anti-aliasing and I'm sure your sprites will turn out better.

I don't really know how to describe it, but just make sure your sprites look GOOD. That's a really dick thing to say, and I don't mean it in a negative context, but your sprites to me just convey a bit of a lack of polish. Spend that extra hour working on 'em, you know?



Woah. For someone who doesn't appear to frequest these forums, that was one hell of a peice of advice!

Also, NAMECHECK WOO!


Hahaha, I have the unfortunate ability to be pretty good at spriting/graphics in in general, but I have shit-all ideas so I never make enough sprites to make my own topic here. :( Lurking here and checking out all the sick new sprites that everyone posts is my guilty pleasure ;-;

Creepy voyeur!

Nah, just kidding. It's not a problem.
Personally, I have the problem of having too many ideas.
Author:  Volty [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:24 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Travolta3335 wrote:
Oooooooooooh, Lind messed up a quote! :karma:

Big deal.


If I recall correctly, you made a big deal about it to me in the English Names thread...
Author:  Lind [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Travolta3335 wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Travolta3335 wrote:
Oooooooooooh, Lind messed up a quote! :karma:

Big deal.


If I recall correctly, you made a big deal about it to me in the English Names thread...

I did?
Author:  Volty [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Travolta3335 wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Big deal.


If I recall correctly, you made a big deal about it to me in the English Names thread...

I did?


Actually, to be clear, it was a spoiler tag (hence why you made such a big deal) I just felt the need to say that back at you because of that, even though I'm not mad or naything, I'm just screwin' with ya.
Author:  Lind [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Travolta3335 wrote:
Actually, to be clear, it was a spoiler tag (hence why you made such a big deal) I just felt the need to say that back at you because of that, even though I'm not mad or naything, I'm just screwin' with ya.

That was because you actually spoiled something for me. It's not really the same thing.
Author:  Volty [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Travolta3335 wrote:
Actually, to be clear, it was a spoiler tag (hence why you made such a big deal) I just felt the need to say that back at you because of that, even though I'm not mad or naything, I'm just screwin' with ya.

That was because you actually spoiled something for me. It's not really the same thing.


Yeah, I know, I just wanted to screw with ya, even though a messed up quote counts for shit. :edgy:
Author:  Christophomicus [ Tue Jun 30, 2009 6:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Yo looking back over your stuff, most of the garish problems come from not eliminating all the outlines properly; on the Interpol guy (the Larry edit), there are still very bright remains of his trademark orange jacket. Turning them black as well (though not PURE BLACK, the nearest shade equivalent sorta deal, you know?) would make your sprites sooooooooo much smoother.

To help give you an idea of what I was talking about earlier with colours, I redid your Trucy edit from scratch using your colours as a guide.

Spoiler: Comparison
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On the left's mine! ;) I have no idea how you managed to get the beanie to fit like you did, btw; no matter what I tried I was always 4-5 pixels off!

Stuff that isn't really the same:
-Gloves: A lot lighter than your version
-Scarf thing: Also not quite as pink, couldn't be assed (it's still different to default Trucy though!)
-Hair length
-Beanie: Made the "Pa" cyan because it blended better


Notice how it's a LOT easier on the eyes? It all comes down to the colour choice and shading; you've missed a bit of shading in your original, and the colour choice is very strong, very powerful. I held back a lot when editing (but good christ it was hard getting that orange or red to look any good (and that's debatable even now!)), and the result is a lot smoother, you see?

Kudos on the badge instead of the gem, by the way! Nice detail I didn't notice at first. It's good you've gotten into little touches like that; when you get further along with your spriting, adding small nuances like that will literally make or break a sprite, and help distinguish it from its base sprite. At the moment, this is a dead-set Trucy edit, the only thing borrowed being Hobohodo's beanie. If you keep fiddling and adding little things, mixing in parts from other people (hoorah for frankenspriting!), you can have an original looking sprite before you know. OK maybe I'm overblowing it a little bit, but keeping adding these small touches! For great justice!

ALSO while I'm going at this Trucy edit, one thing that I noticed when I finished my rejig was that god damn there are a lot of colours. There are probably far too many colours, to the point where it's distracting. Note that every character has a sort of COLOUR SCHEME attached to them:

Apollo: Red? Red for me at least!
Grossberg: Orange
Larry: Depends on outfit, but generally his ORANGE jacket
Edgeworth: Maroon
Phoenix: Blue
Maya: Purple
Klavier: Purple
Kristoph: Sky Blue

Mostly distinguished by the clothes they wear; this character has about 6 million different colours going on, which makes it hard to really CONCENTRATE on any one specific part, you know? Give Mira a colour scheme! Don't make her the rainbow! :)

OK so I've pretty much ripped your sprite to pieces and that is a terrible thing to do, but I've tried to be CONSTRUCTIVE about it and give you advice, which I'm hoping you'll take the right way. ;-; I'm not trying to discourage you from further spriting; quite the opposite! In my lurkings, I've already seen Cold52 go from a fairly meh spriter at first to a pretty god damn fabulous one at the moment, and I'm hoping to see you follow the same path.

Keep workin' at it and you'll soon see results. :phoenix:

Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Personally, I have the problem of having too many ideas.

Me too, buddy, me too, but I'm a writer by trade so my ideas come in the forms of words, not pretty pixels ;(

EDIT: Mother of all that is holy, that is a long post. If you want me to run through any of your other sprites, give me a buzz and I'll see what I can do!

EDIT 2: If you haven't got an eye for things that look right/wrong together, try using a colour wheel and using complementary/analogous contrasts (can you have a complementary contrast? Man, the class where they taught me this stuff was so long ago), likeeeeeeeee I think it was Lind suggested earlier in the thread. They help!
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Tue Jul 07, 2009 12:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Thanks for the advice. "Christophomicus" what's up with the (long :meekins: ) name?

EDIT: Criticize My New sprite! Pleeeaazzz!!
Spoiler: Lili Monteiro
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Another OC.
Author:  Romeo [ Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Anna Williams, my fave tekken character! You mind if i make some random tekken characters?
Author:  Christophomicus [ Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Scanning over it quickly, the same JARRING problems apply (shading and not removing all traces of the original colour!), but your colour choice isn't too bad. I'd fiddle with it a bit more, though; maybe add a new head or something interesting so it's not super obvious from the outset that it's based on Ini/Mini?

EDIT: You've chosen a new FACE (who is it, btw? Angel? My memory fails me), that's the first step! :D The hair's the give-away though.
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:52 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Scarred_owl wrote:
Anna Williams, my fave tekken character! You mind if i make some random tekken characters?

Sure!

EDIT:
I'm Currently making a Jin Kazama Sprite out of Edgey!
Author:  BlackJack [ Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:50 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
These are decent. I would take Chris-....Christo-......-Kristoph-.......Chrisopotamus's advice.
Because not to be rude, but when he made his version of your Trucy edit. He blew yours all to shit. :oops:

My personal faves are:
Your Godot/Phoenix hybrid
Emo Edgey (epic lulz :hobolaugh: )
80's Franziska

Does your newest (Ini+Angel+Ect) have a name? :yuusaku:
And you should delete that extra white matter around her shoulders. :nick:
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Sun Jul 12, 2009 9:00 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Thanks you guys! I really need criticism! good or bad!

To lind: you're in my sig cause you like gave me warnings and i didn't listen.

and yet again, :acro: :acro: :acro: :acro:
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Thu Jul 16, 2009 5:07 am ]
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Hooray for double post! Is it illegal?

Random: Is Phoenix a Pussycat Doll? :edgy:

I has da evidence!
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:cody-flash:
Author:  Lind [ Thu Jul 16, 2009 5:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
jaydrick0620 wrote:
Hooray for double post! Is it illegal?

Random: Is Phoenix a Pussycat Doll? :edgy:

I has da evidence!
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:cody-flash:

Don't worry, we all have to double post for updates occassionally.
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Sun Jul 19, 2009 5:46 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Yay! Double post! Double post!

Yay! New sprite! New Sprite!

Spoiler:
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EDIT:How do I get those "pastelly" Colors?
Author:  Zinle [ Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:25 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Umm...It's not.
Just normal spam post XD
*like this one*
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Tue Aug 04, 2009 9:46 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Jaydrick0620's Sprites
Yay!!

EDIT: New stuffies:

Grodot, Scarface Dahlia. :hotti:
Author:  FEMM the Attorney [ Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: JAYDRICK0620's Sprite Center! Last Update:08/05/09!
Scarface Dahlia? Dunno what its from but it looks awesomely scary. o_o
The others... I like the Trucy and Adrian with the beanie hat edit, but the colors are messy... :sadshoe:
And the 80's Franny made me lol. :Will:
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:35 am ]
Post subject:  Re: JAYDRICK0620's Sprite Center! Last Update:08/05/09!
Yah, I Know. I Used The Basic MS Paint Palette.
Author:  FEMM the Attorney [ Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:09 pm ]
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jaydrick0620 wrote:
Yah, I Know. I Used The Basic MS Paint Palette.

That explains it. :keiko:
Just keep at it and try different colors that are more... pastel or not so vibrant. :Will:
You have potential, just needs more work on the colours. ^~^
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:15 am ]
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Yet Again, Yah I know.
Author:  SnowWright [ Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:28 am ]
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i like your sprites, especially the franzy/lotta one!
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Tue Aug 11, 2009 12:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: JAYDRICK0620's Sprite Center! Last Update:08/05/09!
Yeah, most people like that one.
Author:  miles*reminisence [ Wed Aug 12, 2009 9:59 am ]
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they are all awsome ,hon! particularly like emo edgey and emily armando!
Author:  jaydrick0620 [ Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:02 pm ]
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thanks, hon!
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