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Though I'm only doing screenshots, as full out animated gifs would be a waste of my own time. How's this for size?
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I think i did amazing on the face, and mediocre on everything else. TT
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The Middleman wrote:
Though I'm only doing screenshots, as full out animated gifs would be a waste of my own time. How's this for size?
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I think i did amazing on the face, and mediocre on everything else. TT


Seems pretty cool I especially like how his ponytail goes behind his back and emerges near his shoulder.
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You did amazing on that fuckin' ponytail man. Jesus. That is a beautiful thing.
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Thanks, I used to do pretty good pixel work when I was younger.

I have this distinct memory of when I was 10, I had formatted this picture of the Elric brothers dressed as Mario and Luigi, and changed it to Wario and Waluigi... I don't have it anymore, as my dad tossed that computer when we got the dell.

But I just tried gif editing, and I sorta made a younger Manfred von Karma, how'd it turn out folks?

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All I really did was change the outfit color, hair color, and I removed his dimple wrinkles...
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Well, you did do a great job editing the hair on that one :D I love the detail. And I did notice you took out some of the face wrinkles...he still kind of looks old though, I'm not sure how "young" you were going for XD But nice job regardless, it's at least a start.

And like all the above, I like your OC and the ponytail of awesome xD
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Those are cool. =3
I like the hair.
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Yeah, I noticed he still looks a bit older than I meant to. If I took out the bags under his eyes, he'd probably look younger.

With more experience, I tackled another adventure within the last hour; making an even older looking Payne, of course, with his notorious hairflip.
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Here's another. I rushed on this one though,
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The rushed one has a weird colour shift on the bottom that looks like some kinda juice sloshing about.
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The elongated hair on the rushed Payne is lovely, but I can still see the line where his hair-length used to be n.n;
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well to put it simply they still need work

ill start start with the first as an example
the hair is way to dark and a lot of the detail has been messed up, the collar seems like its stitched to his neck+ lines are do bold and dark, the ponytail I'm assuming his body is turning as hes slamming his hand down so its alright i do think you did a nice job with the scruff and glasses...maybe raise the right side a bit (i dunno maybe just me on that part)

id say its not bad but works needed

next comes the Manfred
ill be honest...its bad...the hair looks bad there's shading in the sprite where there shouldn't be and i think i see a few dots changing from here and there

finally Payne (not talking about the bottem one which has that yellow at the bottem)
its not bad just change the outline color of the tie and work on the parts that get changed (stuff like the eyebrows for instance)

anywho keep working at it :godot:
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Cold52 wrote:
well to put it simply they still need work

ill start start with the first as an example
the hair is way to dark and a lot of the detail has been messed up, the collar seems like its stitched to his neck+ lines are do bold and dark, the ponytail I'm assuming his body is turning as hes slamming his hand down so its alright i do think you did a nice job with the scruff and glasses...maybe raise the right side a bit (i dunno maybe just me on that part)

id say its not bad but works needed

next comes the Manfred
ill be honest...its bad...the hair looks bad there's shading in the sprite where there shouldn't be and i think i see a few dots changing from here and there

finally Payne (not talking about the bottem one which has that yellow at the bottem)
its not bad just change the outline color of the tie and work on the parts that get changed (stuff like the eyebrows for instance)

anywho keep working at it :godot:


I acknowledged the Edgey mistakes already, as I had mentioned them in the first post.

As for the manfred one, that's completely understandable as a very VERY first attempt at gif-ing, the Paynes being the second.

New Payne, by the way.
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Now, every problem the old two Paynes had, I fixed with this one, and added the cape. Now, except for the misconstruding shadow, and the shrinking button, I think the cape is quite good.
SUPER PAYYYYYYYYNE.
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Haha, super payne is da best.
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Why thank you! Next on my list of attempts are going to be:

---------FURIO TIGRE: ACE ATTORNEY

---------DARYAN CRESCEND: PROSECUTOR?!

--------- EDGEWORTH TANTEI NOUGAMI NEURO.
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LOL!!! I love the Paynes (xD) Can't wait for the next sprites ^-^
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Really good ones of these are yar first ones.
The thing is; super Paynes cape shouldn't be...waving(?) that much.
Only a little, since he doesn't move further away.
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This one was way too difficult. It may have been my first Neuro Edgeworth, but it's certainly my last...
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For those who don't know, this was my reference;
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Please spoiler tag, please spoiler tag, please spoiler tag...
Good serie, but way too...it.

That's actually quite good one.
Even though there are few paint spots here and tere and ya forgot to recolor his hand to dark grey.
Other than that, quite good one.
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Oh those aren't paint spots. It's blurred and smudged because I couldn't come up with a definitive palette replacement to make Edgey blonde. It's like, impossible. His hair is three toned, and I ended up using 6 different forms of yellow, 3 golds, and 2 browns. I was going to do sprites of Edgey Neuro doing other things, but I don't think I even want to anymore... @_@

I see what you mean with the glove though, totally forgot about that. His glove is actually a very very dark red though, as evidence from the picture.
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New crap. I think you can guess what these are.
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The Middleman wrote:
This one was way too difficult. It may have been my first Neuro Edgeworth, but it's certainly my last...
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For those who don't know, this was my reference;
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I LOVE this
and the other work from u too
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You're actually really good in my opinion. The Godot and Diego ones are nicely made and I also like Neuro and all the Paynes.

I'm really looking forward to Furio Tigre Attorney, because I don't think anyone else has made it.
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New Payne, by the way.
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Now, every problem the old two Paynes had, I fixed with this one, and added the cape. Now, except for the misconstruding shadow, and the shrinking button, I think the cape is quite good.
SUPER PAYYYYYYYYNE.

Ah, that Super Payne is awesome! I wanna see him in court! :hair-flip:
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I love this XD
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I love this XD

So do I. Hillarious! Best thing I've ever seen done to Payne! XD
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Since you've definitely got a great amount of skill, I suggest you put all your sprites in the first post and change the thread's name to:
"The Middleman's Sprite Corner"
Or something similar.

That is, if you want to become a popular spriter. :yuusaku:
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